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Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 9
Thanks for the comment. Grammar, style, etc. I agree, but where do you get the editor? The topic is very specific.
I try to follow the accuracy and try to avoid like blunders, but of course I see a fresh look. By the way, there in the second part, in the description of the actions given in the example, there are no inaccuracies. He holds his hand from top to bottom and there is no need to get anywhere.
And as for my husband, I didn’t plan any wiping of my feet, and I will try to continue the story on the verge ...
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
New part on check
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
Until the end of the week will be
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
Someone and Santa Barbara looked with pleasure, for example I like to read multivolume stories, and someone enjoys a collection of stories. Well, I will finish with the ninth part of this series, I will crumple everything up at the end and he will fuck her fast, so what? There are readers who need not only the finals, but also a very slow development of events. And like you say "serials" unfortunately very, very few.
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
This part is approximately the same in volume as the previous parts. Each part is a separate scene, well, I do not have the opportunity to write novels. And the meaning of his writing year? what would then put a bunch of pages that will not read? With a small amount, at least some feedback is available, according to estimates and reviews you can understand whether readers like my writings or not. And if you don’t like it, then why write further, much less? To whom it seems that I am writing a little, try to write it yourself (this applies to readers, I think that the one who tried to write understands me), I read with great pleasure. I also like to read very much, only this topic is not updated as often as I would like, and it is because of this that I try to write. And once again, I’ll be happy to hear all the suggestions for the further scenario and characters of the characters, let's write the story together.
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
At this point, how it goes, all thoughts on the continuation of the plot are welcome, so that you are welcome with ideas
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 8
So write yourself, all with pleasure. including me, revered.
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 7
Why does everyone want a child? I just do not understand why some are fixated on this. No baby is planned.
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 7
An interesting scene, think about how to embed it in the story.
Comment on publication: New stage of family life. Part 7
No intrigue)), the husband will be in a condom ...