My only true, very short and last story dedicated to all women.

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Very warm, summer. Everything around, flooded with some kind of unrealistically bright, golden sunlight, which is more likely to be called celestial, as its clearly visible rays are beautiful and pure.
I run along the sidewalk, along the city street, under the green crowns, and the warm wind waves my long hair. I have flared jeans and a thin, slim shirt. The road goes steeply up, but I just fly along it, not even feeling the climb. How old am i Eighteen? Twenty?

What is this city and where I run, I still do not understand. In my head, beautiful music of John Lennon sounds loudly, uninterruptedly:

- Why dont we take off alone,
- take a trip somewere far, far away.
- We'll be together on our own again
- we used to be in the early days ...

Where does this music come from? Is it inside of me or pouring from somewhere above? But most likely, it is everywhere, both in the air, and above, and in myself. But why this particular song?
There are people along the way, but they are strange, they have no faces. It is even impossible to discern what they are wearing, and I continue to run easily further. All that can clearly be felt is music, light and wind. How pleasant they are, these warm, caressing blows, on a young and beautiful face.

The climb ends, the street levels off, and suddenly it becomes clear where I so unconsciously strove — under a tree, opposite some shop, with a sign for some reason in French, in sandals, in a summer cotton print, and with loose, blond hair, stands .. . She is.
And it seems that She has been waiting for me for a very, very long time, so long ago that it is even impossible to imagine how much.

I am already near. We join hands and silently go to the store. No, not even into the trading floor itself, but only into a narrow vestibule, between two glazed doors. We turn around and look intently at each other's faces. I don't know her at all, but ... how beautiful she is! These features, for me, are simply immaculate, and big eyes ... how they look at me!
From this view, you can lose your mind. God, because She turns out to love me, and I am Her!
Rising on tiptoe, She hugs my neck and touches her lips to mine. No, this can not be, this does not happen on Earth, probably only in Paradise! Or maybe I'm not on Earth right now?

But what is it? Why did the night come so suddenly, and why am I standing again, on the same street already lit by lanterns?
That French shop, where I had just been, was completely happy, is about thirty meters away from me, and opposite to it, under the yellow light of the lantern, She stands again. Her confused, divine gaze wanders around in search of someone, and I know that She is looking for me ...

It is necessary to pass a little, and we will again be close together, but some sort of irresistible force holds and does not allow my legs to budge. How she is waiting for me! As carefully examining every passerby, in the hope that it can be me. Unable to come closer, my soul is simply torn from love and tenderness towards her, and despair, from the realization that everything is over, and we will never see each other again ...
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... I open my eyes, the same darkness as in the dream from which my consciousness had just emerged. Green hour numbers show seven in the morning. My beloved spouse is sleeping peacefully next door. Yes, I feel good with her, and I have always believed that I love her, as a man must love a woman. But apparently the Lord decided otherwise, and for one single moment in his life, for which he gave me a feeling of True Love. Why did he do it ... What is it, a gift or a punishment? Probably a punishment, otherwise he would have left me "there", with her forever.

I need to throw out somewhere, emotions that still overwhelm me, and I thrust my hand under the hem of my nightdress (oh, those notorious nightie, but without them nowhere) of my wife, I gently stroke her hairy pubis, tummy, breasts, feeling downstairs persistent morning erection.

Feeling my caresses, the spouse habitually spreads her legs, inviting me to come closer to her, and I gently turn on her from above, trying not to press hard on her belly. Vera loves copulating with the full bladder in the morning — she experiences, as she said, “special” feelings. But I'm not in a hurry.
Having embraced, I begin to kiss her in the neck and behind the ear, pushing with the tongue, earring, pushing in her mouth. The spouse lays and quietly pallies, from such unexpected and slightly forgotten caresses.

But surprise intensifies even more when, unexpectedly, I move to my face and start kissing her lips passionately. As he wanted and did not have time to do it in a dream. My condition is passed on to my wife, and we desperately, like in our youth, weave in tongues.
Pinching with the nails of the back, tell me:
- Come on, come in! ... everything is ready there! - having accepted the hospitable invitation, I easily and smoothly plunge into the wet and open gap of my wife ...

We are “finishing” with her at the same time, because at this moment her teeth painfully sank into my shoulder, leaving a bruise-like sign of female gratitude on her, for the pleasure she received. (Erotic stories) Then Vera looked all morning, strangely looking at me, but she didn’t really say anything, apparently fearing to scare luck — she didn’t even know about the real reason for such a sudden love that flashed. And I did not tell ... what else.
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Then I many times, closing my eyes and falling asleep, tried to get "there" to Her, and I must say that I almost succeeded. There was a street, a little shop, and even She stood there, but the difference was that Her face was no longer visible. Apparently the Lord decided that I had enough. Since then, I often in a dream, standing on a dark, evening street and just listening to music. The song always sounds the same, and for some reason only the chorus:
- Why dont we take off alone ... - and it becomes unbearably depressing at heart.

Takazuko

15 comments
  • Aura (a guest)
    November 27, 2013 17:07

    Sumptuously! This creation is quite in “your” style (apparently, again, the story is taken from life), and, perhaps, this autobiography story)))

    I just want to cry at the thought that "this is my last story" (

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  • November 27, 2013 17:15

    All I did here was constantly fooling around. And now, at parting, I decided to show what I really am. Simply, I probably have nothing to say after this story.

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  • November 28, 2013 4:17

    Fooling around, that's good! Without this, boring. And to say, there is always something to say. It is difficult to put it on the sheet. I know myself ...

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  • November 27, 2013 17:35

    Here it is in Nashin, as a man: briefly, mentally, exactly in the top ten. In our hectic and stupid age, the romantic BLUE BIRD does not want to show us (just like Makarevich), and only rare lucky people will wave their wings in a dream and disappear. But this wave you will never forget when! And an intelligent man does not rush off, his eyes wide, to look for her all over the world is useless. Better share a particle of joy with a loved one, and you will be doubly happy! ... You are a good fellow, the author!

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  • Aura (a guest)
    November 27, 2013 17:41

    Reading so fascinated that did not even notice grammatical errors.

    By the way, in this proposal there are 2 commas “superfluous”: How pleasant they are, these warm, caressing blows, on a young and beautiful face. (the words “warm” and “caressing” are different in meaning, which means they are NOT written with a comma), the last comma in the sentence is also “superfluous”, but ... this means that you are trying to understand the science of spelling))))) )))))))))))), which is very, very commendable.

    The words "someone", "once", "someone" (and others like them) are written in a dash ALWAYS.

    These are the mistakes that “caught my eye” when the excitement “lay down” and I began to reread the places I liked))))))))))))

    Write further, I ask you very much - DO NOT stop to surprise and improve us. Your experience, as experience shows, is UNLIMITED! ...

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  • November 27, 2013 21:50

    Mental ...

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  • November 28, 2013 4:15

    Really, the crisis of the genre? Maybe just get distracted? Do not write yet? A week, another? Do not throw everything here and now. I am pleased to read your stories ... It will be a pity if it stops.

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  • November 28, 2013 8:35

    I support, time changes a lot.

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  • November 28, 2013 10:06

    Well, just fine, colleague!
    Very high-quality, exciting sketch. He was not a fan of short stories, but this one turned out.

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  • November 28, 2013 10:32

    Thank you friends, I respect and love you all. It seems to me that I again hurried to lay out the story, because in fact, everything was much more beautiful and emotional than described.

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  • November 29, 2013 4:39

    Gorgeous sketch! In vain you torment yourself for what, supposedly, hurried. From my own experience I know that it is the first option that is truly emotionally significant, and if something is refined, added, added or subtracted, something else always happens, cleaned, ironed and “sleek”.
    And your journey to parallel worlds, how you showed it, is the most real and living.
    Well, about the last story ... Do not think about it. After all, the editor doesn’t stand over you and doesn’t demand that this and that is given to such a number, it does not threaten with a penalty under the contract. Do not want to write now, do not write, a week or two will pass and everything will calm down ... It will take a month or a year. so be it ... I think you'll be back)))
    By the way, without your tomfoolery, it will become boring here !!! So do not leave)))))

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  • November 29, 2013 6:11

    I look at these pitiful 17 ratings and ... I spread my arms. What is there to add? So, this is our world, and such we are.

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  • November 29, 2013 9:03

    Dear Takazuko!
    I am not a fan of your creativity :) But here I sincerely want to congratulate you! Very good. Read with pleasure. This is an example of what brevity is the sister of talent.
    And as for the last story. Do not promise! Believe me :) A creative crisis happens. But then we are scribes :))) I personally believe that you will come back. Wish you this.

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  • November 29, 2013 11:58

    I heard almost everyone I wanted to hear. And I have enough “enemies” here.
    Once again, thank you all.

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  • Olga (a guest)
    January 3, 2014 0:01

    I hope that you change your mind, and will write more. I have not visited this site for a long time, but I went to read exactly your stories. I like them so much.

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