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Khrushchev court ...
- Get down.
- But as?
They were attached for a long time, turned and fussed, dragging off a terrible moment. Finally, Anina’s clothes were neatly hung on a branch, while Anya herself was lying on her back, and a dim lantern illuminated her swollen nipples, hairy pussy and goose bumps on her legs.
- Spread the legs.
- I can not.
- What?
- Oooo ...
- What?
- Shy.
- I'm too shy.
- Yes?
The legs instantly divorced, revealing the shell, swum juices. Sanya slipped into it so easily that he was surprised.
- What do you think? - He asked Anya, pressing into it until it stops.
- Oooo ...
“My good, my love,” he murmured, leaning over her. The yellow gleam of a lantern gleamed in her eyes like tears.
Sanya went back and forth in it, and the bitter vial all stretched, stretched, and still could not spill out, and Sanya was terribly afraid that he would stink, and puffed like a locomotive, slapping eggs on a rough bench board. Anya snuffled under him, then began to howl softly - and suddenly burst into tears loudly, arching.
- What are you doing? - Sanya panicked, and immediately understood - “ends”, and he pounded a member like a jackhammer, and immediately swept it with mortal hardness, and roared from bliss like a bear, and fell on her, kissing her eyes and cheeks, and that’s all could not pour out to the end, and all the sperm flowed from it, squeezed out by the last tedious jolts ...
This first sex impressed them so much that they bombarded each other with sms all night long, and at half past five in the morning they licked in the old barn, naked and frightened, and Sanya updated the passage he performed yesterday in Anino's body. Anya lay on the dusty floor, moaning embarrassed, embarrassed by her lust, and smiled at Sana'a.
“You kiss me at once in two places: on the lips and there,” she said, and Sanya pressed into her to the pain of the pubis in order to merge with her as closely as possible.
Since then, they have been doing this every day, hiding in every conceivable and inconceivable corner. Sanya loved when Anya fucked lying or sitting facing him, loved to look into her eyes, share her impressions and die from the furious closeness, which was then scary to think about. True, Anya no longer finished under him, but he learned to lick her a flower bud, and she assured that she did not experience such bliss even in a dream.
Very soon, Sanya and Anya lost their heads so much that they were not ashamed of either their parents or their teachers. Nobody scolded them, but on the contrary, everyone was touched by such an early and beautiful love. "Sanya should be With Anya“- adults joked.
When Sanya was in the eleventh grade, and Anya was in the last year of school, their parents started talking about the wedding: “Once it happened, you need everything to be correct, like a human being.”
They were people of the old school and had views of forty years ago, but Sanya and Anya took them more than seriously. First, they were not allowed to spend the night together (surely, it’s impossible before the wedding!), And they were dying of anguish. Secondly, their parents created such strong families that they wanted to believe them, and not modern “concepts”. Early marriages in their remote places were not at all uncommon, and no one was surprised that the bride was 19 years old, and that the bridegroom was 18 years old.
We decided this: in the summer, right after school, Sanya and Anya get married and go to Moscow. Anya goes to Vadim Vadimych Navoznikov himself, a well-known Moscow lord of the world, Sanya works in the office of her father's friend and does everything for Anina's career. Anya, a prodigy of world fame, had Napoleonic plans, and somehow it was implied that her career came first. The atypical model of the family did not embarrass Sanya at all: he had long been accustomed to considering Anya as something like a genius. He decided not to do this, but next year, and not somewhere, but at Moscow State University. He was an asthmatic, and the army did not threaten him.
Before the wedding, Anya went to play the entrance exam to the conservatory. She returned with a strange scar on her arm (“the little boy bit”) and with a wrinkle on the bridge of the nose, which Sanya wrote off for overwork. Giving to everyone to congratulate and cuddle herself, she stayed with him and said:
- There will be no wedding.
- Why ???
Sana'a was presented with a whole heap of arguments: “we are still too young,” “we have no savings,” “I don’t want you to sacrifice yourself for my career,” “I don’t want to bind you,” and so on.
In the end, she burst into tears. (Erotic stories) Sanya rushed to comfort and kiss her, and it ended with such violent sex that Anya, gutted inside out, said - "no, let's still get married ..."
“You, restless Anna,” Sanya told her, “are all geniuses so gloomy?”
A month later, the wedding was played, and at the end of the summer they moved to Moscow.
And now they have been living here for seven months, they see each other in the mornings, in the evenings and on weekends, they eat cakes like children, make love every day, walk - and almost never quarrel. Their life could be considered an idyll if it were not for the attacks of strange anxiety that befell Anya. “A creative person,” thought Sanya, “geniuses are such ...”
Maybe he and Anya were the very eternal and real, which does not happen?
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When Sanya came to the office, it turned out that there was an accident in the area and there was no light. They promised to fix it only by morning.
Sanya suddenly fell free day.
As always in such cases, he did not know what to do, and for the first half hour he wandered aimlessly anywhere, getting used to freedom. Then he decided to return home.
“We are, in fact, so rarely together,” he thought, “and Anya is at home all day. She will be engaged, I will listen, and then undress her, and she will play naked, and her nipples will sway in time with the bow ... "
Quietly, so that Anya did not hear, he opened the door. "Sneak into the room, make her a surprise ..."
And froze in the doorway.
At first, he thought that Anya was watching a movie.
He tried to convince himself of this, even though he already understood that the screaming of a scream belongs to a living, not to cinema Anna, but to a tenor, screaming “in pussy! in pussy! and in the ass! "- Vadim Vadimych, Anino teacher, whom Sanya knew very well.
His legs gave way.
Sanya completely trusted Anya, never jealous of her ...
The scream grew like the whistle of a boiling kettle, and finally turned into a cry: Anya beat in a mortal orgasm.
- ... Well? How does my sweet gury feel?
- Yyyyy ...
- Here you go. And you were afraid ... Good balm? Even the pussy turned blue. This step has not yet been, eh? Even in summer, when you came here, and I put you up with cancer and for the first time fucked in a human way, remember? My little guriya was so offended then that she grabbed herself on the paw ... You also said that your Romeo never put you on cancer. Already with him, you definitely did not end up like with me ...
- Yyyyy ... Do not need this ...
- Why not? Truth is true. I doubt that the boy Sanya, who is so touchingly wearing a violin behind you, can fuck you properly. You are a rare girl, Anyut. You have a rare body and a special, very special look. He grabs a man right behind the dick. Listeners feel it. Do you think it's only your game? I first discovered your sensual potential, Annie. If it were not for me, you would have remained a touching provincial child who, in Moscow, does not need anyone to fuck. And even more so in Europe. Your pussy is worthy of an experienced dick, Annie. And Sanya is so for ...
- Vadim Vadimych! I asked: about Sanya is not necessary!
- And why? What is interesting about him that ...
- Because! - Anya was crying. - Because I ... you understand everything, Vadim Vadimych ...
- ABOUT! I understand! Because you love him with unearthly love and shy to talk about it, so as not to sound too pompous, right? Poor girl in love gives herself to fuck the old goat to support her, do her tours, grand prix and so on and so forth? It is so disgusting to her, oh, so disgusting, even though she pisses from cum, like a little pig ... Ah? I can not hear! I can not hear!!!..
- DAAAAAAA !!! - suddenly cried Anya.
- My joy! That's when you play the code as prestigiously as well - then we'll talk about France, okay? With such a sluggish little sound to climb into Europe ...
Sanya silently went out, locked the door and went, wherever they looked.
***
He returned in the evening, at half past eight, as always.
- Hello!
- Hello, - Anya climbed to peck him and recoiled: - Are you drunk, or what?
- Yes, no ... a little bit. My colleague's birthday was so we noted slightly ... on duty ...
- Maniac. Bandit. Alcoholic. Immediately call the detox.
- It is better to immediately slaughter.
- Not. Dangerously. For the slaughter department ... - Anya suddenly gave him a fitful hug.
Sanya stroked her, trying not to worry.
- So. Restless Anna ... Well, report what happened?
- It happened? Never mind. Here are just my tours in France - remember, these are the ones I dreamed of so much, and you and I still watched all sights on the Internet in French ... Versailles, Montmartre ... remember?
- Well?
- In general, the tour will not. I'm not ready. Vadim Vadimych canceled everything.
- Well, okay. But you will not leave me. We shall be together...
Anya suddenly burst into tears.
Sanya embraced her and led her into the room, repeating to himself for the hundred and twentieth time the words that he would tell her now.
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Messy - but realistic. In the style of "Man" so to speak. Worthy - but it can be better. For realism - 10ku. For implementation - forgive me - well, points 6.
Solid 8-ka - in my opinion.
Non-standard beginning is worth noting. The end - it was possible and intrigue.
Good luck - 8!
respectfully
Ernesto-What-Guevara
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= D Strange question. Implementation of the idea - had in mind
respectfully
Ernesto-What-Guevara
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Perhaps complement the details. Psychology deploy.
You can
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I'm lazy :) My principle is BLS: Without Excess Words.
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I would have let this old pidaras in the place of Sani go to the fucker so much that he would see the stars only above his head.
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By the way, there is not enough badge "treason". There is some kind of understatement - what was the main character going to say to Ana? It seems to me personally that the final of this story will certainly be tragic, am I right?
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Hm Public opinion tilted unintended in the direction: Anya is a whore, Sanya is a sucker, it will all end badly.
Of course, I'm just an old voyeur, but what I managed to spy on (and describe) ... namely:
- Anya said (indirectly, but quite definitely) to the old goat that he is a goat, and she tolerates him only because she was driven into a corner;
- for this reason, Sanya did not let him go to the fugitive: he understood what was going on inside Ani (not in the vulgar sense), and did not want to make scenes from which Anya would only get worse;
- Anya is clearly at the limit. It is worth Sana'a to do, as deceived husbands usually do, and this can end very badly. We do not forget that “all geniuses are dim”:) - Sanya showed himself like a real man: he did not give in to the impulse, but went, cooled down, weighed everything, understood how to act, and only then returned to Anya. And even got drunk, please note, not at all too ... Of course, it is difficult for me to judge (just when Sanya returned to Anya, a cockroach fell into the keyhole, and I did not look through the denouement), but - based on the fact I managed to see - it seems to me that this story will end well :)
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The ardent owner of Romeo still believes that Anya is to blame herself.The text says: "Gives himself to fuck the old goat, so that he would support her, make her tours, grand prix and so on and so forth" - how does she differ in this case from whores? Those give for money, and she for the promotion of herself (her emotional experiences ... well, so prostitutes also pity themselves, their fate). Here, some people say that quitting is the easiest. How then does Sana live with her? Fall asleep next to the thought that someone else besides her enjoyed it? "Lick her, sticking her tongue out like a gentle dog," realizing that a member of some Navoznikov had been there? Start jealous of each lamppost, watch her not to live in fear that she will ever change again for the sake of some material goods? Who betrayed one day betrayed a second time. Or pretend that everything is good and drink yourself slowly, mired in self-digging? No, guys. Like a real man here - quietly, according to the principle of BLS (without further words), give in the face, and leave without a scan als, farewell hardcore fucked Anya and words in the style of "I love you, bitch, loved, and you are here in all creation."
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Romeo, I agree with you :)) In my opinion, Anya really differs little from the breed of women you named.
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Of course, Anya is to blame herself. She is already at that age, that although the will is still flabby, childish, it clings to the wind, but the demand for it is already adult.
But not every guilt is punishable by death;)
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It threatens to grow into our old conversation about morality imposed on us by society. Let's get off on the fact that everyone goes crazy in his own way. Damn tolerance, etc.
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It’s just everyone who is to blame, and what happens next depends on the attitude of the “I” towards this wine. Anya has an “I” with her fucking confrontation, which makes us hope for the best.
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Maybe I'm exaggerating, but this is the same thing as a repentant killer. You can’t undo it.
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Well, these killers are now - 99% of women. Even, I think, more :)
(and men too, if that)
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I do not remember it was said either in a conversation with you, or with Gorbatov. When one key opens several locks, this is a good key, but when one lock opens several keys ... comments are superfluous. I think the situation is not so bad. I refuse to believe that 99% of women change and that's it.
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You know, maybe I just came across these, but all the women with whom I had to speak on this topic (there were, however, not so many, but not so few), confessed to me that they had cheated on their husbands.
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Well, if so, then of course :)) it all ended well. But anyway, personally, Anya is unsympathetic to me: (
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\ this story ends well:) \
I think so too.
Based on the text, Sanya will offer to leave everything as it is, it provides life and romantic love, the professor - the realization of the dream of a career and stepped orgasms, everyone is happy. The scar on the arm will of course remain, but the wrinkle will be smoothed out.
Icon "Forced" - why?
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That's right, except for the professor and the implementation. There has been a conflict (“until you can say that I’m better than Sani - you FIG, not a tour”), and he is unlikely to end in a betrayal of Ani. I think in the near future she will replace the professor and put a big question mark on her career: (
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Based on the text, I can not agree with you. The choice was made when \ Before the wedding Anya went to play the entrance exam \. and \ said:
- Wedding will not be \.
To enter the conservatory, even if it wasn’t to go to Navoznikov, it was probably possible without becoming a cancer.And “in pussy! in pussy! and in the ass! "- This is for bonuses (touring, and so on).
If, in my opinion, Anya was fascinated by the professor, there could be options, and so ...
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Right, for bonuses. But hardly from the side of Ani was only a bare calculation. Imagine: a girl from Kryzhopol comes to Svetil, radiantly metropolitan-genius - in front of him she is klopik, and yes even provincial; and suddenly the Light makes it clear that he sees in her not a klopika, but a woman; Moscow, a new stage of life, euphoria, then-that ... Wham! already without a bra.
Of course, someone will turn on the brakes in time. But if you do not turn on - it does not mean that they are not at all.
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Not. If the brakes were not included in the period of receipt, she is alone, in a foreign city, nerves - I agree. But, after the euphoria, a month before the wedding, plus some time before moving to Moscow - enough time for sobering (if there was intoxication). Seven months, in Moscow, do not give out anything ("attacks of strange anxiety \ can be explained by anything) - not every mature aunt can manage, not the 17-18-year-old. So-that \ Bang! already without a bra \ not this case. Another thing, Anya does not have enough sex, even though she makes love every day, lying or sitting facing Sana, because / Anya no longer finished under him /, and you can have a cancer with the professor \ "pussy! Pussy! And in the ass!" \ fight in \ mortal orgasm \. Also, of course, she is flattered that Vadim Vadimych Navoznikov himself sees in her not a klopik, but a woman, even if the field of view is limited to anal and vagina in a “cancer” position.
Careerism, lust, vanity - that is what drives Anya. Vadim Vadimych - is needed as air, and Sanya? Lick for the professor? There are wet wipes. Vzbryknёt, say - choose, go without it, easy. But he will not vzbryknet. And kids Aniny will love.
Everything will be fine.
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In general, that's right. But the voyeur, peeping at this story, noticed that Sanya is not so severe :)
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The best story on the site.
Regarding the rating: either readers are stupid drochery, or administrators twist. Rather, the second.
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And if in art. environment such relationships - the norm and a necessary condition for a career? And in school, to go \ give concerts \ had to give? After the trip, and \ bust bursting T-shirt, sparkling hair flowed to the priests, and the priest described when walking eight. \ and \ Sanya slipped into it so easily that he was surprised \.
Then the change of professor - only time to lose.
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Diks, I do not understand what you select with the help of \, because phrases like “Sanya slipped into her so easily that he was surprised” and “he sees not her klopika, but a woman” in the text he did not find. And "lick for the professor? There are wet wipes. Vzbryknёt, say - choose, go without it, easy. But he will not vzbryknet. And kids Aniny will love. Everything will be fine. ”- this is not good. This only proves that if events will develop according to your version - Sanya is a complete sucker.
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1st selection from text, 2nd from author's comment. \ Everything will be fine \ - this is, for the sides of the love triangle, where Sanya is a tiny leg and Anya is a huge hypotenuse. He is internally ready for the role of a fashionable kukolda for a long time, so he is stunned by what he saw, but is not outraged - “geniuses are such ...”, and will probably tell Anya that he does not condemn her, because \ her career comes first \ and \ Atypical family model didn’t bother Sanya at all \
Art requires sacrifice.
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Everything is strange and strange ... what a romantic love when a professor uses her? Besides the fact that changes, so also does it openly? Then this fully confirms my theory, which is that Anya is a whore sucking on an iPhone.
P. S. Man - to parasitize on a topic that we have chosen for quite some time. I suggest to move to HP.
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Write the end that Sanya would tell her very interesting to me, and in general it is possible to write a book about it so interesting it delays it is very interesting what will happen next !!!
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Not bad!
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Yes, an unexpected ending. At first, I, along with the hero, soared on the romantic wings of love. Then, mumbled face on the ground. I wanted to temper, like the first appraisers, to put 5 or 6. Then I cooled down and thought, but what do I have to present to the author? Well, unless, to name a stamp an image of the boss Ani? Oh, if Moscow, and - the head or "light", then, of course, fag or bastard. So, this is the little things. The story is quite vital; Probably, many in this way “earned” fame and place under the sun. Although the author has sweetened the pill with some unusual high of Ani and the boss, I want to believe that the heroine is genuinely in such a situation. Even more I hope that Sanya turned out to be a real man and found a worthy continuation of the future family life. For me, the story is finished. Put 9 points.
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And I liked it.
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Why "A", as opposed to whom? After all, before your, too, positive feedback.
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Shrill. Literary. Not a single extra word. The style resembles the stories of V. Dragoon in LiveJournal.
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I agree with Eugene. I did not expect such a trick. Although ... It will all end very tragic in 99% of cases. The story, the style is good, but as always, but sediment remained. Hmm ... As usual, the boy is a weakling and will turn into a monster in the end, or so it will be a squish. Damn it is impossible that whether to combine into one the identity of the “old goat” and this hlyupika ... Brrr. Not all sediment remained.
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See above :)
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Man, you, as always :))) This is LITERATURE!
Cool in every sense of the story. But I also had a sediment ...
Anya is a reptile! Does not see his happiness!
Sanya sorry. If I were you, I would write a sequel - Sanya should talk to Anna. I would have him leave her. In no case do not press on the author! Just heroes are so alive that you resent them as real people :)
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It’s very convenient and simple to vote for your stories, Human, all the points are “yes” :))))
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I would also have him leave her (well, what is it, really: a man with a girl, what a page is - even if she is a genius-craze) - but, alas, a modest voyeur is not all under force :) See above.
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Hmm, well, in fact, Anya is not a reptile then. As it is not paradoxical. Or rather, everything is clear with her. But if Sasha just throws her, then he is a sucker. And these are now full. Lazy people and wimps, or vice versa, a high opinion of themselves. The easiest way, threw all. She love him anyway)))) Fight then. Learn and Grow. Strong is not the one who did not fall, but who could find the strength to stand up and go on and overcome. He is simply not a man, but henpecked, and he did not have an example of a normal one. Under all arranged. Got this lesson, draw conclusions. I told you, if he finds an opportunity to attach HARMONIOUSLY to his personality, the identity of a professor, then this will be a super guy, from whom everything will “drag”.
For the rest, I fully agree with Nefertiti Mitanni. The stories of Man is very realistic, therefore there is so much discussion))
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Well, for the personality of the professor, he still has not enough years :) Such a person closer to thirty hatches. To the great joy of everyone around: - /
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Um, well, the professor's personality is not positive, she will score the guy's personality. NDA really "to joy"! ((((. The fact of the matter. But he can develop harmony, although in life in 30% of cases he will become 30 as a professor and he will like, in 69% he will be a henpecked and all in the same vein, but 1% still leave, on strong personalities.
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Disappointed, dear author. To put it mildly
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And how disappointed I am! :)
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What exactly? Join the rest of indignant?
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The fact that people rebelled instead of sympathizing :)
Between us, geniuses: the current 18-19 years - a nasty age. On the one hand, children (more precisely, on all sides, if not witty), and on the other hand, they are legally and morally responsible as adults. And there is no adulthood, and it is not clear when it will be.
But this is me, aside.
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Man make beautiful. In life, and so shit enough I want to be beautiful. advance ATP
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Beautiful here will not work, I think. It was necessary from the very beginning not to drop Anya :) And now, of course, she can realize and repent, but still there will be no beauty anymore, alas ... Personally, I could have adopted a heroine if her betrayal resulted from sincere feelings for the professor. But no, it is driven by greed :) So why is there any beauty here? This is venality.
Only the beauty of style and style. In this sense, Man is approaching the Russian classics :)))
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For sure.
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I agree - self-serving motive = forgive me, what feelings here already nafig. Then Anya will want to go on tour to America, grieve for the departed, after a quarrel with the professional popularity, or just want a necklace or a new Lexus and pzhalsta, here's a new professor, director of the stall, major, real fucker - stress it.
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Damn it guys, I came here to relax and “relax”, and I saw the comments at the end of the story. I decided to read while reading all the mood was gone. Tie your philosophical judgments so develop here (
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Run away from here, dear, wherever you look. What is relaxing here? Here, for the faint of heart, the roof can be torn off, and for the rectilinear ones - even direct curves can form a knot. God forbid, of course.
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Good advice. I envy. I would not have been able to.
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Weakly for Man, in spite of all the enthusiastic comments ... Open end, reflections for readers ... Sasha is a hilyak, cannot satisfy his beloved woman ... The "stronger sex" weakens ... Anna will leave, a good end, as in cinema will not and should not continue. It is better to write a new story, I hope it will be stronger. It is unlikely that this work will take a prize in December ... What a pity. In my opinion, fairy tales and fantasy you get just great!
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The author, because of such an ending, now for a month now I will not be presenting myself in his place. Why such a shit to write something ??
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The ending is in my opinion in absolutely black tones - if he is a man, Anya deservedly gets in the face and adios, if he is a weakling, a coward and a rokhla, and judging by the story it is like that, then these moral sufferings will be stretched for the whole of their life together He is tolerant to sharing his Anya not only with the professor, but also with a bunch of other men who will be able to satisfy his spouse, and in the evening, with his eyes hidden, he will convince himself and Anya of his unearthly love, which becomes every day less and less.
Although the story is without a doubt realistic, and the talent of the author is not subject to doubt - I will not give a mark, because they like happy people, which is, unfortunately, not = (
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As an eyewitness voyeurist, let me fundamentally disagree with previous speakers.
The speakers proceed from the following theses:
1. A husband who did not kill his wife's lover - without options, a wimp, a coward and a rohl.
2. A wife who has changed her husband is without a bitch's options, and will be such for life (more precisely, all cells).
3. The act of a man without options reveals his essence. repentance is an excuse; internal contradictions are inventions of fiction writers.
4. The relationship of a person to a person is expressed in legally unambiguous forms (yes / no).
5. The main thing in the story - the plot, and all the details there and you can skip.
6. In his actions a person is always guided (and, perhaps, should be guided) solely by selfish motives.
I propose to collectively reflect on antitheses :)
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Dear Man. Here, in fact, all comments are not in the case. Instead of discussing the story, which, by the way, hurt me a lot, we discuss (condemn) its heroes and their motivations, although in the text, in my opinion, everything is completely clear. Another thing, due to the principle of WLAN, everyone can imagine for themselves not only the missing final, but also the intervals between the events described.
My antitheses are: sacrificial, self-deprecating, love on the one hand, and goddamnedness on the other. The deed is something impulsive, often rash, and when many months are a way of life. As in the beginning - a constant wind over the cliff.
To all: it seems that the author trolls us.
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By the way, the question to the voyeur-eyewitness: \ You still said that your Romeo never put you on cancer \ he did not want or did she not give?
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Why trolls? Just the author is very interested in this topic. Although - in a sense, "trolls", if you can call fundamentally ambiguous situations that appeal to readers' opinion, can be called trolling, but such "trolling" is embedded in the stories themselves. Dialogue with readers - only its development. My favorite situation, to-Rui, I repeat from story to story, - “in reality, everything is not as it really is”: the character, who seems so or so in the light of familiar stereotypes, is actually the opposite. In “Restless Anna,” the reader's assessment turned out to be more rigidly tied to stereotypes than ever before, so the voyeur-eyewitness unobtrusively pushes her in the direction of “in fact”, the edge, as it seems to him, is quite clearly shown in the story's details.
diks, the answer to your question is in the text: “Sanya loved when Anya fucked lying or sitting facing him, loved to look into her eyes, share her impressions and die from the furious closeness, which was then scary to think about.” That is, it simply did not occur to him to expose her with cancer, because in this position one cannot look into her eyes and communicate during sex, and that is what our sensitive boy most valued. This, by the way, is a very common mistake of boys in love.
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\ Why trolls? \
The author in the story shows Anya with a cold-blooded blyuda and a prostitute (fuck, both for pleasure and at the rate of) in the most romantic (for ordinary newlyweds) period, she has a look that fucking ... You have a special, very special look. He grabs a peasant right behind the dick \, and Sanya, who \ silently went out \ so as not to interfere with the following relations - sticky fish (after all, Anya's crumbs of the pussy and potential bonuses will get him too, asthmatics).
And in the author's comments - “in reality everything is not as it really is.”
If it's not trolling, then what?
If a cockroach is driven out of the fact that it is in the keyhole, and not in Sanya’s head, the voyeur-eyewitness will notice how soon Sanya gently lubricates Anin's anus, so that she would not be hurt by a professor's member, and then diligently licks it. Everyone is happy.
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Well, the word "trolling" implies stebuchego troll behind the scenes, to-ry scoff teeth and laughs with a blunt people.And then behind the scenes, nevertheless, a more comely physiognomy is seen. However, perhaps, the voyeur-eyewitness flatters himself :)
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Troll in the best sense of the word, chuckles.
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Estimated set comments read. Thank :)
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Congratulations on your prize! Keep it up!!! Hopefully, further, Humankind will delight its regular readers with worthy stories and fairy tales.
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Thanks for the story, for some reason, when reading, Zamyatin persistently recalled: D
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What exactly?
(I often do remakes, but here, apparently, it happened by chance, - and I don’t even understand what you mean)
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Writing style
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Late will be my comment, but nevertheless)) I liked the story. And as erotic, and from the point of view of the plot. And all the images of the characters turned out pretty, even the Old Goat. I don’t really understand those comments in which Chelovek is, as it were, blamed for such a turn of the plot that everything is not as they (the commentators) would like. Describes a specific situation, specific human characters. The author should not perform the “Wishlist” of readers, he says what he wants to say. It may like it, it may not like it, but to call the story weak only because of the lack of sympathy for the hero - this is not at any gate. It's good that the site is still more people adequate.
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and why such garbage put high scores?
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The fool will not understand, the smart will not ask.
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I think a person can love two at the same time, and this is the case. She loves everyone: one for youth and tenderness, the other for adulthood and strength. I think Sanya understood this, and she and the professor. I do not know how it will end. But I wonder: what will happen if Sanya tells her that she knows everything, but still loves and gives her the right to decide for herself what to do next: stay with Sanya, go to the professor or meet with both.
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I think the answer is \ meet with both \. She, apart from two sexual partners (however, which prevents Sane from being gentle and with a professor, then each has two) gets Paris, fame, and admirers.
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Only a complete idiot answers a rhetorical question with a hackneyed saying. However, after reading your enthusiastic comments - the way it is. Have you finished school? You can not answer. If so, then you have no imagination and reason per gram. Probably, dragging from words like “write to me”.
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Here, on this site, mostly people have gathered who trudge from such words, as well as from objects that designate such words.
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Perhaps, but this suggests excessive viewing of porn and children's complexes. Many of your stories are very interesting, specifically I really do not like this, both in style and in plot.
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Yes, he is not very me.
And “piss” about something, of course, speaks, but not so much about the author, as about the hero;)
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