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Comment on publication: Pauline

1) The situation is not ordinary, I agree. In such a situation, 99 polins out of a hundred will remain virgins or be raped, but the honeycomb will definitely pass the way of the main character. Not acceptable.
2) See clause 1
3) From my point of view (and I am a blonde) everything is quite logical, and I myself sometimes had a similar struggle (in other situations, of course), continuing to the very end. And you judge from the point of view of male logic. Do not do it this way)))))
4) I agree here, but from my point of view everything that you have described is: “I could not keep it”. I will not redo it. Let it be the author's vision))))

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Comment on publication: Pauline

I bow, I bow, I bow to the applause))))

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Comment on publication: Pauline

thank you for rating

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Comment on publication: Pauline

Not

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Comment on publication: Pauline

1) ... the events described are unlikely to allow other interpretations than “there will be sex now” ... Well, what do you think? I write porn, not literary works, like many others.
2) ... Polina could be seduced, intimidated, deceived (subtle), made ... You probably read the story inattentively: Polina is already fully prepared for the succession of events that are being described. It has been mentioned more than once that she wants all the same things that they have, what her new friends look like or do. Just any form of other prerequisites for sex would be inappropriate.
3) ... Polina's thoughts about the obscenity of what is happening become completely ridiculous ... As you do not understand: this is an internal conflict - Polina understands how everything is happening, but she can do nothing with her desires.
4) ... standard cliches like: “there was so much sperm that it poured out of your mouth”? ... But you are in vain))) Believe me, this sometimes happens in reality. If al didn’t happen, it doesn’t mean that some other men have so much sperm and it is so quickly erupted that it’s really impossible to swallow everything))) Although I agree, it happens infrequently ... and not with all)))

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Comment on publication: Pauline

Nice to be elected)))

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Comment on publication: Pauline

Thank you))) Bear angles are still found, by the way. If I have a dress and an exaggeration, it is very small. And goddamnedness is yes, but this is the genre)))

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Comment on publication: Good, bad teacher. Part 3

Now on this site you can not write about minors (

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Comment on publication: Demon. Act Four: Forbidden Fruit

Not at all in my taste ... I understand the marks for literature, because this is not porn, but a completely different format ... Alas, I have a completely different philosophy ...

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