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Comment on publication: The case in the barber shop
The author made a little mistake by the genre and, accordingly, by the address: they come here for a positive.
It would be better if the author confessed (directly or indirectly) how he drags himself from this scene, whether it was real or not, than to make a law-abiding revelation with morality out of it. I share his morality, but here she is at the wrong address.
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
I agree to replace the mod with a modern :) with an additional charge of Oder (such a river)
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
Post, mod, turf, bullshit, bottom :)
(each of them is in Russian)
* Euthanasia is not erotic. It is better to have a thread like a hyperstimulator like a slug from Predatory Things. Better yet, just live;)
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
* ... claiming unpredictability, damn it :)
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
Why are you in a bad mood today?
Three - claiming predictability; but only them, the stump is clear, not three. The concept of classic drama (which I am playing here, as you already guessed) suggested the following dramatic structure: 1 - exposition, 2 - confusion, 3 - imaginary outcome, 4 - new confusion, 5 - final outcome (for Bailo Region). What, with minor variations, here and implemented. As you can see, this structure assumes exactly 3 plot surprises - as in Phaedra, not here be remembered.
It would, of course, be more appropriate to write a drama in five sexual acts :) Viking is right.
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
A. Love of the people to their akyn :) Well, who has the medals, who has gigabytes of comments - people's love has different forms of expression, in short :)
And by the way, do not tell me about turns. There are three of them: 1) Kroko = Dasha, 2) Arrival of Dasha, 3) Exposure of lies. The first one is still interpreted retrospectively: “aha, that’s what the paragraph was about.” The second, as for me, is rather unexpected. Well, and the third - yes, is predictable. But realistic :)
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
In both!
Fix :)
Comment on publication: Prisoners of the World Wide Web (virtual drama in 5 acts)
And where is the author's regalia? :)
* asks to respect them too
Comment on publication: Chocolate Ay
Where I'll go, I'll write ... someday :) When inspiration comes;)