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Comment on publication: Cigarettes and coffee
In fact, not all raises the degree. Mate, spitting, and something else.
Although, I confess, it is written well. Emotions, actions. Especially the first page. Then it was harder for me to read. Just not very my theme with this physiology and verbalik.
Comment on publication: What do I do, I do not know - on the daisy I read!
A similar story was told to me, so, quite real. How many participants were there was not interested. True, they told a slightly different version. There were several young people, and whoever finishes first, paid the price.
Comment on publication: My favorite hate
The ending is good, only crumpled or somehow wrong. For me, it was not organic. Yes, and this may be, but not so suddenly. Perhaps a couple of sheets needed to stretch. I dont know. But it is written very well. True)
Comment on publication: My favorite hate
Marina,
very well written. Emotional heat, charge. I was captured by the story. But it was as if they plunged into a hole with cold water when she changed her anger to mercy. Something I did not have. For me it was crumpled and disingenuous or something. Not exactly the word, but I can not find the right one. Drawn happy-end, or something. People rarely behave like this. The force of inertia exists. It is difficult to hate, hate, hate, even if it is attracted, and suddenly love. Maybe I'm wrong, usually in different ways, but the ending left some bewilderment.
Comment on publication: Neighbour. Part 2
Dear Monsieur Gorbatov, you know how to hook ... Although not my story, but ...
Of course, if you position yourself as a victim, then violence cannot be avoided. Neither in a relationship, nor simply walking down the street. Often faced with the opinion that the victims of rapists and maniacs are those who consider themselves victims. I did not feel the character of the heroine, so I cannot understand for myself who she is - the victim, the thing or who else ...
As for things, and it happens, some, indeed, consider themselves as such. It happens, of course. Lower too happen different. If they call me a thing, I can keep silent during the session, but I will put one huge minus.
Comment on publication: Neighbour. Part 2
Accidentally went unfinished ... This is not just my opinion. These are other relationships, fine lines where it is not always possible to clearly distinguish black and white. As in any relationship. Not only thematic.
Comment on publication: Neighbour. Part 2
Let's just say men love queens. But do not know what to do with them. They are often simply afraid of them. With no queens, it is easier to appear king. Honestly, among the lower queens full, even if they are on their knees. This is a slightly different relationship. And, at times, it is not very clear who controls whom. During the session, it seems clear. And so ... This is - not only my
Comment on publication: Dance of solitude
Of course, from myself. Therefore, in squabbles except that after a glass of wine I can get involved. In general, sometimes you think why? I am neither cold nor hot from grades. Yes, of course, nice. But I'm more interested in reading the comments. Learn from mistakes. On others constructive comments - too.
Comment on publication: Dance of solitude
And there are groups, only this is not a matter for the Tsar. Well it is, by the way.
A bit of history, now a slightly different rating system.Previously, assessments were very strongly influenced by illiteracy, ease of reading, the presence of obscene words, etc. Some people have always marked my stories as illiterate and teeming with obscene words. Now these columns are there, but they do not affect the assessment.
Comment on publication: Dance of solitude
This is a normal situation. It is customary to evaluate the person, not the stories. Some accepted. Someone, for example, is in the throat of my habit of writing about BDSM. They do not perceive it, they consider that I propagandize or something else that does not matter. For someone, sex with a sandwich is good, but for someone the whips are not tough enough. All people are different.
Again, jerk on the text does not work. He is a little about it.