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Comment on publication: Cinderella 2013

Is it good or bad? :)
By the way, the communication style of Sanka and Marki, uh ... let's say, not quite mine :) Rather, I'm here - a modest imitator.

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Comment on publication: Duel

Written under the impression of the film "Restless Anna." But I warn you: everything is completely different there :)

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Comment on publication: Cinderella 2013

Ouch, on one - it's a long time Inhale before the ball scene;)
Thank!

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Comment on publication: Duel

Glad to try :)

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Comment on publication: Cinderella 2013

Charles Perrault finished it for me;)

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Comment on publication: Masha and the Bear

Does the heroine of the story itself complain to us? ;)

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Comment on publication: Masha and the Bear

However, the advice is reasonable. Right now, add a clarifying paragraph. Perhaps not heavy :)

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Comment on publication: Masha and the Bear

So that's the point: I do not like the obvious. I like it when there are few words, and the rest of the reader’s fantasy completes :)

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Comment on publication: Masha and the Bear

May be. But on the street, fervently :)

In addition, if due to - then the final is more predictable. And then, in turn, is the inevitable taste of morality :) I like unexpected ends: they are devoid of tendentiousness.

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