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Comment on publication: Cate blanchett

Wow, just wow))) In fact, you have stirred up such antiquity! Purely by chance, I noticed a comment while checking my email ... Sorry for not answering immediately.
It was the very first story of mine, so the curve is still the same. I have thoughts about the continuation, but there are several obstacles:
1 I write rarely, according to my mood. Sometimes I give out a few stories, sometimes a year of inactivity.
2 Now if I take on the job, then implement other interesting ideas. In particular, the Miriya cycle (there are three parts on this site).
3 In addition, there is another problem, despite the fact that there is a continuation in the head. I do not know what to do with this part, it is too clumsy. Ideally, you need to rewrite it completely, but in fact I doubt that I will do it.
However, I do not argue, it would be nice to return to your heroes and put an end to the story.)
I can tease the name of the continuation, if I write it, it will be called: "Technostas" and the name is not given by chance;)

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Comment on publication: Amazingly extraordinary adventures of Miriya. Chapter 2: Drink

I suppose you are the same person that left me a comment to 3 parts, so I will quote part of the answer from there:
"Thank! Your words are music to my ears. =)) Yes, I did not even think of throwing, but since there is not much time for writing, the process is slow. And in order to develop the whole history of Miriya, I will need at least 6-7 chapters, or even more.) ".
In general, not only time, but of course laziness also slows down.) I cannot say for sure with the time frame. Between the first and second period was two months, until later - about four and more. Well, this is also due to the fact that the third part turned out to be much larger in volume. Plus, I know for myself that I cannot be in a hurry, I should post it right away, it will be raw and with errors. The longer I have been at the editing stage, the better for the story.

P. s. Strange features of the site ... I don’t see part of my stories until I log in to the site under my nickname and password ... And I don’t see the “shopping cart” tag where stories with a rating less than 3 are dropped. Maybe the “cart” can be seen only by registered users, you need to check it later))

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Comment on publication: Amazingly extraordinary adventures of Miriya. Chapter 2: Drink

The third part scored a very low rating and got into the "basket", so it is not displayed in the general search. Try to select the latest tag in the “stories” section of the site menu.

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Comment on publication: Incredibly amazing travels Miriya. Chapter 1: A Dream

Thanks for the detailed answer.

As for the esophagus - yes.) Everyone has their own fetishes. You can continue to move forward, you can with more detailed anatomical details, but the penis is longer than necessary.

I am doing proofreading more than once. Unfortunately, from my subjective point of view, it looks acceptable. Hopefully with experience will come skill.

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Comment on publication: Incredibly amazing travels Miriya. Chapter 1: A Dream

Thank you ^ _ ^

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Comment on publication: Malice

Your comment is already a kind of gratitude! =) Actually, I don’t know how the gratitude system works here.))
Do not cry and despond, welcome 2017 with joy and enjoy wonderful moments!;)

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Comment on publication: Immenlosia. Part 2

You can not wait))) The whole story that I want to tell, will result in 2-3 books. But at the moment I will not be able to write them, that is, I will ask you to write it down. Because the skills and experience are not enough.
But a small prequel about Morsariel is planned, I also do not exclude other small tales in my own world (possibly with past heroes).

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Comment on publication: Darkness in the forest

Thank you!) From the category of "not porn" I have a "gulf" and "immenlosia." Last, if I am not mistaken, you have already read.))

P. s. And so I have a couple of ideas. For example, the prequel to “immenlosia” and the continuation of the “game of vice”, and a bunch of other ideas.

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Comment on publication: The game of vice. Part Two: Hospital

Impressed by Life is strange, but apart from the very idea of ​​time travel (in my case, very simplified), there are no more similarities. Although ... One future character will be a bit like Chloe.

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