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Comment on publication: An ancient spell. Part 4
Oh oh And how many videos are left?)))
Comment on publication: Stories on order. As I instructed the horns of her husband in his presence. Part 2
Thank you very much for the feedback. The only thing that the theme and plot of this story is not mine, I wrote it on request. Therefore, these are not my observations.
As for negative comments, I’m not worried))) Actually, it’s good that they exist, I like to argue and justify something there)))) Alas, I’m probably bad, but polishing doesn’t work - it was written that way ... Especially since everyone has their own opinion, as it should be, often the opposite ... You can't please everyone at all)
Comment on publication: Stories on order. As I instructed the horns of her husband in his presence. Part 2
Oh thank you! Not so often in my life there are such comments))
Comment on publication: An ancient spell. Part 4
"I read - in general, not bad." I hear snobbery in the text)))) That way from the master's shoulder - “in general, not bad”)))) Although “in general,” I consider myself a master)))) Deserved or not, where should I go against my own assessment )))))
“There was a mistake in the middle of the text - there is no linen on the heroine, and you write that she put her hand under her panties. Check the text before you post. " I check, but only diagonally ... Sometimes)))) The fact is that while I am writing, the characters bother me to hell and read again about them there are no forces) Therefore, excuse me, eat what is served, especially since ( in my personal opinion) I get quite tasty, well, mostly.
“In addition, I recommend you to reflect on the heroine’s worldview in the next section, because sometimes her inner monologue is annoying. I just want to say to her, “Come on, stop being such a fool! "" Well, I do not!!! Fundamentally disagree, even in terms of world literature. It is in such moments that the character of the heroine is registered. Yes, in some places she is a naive fool, who does not want to calculate the situation two steps ahead. And it is precisely this - its feature that distinguishes it from ordinary banal whores. In any case, I am fun to describe her adventures, and in general I hoped that they would read it with a smile ... By the way the question is: do you have a sense of humor? And then I have not noticed))))
"Write more." Sure to! Where am I going to go?))))))))))))
Comment on publication: An ancient spell. Part 4
Oh thank you!!! What a breathtaking comment !!!)))) Especially flattering about the "error")
I try to diversify, but, alas, at some stage standard sexual acts will still be obtained (or close to it), otherwise some of the following plots will not fit ...
Comment on publication: An ancient spell. Part 4
Thanks, however)))
Comment on publication: Stories on order. As I instructed the horns of her husband in his presence. Part 2
Thank you ... This is how I do it and try for you, my readers) Only the clarification is not “dear”, but “dear”)
Comment on publication: Status: Sex Slaves
Thank you for the praise)
Comment on publication: Stories on order. As I instructed the horns of her husband in his presence. Part 2
Oh, what a coloring !!!)))))) "Kunka", "Shaved skull" ...)))))))
Comment on publication: Stories on order. As I instructed the horns of her husband in his presence. Part 2
Those fantasies that I describe with YOUR stories - excite ... Someone else rarely)))))