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Zalon

Publications: 5

Comments: 19

  • August 24, 2017 20:29

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 2

    It's good that it's ugly, not all are reading romantic nonsense, plunge into another world) Where there is a plus, there must be a minus. Negative emotions are not always destructive.

    • Rating: 0
  • August 24, 2017 20:22

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 2

    This is just a story - a fantasy on a given topic. Do not be so worried about the girl))) She is efimerna and exists exclusively virtually, in our imagination. Reliability and reality, in sex stories, as a rule, not in respect - it will be too boring to read)

    • Rating: 1
  • June 8, 2017 21:28

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 1

    Yes, indeed, the transition to the game with interest in the full version opens the emptiness of 404. Strange, maybe I messed up, and maybe deleted. I do not know. Well, it's okay, the full version of the “game with interest” without cuts and without age adjustment remained with Mark Desadov. You can read there if you are interested. Or search for Google, in the wilds of the Internet nothing disappears without a trace.

    • Rating: 0
  • 27 May 2017 19:16

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 1

    Made corrections. Thank.

    • Rating: 0
  • 27 May 2017 9:19

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 1

    Thanks for the feedback.
    Sometimes innuendo is more interesting than any continuation ...

    • Rating: 0
  • 27 May 2017 9:05

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 1

    I did not go very far. I do not know about the continuation yet. I don’t want to get into a harsh topic, but it’s not going to work around the edge for a long time - the interest of the “focus group” will leave
    All serials suffer from a plot-tightening, so I think that the story should be laid out in its entirety or divided into no more than three pieces (parts). Perhaps I will think about the continuation, if I grope a path between repetition and standard fights.

    • Rating: 0
  • 27 May 2017 8:42

    Comment on publication: Strawberry jam on pineapple in champagne. Part 1

    Thank. Not sure what to continue. Although everything can be. I know about Pastel, word made corrections, but I did not do the final proofreading. Excuse me.

    • Rating: 0
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