- Studio romance. Part 1
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- Studio romance. Part 3
- Studio romance. Part 4
- Studio romance. Part 5
- Studio romance. Part 6
- Studio romance. Part 7
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trying to remove the girl from the back.
At this moment, I very well butted the second, and when he bent, gasping for breath, he added a good knee to his nose. Maybe even broke.
The brunette managed to shed Marina and already swung at her, but I managed to swoop on him and knock him down. Now the main thing is not to let him get up. Blow, more and more. All he has to do is cover his face.
It seems we are winning!
But I was delighted early, the second guy came to his senses and put me well below the back. I never thought that it was possible to hit the tailbone so painfully. I was not like a hero for howling, and clutching my ass, I jumped aside. Brunet and his friend were determined to rush into a new attack, now a united front.
Here they would have broken us, but, fortunately, the elevator stopped on our floor again and the policeman I already knew came out from there.
“Junior Lieutenant Kirov ...,” the policeman quickly assessed the situation. - Come stop the fight !!!
Having barely noticed the representative of the authorities, the whole company, including both guys and a girl, rushed down the stairs. The policeman briefly looked at us with Marina and rushed in pursuit. His cry echoed through the floors:
- I will come back to you !!!
I wanted to say a lot of things to Marina, but, catching her hunted look, I smiled tightly:
- Let's go home, everything is fine.
Before I could put the kettle on, they rang the doorbell. Lieutenant Kirov returned.
“The bastards are gone,” he said annoyingly. - And why? Because they jumped into the car and gave off gas, and I only have uniform boots from official vehicles.
I sympathetically nodded, Marina, clutching at me with a death grip, repeated the gesture exactly.
“So,” the policeman looked at us carefully. - First, your unhealthy pastel hobbies, now here's a fight ... What do you say in your defense?
- We are not bedding ... they themselves ... I have them ... and they are him, well, it turned out ... - Marina bleached.
“She wants to say,” I took the thread of conversation into my own hands. - That our pastel is only our business, and we ourselves are outraged to the utmost by this hooligan trick. Only your timely intervention and rescued us. If it's not a secret, what are the fates in our area?
- Neighbors summoned - blurted Kirov.
- They called it in time! - I smiled cheerfully.
- Will you write the application? The younger lieutenant asked wearily.
I glanced at Marina, but she did not react at all. (Especially for eroticspace.info) Then I decided not to hurry and first consult with Dimka:
- No, I think it is not necessary, if repeated, then it is necessary, but for now ... - I pointedly glanced at the door.
The policeman got the hint.
“Okay,” he turned at last. - But the second challenge ... take you to the pencil!
- Thank you for your vigilance! - I close the door with a wide smile. I am sincerely grateful to this policeman for help and for not bothering to ask questions. Now I wanted to collapse on the sofa and relax. What I did. Before making sure that Marina was not injured. Fear does not count.
- Nice you them! Cool fighting! - the girl spun nearby. That offering tea, then adjusting the pillow. - I was so scared, and then you ran into them! And r-aaa! And d-in-ah!
I silently lay on my stomach. The tailbone whined intolerably. Why in cinema are the consequences of fights always portrayed as fingals? Here I have no marks on my face left. And the tailbone ... How painful.
Grimacing, I found in the first-aid kit an imported miracle ointment for bruises and bruises.
- I'll grease! - Marina immediately volunteered.
“I can do it myself,” I try to argue, but where it is. The girl instantly snatched the tube from me and began to pull down her pants. My weak resistance was quickly broken.
Thin girlish fingers gently smeared cool ointment on my battle wound. Very nice. It was just a little awkward to lie down with my pants down.
- You do not want to tell who it was?
Marina for the moment got off, but quickly pulled herself together and continued to massage my tailbone.
- It was Oleg, Vlad and Game. My ... friends, - after a long pause, a girl confessed.
- And Oleg, which one is it?
- Brunette in blue jeans, you hit him first.
Aha Immediately I did not like it! Immediately!
- You do not want to tell what happened? And by the way,..
- What is the "way"? - I did not understand the girl.
“I don’t have a tailbone here - don’t get carried away,” the emboldened girl has long since moved somewhat below the damaged place and even tried to slap me lightly. With a massage, it's time to finish ...
- Yeah, - caught up Marina. - Now I will apply one more ointment.
- So, tell me what happened? - I was determined to get an answer.
“I called Ira from your home phone and asked her to bring some things, but so that nobody noticed anything at home,” Marina began to tell. - And she told everything to Oleg and Vlad. I grabbed the bag and closed the door, and they began to break ...
It all came together, I myself noticed a small girl's backpack in the hallway, just did not have time to ask where he came from.
“Igor,” Marina hesitated and spoke softly, almost plaintively. - You will not drive me away?
“I won't drive it,” I replied after a long pause. I guess I signed the verdict. In fact, with my answer I legitimized her being in my apartment.
- Thank! - from an excess of feelings, Marina slammed me on the affected place with a sweep. I howled like stung.
- Sorry!
- Everything! Enough therapeutic procedures! - I pulled on my pants. - Let's have supper and go to bed. We have to go to the cinema tomorrow.
- Oh! I need to prepare! - Marina rushed to the backpack and began to gut it, occasionally exclaiming. - Not that! She's all messed up! I asked for another!
I sighed and went to cook dinner. My macaroni was just cooked when Marina looked into the kitchen:
- Igor, can I use your spare razor?
- Use, of course, - I shrugged. - Just what are you going to shave?
In vain I asked. In vain.
- Do you really want to know? - Marina's eyes narrowed, and steel cut from her voice. - No seriously. I can explain to you that I will shave, show how gaskets are used, maybe you also ..
- Enough !!! - I retreated in horror. - I got it! The razor is at your disposal! In general, you can use anything!
- Thank! - the girl joyfully smiled, instantly changing mood. - I will finish soon and we will eat.
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Put 9, but only because sex is not in the first place here ... maybe for romance and not porn it is the norm, but just for me on the sex forum, even if there is no constant description of sex, then sex should be the center of the plot, and here a little more ...
It may be good, but as for me it is not quite for sex-teils ..
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This time I decided to focus on the “humor” and “not porn” tags.Sex will be ... probably, but you want something more interesting than the usual "spit it".
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I do not agree. The author honestly put the category "not porn", you want more sex, you can read other sections.
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Well, no, it went too far.
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Very nice and incredibly funny story, while reading it, it was like a fool)) I am waiting for the continuation,
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Thank you while writing is easy. I hope not to have to put in the far box.
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Author, you do not write the case of the book? The story is excellent and in no case do not change the style. The more you read about the heroes, the more you begin to understand them and when the “bed scene without a blanket stretched over the neck” appears in the finale, you get real pleasure from what you read. At this stage of development of public morality, cinema is not able to offer us a qualitative presentation of intimate stories, but such stories ... In this story there is an atmosphere and live characters created by the author, and all other nuances easily draws the imagination, so there are all guides for that. Bravo! I would be very grateful for the continuation of such a wondrous story!
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I have not written a single book yet, but I really want to, therefore I experiment with all possible genres, I fill my hand.
Thank you for your feedback, I will try not to disappoint.
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And you can make the girl not behave at all, just like a child, because it begins to annoy IMHO, and please, well, let them at least kiss once or touch each other. Well, you can not lie in the same bed for several nights and absolutely nothing. But sex is not necessarily a bang, and in general it is not even necessary to have sex, before sex there is a lot of everything that can be much more sensual, interesting and pleasant.
and then everything starts to resemble the relationship of father and daughter - fi!
the rest is cool, I would have lived with someone too :)
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And touch, and kiss. You only need to give them time.
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The story is cool. There is a desire to print it. And give a friend to read. Excellent and original course of the plot. Waiting for the continuation.
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Excellent writing, easy to read.
Waiting for the continuation)
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Great, but still "kAmorka".
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I did not read anything better on this site.)
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Vooot you! Master to torture))) Please torment further, this is great at you. Already so many sheets are written, and I'm still looking forward to, when is it already?
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I also liked it, it is easy to read, pleasant, the picture is alive. And the lack of sex, well, many find pleasure in waiting for sex, foreplay, tension between the bodies. In addition, drawing this behavior of the protagonist - the author creates an image of a good guy, which is impossible not to fall in love.
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A worthy continuation of what has begun: the images of the characters are becoming more colorful, humor is at the height. There was also a detective line with interesting friends. What do you suggest? First of all, do not delay the storyline: in a multi-part story, the dynamics are very important. Try not to repeat the same scenes many times. Somehow, gently, a little to reclaim the heroine, so that even the egg could fry, but not losing the charm of the ridiculous immediacy. And to suggest the plot is a thankless task, this is the work of the author. While everything suits me. Have a good sequel!
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I really liked it, I want to continue more)!
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Hey, I read with pleasure
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Thank you very much for the comments, I will try not to delay the continuation.
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pastel is a pencil such chalky or wax.
And the place where they were "found" by the junior lieutenant - Postel.
By the way, for the district officer - the title is not enough,
and for a group of faculty - few people!
After college, get a lieutenant
and youngest give with a long service life without education ...
And why didn't the lieutenant check the documents?
The main weapon of the cop is a pen!
Moreover, he did not come himself, but on the call of the neighbors! ..
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Thanks for the comments. On account of the title of district police officer - I do not agree, they all start with ml. Lieutenant and quite successfully working in this rank, I can say this with full confidence.
By the way, in large secret. Ml. Lieutenant Kirov is a policeman, but I do not claim that he is a district police officer.
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"I do not claim that he is a precinct."
then what the fuck is he pinned ONE (!) to the challenge?
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I do not want to spoil =)
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You write well.
But, on the eroticspace site ... it’s time to describe sex.
Tighten
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Not fair! Making an interesting start with blackjack and anal virgins, and then tightening up with a denouement - this is uniform sadism.
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The author, do not listen to anyone, everything is conditioned, everything is in moderation ... Take your time, do not hurry, develop your heroes, show their sensuality, their emotions, thoughts of experience ... this is incredibly fascinating and you get it very well , ... Yes, the audience is of course different, but you can write for those to whom not only sex is important, ... the scene with the horror sofa and pillow is a section of the territory that's what's cool, more of this ... but about the whims of the girl someone wrote comments above, but for the sake of such whims of girls I want to live, seriously ... I really like ... Prodo zhayte in the same spirit
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the joke is that I began to read the first part of the story after the previous comment, ... there is not quite rosy ... The choice is yours: the author: what response do you need, what kind of audience do you want to gather ...
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The first part begins gloomy, but it is conceived to create a contrasts with the sequels.
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To be clear: I am not against such a string and in general such a style. I do not argue, very interesting. But in the end, it is not a fiction novel. There was already one author with the nickname Kremona, she also wrote in a similar style. One of her little tales is spread out on 13 parts, 2 pages each. At first, of course, it was interesting and exciting, but in the end I read diagonally and only for the sake of the plot. Whoever wants to search for this very work - a search on the site Nick Kremona will not give anything. At one time it was cut out, since it had the tag "teenagers". So go to Google with the query: Kremona eroticspace we loved. And for the author - I repeat once again what Th1nk said above - you drag out. A little bit shorter. You are welcome. Not 26 pages. And then because all the desire to read will disappear.
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The taste and color, of course. I, in any case, I am going to finish everything that I had in mind, and even that concerns size ... Well, if there are 30+ pages, then it will turn out to be 10 pages - then so be it.
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Oh, someone else remembers Cremona, I just reread it recently, I was looking here without success either. To whom as, but here such sagas drag on cleaner sex.
Author - thanks for the story, waiting for the continuation with interest;)))
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I read the first part, the norm end is all right, the author is waiting for the continuation
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Cool story! I am pleased to read the sequel! When can I wait?
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I can not promise anything. I hope during the week - two to write a sequel.
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The people, requires continued! And me too!
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The author, well, what's up? Excellent writing product, but where is the sequel? We have been waiting for a long time: (! The main thing is not to leave; I have seen so many wonderful works with great potential that have not been written. Please readers)
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Thanks for waiting. The third part is already written, as soon as the fourth one is ready, I plan to lay them out one by one.
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Great, happy to move on to continue :)
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And the truth is, the girl is annoying. What kind of girl is she? He doesn’t know how to cook, behaves in someone else’s apartment as if he was his own, blames him for various nonsense, and even has a lot of friends. All in general, and even repel the behavior completely. I read only because of the uncommon plot and the positive and correct years, but this ridiculous girl with her problems and this impudence blasted the impression.
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A horrid story, it is easy to read, only it does not apply to porn stories at all)
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