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“So do not be tempted,” he smiled softly in the dark, sweetly smacking and slowly getting up. Their eyes met for a second again, but Christina immediately turned away and went to the car, leaving the luggage bag on the pavement. Matvey unquestioningly raised it and brought it to the trunk.
It took about two hours until they drove around the empty night roads in search of a free room. Matvey chatted about all sorts of trivialities, as if nothing had happened, thereby discharging Christina’s tension a little. A couple of times she even laughed at his jokes, and he thought that her laugh was delightful - clear, high and sincere. The girl was fascinatingly seductive - some kind of unearthly, not spoiled, educated, tender and refined, not to mention beauty and charm. The sweeter from the awareness of these features became for him the memories of her charms. Fortunately, she still was completely inexperienced. To seduce her would not be worth any difficulty. Is that worth a little play with her to start, before provoking her to throw herself on his neck. He smiled with delight to these thoughts, and when the card from the glove compartment allegedly took him a hundred years ago, he purposely searched for it for too long, while involuntarily touching his knees with his hand.
When they finally found a free room in a very decent hotel, though located far from the center, he insisted on paying for her own living, and in general he acted politely, gallantly and at the same time charmingly. This was his crown number - not a single girl could stand that way. Christina kept his manner in easy confusion. He was nice, but he didn’t show his passion or even special sympathy, because she thought that she really had to fight back from him.
“Let's help take the bag to the room,” he said impartially when the registration at the reception was over. Christine nodded silently. When they took the elevator, the girl tried her best not to remember his kisses, although she didn’t feel good about it. And yet she managed to stay cold and detached.
When they found the door to her room, Christine, with a trembling hand, turned the key and opened the door, passing Matvey and her bag forward.
“Thank you,” she said timidly, watching cautiously as he walked around the room, peering curiously into the bathroom. Then he looked at her, once again glancing at her whole figure. She stood, clasping herself with her hands, lowering her eyes and biting her lower sponge.
- Thank? And this is all your gratitude? - Matvey sneered hard and slowly approached her. He unceremoniously lifted her face by the chin, and she mechanically extended her hands to push him away, and at the same time tried to step back. Matvey immediately caught her with one hand around the waist, one by the neck and pulled her to him. Though she rested against him in the chest, yet this is a miserable resistance and it was impossible to call resistance. It rather testified to indecision than to the reluctance of its proximity.
“You promised not to touch me,” she whispered weakly, losing her voice from the excitement.
- I did not promise you anything. I just said that I was not raping the girls, but I was seducing, - his lips wetly touched her perplexedly parted mouth. Goose bumps ran down her skin, and her arms and legs suddenly felt like cotton. “I’m even curious whether you’re so naive that you don’t know how dangerous it is to invite a man to your room, or you just pretend to be holy innocence because you want to continue what we have already begun.
His hot breath burned her lips, and it was simply impossible to dodge his bent face because he was holding her head with his hand.
- I ... I did not think that you ... Please, let me go! - she whispered hotly, suddenly, feeling how his other hand squeezed her ass and slipped between the buttocks under her skirt, making her way to her crotch flaming with excitement.He felt the edge of her panties, lowered them down and began to gently caress the smooth skin of her elastic ass. The girl tried to break free and squirmed in his arms, but it only turned him on more.
“Matvey, do not ...,” she whimpered weakly, practically not resisting, when he began to cover her neck with kisses and pull her earlobes with her lips, “You promised ... I do not want!” I can not do that!
But her grumble subsided under a greedy deep kiss. He enjoyed her quiet thin moans, the timid movements of her hot tongue and the faint touch of her fingers on his neck and hair. When he finally released her, she jumped away from him, as if she was scalded, gasping and all trembling.
- Get out! Please leave! She whispered, barely breathing.
“As you say,” he smiled softly, tasting the index and middle fingers of his right hand, with which he had just caressed her wet pussy. She was hot. It seemed, from embarrassment, not only her cheeks flared, but her whole body, - We will continue some other time. I don't want to corrupt you too fast. I hope you can do yourself the pleasure yourself and you will not suffer all night from unremitting passion. I'll pick you up at eleven tomorrow.
With these words, he calmly left her room, closing the door behind her, and Christina stood still for about five minutes, rooted to the spot, clutching at the edge of the dresser she was leaning on with trembling hands. Matvey's haughty, beautiful, domineering face still loomed in front of her gaze. When she remembered how beautiful his naked body was, her lips involuntarily whispered something like: "Lord ...", and her fingers touched them. She is completely defenseless before him, just like before Luka ... And what should she do now? Let it go to chance? Letting them take what they both want? Urgently go back to Moscow? She was seized with fear, which for some time subsided only after she really caressed herself a bit before going to bed in bed. Only this almost did not quench her passion and did not bring calm. All night she spun, fell into a restless slumber, saw dreams and tried to keep up with scraps of some fantasies. Of course, they were Matthew and Luke.
(To be continued)
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An interesting outlook, passionate and passionate, calm and confident, the heroine has plenty to choose from! I hope the duel between the brothers for the hand of the ladies will not come? Although I would read this :)
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So far, I can’t say exactly what this will take - I sketched a few scenes in the continuation, but the general idea has not yet settled down. Even there is a thought about “yaoi” ((: I just don’t know how much it will be in demand)) There’s definitely not one among men)) Probably ... (:
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Well, I am not a fan of yaoja, although I am without disgust, but the people will, I think, negatively, what to do. On the other hand, this is your story! If you see such scenes in the plot - add, in the end, it is creative in order to sometimes neglect assessments and other formal attributes for the sake of your own vision of the plot.
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Hmm ... thanks, I will take into account ... But I'll think about it again)) Maybe someone will have to say goodbye to their stereotypes (:
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It is very interesting to read you, remember good-quality love novels, something like Susan Napier, Judith McNowth and others. But of course in your performance a little more spicy details. Two brothers and one girl, slightly reminded Sabrina, even the characters are similar. Of course, I immediately gave my preference to my elder brother, such men are my weakness. Honestly, I would not want to, despite the fact that we are on the site porn stories to read about the band performed by the characters. But the author and you can certainly decide differently. Thanks for the story, enjoyed reading.
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Thank you, Marina! Spicy details - this is exactly what everyone lacks in love stories;) I just do not like love stories because of this;)
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I liked the story very much !!! I look forward to continuing. Hurry ... Thanks to author 10+
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Thank you very much;) I will try not to delay :)
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What's the matter? I got ill-wishers on the site? :) It is strange to see that for the high-quality text the points all fall and fall ... However, it does not matter. Although offensive :)
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Thanks for the story. Interesting and easy to read. Intrigue available)
We are waiting for the continuation.
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And what's the intrigue? To take place there elections and even debates, all three candidates together.
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Thanks for the support!:)
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What bad brothers, poor pussy offended))))
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Not yet started))
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Already trying to taste, but have not yet begun?)))) As a joke.
Sit down to a woman in the SV man. The conductor asks if she is against it. That says that everything is OK. After 20 minutes, he resorts all in tears and speaks to the conductor.
- When he started to undress, I put up with it, when he started to undress me, I also suffered, but when he took off my glasses, put himself on h ... and said, "Vasily Petrovich, look at what lovely crocodile we will love now" I could not stand it)))
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That's exactly what I had in mind!))) Before the crocodile, something has not yet reached)))
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So already like even poked into the face. How not to get it? And, this is now considered a prelude))))
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I don’t know how now ... But you consider what site we are on;)
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I understand everything. On polshishechki, on eroticspace.info not considered))))
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Quite interestingly written and almost from me. True, we did not have mansions with butlers, but the situation was similar. Although in my life experience, the stepbrothers brought me to the handle and I just went into a snowy night, and found me in a hospital in a state of shock. The brothers then, by the way, notably received from their parents for what they wanted to do with me without understanding and what everyone brought to. My father was even going to break off all relations with his mother (stepmother), but they made up. It will be interesting to read the sequel. I wonder what could have ended with me if I were like Christina :))
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Wow. This is how you fantasize about human relations;) What plot you take, everything is somewhere with someone, but it was already ... And some of the intrigues do not see ... Eh ..
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Only I beg you without ped ... s. This garbage I never understand. Although as Faina Ranevskaya used to say: “Unhappy country. Here a person can not dispose of his well ... oh "))))
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Yeah - I noticed that within the framework of this site, somehow more and more incestors of parents / children are almost approaching the norm. Lesbianism again is not forbidden. And what gay people didn’t please someone?;) In my opinion, this is a discrimination of women's rights to freedom of erotic fantasy)) Maybe I will write that you will like it))) Although, maybe I will not write ... Not I know bye! (:
PS: Faina Ranevskaya was too eccentric woman, so that all her statements could be taken seriously, but now, it seems, no one is forbidden to dispose of her body parts at will - just to not violate the law;)
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The problem is that these individuals are now divorced. And among them is mutual responsibility. Realistically. It's just pease ... u some.At night, they clean the pipes to each other, and in the afternoon they hang orders and medals, the budget is also divided.
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No, well, in principle, if you think logically, the stepbrothers and sisters are not blood relatives to each other and there is nothing like that in their sex. The truth is, when you are 15 and you are still a girl, and here two adult men are pushing at you, then of course you want to fight back. True, if the men by description such as Luke and Matthew, then I might not have fought back ... :)
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I do not know how anyone, but I disgusted to use the inexperience of a girl in this light. Yes, it can touch some naivety and inexperience, but to use it at the first meeting, also with a virgin, in general moveton. It’s obvious that a man at 17 saw less than you did at 28–32. Especially if a girl, I would say a child, 15 years old, I would have castrated such people with blunt garden scissors. Although, again, there are different teenagers and there have been cases when hints have been made from such girls, but an adult should understand his full responsibility for such things.
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15 years is not the same as 17, and the erotic fantasies of the majority of girls in this period are more often directed not to classmates. Although I am not responsible for the statistics, but I am responsible for myself and my acquaintances. A good or unsuccessful first experience is someone as lucky, but here it is not the age of the partners that is affected, but the coincidence of desires. And yet there is still the difference between rape and seduction.
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Yet again. What can a virgin know at 17 about sexual desires? A little less than 30 years old uncle, frankly. And even more so, where to press, so that these very desires coincide, uncle in the course ... Of course there is a difference between rape and seduction, but here again, age plays a decisive role, and, as it were, culturally speaking, the nature of the sexual act whether. I think it is clear what I mean.
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As for the difference in knowledge of 17 year old virgins and uncles of 30 years, I would argue))) It all depends on the interest in sex, not on age. Moreover, virginity does not interfere in general with learning, at least theoretically)) And many people exaggerate the value of practice;) So the first experience can be exciting, but not repulsive, even if it ... so to speak ... unexpected) )
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In theory, yes, although now is the time, which is practiced by many from elementary school))) Unexpected is how? Forced and abandoned was uncomfortable? In short, okay, but I still remain unconvinced. To seduce a girl of 17 years to me is more difficult than the other way around.
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At 17, they seduce with youth, beauty and inexperience in practice, and not sophisticated technique)) And about all sorts of surprises - you already fantasize yourself;)
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Fuck knows what they are trying to seduce more, but somehow it does not start too much. There is no experience in these things, although the experience on the sexual front for many to 3-4 years. Manners alas are now suffering. As for me, girls flourish in 20 years. The majority and the body is finally formed and the brain becomes many times more. Judging by personal experience. Is that lovers of fresh meat can make the most))))
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And as my former chief used to say. "And now we will have a week of tantric sex with an annual report." I added. “Yeah. Masturbation of the brain without orgasm. It's about experience)))
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"And yet there is still the difference between rape and seduction." - ------------------- -
There is no difference, more in the end - destruction. You can only consider the severity of the consequences for the soul and psyche.Especially if the object is such as your heroine.
Although your text is “strong” and is written in a good, quite literary Russian language, that there is a great rarity in such works. Curious how the plot rotates? Although the “logic of characters” has already determined its development in many respects: “the rebirth of souls” is not presupposed, if you don’t pull it “by the ears”. Alas, it is not in the times of Dostoevsky that we live and have not been afraid of God for a long time: sin, shame, repentance - “the sound is empty” for a long time. Homo-erotic with the main characters here will obviously not be based on the “logic” already set)))) Although ... if you decide, you are curious how you decide the question.))) Good luck!
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Dostoevsky wrote about things extremely scary, vile and nauseous, which occurred in his time, and in all others too. Me with my eroticism to his sophisticated sadomasochism oh how far. The girl, seduced by Stavrogin, raped by Karamazov elder mentally-retarded crybush, who later gave birth to him, went for some reason to the panel almost Saint Sonya Marmeladova (why to the panel? Why not a laundress, for example?!) ... Do you believe that everything is it written from God and from deep religious feelings? Was he writing only for the enrichment of human spirituality? Personally, I very much doubt (but this is my very humble opinion). I admire Dostoevsky as a writer, but I do not think that his novels are capable of elevating spirituality. They just terrify and everything. And the fact that God will forgive everyone, personally does not reassure me after all that you read in his works (and you see around).
What I write, in my opinion, is intended solely to “raise the tone” of adults who are looking for some kind of diversity in their lives. In the plot I diligently try to be realistic, although, maybe, I get bored))) As for the gay - I found a trace. the parts, in my opinion, are a good compromise that will look organically and will not alienate opponents of this direction (there will be no explicit scenes on this subject). About rape and seduction ... I repeat - there is a difference and it is huge. Listen to / read reviews of those who were raped. And I personally understand seduction as the temptation of the less tempted by the more sophisticated. How terrible / beautiful, morally / immoral, depends on the situation. Rape is always terrible.
Thanks for the wishes :) I will try to meet the expectations of the readers :) And even, if anything, punish the guilty heroes))
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In my opinion, seduction is no less disgusting than rape. Especially when a truly innocent soul is seduced. Just the destruction of the internal order is not so noticeable. Even the most seduced. By the way, you have a seduction described on the verge of physical rape. With the only difference that no one is beaten in the face, but forcibly the "main instinct" is situationally cut.
As for Fyodor Mikhailovich, his “abysses” have long been “common ground” for the surface reader (whom I do not consider you to be). True, I do not see there sado-maso, but only the study of sin, its gradations and the possibility of redemption. He is a sinful man, but God is not for him “a sound empty,” therefore his way out of sin is only through repentance. And if in the soul there is no face of God, then there is no repentance. And there are “down-and-out people”, like Stavrogin or Papa Karamazov. And “The Possessed” left him from Ivkaramozovsky: “If there is no God, is everything allowed?” Well, the novels are good enough for him, they force the soul to ache, for complex questions to search for answers - they do not just terrify. We are all sinners, but there is always a choice: up or down - there is always where to fall or where to rise. F.M. doesn’t have “God forgive everyone”, this is not the case in Orthodoxy, nor is it Catholic. Fuck us all, not forgiveness - without genuine repentance ... and redemption.
Well, there is a lot and you can argue for a long time.))) For example, why the Hindus have no idea of sin, but there is a Kama Sutra - by no means an instruction for complex, positional fucking.))
In the meantime, in the first part of “Christina”, the brothers GG didn’t have much better than Papa Karamazov’s speech - the same filth. That's why I'm wondering where they go - up or down. In fact, to the best of talent, you have the same questions for yourself as FM.will have to decide: the vector of movement of conscience and soul. And eroticheskaya novel can become a "novel of education")))
You succeeded with “raising the tone”, although your prose is more complicated and differs from most texts of this resource for the better: most of them are gray squalor. Well ... how they fuck together, so they describe.))) Spit on the rating with saliva: it does not reflect the true artistic value of the opuses.)))
About gay priprazy. Your oldest GG cannot be one by definition: he is not a composite construction, but a cast. Gay impregnations would be a deviation, and there in the character ... until ... there are no gaps. Here's the youngest could get out of curiosity to bisexuality - but only as a one-time practice.))
There is no need to punish the "guilty heroes" - they are not guilty that you invented them by such. Each author writes a novel not about heroes, but about himself, beloved.)))
"Brother. Novella "I liked: a rare but tragic choice between a centuries-old taboo on incest or love that does not choose.)) By the way, the term" refined "can serve as a synonym for the definition of" sleek ", which is very suitable for your GG - especially for the elder.)))
In general, almost by Roshchin: “I’ll join the library! I didn’t read the story “Kashtanka”, how it ended there! ”I threw your page in a memorial: I wonder where your GG will lead you.)))
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Hm I will not continue the discussion about Dostoevsky, all this is too complicated. I can only say that the religious worldview is far from fully characteristic of me for various reasons. Although ... in any case, all people, both believers and non-believers, still live with myths until now (that is, in particular, at the mercy of religious ideas), and this cannot be avoided. In the case of Russia, religion is generally of paramount importance. What I personally find particularly unpleasant in religion is hypocrisy, when people try to judge people by determining who has destroyed the soul as a result of certain actions. By “God will forgive everyone” I just meant this most sincere repentance (the main leitmotif of Dostoevsky). Sadomaso at Dostoevsky, of course, you need to put in quotes. Almost half of his heroes are overt sadists, the second half are half-holy martyrs selflessly engaged in self-torture (again, I exaggerate).
About the fact that about myself all the authors write. To some extent it is. Those who are more professional do this in a very veiled way, although usually people who are thinking try to set themselves tasks that are more complex and, as it were, not personal, but alien and universal, although they also occasionally roll to their own will and to their own. And when heroes create them, from a certain moment they begin to live their own lives, so I sometimes do not know where their curve will lead and what will affect them (I can only guess). By the way, comments often help to determine the right direction) So thank you for the detailed discussion)
And about punishment - why should I feel sorry for the heroes? I created them or not I, these are characters who perform certain actions for which they often have to pay during their lifetime (simply according to the logic of things). I may be mistaken in the realism of what is happening, but I try to be objective;) This is something like: regularly exceeding speed - more likely to be killed.
Thank you for your interest in my work) I will try further))
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I thought here once again about the conceptual content of the words: rape, seduction and seduction. I believe that the meaning that you put into the concept of “seduction” is closer to seduction. Flirting with "deep" physiological consequences.))) And seduction is "depriving a girl's honor" (according to Ozhegov, for example) In the first two cases I would define it as "contact with coercion", in the third - as "contact with persuasion" )
In our conversation there is no place to discuss our personal religiosity: we respect the Constitution of the Russian Federation, where our right is not to exaggerate this topic, if there is no desire, it is fixed.)
We are talking about literary works. And both our European civilizations are built on Christian ethics, so that the concepts of “soul, sin, repentance and redemption” are indispensable.
You are right that “in the case of Russia, religion is of paramount importance in general.” Moreover, the Russian state itself was created for the sake of and around the defense of that Orthodoxy itself. And Russian civilization in sociology is also called Orthodox, depending on the author of the source. And in FM, that is not a novel - that is the gallery of bastards: a sin is very diverse, and a man in his baseness is many-sided. And sincere repentance is the Gift of God for the salvation of the soul. It is necessary to study the Bible in school, at least from purely utilitarian positions: without this knowledge, the meanings of most works of art of the past pass by our understanding. I do not like the Lord Enlightenment - the lights of the Age of Enlightenment. From their ideas that it is man who is the measure of all things and modern liberalism has been fostered with all its vulgar stupidity and vileness. ((((Such is the personal IMHO.))
“... when people try to judge people by determining who has destroyed the soul as a result of certain actions. “- so simple with that.) There is the“ canon ”, the standard,“ the norm ”- the ethical Law, stated in the Eternal Book. They are oriented towards it.)) Otherwise, if the Supreme is not there, then everything is allowed. We already forgive a lot for ourselves ... Well, but within the framework of this resource: there are pranks and “pranks”. (((The taboo on the same incest rests on genetic and economic feasibility: a survival rule at the level of the law. I was interested in your “Brother" that the question was raised here: the law is the law ... under any circumstances and introductory, or all of it you can break it ... under special circumstances. This “here from the ve keschin” in all areas of our sinful life comes out regularly, but everyone decides it, including the prose writers, in his own way. (By the way, in Russia sibs do not pursue, although they do not marry - according to the Family Code, tea, not German on which during this period can give. (For example, the question of evrotolerantnosti.))
“About the fact that about myself all the authors write. To some extent it is. ". I do not agree. To any degree, always from the perspective of personal experience, understanding of being, etc.))
What is the level of the writing task - professionalism does not matter here, it will only affect the quality of the text - all the same, everything will be sifted through the “sieve” of a particular individual with a pen.)))
And the heroes take pity yet. Give them a chance to repent, to save the soul. Well, good sex on the background of love will be forgiven them all earlier. They say that "God is Love." So our “evil” animal will be bathed in love.))) Teach them to love - here you are defined as the Creator.)
Yes, according to the style. I caught “fleas” in Brother 6 — trained.) For example. You love the definition of "sleek". And the hair can not be “well-groomed”, but the “well-groomed” ones can be: well-groomed - excessively surrounded by care. In my opinion, it is not very suitable for the positive characteristics of "cherished" hair. Well, the paronyms are “realistic and realistic”: there, somewhere in the text you used “realistic instead of“ realistic ”, although here, in the answer, the definition was completely to the point. Trifle, and scratched.)) Well ... do I need to find fault with anything? Otherwise, what will I be for the reader?))
But you can describe the “passion”: not many can boast of it - here I met only two able authors. And without sickening vulgarity.)))
I say goodbye ... until the next chapter!))
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Wow - said goodbye!)))
As for editing, I myself am a fan of this prof. I don’t bring it to perfection in the habit, but in this case I don’t have much time for that, and when you write quickly, it may happen that something escapes, but I won’t rule on the site. I can advise you to add my favorite synonymizer to your collection of favorite dictionaries. ru)) In reality, it will be possible to fall asleep stunned "victims" with synonyms)))
In general, it seems to me that you shouldn't get too carried away with dictionary definitions - the language is richer, the language changes faster than they manage to create new dictionaries, the language even allows you to make mistakes, because through reservations, errors and inaccuracies some emotions are sometimes transmitted. And how many strange combinations are permissible in a good and refined literary text! (but this is not about my texts, they are simple, so I take note of the realistic / realistic amendments, I will continue to pay attention)
Sleek hair ... Why can't they be sleek? 1. one that is groomed; pampered care and care. 2. such that it happens with the careful care and care, indicating a thorough care and care. Hands / skin may be sleek. Why no hair?
The Bible and the history of religions, including Orthodoxy, yes, it is necessary to study as thoroughly as possible and not only at school for the sake of understanding history, culture, literature, etc., so that at least the epigraphs to the works of classics can be distinguished like: I am telling you that anyone who looks at a woman with lust has already committed adultery with her in his heart, ”well, etc. And the present church will not save from liberalism, unfortunately. Only the law and mass propaganda (the church propaganda turns out very badly). This is the only thing the majority will listen to (still it is possible to make Orthodoxy radical, but we need it?). Enlighteners ... Eh ... A man is not ready for their ideas - that's how I think. People are not ready yet to take responsibility for their actions, and even for others, and even more so, so let it be better for God to fear. To let such ideas go to the masses is definitely harmful.
Personal experience of the writer ... In my opinion, you overestimate the reader's ability to penetrate the author's soul;) For everything else - in the second part of Christina)) Thanks for the nagging)) stirs))
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Mdja ... said goodbye, clinging to the tongue.)))
For the recommendation of the dictionary, thanks: I like to read dictionaries.) Although ... my memory reserve is more reliable.)
"... the language is changing faster than they manage to create new dictionaries," - Not happy. Now there is a “simplification” and primitivization. They read little, the right speech is now rarely heard: that is why coffee is now in the middle gender in dictionaries fixed. ((I’m just getting along with some of the opuses: it’s felt that the pacer and Ryaba Chicken couldn’t be overcome. ((("... because some emotions are sometimes transmitted through reservations, errors and inaccuracies)” - I don’t agree: rather rhythm of text and mixing of styles - let's say, interspersions of “expletive” vocabulary in speech of “cultural personality”) Against the background of the excellently lettered language, this technique gives a special piquancy of speech, but you need to know the measures.
“Hands / skin may be sleek. Why is there no hair? ”“ Does FIG know him?))) Steady phrases. Hands, horses, people - sleek, and hair well-groomed. Even neat.))) But the combination of the adjective "neat" with the essential "horse" I have not met. And like, everything - synonyms.)
Sho before the Church, it does not save: not a hospital and not the Ministry of Emergency Situations. It only helps and instructs, and everyone saves himself: he works on himself, overcomes.) And she is not a propagandist: who needs to find the road to the temple himself. Oh, how these “announced” enraged me - neophytes from Orthodoxy: they often behave like sectarians on the basis of Protestantism. (((Liberalism, like the ideas of the Gd of the “enlighteners” is a road to a dead end. If a person is the measure, then he has nowhere to strive for - everything! Sailed! Why does the “ideal” have something to change? ” what to take responsibility for their actions, "- And they will not. And to whom the answer to keep, if a person - the highest measure?)))
“God is afraid” is not an option for modern society: non-all smart, everyone knows, they understand, they don't fear anyone. And there will be no sense through fear, only through love. To love in yourself the best - our divine part, and to grow it in yourself. And this is labor and considerable: overcoming. Straining is required. This is the Path of an Adult (using Eric Burne's classification))
Vasche, the philistine, at times, in the wildest way, interprets the Bible (without reading!) Outside the historical context. One interpretation of the concept of “god of God” which is in the mouth of individual ignorant.))) Onex is not slaves, but free people ”))) And you dig deeper - the last slaves ...)))
“In my opinion, you overestimate the reader’s ability to penetrate into the author’s soul;)“ It’s better to talk about the author’s modus operandi with being. It’s difficult to judge someone else’s soul: you don’t immediately understand yours.))) But through the author’s attitude to some “momentous” moments, some conclusions can be made, moreover, the author gives an assessment in accordance with his internal settings.) Yes, and there’s no one understanding the book. Someone read that there are many options for “War and Peace” - as many readers, so many options.And one more: Count Tolstoy himself.))) And in this version he is revealed before the world. Here you are, for example, a girl was saved from seduction ... at least for one evening.))))
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Oh, well, do not persist in absolutely everything)) Hair can be groomed)) There is a shade of aristocracy in this word, and the word “well-groomed” is too neutral;) Well-groomed hair is when you just washed it, combed it with dandruff shampoo)) ) However, okay - about male hair, I can and more detailed next time (:
All smart and not afraid of God? Are you talking about Western culture, including us? But what about the rest of the world, steeped in the Middle Ages?)) We are too arrogant here in our sore West - used to think of ourselves as the navel of the earth;)
When a person does not understand the laws of life, and more often simply does not think about them, he, of course, has no one to answer. Meanwhile, as nature itself dictates the only possible way of survival of both an individual and a species - natural selection, endless progress for the sake of survival, for the sake of reproduction of its own species, for the sake of expanding its habitat, for striving for immortality (overcoming the natural fear of death). God certainly needed to be invented, so that those who are not capable of thinking in the abstract have before them a clear example of what they should strive for. Although the laws of nature already clearly demonstrate what and why you cannot do: various kinds of behavioral deviations (including sexual), excessive cruelty, excessive depravity, laziness, gluttony, any abuse, etc. - lead to a weakening of the form and to its extinction. So everything is simple;) And this is what inspires many for great achievements. Only universal enlightenment ... it's like the embodiment of heaven on earth. Therefore, there is always something to strive for. And liberastia is yes, in any case the worst of the options for society, when even the most base features are glorified in person. So after all, these are not random processes, as claimed by conspiracy therapists, who know everything about everything and everyone))
I saved the girl?))) You don’t know me - maybe I just love torturing my heroes)) Longer)) Yes, the author’s assessments expressed in the text can be fictional and differ depending on the task assigned to the writer;) “All lie” :)
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I do not persist.))) I once again checked my point of view on the Word Compatibility Dictionary (ed. By Denisov). However, you are entitled to your opinion. This is such a trifle against the background of the “creativity” of other authors ... and not only here.)))
I was not talking about universal enlightenment, but about the specific ideas of the Gd of the Encyclopedists, all of these Diderot, Rousseau, Montesquieu and other Voltaires.
And watching the processes in the Western democracies, especially where leftist liberals came to power, I do not get surprised that they are increasingly taking on signs of tottoletarism in a forced "liberation of the spirit." A certain “dictatorship of freedom” is such a dangerous and sad paradox. (((“Everybody is lying” (c). I’m not! But I’m easy to grab when I have to ... for salvation.))))
"Torment" the nerve? Yes, please!))) Both life and the author's will are variable.))
“Yes, and the author’s estimates expressed in the text may be fictional and differ depending on the task assigned to the writer;)“ - Anyway, any option will bear the imprint of your personality only.))) We all lie differently - even within the same plot.)))
If GG was only one girl, then more than a “romance of upbringing” you wouldn't squeeze out of it: a sort of “Teenager”, but about a girl.) But with the appearance of boys in the plot of GG, the scope is greatly expanded: muschin - such cats. )))
You are on prose. ru laid out their texts? There is a place for everything, and erotic creations, too. You will have readers.))
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So, dictionaries are compiled based on linguistic realities;) The latter are primary, and dictionaries are needed to describe a language so that it can be studied, for example.
On prose. ru - no, it was not published, although many times I went around and about. I do not understand the format of this site, in particular, how something can be conveyed to someone through it. And since here I was kind of stroked on the head (see Eric Burne))), I decided to take up the mind in the most powerful way and send 1 work to the publishing house, but so far everything was hanging (in the sense of bringing it to mind), t to. hit into erotic prose)) And as always, time is on everything butt ...
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“So after all, dictionaries are compiled on the basis of linguistic realities;) The latter are primary ...” - Well, well! Let's wait!)))
“On prose. ru - no, it was not published, although many times I went around and about. I don’t understand the format of this site, in particular, how something can be conveyed to someone through it. ”- I suppose that this resource is a very popular“ reserve ”of novice talents and experienced graphomanes with a reputation as a serious site.)) ) Authors who want recognition - at least on the Web - publish their masterpieces there. Someone then gets into electronic bs, and even into real publishing houses. Well, the number of visits there is higher, and the audience is wider.
Attempt with publishing - the right step. Good luck! And with erotic prose you get: you are given words to convey emotions. It’s difficult to describe the pastel scenes - I wouldn’t have taken it - and very few people were given: they still cope with the “technique”, although with difficulty, but you don’t feel the taste of passion on the lips. At best, boring, often funny.)
You did it frankly, without slipping into vulgarity or primitive obscenity - with psychology and mood. By the way, very cinematic.))) No, I was not bored.)))
And, really, but instead of the preposition “from” you do not use “with” - special thanks!)))
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I was glad to dispel boredom)) I hope I will not disappoint demanding readers in the future) Thank you for your evaluation and advice;) Although for “from” instead of “c” it was somehow too)) Insult)))
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In the sense of "gratitude for")))) Horror ... (:
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Well, my father, my stepbrothers, then almost castrated, they were saved only by the intercession of the mother and their quick repentance, and the fact that they helped me very much to look for me when I ran away without a jacket on a cold night.
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Although this kind of situation in its own piquant. Sometimes walking down the street I look at the current 17-year-old girls and their appearance, and I would not be surprised if they are already having sex.
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The view is very often deceptive. To my mind.
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Yes, skromnyagi are such zajnitsami))))
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And after that, all reconciled, as I understand it?
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Well, when the whole family stands with a penitent view around your hospital bed, it is simply impossible not to start putting up. It is true that some time she was wary of the brothers, until everyone proved in her own way that they were not afraid of them and they would understand and support them in any situation.
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Well, all's well that ends well. People are different - really could get to criminality, and this is not a joke.
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As the doctors said then, if it were not for the ambulance that was passing, it could have reached the cemetery and a beautiful wreath with the words “Remember, love, mourn”.
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Nightmare (
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Horrible. I would be in the place of the pope face all the same guys stuffed, purely for prevention.
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He did not fill so that they could care for me after I was discharged home from the hospital. True to the psychologist, I still looked like a while ...
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Believe me, now to meet the naive 17-year-old virgin is very rare. Many girls start having sex almost 10-11 years. A great story
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From 10-11 years old you are bent. From 13-14 mei bi. And you can meet, just need to know where to look. Some for some reason, they are looking for love for the rest of their lives in discos)))) Here the main search parameters are correct to ask))))
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Unfortunately, not bent. My little sister is 12, and her friends are surprised by her innocence. And these are children from good, decent families ... And about the parameters I agree))
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Somehow it is creepy to read about such things, but maybe acquaintances will like them if they are her age. Some children tend to seem sophisticated in all matters. Maybe they are well-informed, but in order to start a sex life so early, this is somehow wild ... In my understanding, this happens in some dysfunctional families ... at least I want to believe that it is not commonplace.
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Just the children of these rich as I understand, families are becoming the most depraved)))
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I do not think that rich children become the most depraved)) It depends on upbringing on the family. And do not take my stories as an example;) I have wealth - for the sake of entourage, for the sake of some aesthetics, for the sake of freedom in plot moves. For example, I wanted to go somewhere - please. Necklace girl? No problem;)
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I take examples not from your stories, but on the basis of logic, life and historical experience.
It is the golden youth, rich daddies and moms, looking for a “new feeling”.
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In my opinion, this is a misconception promoted in Western pop culture. Money spoils. But not all. Although ... in general, it does not matter;)
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the dispute turns into a political plane))))
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What? Politics?)) About politics only on thematic resources and only under a male nickname;) I don’t like to talk altogether with men in these matters, and female nature implies softness and flexibility))
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Yeah) still as spoiled))
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Dima (the senior of the consolidated ones) gave to read, he was upset that I still remember that unpleasant incident, but I became interested in what the story of Christina would continue. So we are waiting for the continuation :)
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You are more careful than Madmoezl, they are stupid men, suddenly he will think that you are hinting at something again))))
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Now I’m an adult and do not mind if such a male as Dima performed with me lions in the mating season in savannah))
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here understand that women)))
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Simply, there is a difference between an innocent child and an adult cat with unceasing heat))
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how do you know with one phrase to completely knock out the brain of a man.
And at first I imagined you a sort of quiet mouse, a maximum of a frightened kitten)))
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I was a quiet scared mouse until I was 18, then I became a very poorly liberated sex-loving cat)))
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I would wait your brother a little bit, such sex and an explosion of emotions would get)))
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The older one now has almost a wife, the younger one has no rebound from the girlfriends, so I think they have not lost anything. But who knows how fate will turn ...
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what a pity that I have such a little sister ... stepbrother.
And maybe good? Who knows))) Quality your sex Kira
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Val, maybe somehow from myself I will write a couple of stories of their sex adventures))
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You can throw in a personal outline of the stories, I will help than I can)))
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And do not want to become one of the participants?)
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I already want))) just at least throw off in a personal, for some reason I can't send you my email: (
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Yes, and we don’t need to be understood much, we just need to love, feed and not refuse anything)), especially in quality sex))
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Wow - zhzhote, Kira, zhzhote))) We are waiting for a written report))) lem - do not let the lady)))
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I think the photo report will be more eloquent)
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I liked it very much) to continue !!!
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Great story !!! We look forward to continue, and with impatience))) Author Respect!
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Thanks for the praise of grateful readers - it inspires;) I continue working on the sequel :)
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