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there are men. All uporotyh with beer, well, so for the romance. She is still young, beautiful. And we fuck until it is gone.
Wow Prishol
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Fuck me in the ass.
Mamaaaaaaaa !!!
Oklemayus, then I will write.
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Again, all week did not write.
We fuck less, mostly communicate, argue. He's such an activist! All clever things are loading me, about the unity of the Slavic world, about the Great rise of the Russian spirit and such and such. I love to look at him at such moments. Immediately he becomes so special, his eyes are burning, and his voice is strong and strong. He just do strong. He raises me at times, can carry at least half an hour.
But I still argue with him. Lift up, but why beat the muzzle, insult each other and all that? And what have the Russian or Ukrainian spirit? What if one spirit has a great rise, so the rest should sit in the ass? We never had such a thing, everyone spoke Russian, and Ukrainian, everyone understood each other, it was good for everyone. Odessa Mama is two hundred years old, and we always had it so that everyone lived in the world, even in Ovidiopol there were Greeks, Russians, Ukrainians, Moldovans, Bulgarians, Jews, but he knows who we don’t have. I won one Russian grandfather, another Moldovan woman, Bulgarian and Ukrainian grandmothers. And surely the Gypsy blood somewhere wormed, blacking out what all. And now, my halves to fight with each other? He says that I do not understand that I have a philistine consciousness. He says the spirit and the idea is more important than life's benefits. But my sensitive good soul, he says, should help me realize where the truth is and where the lies are. So it is mine and so helps me.
In general, we argue on black. But never swear. If I see that there is a lot of emotion, I immediately start kissing, and if we are at home, I undress, I beat him with boobs, or I just crawl on his sausage. I wildly like to fuck him. We tried it recently, I would climb on top of him and fuck him like a boy, all so sexy, I press his unit there, and he writhes under me like I am under him. I love to tie him to the bed and fuck so that he cumshot of me, and watch him wheeze and salivate.
And we all the time fuck in the ass. As they tried, I could not sit for two days, but then it passed. That first time he smeared me with cream and at first smashed his fingers, while I lay shy like a fool. And he did everything right, I'm sure I was baldela. Then he confessed to me that he read all the manuals on the net. This is such an awesome feeling when everyone is doing things to you, and you give yourself up and get high. He took turns in thrusting three fingers into me, and it was already good as pipets, as if they were caressing you right from the inside of the body. He popped his fingers in me many times and took out, I lost the account. And then stuck it like that plump, already cold in the gut. I feel like I want to shit, but it's nice there are no forces !!! I lie like this, groan and say: when will you be me? And he says: already. It turns out he entered me at the very balls, I did not notice. AAAAAA !!! From the mere thought that he was all in my ass, I was directly overlooked. And he still caresses me, licks my ears, the back of my head. Lie quietly, says kayfuy. And little by little it moves in me, fuck. Ahuenno was nice, but then it hurt badly, I even cried. But then the ass was developed, and he fucks me a tude almost as easily as pussy. Almost. The buzz when I am standing with cancer, and he is a tude, and a syuda, or in one dick member, in another fingers. Well, there are simply no words !!! ..
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In economics, we are tested 2, haha. And me and him. Well, it is necessary that such a schmuck taught people!
It was cool: today I’m told one, like, your Cabbage with you is so izminilsya, right the whole macho is not to know. And then my neighbor Aunt Bronya tells me: you are so izminilas ...
Kapets! And I didn’t change my mind, just maybe the emotion is less and noise, more it all goes to sex.
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Well today is the day ...
First of all, Mamulka heard her load about Benderlogov. I saw him with Georgievskaya ribbon. Quarreled straight pipets like, kicked out and forbade us to go. I wanted to leave with him, so she haped me by my hair so that I would not be dumb. Well, I ran away with him anyway.
Then he still.Angry such goes, says, “what are you with me? You agree with her. ” They say you're for Benderlogov.
Then it took me evil, as I began to peel. You fool's dickhead, yell, and banged on his ass, right on French Boulevard, for all of them. But he suffers, he does not give a date, but I use it and I beat it. Then he hung on his neck, and they laughed like crazy.
Then they turned into Chkalovsky. The first of May is full of people everywhere. Well, we climbed under the stairs. There really is shit everywhere, but all the same it's great, the greens are like this, the leaves glow like in my Ovidiopol. All the same, this solid stone and asvalt zadolbali. We climbed into the bushes, and I stretched his pants to him, got up on my knees ... You asked, as for. Look, I say, I'm in front of you on my lap. Appreciate! And at the very bottom in the cold.
Because she was afraid to screw up. He immediately gave me a kuni for five plus, and I never did blowjob to him, even strangely like that. And now I suddenly realized that it was time. I lowered him pants with shorts, so that all the ass was mine, and I lick him a sausage like ice cream, such big lizki. And she is so salty, so cool ... And the sperm is pepper, I thought it would be nasty to swallow, but it turned out nothing.
In general, he finished in half a minute probably. I just broke up. So, I say, you forgot that you teach me the tricks of sex? Let's tell you how to do it. And he only moans and rocks ...
Then he walked like a drunk. Left on the landscape. Around the crowd of people, and it seems that everyone knows what I did to him blow job, I can not look at anyone. I go and rzhu as psychic.
Sea rustles near. He says: there is a nude beach over there, let's go? What do you say, I will never undress, I can not. Well, just go see, says.
They came, and there is full naked. I've never seen so many naked live. They do not bathe, it is cold, they simply lie naked, smoke, play cards.
And then he began to undress me. I do not know how it happened, but I did not even resist. Section to the goal, to the pussy. As it was inconvenient to shout, around the same naked, tanned, hardened such, laugh.
What are you asking, I can't. I'm ashamed. "And I want, says, that all saw what you at me beautiful". And he undressed himself.
In general, I pitschiteli how many people in my life have seen my pussy. Mom, doctor, he is, and for today about forty people have probably been added. We lay naked right on the stones, they are hot, we listen to the sea. The breeze is blowing. I feel all skin naked. They walk past me, they look at my pussy, and everything is unbroken there. Kapets both ashamed and cool ...
Then he took me home, but my mother would not let me. You Colorado, says go to her. I was a little sour, I never thought that she could.
Well, he certainly says: come to me. They came, and his daddy drives me out. Benderovka, says go to your mommy. It turns out that their home is the same, and mine has long been suffering. Pipets.
I didn't even cry, I was so shocked. (Especially for eroticspace.info) Well, nothing, says my, since no one wants us, I know one place. We went to our Kulikovo, said, we spend the night there in a tent.
Here we sit here. Cool, like in the movies. My ears have solved world problems, and here I am sitting near a tent, I am writing. Everyone is pestering me, zadolbalo already. Syavu met from our group, they say that Kotya is somewhere here. Stubby everything with beer. And my straight preacher, his eyes are burning. How nice that from the very beginning I saw a good man and did not lead on the moron. How good ...
That's just what to do, it is not clear. It is clear that they are going crazy, but when? They bother me so that I tied the Ribbon of St. George, I don't want to, I otmazyvayus, like I do not go to my prikidu. But actually I just don’t want anything. Nafig person allocate any ribbons, such as your own or your enemy. The main thing that he has inside, and not what is fastened on him. I am a simple girl and I do not understand politics, but in my opinion it is so simple.
Something long is not it ...
Today, the first time we spend the night together. I will hug him all night, I have already decided. I wonder, does he snore? And besides us there will be a lot of people in the tent?
How alarming. Perhaps it is such a day, on the nerves of pressure. And probably I am a coward, got into an unfamiliar environment and that's it.
I'll go look for my preacher, but something without him is completely dumb. And it's already dark to write.
God make people smarter. And so I was not afraid. And that was already the world.
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This diary was found on May 3 at Kulikovo Field in Odessa.
He walked around for a long time in the police department. Cops read it and pickle it up to holes. So he would have worn out in the powder, if someone had not lost it in the toilet. When I found it, I immediately realized that it was my duty to open this invaluable document to the world.
The names and destinies of his heroes are unknown. It is not possible to define them: in Odessa, all Svyatoslavs are called Syavami, all Konstantinov Kotya, all nerds Kapusta, all neighbors — aunty Brony, and economists, without exception, squeeze beautiful female students for tits.
Therefore, we will never know whether the heroes were burned alive, shot or strangled, hospitalized or returned home safely.
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You are a genius.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
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nerds FTW !!! make love not war
- - peace
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You are the best! We were silent for a long time, so we even imagined that we could too. The story fascinates, conquers, you believe in every line. After all, you have not only kept the style, but even mistakes :))) As for the content - you should read all the ideas.
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And the “ideological” ones, Marina, will read and say: “This is Putin’s propaganda, and we are Putin’s zombies.” This, literally, is replete with the Internet. Well, if at least one of them thinks about the words of a simple Odessa girl, the last twenty years have not been in vain, alas. We naively think: “We are as we were, it means they too.” So, the figs are not too ... Well, yes, all right. Today is our holiday: it was completely gone back with a wonderful, naive, enthusiastic and sad story. My +10!
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Yevgeny, yes, only a simple Odessa girl treats Putin and Bandera zombies equally. She just loves Putin, but not because he is Putin. Mom she loves too :)
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Awesome story!
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The story is power!
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Judging by the spelling and style, you need to look for heroes in the nearest vocational school - the author somehow lost sight of the fact that the heroine is a university student. Or is it underlining the terrible fall in the literacy level of Ukrainian students?)) Nothing, so soon, it will soon help to lower it to zero. Stylization is extremely weak and naive.
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Dmitry, do not forget that the Russian language is not studied in Ukraine.
In addition to specialized Russian schools, in which the heroine, apparently, did not study.
And about vocational schools - you know better :)
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It is also studied how)))) And not only in specialized schools. But if a girl hails from a small town or from a village, in theory she should talk and write on “surzhik”;) And the mistakes ... I have seen such mistakes here in the original Russian, that I - the ethnic Greek Tatar - hair stand on end )))))
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A non-commentator, around Odessa, they do not speak surzhik. The southern boundary of the surzhik is the north of the Nikolaev and Zaporizhzhya regions. Surzhik penetrates into the Odessa agglomeration only with visitors, which, however, quite a lot.
“In 2010, according to Vladimir Polokhalo, chairman of the committee on science and education of the Verkhovna Rada, there are 1,199 schools left with Russian-language schools, and 1628 bilingual schools [127]; according to the Ministry of Education and Science, 862, 7 thousand (18, 7%) of schoolchildren studied in Russian. [128] »https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/%D0%F3%F1%F1%EA%E8%E9_%FF%E7%FB%EA_%ED%E0_%D3%EA%F0%E0 % E8% ED% E5
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H. Man, a surzhik is called a mixture of languages, usually Russian and Ukrainian.In Odessa and the region speak surzhik, but mixed with Moldovan and Yiddish)))))
1199 schools with Russian language of instruction and 1628 bilingual schools are almost three thousand schools. In your opinion, how many schools are there in Odessa region?)))) And yet, these are official statistics, multiply these figures by two and you can’t go wrong - many of our institutions conduct all documents in Ukrainian, and in reality the teaching is in Russian; )
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No, “Odessish” with a surzhik has nothing in common. For the "surzhik" it is the Ukrainian component that is of principle. Especially since the “Odessish” has almost disappeared into the “Senengev Russian”. Earlier, about 100 years ago, the Ukrainian-language jet in Odessa was much stronger, but over time it almost faded away. In Odessa, there are people who simply do not understand Ukrainian. This does not mean, by the way, that they want to live in Russia, and not in Ukraine: there are quite a lot of Ukrainian patriots among the inhabitants of Odessa (Russian-speaking). I know all this not by hearsay.
And I did not give statistics in the Odessa region, but throughout Ukraine.
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What I am talking about is easy to follow along with the evolution of the Odessa chanson language. The oldest, pre-revolutionary and 20-ies of the city - “From Odessa Kichman”, for example. - with a strong Ukrainian component (surzhik). The later - the less. Already in the 1930s - “A beer pub opened on Deribasovskaya”, or “Mom, I love a pilot” - there is almost no Ukrainian component.
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I will not argue - Odessa chanson was never seriously interested ... so, on trifles)))))
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According to statistics, then we can safely multiply by five))))) I will give an example - a rural school, Ukrainian, the rehearsal of the last bell ... in an hour and a half - not a single Ukrainian word)))))) They think there in the classrooms that they passed a resolution, then everything is under the visor and execute))))) And on the ground they are clutching their heads - how to read mathematics in Ukrainian, when all the textbooks are published in the deep Soviet Union?
The last time I spoke with Odessa ... I will not say how many years ago, but obviously less than a hundred ... so here - their "Odessish" differed little from our "surzhik", unless it was an accent)))) And everyone understood perfectly)))))
And yes, no one wanted to go to Russia ...
Shl I am angry - I remember those full faces, I just want to vomit and throw> _
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Well, we are talking about the schools in which Russian is studied, and not about where it is spoken :) Indeed, the South-East of Ukraine, including the village, speaks Russian, and there are more Russian schools, respectively. In the Transcarpathian region of them, for example, as many as one, and in Ternopil, most likely, not one (I don’t know for sure). The school you are talking about is most likely located in Kharkiv, Sumy, Luhansk, Donetsk, Zaporizhzhya, Mykolaiv, Kherson or Odessa regions. Hardly - in others.
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In Zaporizhzhya))))) And Russian is studied there, because there are not enough Ukrainian primers at all))))))
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If possible, provide statistics on the number of Ukrainian schools in Russia, by regions and how many (if any) are left in Crimea. And the story is great.
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So I can find out this statistics only from where you are from - Wiki :)
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The best statistics - personal participation. I personally took part in the life of the Odessa region. 4, 5 years. And I will tell you one thing! The impurity of the Moldavian language is present only near the Moldavian border. And surzhik has a distribution throughout the region. Also, the Russian language has recently been studied in all schools, starting from elementary school. Last year new textbooks were delivered.
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Ukraine is learning Russian! But you do not know this, if even on this site you are promoting in the comments. I am Ukrainian, I live in Ukraine, Ukrainian-speaking since birth, but I know Russian better than many of your compatriots. And my child learns Russian in an ordinary Ukrainian school as a compulsory subject for study, and not even as a foreign one. Whether Ukrainian is taught in Russia is the question!
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H. Dmitriy,
Alas, university students kosyachat no less than others. What makes you think that the level of education is somehow related to literacy? For example, I find a punctuation or spelling mistake in every third text of “customs” on clavogonok, and it’s good if one, and these are quotes taken out of fiction. Which is handled by special people in the profession of "editor". Think about it ...
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The best story I've read on porn sites. And he hung on them a long time ago, since 2001, and even wrote several himself.
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Beautiful theme - love on the background of the war ...
And I will not write anything else - because what is happening now is not a war, it is a performance staged with money from unknown sponsors. And it is very unfortunate that many extras believe that this performance is life.
PS Zv. Man, if you have an idea to write about Ukraine again, please contact us. I can help with the "localization";)
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Yes, I agree that this is a performance.
Thanks for the help, but I myself have been in these parts so often that I have long been localized to the logical limit :)
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It's my pleasure ;)
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People died there, and you earn points at their expense. Shame should be the author. There were no other ideas? fantasy faded?
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Kirill, I would be ashamed if the heroine wrote: “aha, they burned Colorado! so they should! ”Or:“ bitches Banderlog, cut out all of you to one. ”
And so - not ashamed.
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It should be a shame to those who, at the expense of these dead and missing, fills themselves with a political rating, and Chelovekus raises moral and ethical questions that resonate with readers.
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In your war there is no place for the love of teenagers? Among blood and politicians, when they demand from everyone to choose someone’s side and be sure to be “against” someone, there are no such nerds, silly tender girls and first sex?
I like this! In general, I love it when, against the backdrop of human dirt and that garbage that clogs human brains, suddenly someone has such a golden grain of sand "We live!" We can! Love! ”
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In war, there is a place of love, and tenderness, and even compassion, and philanthropy, but, unfortunately, all these wonderful feelings and qualities are doomed ... Although, of course, I want to believe that these two were not burned alive at all, were not shot, strangled or stoned, that they managed to escape to the famous Odessa catacombs, hide from the cruel and unfriendly world and raise their love to true love ...
That is why my score is ten;)
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What is he raising there? Readers are here to gather to raise something for themselves. And the author just dragged a fashionable theme to his story. It is evident that he himself understands little in the events that occurred. What makes him think that parents out of any nonsense children were expelled to the streets and with such applications ?. Do students at the institute think only about sex without politics? and what is this (we will never know what happened there)? The fact of the matter is that everyone really doesn’t care what was there and how it was.just a fashionable topic you can earn points.
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With the same success uv. A man could put his heroes and during the Great October Revolution, and in the days of the Paris Commune, and even during the War of the Red and White Rose - what difference does it have, where and who staged a coup d'état? There is only one truth - in the History the life of two people is not even an episode, so statistical information - in such and such a collision so many were killed, so many were wounded, so many were missing without a trace. And for us, for those who could well be in the place of these two, or in the place of one of the hundreds or whose relatives could be among them, this is a real tragedy.
Yes, this is a porn story site, where, as it were, it is not customary to talk about something other than “mechanics”, where people come to take a break from everyday life, relax, “let off steam”, but, you see, naked “mechanics” get tired very quickly - we people, not cars, we need emotions, feelings, experiences to complete the sensations. And here - and “mechanics” are more than enough, and you can rake in even the feelings with a ladle.
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Who remembers this October revolution? few people in which country was the War of the Rose. And here is a fashionable topic, everyone knows.
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Well, let's go on the other side - why don't you want to assume that the author describes not the present, but the events of, say, a civil war? Then in Odessa, too, was restless. Discard these St. George ribbons and all - the White Guards, red and UNR-ZUNR. As they say, the same eggs only in profile.
The background can be anything. That's just the essence does not change ...
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Do you think dibily sitting here? without education? Mowgli from the forest? type we can not distinguish the era? Although your arguments only confirm my arguments. Indeed, one can choose any epoch, but the author chose those events that everyone has heard, because he wanted to “interest” his reader, and the fantasy is not the same.
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I do not think anyone moron or Mowgli from the forest)))) But I sincerely regret that you paid more attention not to the plot, but to the background.
The author writes that he is interested, and not about what is interesting to readers. At the moment, obviously, it takes and worries about what is happening in Ukraine. This is commendable - the authors should not remain indifferent to what is happening around. And if his interests coincided with the opinions of readers, hit the stream, then it’s probably not the events themselves, but the presentation. Perhaps, if someone else had written about it, it would not have caused such a storm of indignation;)
And enough already angry, do not you think? Noble anger is good in moderation;)
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Only morons do not remember the "October"
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Dear, can you offer something for your reader? Not this, as you put it, a fashionable topic, on any other. Not? Well, shut up.
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By your logic, it turns out that you can only write fiction ...
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"... we will never know whether the heroes were burned alive, shot or strangled, hospitalized or returned home safely"
Yes, because you do not care, you do not want to know about it, just another topic for scribbling. And you call, make inquiries.
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Kirill, on May 2 in Odessa, more than 100 people were missing. And no help does not help.
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it's all aliens ... they steal people ... and they have humans as slaves o_O
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You are in the wrong category - you are in fiction with such thoughts)))))
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And you try.
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And you?
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Thank you for the spirit of the times and excellent presentation! It was interesting, sometimes funny and sometimes sad. Even in our country, which is not involved in the conflict in any way, society has split into two parts, though not so radical-minded - neighbors, after all.
And about Dmitry's remarks about literacy - so the heroine does not hide that she did not act like brains :) Such, alas, can be found in any university. In my opinion, the styling is great!
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Very controversial feelings causes this story. And there is no longer such a familiar happy ending ... and rightly so. He really is not.
Rather, this slaughter is already over. Let all those who are responsible for this horror, what is happening now in Ukraine, will die in terrible agony. Not the bottom of them or tires.
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I still would prefer that they do not die in terrible agony, but repent and smooth their guilt by deed.
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No, better let them just turn around and leave, otherwise even if they fix it, they will make it even worse> _
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I can not imagine how you can make amends for the people killed and the crippled fate. But I also agree with you - let them repent. Let them repent of their actions in such a way that no physical pain can be compared with their spiritual pain.
Horror, I did not know that I could be so bloodthirsty.
I can’t read or watch about Ukraine anymore - my heart doesn’t stand.
Only your stories and save. You are my antidepressant. I am already on the fourth page of your book. About September 11, you also have a very subtle and piercing work. As well as everything else. You write very tasty, Human, I read you with all my feelings :) Pure kayffff ...
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What a cool word - feeling. I drag in a personal dictionary, to a place of honor - next to the verbs "shomyachit" and "link" :)
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Here one commentator correctly expressed above.
When you read the stories of other authors, you think: you have to write yourself. I'll write better.
And when you read your stories, Man, you don’t want to write. SO I will not write. Talent is not given to everyone.
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Greetings.
The story, of course, out of a number of works that are published on this site. On the one hand, he seemed to me to be good, because the thought he carries is, in my opinion, very correct. But on the other - bad. I will explain why.
If the purpose of the author was to cause the reader sexual arousal (which implies the theme of the site), then in my case he did not reach it. With the recollection of what is happening in Ukraine, it is absolutely impossible to get excited.
If the goal was to make the reader think, then all this vulgarity about how and where, is absolutely inappropriate here. It makes it difficult to take the story seriously. No wonder slipped the comment that the author is trying to unwind, roughly speaking, due to the popular topic. In the context of the subject, the thought of peace and friendship may well seem to someone to be an ordinary lure. I can understand these people very well.
This is my first and very likely last comment on this site. By this, one can guess that the story made a pretty strong impression on me. And it seems to me that the author is to some extent talented. Therefore, I would not like to see his bright thoughts in the future, like the one hiding in the story, side by side with outright vulgarity. Perhaps the author would be worth a look in the direction of the “Not porn” tag.As far as I understand, there the degree of vulgarity can be understated quite substantially.
All this is purely personal opinion.
All the best.
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What an interesting debate around the "Diary" today. H. Fantastic, why don't you want to leave your feedback on C, T ,? Just with you it would be interesting to exchange opinions and argue. There are a lot of interesting authors on the site, waiting for comments on their stories, come in ... I think the author will answer you. I want to make a few replicas in response to your comment.
1) Do you think about the excitement of the author "flew"? Then, what was moving in the pants at the moments of heroes tumbling in bed? (Grinning).
2) You asked a question: this story - vulgarity or something serious? And how does it fit together? I think both. Or on the contrary, neither one nor the other. And it goes well together. This is a simple erotic-hochmic story that happened by chance in Odessa, which gave the story a rage of seriousness and tragedy. Well, as far as this accident is random, judge for yourself, considering that 80% of the news is now about it. I did not see any special vulgarity here, all in the usual author's manner. Unless, it is possible to argue how realistic are the images of young contemporaries.
3) There was a hint that the author chose a hot topic for promotion. Come to your senses, my dears! Click on "Man" and see 77 stories. The author is already so promoted that it’s time to spin back like a roulette.
4) And the last thing about the humorous component. None of the critics did not mention it, but in vain. A heroine with a model appearance and an almost clown soul is Hochma itself. And reading in the diary that she gets up is not possible not to laugh.
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H. Yevgeny3, a beauty who does not know how to tie two words without a mat, Hochma is only on paper, in real communication it is never funny> _
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FantastiX, Eugene replied so fully that I can only add a few words. I understand you. In a certain cultural mode, such a combination (vulgarity-pathos) is impossible.
Just in a different mode, which Eugene described, it is quite to itself. And it's only a matter of choosing a mode. The history of literature consists of such choices. What Pelevin writes, many still do not accept, and it is in combination. To convince a person rooted in one mode to be true of another is impossible. That's why I say: I understand you :)
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(an extra comma after the “other” got itself, I'm not guilty))
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The story is good, but just like a porn story. And talk about the Odessa tragedy is stupid, few people really know what happened. That chloroform found, and who used it - the question. It would be better to do without politics
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There is humor, but it’s special, maybe it’s like “Odessa humor”, although it’s not similar. Smile, but not amused.
Is that a joke is that the beautiful model looks gave her virginity for student curses to some nerd:
“Points, such a voice, well, just go easy. Muzzle like a mole. Handles are thin, walks all so hunchbacked, as if he has a house on his back. Dick shorter. "
Probably there are such fools, although this is fiction.
The author shows young heroes who died in Odessa, in love with romantics, idealists.
And I chose for this erotic genre, but in this case somehow does not excite ...
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“The author shows young heroes who died in Odessa, in love with romantics, idealists” - Damn, Dostoevsky. What was there smiled, in what place? "There was a hint that the author chose a hot topic for promotion. Come to your senses, my dear ones! Click on" Man "and you will see 77 stories. The author is already so untwisted that it’s time to roll back." ., fantasy dried up, Kama Sutra must be re-read at night to refresh.And do not write about what you do not know and did not see.
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at first I wanted to suggest introducing the category “dramatic”, after reading the comments, changed my mind. very shrill story turned out, taking into account the events. and still I am haunted by a sense of cinematography. according to all the laws of action, the chill in the soul increased as the place and time of action “localized”. A good movie can turn out - a mixture of erotica and tragedy. unless, of course, to present it as an “author's” cinema.
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Yes, I’m always focused on action.
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It seems to me that in this story "action" more
what will be in any film, filmed in this scenario.
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and also, I want to believe that the plot is still an author’s fiction, and not a real diary. already tired of the "chernukha" in real life.
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a good thing. Nothing to throw out of here, neither mate nor error. Ukrainian girls and write, even in Kiev.
It would be nice to lay out this story for a couple of resources. Graduss, for example, or Udaff. com Maybe there is someone who wants to make a film on this material. It would be great.
Successes, author
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Slightly helped the political issue, yet annoying when they write in hot pursuit. But still put the 10-ku without hesitation. Written very talented and delicate. Thank you very much, although I did not see anything humorous ...
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As a non-commentator rightly noted, this topstock could be spread over any substrate from the Paris Commune to the Sudanese War. But having staked out, apparently to warm up the public, the hot topic, when the blood from the floors and the brains from the ceilings were not washed up, the author hastily slipped slightly in the text and on the large (in the epilogue). For example;
The replica “Be my sexual slave” is for intellectuals and is not glued to solid stylization as a fool. But it really is a small thing. But “I entered the university with a face and tits” and her subsequent integrity, and especially the slap in the face with the teacher from the knight - the nerd ... This is certainly not a fold - not okay!
And in the end in general, the rush went like a craftsman, and the author missed the opportunity to break the applause in at least another three or four categories.
Probably already clave tormented and overlooked by the zomboyaschiku that the excesses in the DP were also accompanied by sexual violence. (KLONDIKE for fantasies) They even showed (with shading) an outstretched woman in some distant room. But having often visited a cop outhouse, the author was clearly in the subject and could well be on the scene of the massacre among the first “visitors”, find this woman, shoot, immediately place a trophy in the Internet, rummage in her backpack, find a diary, a photo of a botanist who was lying nearby with crushed eggs and noggin.
AND ... THEN, having read the diary to mentally recreate the course of events that followed the last recording. And there the categories “under duress under the threat of reprisal with a botan” “all her previous pleasures, but in a group performance” “all kinds of torture by itself” and the last line is fatal scars ...
That would be cool and funny ...
And so, you have not even skins removed from the fertile topic ...
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Prokhor Kuzmich, I would answer point by point, but cool first, otherwise my monitor hisses :)
I propose to read my bad stories for Ostyvachki. I have them too :)
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I'm under seventy now, so no texts from this site are already lit. Yes, and its own similar scribbling, even the fountain pen is initially written in the attic about ten kilograms. So just a cold analysis of the logic of building your next netlenki.YOUR past stories did not arise, and here it was this claw. “He walked around for a long time in the police department. Cops read it and pickle it up to holes. So he would have faded into powder if someone had not lost him in the toilet. ”
This document could not be dirty to holes in a fortnight. For some reason it was thought that this stamped phrase was drawn here in order to save time. Then I reread the entire text more closely, and the samples of Koryavinok, indicating that there was really a rush, set out the rough for you with only one purpose ...
Hint (albeit thickly) that one should not hurry, under the plot there are real events on which it’s not that the grass is overgrown, but also the embers do not go out ...
This is not ethical in my opinion ... Yes, others hinted to you and others. Vaughn, Leo Tolstoy Natalia's emotional throwing how long on the invasion of the French pulled ...
When the scoop was such a sweet couple on the stage under the motto: - In the morning in the newspaper - in the evening in a verse! They didn’t last long, although censorship wasn’t scraping them.
And the people disdained to listen, sing along and abruptly called names.
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It can be seen that it is naive to wait for your cooling, so I take a grab to avoid getting burned, but proceed to answer.
1. The concept of "sexual slave" has ceased to be the property of "intellectual" use and entered into a mass so long ago that it already had time to grow grass, and this grass managed to mow thirty-three times. In particular, on this site it is used in almost every third story, including those whose style parodies the “Unknown Diary”.
2. If you have ever watched the selection committee in higher education institutions in your life, you should have noticed how the male staff rejoices at the beautiful entrant, how her standards change instantly and imperceptibly, how she supports her if she doesn’t tease. And women in the selection committee, although there are, of course, but not so often, because this is a very tedious thing - to sit in the July-August heat of an asshole.
3. Botan, who has smeared the powerful of this world, is more than a popular plot. Even Zoshchenko used it.
4. Jump on the next. posting to leave the main thing for the end. For a month (!) A thick ledger can burn up to holes, not like a thin notebook. If you have seen the arrival and departure sheets where employees sign, you will understand what I mean. However, this is not the case, since in this context “to be dirty of holes”, of course, it is a figurative expression.
5. Tell your grandchildren what is ethical, what is not.
6. I will not comment on the proposal to extract the erotic component from violence against women in the House of Trade Unions. I think you and so ashamed that you blinked such garbage.
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Okay. Let's now point by point, and parting. So already in the clinch from the Main page were overthrown.
1. I would immediately have stumbled, if you, as an old-timer, told, under what nickname your GG hangs out here and the intellectual turns of speech are typed. And if this is not the case, then “in the garden of an elder, and in Kiev an uncle” - about Kiev is a coincidence.
Although it is now fashionable to invest in the mouth of the epic heroes modern Fenya. BUT, MASHA gets a bear with creative creativity all the time (kids think that they said that 100 years ago, and they just bastard about her actions) And bugs adults, believe me. But at least there it is clear that this is a spirit of the times and a common style. And you have a single phrase, of course, accidentally and in a hurry that got into the “diary” next to the simple and diligently exaggerated speech of the simpleton (and the phrase was written out without a single deliberate mistake - under the general style) of course it touches ...
However, this is just my feeling and I do not impose anything on you.
2. You caught me here. Before “the selection committee I was not able to defile.
But! For the sole reason that neither 50 years ago, nor in today's times, these “commissions” are gathered by the crowd to watch the defile caption in bathing suits (exception: theater-goers, circus, and some athletes). So again you hurried to draw a lyrical picture “- as the male composition rejoices to the beautiful entrant, how her standards change instantly and imperceptibly”.It was worth first to look into the “Rules for admission of students to the universities of Ukraine for 2013.” Of all the options, a face-to-face meeting with a core member of the commission is provided only for those who go through an interview. And here for stupid 2 options. Either a preliminary agreement (through an intermediary and a decent loot), or an impromptu agreement on the calculation in kind (again, good). And the long-established principle of “morning money-evening chairs” is in effect. And, in the same place, a stud-ticket for a languid look in our pragmatic age cannot be given at the same interview. And even if it had been a miracle, this dinamer would have already been eliminated at the winter session. Re-read by you the briefly outlined portrait of the “historian.” He would not have missed his own.
So your hastily fictional lyrics here too in the span
3. There is nothing to object against Zoshchenko. Yes, I nerd and did not touch a finger. He himself flew into "the wrong place and at the wrong time." And most importantly !!! If you mentioned in this episode that while the “historian” squeezed her, “this infantile slut, following the context of your kneading and examinations) would sluggishly kick, thinking that the campaign would soon have to be checked in practice (perhaps without much desire). Is her nerd really an exceptional lover? And here this bot drew from P on skis ...
Just a couple of phrases from the “inner world” of the GG and there was no reason for our battle.
4. At that time, when I began to write such little things, they secretly (under the fear of the real term) walked handwritten in handwritten form for years and did not read to holes. So I agree with my identity “this stamped phrase is drawn here” and your “figurative expression”. Yes, and we are stuck for clarity.
But your “For a month (!)“ Again caused a sad smile. When dealing with fantasies of real events, it is advisable to include a timer. Between May 2, when the "diary" went on a journey and the date of publication is really so. And let's subtract the moderation period from it, and you’ve probably “literary processed” it for several days, if you didn’t manage with the actualizing prologue and epilogue in a few lines to the previously available disc. (no offense. This is an assumption in favor of your own version of the terms). And if this assumption is wrong, and you are overworked with styling the text for a week, then the cops just got a couple of weeks left.
But I cite all these calculations with only one purpose. Not worth the rush. And reopen over fresh wounds. Therefore...
Immediately p. 6. You noticed that I did not use a single swear word in relation to your personality or opus, I managed to carry your computer, and you seem to be white-hot. This is good ... But after all, I only naturally and one with irony developed one of the likely fantasies of the local jitters, which you deliberately provoked by breaking off the narrative at the most slippery place. After all, you, as a pro, are obliged to know that such a literary device always includes fantasies to the extent of the reader’s perversity. And here it is not necessary to include anything. You yourself transferred GG to real. And there is what you read in my version. Consider that they looked in the mirror, and you became ashamed. Sure! And if not ... That is not treated.
Pee si It is temporarily forbidden to rattle Ukraine on many forums, websites and informpolos. Until it all settles down. And it will not become clear: - Who? Whom? And how many times?
Good luck!
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No, Prokhor Kuzmich, no heat. I just call what the fuck is called. Without unnecessary emotions.
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No, Prosha from Aleisk, who is in his seventh dozen, come on, where did the wind come from? He made a kilometer srach, put a bunch of super noodles on everyone, but he didn’t say what he wanted. Or you hint that all such an altruist and independent text analyzer is onC. T.? Why then did not touch the rest of the texts, since such an altruist and well-wisper? Or, like, the mother-in-law did not look at the Odessa topic, and she commissioned to do a rebuke? Oh, here, just do not! ... I am here, in general, the first time I see such a decomposition of the text into components. The whole question: what about dick and who needs it (except mother-in-law)? Or you care about the professional level of the author, so it is unlikely. You have slipped one phrase that do not touch Ukraine, until everything settles down.Looks like a dog is buried here. I do not know who and where it will settle down, but we are here talking about what we think and how we think, and it’s not up to you to admonish us, in what direction to think. Here the site is of a completely different orientation, no one talks about politics, but this does not mean that any “sage” can silence authors and “teach” them “where to talk”. As you can see, everything is simple, like “our father”.
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Well, you Prokhor and hegerg ...
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Fully agree with that.
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Cyril, this is natural. Friends trolls on the planet;)
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I agree with Prokhor.
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“As a non-commentator rightly noticed” - I'm a girl, I'm sorry ...
And - do not confuse the gift of God with scrambled eggs - I said that this topic is eternal, and not that the author tried to remove the cream from something there ...
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Yes, I see that already noticed. Even without explanation. By the logic of perception alone.
Of course the girl, and yes even greedy. It was worth a few words to borrow from your cue, and already the accusation of copy-paste.
Well, then some sort of scrambled eggs - a sample of female logic.
On the advice of "Human" - the points:
1. Though I am a guest, I am aware that anyone can hide anything, even a whole group of authors. So no offense ...
2. If my cue follows yours, it does not mean at all that you are getting dirty with the cream.
3. You may be in love with the author, but it is pointless to intercede for him. With his experience, he will repulse himself from anyone. And for what I drove on him, I am sure, he understood from the first time. In general, I treat him kindly, but the rate of fire is depressing.
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The best story I've ever read. The best is precisely because of the combination of positive moments: an interesting plot, a powerful presentation, a good, good language. Yes, maybe half the interest in this story is based on the topicality of the narrative, and in a year it will not be so interesting to reread it, but here and now it is good. Score - 9. But, remembering the evil trolls with ratings 1. I put 10.
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Diary of a young girl. Looks like?
I agree, the youth sociolect often has a rough-familiar color. but there is no slang in the text. Here is an abundance of obscene language. No more...
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There is slang, qwertyuiop, there is :) And the obscene vocabulary is just much less than in the average girl text VK or FB. The heroine matyukya only when well, a lot of feelings.
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They talk to each other in front of each other, they think it's cool, like cool. The diary is completely different. Diary - this is not the best friend. The diary is the second me.
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Not at all: the mat refers not to the periphery of the language structure (as, for example, special foreign words), but to its core. Therefore, many (all?) Swear mentally, "not letting out" the mat out (sometimes it still breaks))).
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I would not be frowning in my diary ...
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Unconditional 10. I will not even comment.
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Your story entered the TOP-250 best stories of the site for all times: https://eroticspace.info/top250/9/
Congratulations! This is a great achievement.
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I agree that the lion's share of the success of this story is due to the connection with the latest events in Ukraine. And this is extremely unethical.
And, given the specifics of this site, the analysis of the sexual color of the “diary” is very much at the average level in comparison with other stories of the author.
And further. Can't believe this diary. The Diary was written contrary to the laws of female psychology. It would not hurt to look into a couple of real “girlish” diaries / they are completely different there, and it’s not just the matter ...
Most likely, this is only a blank in the current frame.Simply, the author successfully "played" on the well-known desire of the masses to join the topical fried facts.
WHAT FOR?
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Iris, but other women, on the contrary, told me that the Diary is quite feminine in itself as a woman. Probably, it’s not so much about credibility as it’s about how this woman treats me personally;)
WHAT FOR? This question always sounds when the author deals with some important topic and is successful. By itself, success always makes you think that the author touched on this topic specifically for this. As well as an increase in positions always makes you say that a person is “dragged”, a victory in a competition - that he has a cronyard, etc. It is difficult for people to believe that others may not be in the ass just like that, without meanness.
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“Probably, the point is not so much in authenticity as in the fact,” that women are different)
"In the ass" and "success" are not mutually exclusive concepts, alas.
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The botanist, suffering from an inferiority complex, allowed Rashkin propaganda to fool his head, compensating for the lack of success and lack of communication in school by communication in the subculture of pro-Rashkin activists and a sense of belonging to the mythical rashkomiru. If he had met the girl a little earlier, he would not care about politics, and so, quite possibly, he was in the house of trade unions and burned out. It is always sad when propaganda makes the suggestible young people die for the interests of corrupt politicians. It is doubly sad when politicians have few victims, and they additionally help their supporters die (And in Odessa it was, proofs in Google). The blood of all those killed in Odessa is on the Putin gang. But nothing. He who sows the wind will reap the whirlwind. Whoever breeds aggressive and deceitful propaganda, kindles obscurantism and hurray-patriotism in his country, wring out territory from neighbors and finances terrorists - he will still face the consequences of such behavior, be it sanctions or disillusionment of the cattle after such propaganda bloat of patriotism. One century ago, at the beginning of the first world war, there was already something similar in this country. First - an explosion of patriotism, German pogroms and hats, and then - fatigue, pessimism, discontent and revolution. Putin, his gang and paid journalist once paid what they deserved. No, I am not a Ukrainian, and I do not belong to Ukraine at all. Yes, I hate rashka a hundred times stronger than any Ukrainian, because I live here and not watch this garbage from another country.
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Look, already the third one drew, flew like bees on honey. First, Cyril simpleton, then, a tall intellectual Prosha from Aleisk, now, a shark is a guy Python. And, after all, even to a prickly hedgehog it is clear that all three were on the site for the first time, and together they had to call the breadwinner to work out their greasy bucks and hryvnias. What a solid team, overseas conductor. Let our students learn how to put on the flow of verbal diarrhea for duping suckers. Only, it is unlikely you will break off here, look for the suckers in their turn to pay for this crap. Here, after all, bitches: the whole Internet went down and got to our site!
DEAR ADMINISTRATORS! WAKE UP, IT IS TIME TO CLEAN THE SITE FROM ANY GARBAGE!
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They also said that nobody considered Mowgli here, etc. Does this mean "simpleton"? And you mean high anxious, sophisticated intellectuals? Did I understand you correctly? Conspiracy theory.
By the way, the word Loch appeared in the 19th century in the Vladimir province, and it meant it - the Man, the Peasant. And the expression Cool Loch meant Healthy Man. And since the intelligentsia despises ordinary laborers and people from a plow, this word has become a curse in your mouth. Such as you fool youth in the 80s, they put them on Pepsi and American chewing gum, on porn sites. And now you pretend to be ..., all your opponents are lumped together and you cannot distinguish yours from others. But the prickly hedgehog is smarter than you. And judging by your comment, the Python is dearer to you, to the rest you can see a clear contempt.Typical behavior a la the 17th and a la the 91st.
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In my opinion, Eugene is right, and you wrote all this not because you think so, but because you really want to provoke the anger of the patriots :)
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Dear HUMAN! Maybe you even now realized that with your early work, it was you who “provoked” a real Khokhlo-Srach on this political arena.
And no one else. It is only this idea that I tried to convey to you as gently as possible.
And you stayed in the company of Evgoshi, who is building a militant mega-regulator from FUNT.
See you live. By the way! I read your opuses regularly, and with comments in the crowd of hot fans with a zero rating I just can’t climb without an emergency, like this time, an excuse.
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In addition to sracha, I, it seems, provoked a split (rip) of some readers' personalities;)
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Yes, well, Prosha, do not whistle, I do not distress anyone: I don’t need it in FIG. Me on the site every dog knows what I am. And how you emerged from nowhere, there and kanete. And what are you doing here, there is no point of emphasis here, and there wasn’t any policy until your trinity pulled her by the ears. This is necessary to think, to declare an emergency on porno! Another fire alarm announced. Anyone who comes to read porn stories is never engaged in such garbage. And do not think that I alone saw you, and the others will understand. Simply, no one expected your shobla to appear here. The only thing you deserve is that Human sends you three letters in direct text, instead of all this debate. And yet, I would suggest that he write a second story on a similar topic, just as he will be able to state everything neatly.
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Beg to repeat itself and answered you personally. So you said that nobody here considers Mowgli, but you get the opposite ?. So "simple"?
And you mean high anxious, sophisticated intellectuals? We saw a conspiracy.
By the way, the word Loch appeared in the 19th century in the Vladimir province, and it meant it - the Man, the Peasant. And the expression Cool Loch meant Healthy Man. And since the intelligentsia despises ordinary laborers and people from a plow, this word has become a curse in your mouth. Such as you fool youth in the 80s, they put them on Pepsi and American chewing gum, on porn sites. And now you pretend to be ..., all your opponents are lumped together and you cannot distinguish yours from others. But the prickly hedgehog is smarter than you. And judging by your comment, the Python is dearer to you, to the rest you can see a clear contempt. Typical behavior a la the 17th and a la the 91st.
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Oh, Man!
I began to read and thought: “This is not Humano wrote!” :)) Due to the huge number of errors. In the middle came - stylization of the girl's speech. And somehow it became insulting: (Why, if young, then necessarily illiterate? But seriously, of course, again, the original filing.
But for some reason she did not touch ... For the first time, such that I did not touch your story. Your obscene grace has disappeared :) Lightness is gone ... And the theme itself is somehow ...
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For the first time such that I did not touch your story.
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My condolences.
Until the end of the story even read?
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I agree with the previous commentator. Missed pieces. Too ... politicized. And not really.
Everyone is so tired.
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and I was very hooked on the story! and really liked it! tired of these political debates ... ours ... yours ... enemies ... we are all brothers !!! I look from the side at the impoverished, starved, plundered Ukraine, while brothers and sisters ... why kill each other? for what? because of which? who needs these wars? politicians and financially interested people are vedt ... and ordinary people suffer ... it's all silly
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Well, not so poor and hungry)))) Would you see what kind of zucchini we have this year, ugly))))))))
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through anal in politics. Colorado and ukry, who are they?
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GENIUS !!!)))))
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Cheap speculation on political issues.
“Growling and grunting, I crushed in the ass I'm your Putin, in your Kremlin, pinning his fuck to the ground ...”
Fu
Are you ashamed to write this? Is this a political order for the development of hatred?
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Are you talking about a story or comments?
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Python, Cyril, Prokhor Aleysky - you are dreary and sad chela. Never write to anyone. After reading your comments, it feels like the gift of a passing day. He mentioned you in a crowd, because the language does not turn anyone else to call the word “you”. After Prokhor, after his “soviets”, he also aroused a feeling of deep disgust. I would not be surprised if it turns out that he works as a watchman in the morgue and at night he makes dead bodies or masturbates on them. At least his suggestions for “improving” the story just make you think so. But enough about the little ones.
Author - solid 10. Even on a five-point one. I think you could publish real things, not worse than famous writers. And the point here is not in the genre, nor in the events, nor in the subject ... The point is in the power of the word. You have a gift. Sure. Good luck, you have a great future if you start creating for the masses.
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piiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
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Erotic datsibao?
Tack, the topic with fucking a flight attendant in the toilet of a Malaysian airliner a minute before the “Buka” hit someone already scored, or while the little idea is free, can you break?
The author, the entourage should not beat out the plot. Otherwise, it turns out the ballet "Lenin in October".
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Who should not? :)
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these are hidden, unfulfilled desires, pollutions from politics
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I understand that this is all - fiction.
Author, answer, if not difficult.
And the story is wonderful.
That's just the topic of "two hearts"
brings to mind the picture of the "two burned Colorado".
(a guy with a girl in the arms)
Or maybe they are not Colorado?
And just walked past?
Well, thank you so much for the story.
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Yes, all this is fiction, to the last word. I have already written somewhere above.
"Colorado" and "dill", in terms of Ch. the heroines are nasty crooks imposed on people so that they kill each other for fun, and the author shares this point of view.
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I remember there was a film with Chadov about the Ukrainian bouz only for the fourth year, and so also means a bit of ero. Type lyuboff and rybt ryvatsiya. I then thought it was a chtoli revolution, haha not funny. Well, well, a few years have passed and now ass rynalno! How did not appear such a story, about love and Maidan, I had no doubt that something like this awaits us.
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Do not roll> _ <It’s better to do without it ...
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and what to croak is that, already nakarkano, already goes all the way, it’s better that it’s better, everyone decided for you
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Well, so that this "morale" has not come to you ...
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Four years since the publication of this story.
Rereading is not the first time. And still like it.
Sincere emotions, experiences. And the situation is a historical reality, a background. You can argue about many things, but everything in life happens.
Very good story, lively emotions of a girl. I thank the author for the open ending of the story!)
In my version, they left on time and now everything is wonderful. The fact that they almost lost each other, as well as each life, taught them to appreciate what you have.Now the GGs live a happy family and are focused on their relationship.
Thank you for the work!
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