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Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
Most likely it will be)
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
Thank you all for your feedback and support. I appreciate it very much!
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
Thank. Yes, you are right about the trolls)) I’ve already seen this for myself. Unfortunately, it is impossible to speak normally with some people, and it is useless: ((
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
Listen, I don’t know what exactly I got hooked or offended you like. Personally, I would not spend so much of my time on such extensive comments under the story which, from my point of view, is worth nothing and deserves 1 :)) But since you wrote, I will answer. In the end, criticism is also good :) I do not pretend that I am the best writer in the world. This is my first story, I write in parts because it is more convenient for me. I do not know where you saw that I was dissatisfied with something. I don't care how you read the story, first or from the end. Just by the fact that you wrote it was clear that you do not know the storyline, but you take it to evaluate. As for the analogy with the goods in the store, then in the store you pay money and choose the goods you need. You do not make tantrums due to the fact that you do not like the goods that are offered for free :) And as for the fact that you did not find anything exciting in my story, this is not surprising. If you like eroticism or maybe even romance, then why go to stories with such categories as “under duress”, “submission and humiliation”? What did you expect to see here? :) And you, in this case, as in that joke, behave like a schizophrenic in a brothel, who is constantly surprised that he is being fucked :) PS did not read;))
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
I do not know where you saw the tag "romance", as it is not here. The story is not romantic and I am glad that you personally did not like it. Evaluate the story without knowing the plot, reading the last part and not really understanding what it is about. But the review is like a whole book :)) This is of course “aerobatics” for a literary critic.
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
It is clear) You have an interesting approach to evaluating stories :)
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 4: New Life
How many questions :) I am certainly not against criticism, but still. After all, we live in the Internet era, you can go to any social service. network and find there are tens if not hundreds of thousands of girls with that name. Why ask stupid questions. Or do you think that the girls in the stories should be called only Natasha, Ira or Olya? In my opinion it is trite.
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 3: Irreversibility
Will be :)
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 2: First Earnings
Thank :)
Be patient and learn everything later;) I have planned 7 parts, and maybe more. Ex ... there would only be time to write.
Comment on publication: Brutal games. Part 2: First Earnings
I meant that I will not tell you now in the comments :)) And in the story itself, yes, in any case I will try;)