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Comment on publication: Prisoner of the Castle Myiderslot. Part 1
Anton, are you a troll? I didn’t expect commas to matter to you. I know English better than Russian, and how many languages do you know? And in general, if the first part of the story did not like, why such a kipish because of the continuation? You would write something yourself, and everyone can criticize
Comment on publication: Prisoner of the Castle Myiderslot. Part 1
Dear Anton Rybkin, the fact that the text is “no”, well - not everyone is good at writing the first time. As for commas, I studied 3 classes in Russia, the rules in English are slightly different. And the fact that the “sms”, broke, so it is not on purpose - I put all 3 parts at the same time, but published them at intervals of several days. Anton, you just need to be kinder :) but I'm not offended - I don’t like to read it. And as for your other commentary, which you deleted, so no, I did not set myself the top ten, before that I will never leave. Probably someone liked my trivial.