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Comment on publication: Another bed
Thanks for the comment. I'm glad you liked it.
Comment on publication: The second story. Part One: Greed
Not believable. And how, therefore, quality suffers. I personally always re-read my stories. In a day, a week ... or later. And I ask myself the question: “could it be like this?” Esla - yes, the path is even a stretch, that’s good. And if not...
Here in this particular case - not true. Did not believe. Sorry my opinion.
Comment on publication: Another bed
Frankly, nothing was planned with these heroes. But there are others. There are ideas, there are developments, there are ready-made stories waiting in the wings ... Follow, subscribe, rate.
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Comment on publication: Another bed
I can write if the story "hooks". More difficult to promise. With such offers better, probably in private?
And for the evaluation of stories - thanks.
Comment on publication: Another bed
Thank. Positive feedback is important to me.
It is a pity, people who give low marks do not comment. I would like to know the reason. But, apparently, alas ...
Comment on publication: With a classmate in the toilet
Messy and crumpled for my taste. Many details are empty, and on the subject - a small fraction. Very similar to the fantasy and secret desires of the author ... Sorry, if not right.
Comment on publication: Hot walk
I would like to help the author somehow, if he, of course, accepts criticism.
Already commented on similar stories and will have to repeat. Rudeness can and should be exciting and truthful. In this story, I did not see this. I do not believe that men can be as described. It is impossible to be tough with a woman without respecting her. And if the characters are such as they appeared - it is unpleasant to read. So "peasants" want to tear off arms and legs and everything else. And this is not the emotion that you rely on while reading this resource. From here, by the way, and estimations: you will not deceive the reader.
Comment on publication: Katya
I read it, and I wanted to quote: "I do not believe it!" Well, not convincing, even kill. And not convincing - it means lifeless. There is no feeling, no emotion. Sorry for this opinion.
Comment on publication: Svetka. Part 2
I don’t want to criticize the story. Not because there is nothing, but because it turned out the way the author wanted. The story is thought out and filled with emotions. The story is alive. And this is more important, at times, than grammar, punctuation and literary rules. For the atmosphere - you can forgive a lot. I like it.
Threat to some of the comments sometimes listen still worth it. At least for the future. And do not respond violently to Kriyku. If constructive - it is necessary to accept, if it is empty - do not pay attention. Author, good luck!
Comment on publication: Svetka. Part 2
I don’t want to criticize the story. Not because there is nothing, but because it turned out the way the author wanted. The story is thought out and filled with emotions. The story is alive. And this is more important, at times, than grammar, punctuation and literary rules. For the atmosphere - you can forgive a lot. I like it.
Threat to some of the comments sometimes listen still worth it. At least for the future. And do not respond violently to Kriyku. If constructive - it is necessary to accept, if it is empty - do not pay attention. Author, good luck!