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Comment on publication: Hypnotic love. Part 1
In case you didn’t notice - in the past year I have laid out monstrously few of my stories.
Comment on publication: Ale
A lengthy start, a quick ending, no idea, no plot. This is to the question of "I am even embarrassed by such bright reviews ..." 75% read the text diagonally.
Comment on publication: Hypnotic love. Part 1
Continue by next year.
Comment on publication: Hypnotic love. Part 1
Sorry, but so far only one part has been written. And the second I will start writing no earlier than next year.
Comment on publication: Hypnotic love. Part 1
Thank you. I try every time to pick up interesting and new (for me personally) ideas.
Comment on publication: Loss country fogs. Part One: A runaway bride. Chapter one
Please tell me which school of fencing they taught you, because I went through everything I could and did not find the right one.
Comment on publication: Loss country fogs. Part One: A runaway bride. Chapter one
I want to draw the author’s attention to one thing:
“Sit down lower, you will be more stable. The edge is directed into the stomach of the enemy. More than half of the weight on the front foot, but not all ... You must move along without slipping your feet off the ground. ”- you don’t know yourself how to do this, don’t write better.
1. The height of the rack does not affect the stability - only on mobility, and then depending on what kind of weapon in question.
2. The edge of the sword can be sent anywhere, depending on the style of fencing.
3. The weight in the rack should be exactly between the legs, regardless of style.
4. Move slipping ... hrenaks foot on the stone. This is not a fencing room with an ideal floor.
In general, you are right, this story is not the place. In the first five paragraphs, a quote came to mind: “Of course, dull strength and a sharp sword are good, but magic is what rules the world!” It was said by the magician in one book after he simply heated the knight's armor.
Personal thought: Mages without imagination are depressing.
Comment on publication: Contrary to fate. Part 3
Go to livejournal. com and do a search on the alias.
Comment on publication: Contrary to fate. Part 3
For those who want to follow my work I started a diary.
sear21. livejournal. com
Comment on publication: Trainee. Part 2
I rarely confine myself to just one word, but here is a rare case: Bravo.
Although, I confess right away, I haven’t read the first part and I’m unlikely to read it.
Now I know what kind of creation I need to surpass this month.