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.. I didn’t go to the institute again in the morning, where the teachers knew about my illness and treated the passes with understanding. And in the evening I do what I should not have done. I was bursting with contradictions, but I turn on the computer with trembling hands and go to the porn site. I'm a porn viewer again, but only because I want this porn to not happen today.
Katya returns from the institute. Incredibly beautiful, with a blue-eyed look strictly in front of her, she does not notice the guy who stands on the side, near the front door. It stands and waits for her with a bouquet of wild flowers. Dan.
- Katya! - the girl hears a voice from the side. Its owner fits and gives her a bouquet.
- Do we know each other? - she asks in surprise.
“Yes and no,” Dan says modestly. Katya, so bright and inaccessible, looks at the actor with interest, takes the bouquet and brings it to her nose. Dan tried.
“My favorites,” she says with a smile. - How did you find out?
“I read your mind,” Dan says in his usual light confidence.
- Yes? And what are you still reading?
- If you give me at least an hour, you will know everything about me. And if the whole evening, you learn everything about yourself, - Dan flirts.
- Right today? - Katia plays along. Her eyes light up with a perky light; she no longer seems inaccessible.
“Right now,” he politely invites. Katya takes a pause, looking at the bouquet, then at the guy, and I find myself at the strange thought that, not wanting to meet them, at this moment I am sick of Dan. "Agree" - we think with him at the same time. And the girl finally betrays.
- Wait. I'll be out in half an hour.
It all started like a good date. Dan invited her to the park, they walked along the alleys and chatted freely. Dan showed his erudition, and Katya admitted that he was studying to be an economist, and here the guy had something to tell, which is surprising for a porn actor. Dan cleverly lies, telling her that he is a mathematician, that he applies mathematical theories in calculating economic trends, and she listened to him with his mouth open. She herself gave quite intelligent comments, and Dan, in turn, made compliments to her brains. And no compliments to the exterior. He is right, it will not surprise her.
It was already dark, and they were in the shadow of park trees. I am sure that Dan deliberately led her there. He never touched her in the evening, keeping her distance.
“You are an interesting guy,” Katya told Dan. - I didn’t even think that this one could live next door.
“I didn’t think that I would meet a girl like you,” the actor admitted, staring at her enchantedly.
- Beautiful? - smiling, she asked.
“Nah,” Dan shook his head. - Smart.
“You are strong in compliments,” Katya notes, examining him closely. He glares at her beautiful face. - Great experience in dealing with girls?
And then Dan broke. He hugs Kate and runs her hand under her short dress. There!
Cattle! “Quick!” - I give myself a command, I hurt sharply at the computer button, deciding to stop this disgrace. But incredibly - the computer, in spite of everything, does not go out, and the movie continues.
A continuation of the following. Katya changes in the face, breaks out and that there are forces that she sculpts with a purse on her head. Dan does not have time to hide behind and receives from the heart, and the girl turns around and quickly goes away.
Moron! So spoil everything. Here the picture of the video disappears by itself - along with the defeat of Dan and the disappointment of Kati. But I am glad that he did not sleep with her, so Dan is too tough. With this thought, I fall asleep ...
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... "The use of the drug can cause short-term psychosis, amnesia, hallucinations ...", I read the instructions for Interix in the morning. Hmmm, it was worth exploring at the very beginning. But the doctor warned - there will be side effects of treating depression.So everything is clear! Movies with Dan, scenes with familiar girls are just an illusion, a game of my imagination, and nothing I saw was actually there. And there was no date with Kate.
I swallow a pill and calmly go to college with a great mood.
Between ribbons, Olya and Sveta approach me. Immediately remember their sex with Dan, and catch a slight excitement. After greeting the girls look at each other, as if they are going to give something serious.
“You know,” said Olya, “Three classes are, of course, cool, but more correct ...” she stumbled, even blushed as she picked up the words, “... do it alone.” Decide, please, which of us TWO do you do next time.
“And invite her ONE,” Sveta says and adds with a faint smile, “Dan.”
A hot wave swept over my face, and a certain worm stuck in my brain. What did she call me? Dan?! What the heck? The girls wished me a good day and went away.
This worm pestered me all day, and in the evening, returning home, I ran into Tanya on the landing. She came to her, elegant and beautiful. I remember the video with her gorgeous naked body.
- Do not you go? She asks with a tone of discontent. I mumble that I'm sorry, I was busy, and I am ready to go in a friendly way even now.
“Then come in,” invites me. I pass her into the corridor, she turns around, and I catch the smell of perfume, because Tanya is very close. She wraps her arms around me and I feel her tongue on my lips. Her mouth opens, yielding to her assertive female kiss.
- Do you want how then? - She whispers excitedly, and a member of the bottom is filled with an erection. When then I gently, but resolutely free myself from her embrace. Tanya looks at me in surprise.
“Just don't make me think that you’ve slept with me once, and that’s it,” she says gloomily. - Or did I become disposable? - I note shades of bitterness in the voice.
- Tanya, I'm sorry, but now I can not. Let's stop by another time, and we'll talk, I ask, but I know that I did not tell her the main thing.
- Tanya ... You are a super girl, but I love another.
The corners of Tanya's lips go down slightly, she is disappointed, but she copes with herself, and I see how her eyes warmed.
- Do you like much? She asked seriously.
“More than anything,” I admit.
- Then take care of your love, - We are saying goodbye in a friendly way, and I'm leaving.
Once in my room, I immediately lock myself from the inside and turn on the computer with a trembling hand. Nerves stretched to a string. I quickly find videos with Dan and run one of them. In a neglected story, my friend was sitting in a chair, giving the mulatto the opportunity to suck his dick. He did not even respond to me.
- Well, distracted, my friend! - I literally screamed. - Explain what the fuck girls think that I - it's you? Why do they remember sex with you, as with me?
And this type deigned to distract. Raising his head, he looked at me, smiled slyly and, without tearing off the sucking mulatto, noticed.
- The winner of the mathematical Olympiad can not turn gyrus and find a logical answer to such a simple question? It's elementary, man, you understand everything. They confuse me with you, because ... Come on, finish my thought.
Immediately, scenes with naked girls flashed before my eyes, and the body found impressions of an orgasm
“Because we are ...” Dan said again, with evil pressure.
A flash struck in my head again, I see Katya's legs and fingers in panties under her dress. Cold shivering on the back ...
The flash goes out, opening the gaze inside of himself. Truth opens, and so simple ...
“Because we are one and the same person,” I finished desolate.
The legs are dull from the truth. I fall into the chair.
“Precisely,” the actor announced cheerfully, and already seriously. - Sasha. I just wanted to help you become a man.
I never heard Dan again. I tried to talk to him, but he just fucked the mulatto ...
... Multiple personality disorder. Split personality. I spent the whole night on the Internet, reading about this state.My personality, depressed by the unsuccessful life, created the image of Dan, the alternative “I”, bold and sexy. Strong macho image. But the physical shell remained the same, and it was she who came into contact in all the scenes I had experienced with the girls. Madness or a real way out in my unhappy fate?
Is it really unlucky, I thought, pouring the Interix pills down to the bottom of the toilet bowl. I don’t need them anymore, and the side effect will be over. It was I, Sasha, with Tanya, Olya, Sveta and Kate, and three of them even liked it. I did it, so changed what I wanted. Continuing these thoughts, I stood next to Katina on the next morning, awaiting her with trepidation.
If love has a physical shape, then it is leggy and with a golden bang, suddenly out of the door. But I was not ready that she would pass by. I wanted a different version. And she happened.
Katya stopped by and looked at me with an ironic look.
- Do you want me to say something? - asked in the same ironic tone love. Words of apology immediately disappeared, fell inside and sounded others who were quickly and themselves.
- I wanted to say ... that I am very grateful to you for that evening, and ... - I faltered, my tongue went into a stupor, but I had to confess.
- You are the most sensual girl in the world ... And I can not live without you.
Everything! The earth did not open up under her feet, and Katya continued to be near.
“You know, I thought to permanently strike you out of the conversation, but then I realized that you were the only guy who reached for a skirt on a date with me,” she said with a smile in her eyes. - Brave boy.
Here rolls the famous "Audi" with its adult boyfriend. I take a step toward the car.
- Where are you going? - Kate asked puzzled.
“I will explain to this type that he will not come to you any longer,” I declare emphatically.
Katya just burst out laughing. The gray-haired man, my rival, leaves the Audi and heads for us. I clench my fists, because I’m even ready to fight.
- What is your real name, hero? After all, Dan is a nickname? - quietly asked the girl.
Dan - that was my name too, but Kate doesn’t need to go into such difficulties.
- Sasha, - only I answer.
“Dad,” she turns to the approached peasant, “This is Sasha, my friend.” - And already appeals to me. - Dad does not live with his mother, but periodically takes me to the institute. Is bored.
- I still miss how. Your cavalier - Dad specifies and firmly shakes my hand. Katya just smiles in response. - Sit down, gentleman, with us, kind to where you need.
Katya and I are in the back seat, and our hands are woven together like pieces that have found each other.
- See you today? - I whisper to the girl and get consent. Mentally wink at Dan. Thank you, actor! And joy, and pity that you in my life I will not meet again ...
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Thank:). You, as always, on top. Original, thoughtful ... the same happy ending. Tanya is just a pity ...
The only negative - you did not always withstand one grammatical time. The whole story is written in the present tense, but sometimes the past tense has slipped. But still - 10 from me :).
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Thanks, buddy)).
With times yes ...
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Wonderful story! On the top ten. Thank you so much!
Tanya, of course, is a pity, but I am glad that the hero is not with her) She must have another story. I was pleased with the end. In general, you cool twisted the plot.
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Thank you, colleague).
I confess, with Tanya, there was another ending in the original version, but the story was too lengthening ... finished like this
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And write further about Tatiana) What was her fate?
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Oh, it will be a separate story))
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We wait)
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Today is a great day.We can say a revolution in physics: SINGLE-CHARGES ARE PREDICTED. It draws, at least, on the Nobel Prize, and, as a maximum, on the golden lifetime bust in the homeland of the new Einstein.
A few words about the beginning of the story, about the outset. Very stained zashtampovannost in the description of the hero and the environment. Stupid, but surely pumped up, yard dunce; kralja, which without papika, as Roly without harmonica; Pryamo, who is not just a good student, and printed in magazines (try to get there). Yes, and the American patterns, such as "loser" do not give anything to the Russian mind: well, we will not live in the American way, no matter how the Moscow party would try. And why does a Russian need it? Everywhere it’s all about the best - to be yourself, a normal Russian person.
Now further, about the miraculous elixir. No, I am not against such a move: it is often and effectively used by writers, if only there is no hint that this is the only way out of this situation. I hope that the author does not consider him the only one.
I continue: it distorts me that some overseas Dan teaches our life to Sasha. I understand that these “Danes” have already memorized (or rather, have been blunt) the whole world in their American manner according to the principle: “Whoever is not below us is against us.” Moreover, it hurts the eyes and ears. Are there really no actors in this world?
In fact, the development of events went with a bang, dynamically, sensibly. The second and third set you won with a clear advantage. Cool dude cool The story is the place in the elect, where I wear it.
Yesterday I conducted a tour of past stories and remembered one comment from Snezhana's fan, in which the commentator advised, given her wonderful language, to leave this shitty site and move to a more solid one. And this, they say, will cost the boys-drochery. I would say a little differently:
- As long as there are stories like this, as long as there are authors such as Federer, you can continue to stay here.
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Thank you, dear Critic)).
Your opinion is worth a lot).
Here is the current that you decided that Dan is an American?). Our teenagers have recently started raking up foreign names.
Well, yes, it was not without stamps.
Thanks again for such a detailed comment ..
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Not angry at sarcasm and severity? They alternately reproach me in softness, then in rigidity — I don’t even know what is more common.
Why did I see an American in Dan? The answer is simple: as I read it, I saw it (although it wasn’t directly stated). But you did not directly answer, but who is he according to the author's idea?
The strengths of your stories are obvious. This is the forethought, complexity and intensity of the plot. These are well traced images of heroes. This is intrigue and unpredictability. And, of course, stress from start to finish. And in all the stories all this is present in one way or another. So, there is where to roam the commentator.
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Nah, dear, I was not at all nervous)).
Just determined that the nationality of the actor does not matter for the plot).
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And the cons, wandering from story to story, do you want to indicate?)
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Not bad at all, and where is your opinion?
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Federer, I finally did not read you ... apparently my mistake. but hard! description and style. respect!
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Thank you, Snezhana)),
But I read you).
And praised!).
Success in creative work!
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I don’t like to read long songs, they strain me. but you are easy!)))
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9.9! For the idea, style, pace ... I missed the standards a bit when describing sex scenes, but in this past 1,000,000 years nothing new has been invented here. And if you focused on the sensual, emotional component, you would immediately lose your rating. I myself suffer with similar fears. Everything else was objectively appreciated by previous commentators.I would be grateful if you find the time to get acquainted with my "attempts at writing" and give them a decent rating. Thank.
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Thank).
I will read and appreciate it without fail.
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Class, one of the best stories I've ever read. And maybe the best. ten! Deserved.
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Glad you liked it).
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10 +++ without options. Netlenka, rather not on the bed scenes, but on a chic plot and a great idea. Such stories on the site of the unit, please do not stop writing and do not drop the site (and then look for you through the expanses of the Internet).
This is not your first story, which hooked me to the forethought of plot moves. The name is already becoming a quality mark. If you wrote earlier under some other nickname, please write, I want to read your other stories.
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Thank you for your kind words, colleague)).
Nick is my first and only
and I hope there will be many more stories)).
You are also the best in literature!
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Liked! +
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Thanks for reading).
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Fine. Yes, there are mistakes, but it's not about them. It is written very lively, fervently, a little even intriguingly. Although for me the intrigue did not work))))
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Thank you, Serge)
I will try to surprise you next time)).
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Great story! I have not read here for a long time, something like that! Solid 10 plus!
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Thank you for a good rating! Glad if you managed to entertain you)
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Federer, a great story written by you. I agree with everyone, do not leave this site and do not grieve us, your readers :)
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And you, Sizii, seem to read all my works)
Thanks you.)
I will invent further).
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Yes, all your stories have been read by me, some even several times) But knowing the subject matter of this site, do not think anything bad about me, I just read you and Mankind here, because your stories are beautiful stories that were created not for handicrafts, but for spiritual pleasure :)
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Good story. +10. The author - well done, keep it up!
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Thank you, dear).
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I liked the story! We wrote above about the unpredictability of the plot ... but I immediately guessed that Sasha, in the image of Dan, walked over the girls in real life. But this guess was no less interesting to read. Nice invented!
The story deserves an honorable place on the pedestal. Good luck to you in the future.
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Colleague, thank you!)
Well, a compliment to your vision!)
And you success in creativity).
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10!!! +++
A rather peculiar story. Immediately brings back memories of "Fight Club", "Jekyll and Heide." Type Sasha suffers from split personality - schizoidoid embolism tobish. However, tablets are to blame. They split the mind of Sashka into two and he, having become Den-Deniska, shook everyone up whom he only dreamed of in his erotic dreams under a blanket.
However, the author for some reason cut some points? I read between the lines that Deniska visited Tanyushka more than once but at least three times. But for some reason, Federer limited to one?
Further, the fact that Papic turned out to be a real dad was unknown to me, which created intrigue. And the fact that Deniska is Sashunya I understood from the very beginning that the intrigue was destroyed.
Meanwhile, the story impresses with its novelty, freshness and extraordinary presentation. However, in my opinion, the frequent repetitions of the names of the characters in the plot, by the type of yakan, strained me a little. But these are my personal cockroaches and I am not going to share them with anyone.
In short a dozen with all the crosses!
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Detailed comments are always pleasant to the author).
Thank you, Yura!)
In terms of the frequency of mentions, he made it deliberately, so that it was easier for the reader to keep track of which of the two guys is doing or thinking ...
Good luck with your stories!).
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Love you writing about becoming male sexuality. I certainly, probably because of my age, like more adult stories. However, this one passed with great pleasure. Thank.
For me the truth, too, intrigue did not work. But I think that this is not the most important. The main thing is that you managed, in your own way, without reducing the interest of the readers, to reveal the topic of a split personality.
I do not understand why everyone is crying "do not leave the site." Have such thoughts?
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Marinochka, dear, if only you did not leave the site))).
Less began to write this year (. To please us with their sensual scenes ...
Nah, I'm not leaving).
Thanks for the tip). Your opinion is important. Could not intrigue? Well, until the next attempt)).
You inspiration and success in realizing your talent!)
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Yes, I will not hide, my writers' fervor has cooled. But I write slowly, but porn is that I write very little.
Thank you for your wishes, the same to you. And please do not dwell on this very intrigue. We are not writing detectives :)
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Oh, you wrote such a good story, that you don’t have enough words, keep writing stories and we will read all of them with our friends!
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Thank:)
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everything new is well forgotten old ... Alas, this story is more than 3 years old ... Inetovskoy life ... Good is indisputable. But plagiarism ... and this is an indisputable fact.
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A note in plagiarism for the author, who invents all the plots himself, uses only his own text and style - this is serious. Only you alone know why you wrote it ...
Three years of life inet? Undeniable fact? Is it possible to find a link to the site where this story was published before June, a normal site, where it is possible to “underpain” the date of publication?
and the fact that they called the story good is pleasant to me as the author).
Good luck.
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A good story, read it easily and with interest, was glad at the denouement :)
I will explore your work further :)
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Thank you for your attention).
The following story is not far off :)
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