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Comment on publication: Hopeless situation does not happen
Thank.
Comment on publication: Elevator
Life is such a thing. As you correctly noted, “correctness” often, even more often than we would like, brings negative dividends in life. Why ... Apparently at the time of the formation of this character, I decided that Valentine had a dark streak. A dark stripes tend to end. In what we all - both I and the readers, I hope, were convinced. :)
Thanks for the comment!
Comment on publication: Elevator
Thank! New stories will be. I promise!
Comment on publication: Conspiracy
Remark to the point, I accept and regret that I did not study Russian well at school. Really a pity and shame, but I can not help it. I can only promise to check my texts more closely, but certainly not a fact that will help. ;)
Comment on publication: A friend advised. Part 1
Hot comments. And this means that something in the story hooked people. And this is good. About the lifelessness and unrealistic disagree. What does it have to do with it? The resource is full of fantasies, fairy tales, fantasy and so on and so forth. The author writes as he feels and how he (she) wants. I do it myself - and there I liked it ... I did not like it ...
Therefore, Kate, do not pay attention and write as you see it. Good luck.
Comment on publication: Elevator
Thanks to all evaluators and commentators. Thank you for your interest!
Comment on publication: Elevator
Thank.
Eh, you have to put another story in a queue for a sequel. I don't want to be beaten ... :)
Comment on publication: Elevator
Well, why not finished, I quote:
“- I'll wait for the apartment. Do you not craze me? “Vala began to enter the girl powerfully to her body.”
Just left a little off-screen. Need to somehow spur the reader's imagination?)
And of course, thanks for rating!
Comment on publication: Elevator
Thank you for your interest, comment and rating.
All with the past!
Comment on publication: Wild field
Thank you for your interest in the story. Considering that the story was written more than two years ago, you will have to re-read and remember what you liked about this character. Even the most interesting was)