I would divide the readers into three conditional groups.

It's like Krylov: Swan, Cancer and Stsuchka.

Lebya is a reader who combines two mutually repulsive opposites. He is interested in a prolonged beginning, like a swan song. There should be beautiful descriptions of nature, their environment, characters, psychology of behavior. Why, how and why they are rolling on the knurled path ... and suddenly they roll to a frank blyadstvo. Just fucking should be excitingly described, affecting the low-lying and vicious organs of his senses and brain convolutions, causing them to vibrate, causing and splashing out portions of endorphin.

If at first he read soaking up the romance and the essence of the work, then he who reached the stage of self-righteousness proceeds to self-satisfaction. Suppose that he is alone, then his hands will spontaneously reach to the places of libidous. If there are those present with him in the room, he will expire with the juice of desire, swallowing saliva with pleasure reading what he may now or later and may never be available. Than no meaner scenes and vicious ones, the more excitable and jerky they are.

Cancer - such a reader does not need descriptive scenes. Simplicity in this case is better than theft. From the very first lines, he would like her, him, them or they to put it in, Put it on, squeeze it, pull it in, take it in the mouth or push it to the very neck of the throat. And it should be in the most unexpected places and perhaps in plain sight. The environment is not described, exactly like people. Simple and terse: I went to the park. There I saw the object and dragged it into the bushes or they dragged me and then the act of intercourse, blowjob, buttocks with or without whipping, tearing off clothes or tender undressing, etc.)))

In the story of this kind, the porn component must be 70-80%. Names are not important, you can just use pronouns, I and she. The rougher it is written with exaggerations of size, volume and time, the more narrative the story will look to the reader. However, kamenty put under it, not everyone. Otherwise, he will have to write not what he thinks about this creative. Because honestly no one here will say, or rather they are in the minority - these shameless.

Just compare the number of views and the number of ratings with different works of one author and the indisputable truth will be revealed to you.

A little bitch is a very presentable reader. Give him both this and that and that in one bottle. The story should be written competently, highly artistic, literary language and and excitatory-jerky. But how is this possible, my dear readers? It is like balancing on the point of a needle with a Damocles sword suspended above your head.

These are the stories that get the most kaments, have multiple pages (more than 4 STs, much), are read with interest, and the barometers mentioned on the forum: Eugene and Julie will put dozens under them and write praise odes in honor. By the way, I, too.)))

However, such a story cannot be jerky by definition. And if somewhere someone bugs butterflies in the stomach or warms up in the groin, then this is not for long.

And you, my \ I dear \ aya, what kind of reader do you consider yourself? No need to clap, and I am not interested in assessments. I would like to hear kamenty about this article. And of course, every author is also a reader at the same time.