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Comment on publication: Sex as a vocation. Part 4
H. interlocutor, I know two meanings of the word “tolerance” - the immunological state of the body and tolerance for smth. Since in both of these meanings the word is written with a small letter, I assume that you meant something else. Please explain your comment so that I can understand you correctly.
Discuss the classics harmless. In the event that this discussion does not take place at the level of “Fuck, who ever decided that he is smart” and “War and peace in his bosom.” For the outpouring of bile to the school curriculum can be found many reasons. But it is worth looking for a suitable place.
This field is intended to comment on the story with an erotic slant. A decent story. But even the best erotic story will not become Sevastopol, if you understand what I mean.
No offense to anyone.
Comment on publication: Sex as a vocation. Part 4
Gentlemen, it seems to me that a pornographic site is not the most suitable place for discussing the classics of literature by no means a pornographic genre. Let's not be distracted. :-)
Comment on publication: Sex as a vocation. Part 4
Do not burn. Sorry. :-)
Comment on publication: Sex as a vocation. Part 4
You have a wonderful (and literate, precious) language. Very much raises the story over the mass of others ironic attitude of the heroine to what is happening. In the minus, I can point out a rather mean, symbolic designation of sex scenes - so far this “goes off with a bang,” because you create interesting situations that, even without descriptions, stimulate the imagination, but such brevity can be annoying.
I will join some comments about previous publications - it’s boring and predictable to make a heroine a whore (which you probably don’t intend to). But her new physiological features, in combination with her character and way of thinking, can regularly put her not so much in piquant as in comic situations. Are you going to develop this opportunity?
Comment on publication: Dragon Age: Origins. Horns and hooves
"The lessons of eloquence in the Circle were in vain." No wonder I put this remark. :-)
Comment on publication: Dragon Age: Royal Night
A good syllable, literate language, did not go. But a rather schematic description of the actual erotic part. I also have problems with this.
Comment on publication: Curse of Belozhopka
Damn funny. :-) In the spirit of the "Good Soldier Schweik".
Comment on publication: Office sex victim
Exceptionally beautiful. By the combination of eroticism, style and literate literary language - the ideal to which I aspire. :-)