1. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 2
  2. Thinking out loud. Chapter 2: Priestess and Deserters. Part 1
  3. Thinking out loud. Chapter 2: Priestess and Deserters. Part 2
  4. Thinking out loud. Chapter 3: Novice and Amazon Part 1
  5. Thinking out loud. Chapter 3: Novice and Amazon Part 2
  6. Thinking out loud. Chapter 3: Novice and Amazon Part 3
  7. Thinking out loud. Chapter 3: Novice and Amazon Part 4
  8. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 1
  9. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 3
  10. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 4
  11. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 6
  12. Thinking out loud. Chapter 4: Countess Hellfire-Bloodblade. Part 8
  13. Thinking out loud. Chapter 5: The Kidnapped Queen. Part 1
  14. Thinking out loud. Chapter 5: The Kidnapped Queen. Part 3
  15. Thinking out loud. Chapter 5: The Kidnapped Queen. Part 4

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blushed like a cancer, lowered her gaze and darted around the corner.

- Your girlfriend?

- Y-Y-yes, no ... just ... - no one listened further.

By midnight, the Amazons uncorked the wine, spoiled Cain in the same way his teacher had resorted on their first night. In the room reigned sex. But for some reason, Leila decided not to take part in what was happening. She went downstairs, woke the hotel owner and rented a room. Unfortunately, he was right under where her friends were driving her boyfriend. Amazon could not fall asleep and it was not only the noise that the girls upstairs had fun with, but also the fact that she definitely felt — she didn’t like Cain to fuck with other girls. “Oh gods, am I jealous? What nonsense! What does it matter to me with whom this dog sleeps ?! No, of course, he belongs to me, and I don’t like it if he fucks without my permission, but I’m not greedy and put it under them ... And yet ... where does this feeling come from? I do not want to be with them, but I want to be with him ... Am I really in love? This can not be! Yes, he is just a puppy, boy, whom I seduced for fun! He's just pathetic! And yet ... Today he was great ... Yes, he is helpless when it comes to women, but in comparison with other men ... he has no equal. He is like a knight without fear and reproach is not capable of causing harm to the girl and therefore vulnerable to the point of absurdity, apparently afraid of harm, but he is always ready to help even a completely unknown to him girl. Oh Gods, did I really fall for it? Horror! ”With such thoughts and to the sounds of the orgy going on above the floor, she fell asleep.

In the morning she was visited by her friends. Thanking for the guy who managed to appease the three of them all night and until dawn. They, giggling and chirping, almost purring, ran about their business - they had to go somewhere.

All day Leila avoided Cain and lay down again at night. So it went the next day. To her great displeasure, she felt guilty for doing this to a guy, didn’t know what to say, but didn’t want to apologize. In the evening, before going to the bathhouse, the Amazon nevertheless decided and went into the room with the young man.

- In general, this: I have to go tomorrow for business, so that you will move on to the castle alone. I'll leave you the money, you deserve it ... - it stopped short, because the last phrase was very ambiguous. “In general, bye,” she slammed the door behind her and went to steam.

"That's better. For both of us. I can no longer have fun with him, and it’s too difficult to change my attitude towards him. I really have to go, although today I myself have found a business. It is necessary to drive to the west - there are now heavy battles - the sisters will need my help. And he himself will come - not small. "

She fell asleep in the bathhouse and woke up when the fever was already asleep. “Eck blew me away ...” But some sound woke her up in the waiting room. There someone entered. “Well, who brought this here? I hung a sign that is busy. Maybe Sonya decided to settle scores with me? ”

The door creaked and Cain, completely naked, entered the room.

- What are you doing here? - Leila did not expect to see him.

- And what do you think? - painfully this answer reminded her of their manner of conducting a conversation, only they switched roles. Yes, and the young man behaved unusually. He came undressed and did not flush, did not try to hide behind. Some serious eyes.

Cain approached her:

“Why ask such silly questions?” - saying this, as Leila noticed, he tried his best to keep a courageous look. The young man knelt down and gently kissed the toes of her feet, then began to cover with kisses and lick off the droplets of moisture higher and higher.

- I thought ... You hate me ...

The young man for a moment looked up from his occupation and looked into her eyes, then, without taking his eyes off, sank to her pubis and licked a pea of ​​the clitoris. And then he passionately began to caress her petals with his hot tongue.

Soon he already kissed the face and lips of the Amazon, lying on top and steadily plunging his nature into her hot, passionate bosom. Feeling that both he and she would soon reach orgasm, the young man left the woman and continued to caress her with her hands - he understood that she was not prepared for this coition. Cain began to caress her breasts and pussy with his fingers, looking into her face and reading disappointment in them.

- Why did you leave? - the young man did not answer, only deeply and painfully inserted three fingers into it, having pulled out a moan from the mouth of the Amazon.

“Please ...” She stopped short, but Leila didn’t want to admit that she needed it. And Cain seemed to know about it and deliberately roughly fucked her pussy, looking into her eyes, waiting for her to give up. And she gave up. “Please enter me ... I ... I want you to be with me ... to the end." I ... forgive me for the fact that ... - he did not let her finish her speech, but, having covered her lips with his own, he entered her and they continued to passionately love each other.

They made love, not sex, they loved each other that night without a trace. Cain poured his seed into the depths of a woman who, he knew, would give birth to his child, and which he most likely would not see again. And Leila accepted his gift, passionately wanting to be his woman, to belong only to him, to carry his daughter in her womb.

They could not even imagine that they would not really meet again - she would soon die in battle, carrying his child. She was waiting for fate, so similar to the fate of his mother.

The hunter was famous for always coming with prey, whether it be a beast or a man ordered to her. Forester was the name of Count Lucie Hellfair, a distant relative of Shanah and father of Cain. He was unsociable and loved animals more than the society of aristocrats, and therefore he lived as a hermit in the forest. They met on a hunt. He and she are a representative of the most ancient noble family and the Amazon, whose roots come from the foundations of the Amazon kingdom, which means that the blood of the first husband of the Amazons, Elf Gabriel, flows in her veins. That's where Cain has such facial features. Of course, after many generations, he received nothing but the appearance of elves. It was a cloudy night and the hunters needed to warm up ... Everything was prosaic - no romance. Momentary weakness. In the morning, having caught a deer, they, having divided prey, dispersed. And after nine months:

“This is yours,” is all that the Huntress said to the forester, handing the bundle with the child.

She left and died in the battles. Amazons must castrate their sons and serve the baths or the houses of the Amazons. The hunter was not at all about to break the tradition, it was just that her house was not on her way, so she brought the child to her father. The reasons for which she endured this child are unknown. A forester raised his son as a pet, not able to treat him as a person. The boy grew up and once ran away. He did not appear for a whole year, until the Forester began to hunt for completely brazen wolves. Yes, he was slightly drunk and therefore was not very surprised when the wolf shot down by him turned out to be a feral son. When the boy turned four, the Forester chilled his lungs and sent him to a monastery, and he died. In the Eastern Temple of Fire, the boy’s mentors were monks, whose head was his grandfather Lucian Hellfire. The temple fell into neglect because of the poor character of the elders and their exactingness - the loads were monstrous, the novices could not stand it and ran away. During training, Cain (by the way, his grandfather gave him the name, his father did not bother) turned grayer from an accident.In recent years, the elders died one after another, only he and the grandfather remained in the temple. When Lucian Hellfire, who was like a father for a young man who had not known love since his conception, died, Cain, at his behest, went to his other grandfather, Lucius Hellfair, the former head of the Western Temple of Fire, who was now in the Vampire Queen Castle. And so began the journey of a young genius, now engaged in love with a southern Amazon, whom he managed to love.

It was a youthful, passionate and unconscious, pure love, which he bestowed on this beautiful woman all night. He loved her all - for her rudeness, for her tenderness, he adored every curve of her body, which he covered with kisses.

But then morning came and the exhausted woman fell asleep in his arms during the night, and the young man carried her into the room, wiped the whitish liquid draining from the slightly opened and reddened petals, covered the Amazon, kissed her on the forehead and went to the Vampire Queen to meet her fate.

22 comments
  • June 19, 2012 13:43

    Already I want not vulgar continuation, but to read the duels of Cain and the "bad guys") The author is a genius! Bravo!

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  • June 19, 2012 15:42

    Thank you, I was afraid that the reader would not like a small amount of intimate scenes. As for Cain ... generally speaking, in my “Thoughts” he is usually the main character, only here I don’t think it will work out.
    It's just that he is too good for me and somehow the development of the image does not work out - he is handsome, but modest, strong and gentle, a little naive about women, but he is brilliant in almost everything, and therefore it remains only to describe his coolness and what he the scrapes get out. And I don’t usually see the end of his adventures.
    However, he will definitely return to the pages of the site.

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  • June 19, 2012 13:48

    "Carry his daughter in his womb." - spoiler?)

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  • June 19, 2012 15:44

    Wait and see))
    And honestly, I did not think about it). It seemed to me that it was clear that the Amazon had died as well as the fruit, but if you are interested in the adventures of Cain's daughter, you can think about it.

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  • Alex (a guest)
    June 19, 2012 14:08

    Ehh ... sorry for the end. The author is just a genius. I really liked it. waiting for new stories.

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  • June 19, 2012 15:47

    Genius is a brute force). And not an end account - this is not the last Amazon in Thinking Out Loud, and Cain has not even reached the Vampire Queen's castle.
    But did you really like this romance story? Or a battle scene?

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  • Lissier (a guest)
    June 19, 2012 17:07

    Super!)) Thank you for continuing) Dear author, keep creating!

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  • Little moon (a guest)
    June 19, 2012 21:58

    chic story :) let's continue the life of Cain's daughter

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  • June 20, 2012 15:16

    Personally, I liked both that and the other ... The author is a talent, keep creating !!! We wait!!!

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  • Enigmatic (a guest)
    June 21, 2012 10:47 PM

    The story is good primarily because of the interesting description of the characters, this is your trick so)
    And if it's not a secret, you can find out from whom Cain's image was taken?)) Fire magician ... luminous tattoos ... =) I already guess, but I want to hear the author

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  • June 21, 2012 23:41

    Hmm, fire mage ... Well, my prototype is more like a lightning - the hero of anime is Trinity Blood, whose name is Abel Naytroude. His bad brother is called Cain, but I like this name more - it gives the hero even more controversy.
    In general, Abel from the anime is a prototype of the exterior for the most part.
    But the revolving tattoos ... well, this is from Alucard from Hellsing, although Abel has the removal of the seals, but the vampire is more effective.
    And on the part of the chips because of the characters ... I do not think that this is so, after all, there are no such characters in life. If you have noticed, in no one story does the girl suffer much from rape, and vice versa, she soon becomes involved in the process (maybe that's why the young ladies do not comment on my stories). This, in my opinion, is practically unrealistic reaction to such events. But I just don’t want the girls to cry and feel pain - I just briefly wrote about this in the story about Shan. In general, the characters are completely unrealistic - girls all turn out to be lustful in their souls to impossibility, and men somehow dominate in the end.This is the main feature of my stories in my opinion.

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  • June 22, 2012 1:36

    I liked it, I liked the whole chapter, this part seemed to me a deviation from hard sex to the lyrics) according to the plot - Lane was not very good, but Cain liked it, this is the type of men most often cause sexual fantasies) by the way ... but you did not try books in the style Fantasy to write?)) I think you would have great work)

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  • June 22, 2012 6:26

    Fantasy? It's too early for me - not everything is thought out)

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  • Anonym (a guest)
    June 25, 2012 0:14

    The stories are good, you would write books)
    You mentioned that there are no ideas how to develop the image of Cain, indeed - an excellent fire magician and does not know how to deal with women. However, you could try to develop Cain in a new direction - for example, comprehending new sciences, for example, another school of magic. And describe his adventures in this adventure.
    In any case, keep writing;))

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  • Nomad (a guest)
    July 26, 2012 15:02

    I think it is gradually necessary to get off the porn stories and write a full-fledged dark fantasy. The scene of the battle really hit all lustful thoughts, and now I want to go re-read the berserk @ to revise the hellsing. Plus, as a result, you have a full-fledged fantasy world with various types of races, temples, estates, etc.

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  • reader (a guest)
    July 26, 2012 21:48

    +++
    I support, everything is very well thought out.

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  • August 7, 2012 21:53

    I'm afraid I have little knowledge - I need descriptions of the landscape, people in more detail and all that, geography, clothes - for realism - without this in any way, but I’m not strong in clothes somehow)))

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  • reader (a guest)
    July 26, 2012 21:44

    We look forward to continue! It is a pity that the plot with Leila and Cain is over, the ending is very romantic ... We are pleased to read new stories about Cain

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  • August 8, 2012 21:24

    The fighting scene, and the storyline with the Amazon are good. He still conquered this girl: D

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  • November 8, 2012 18:47

    Great series, be sure to read to the end. But what appeared action without sex is even good. One must always divert the taste in order to feel again the joy of the old taste. Sorry that such a tragic end in their relationship. A bit squeezed heart. Probably closer, and all they had was smooth and wonderful, and they loved each other until the end of their days, although the latter, though it is regrettable, is. That's just not the father's love for his son, etc., would hardly have raised such a person, and also towards women. He just had to see another)) But you need to write a book. I have long wanted to find a good fantasy book with an unlimited description of the characters, where the scenes of sex and love are still described. But for now, you have to be content with good books without scenes, or, for example, with such excellent scenes. Although the fourth part has combined a lot.

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  • 000 (a guest)
    January 18, 2014 18:55

    Loved it. But so sad (even burst into tears.

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  • Alexey (a guest)
    August 1, 2017 17:17

    I certainly understand that the messages of the last five years ago, but the story is interesting, confused by the mess in the list of parts and what and what to read is not clear. And besides, the author promised to develop Cain ... But for 5 years no movements. Maybe some moved to another resource and where it develops?

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