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Comment on publication: Types of graphomania

Thank you, I completely agree. Porn story should be short and hot as a flash. And I still can not - it flows from me ... as it turns out)). Maybe in time it will work, maybe not. (Especially Sisyastik - I realize that it was possible to make three normal stories there - but I “see” like that and even though you’re a horse, I am so pret))).
I hope I still find my reader)))

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Comment on publication: Types of graphomania

funny, I took myself to Florer and Founer at the same time - I love the detailed descriptions, but I clearly restart the text with dialogs (I am amuse myself with the hope that they are successful with me). So who am I getting? Zanuder?)))

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Comment on publication: Punishment Sisystika

I will explain about the final: I invented the most disgusting punishment. because 1) you cannot treat a woman like that and 2) I was terribly jealous of the whole story. In general, he asked for it.))

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Comment on publication: Plan for the day

And it seems to me that the story is stopped where it is needed: stylish, dramatic, literary logical. I, the fetishist, loved the dressing-ups and omissions, but I set 9 - I didn’t have enough details. No, I understand: everyone had to present their dream, but I’m not like that. I saw only a blurred gender image. I did not see any hair, eyes, or lips. I didn’t feel the elasticity of the breasts jumping (and couldn’t have imagined them in size 5, my fetish, because they are always young; yes, the young can be fifth and seventh, but then it is agreed - well, these are my personal troubles, BUT THAT I HAD TO SEE: it’s better not to flirt with the whole audience, but to hit the boobs, or pizdofil, zhopofil or footbath ...) about the interclopal fold, like a nude cunt slips, highlighting the juice and on the saddle of a bicycle ...

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