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the lower lip, the woman fully put on his dick. Could there be a spectacle for a man more beautiful than this.
Her palms gripped his shoulders, and Lera began her dance. The hips moved to the beat of a single melody that was heard to her, it was her dance, the pace of her movements gradually accelerated, and Lera moaned to throw her head back. The man on whose member she led her party firmly grasped her thighs in constant motion. He also contributed to the drawing of eternal dance.
Lera galloped on the penis, like a rider on a thoroughbred stallion, she could no longer control herself, loud moans and cries filled the room. The pace jumps all accelerated. Lera then screamed, throwing her head back up, now sobbing, buried her face in the chest or neck of a man.
Finally, her eyes rolled up, her face buried in her partner's chest, convulsions rolled with a sweet wave, moans and sobs turned into a cry. Her body trembled and, after a few seconds, went limp, clinging to the man.
Amicable exhalation from the door. Four men are fascinated by what is happening.
Lera turned her face in their direction, pressing her cheek to Katz's chest. His blue eyes were embarrassed. Katz's palm stroked her disheveled hair, and Katz's cock inside her began to move.
She completely forgot that she is still wearing a member, and cute Yosechka has not finished yet. Having straightened, Lera licked her lips and invitingly bulged her ass, pushing her buttocks apart.
The first to think Tolik. Coming from behind, he abundantly moistened Lerin's anus with saliva and put a member at her rear entrance.
Lera, feeling that the visitor had come from the back entrance, tried to relax. She froze, getting ready to receive a guest. And the guest has come. Sensing how little Tolik squeezes into her ass, Lera gave way to meet. Strange, but she almost did not feel pain, although Tolya had a rather fat little member, but either she got used to it, or Tolechka had a lot of experience in this matter, but there were almost no discomfort.
But the feeling of fullness, and double, was. As then with Stas and Denis, but now everything was much nicer, softer like that. In my own way, cozy. There is true, more passion. What is better? And this and that.
The men began to move slowly inside her. They were in no hurry, and so was she. Lera squinted and looked at Andrei, he enthusiastically filmed what was happening on camera. And it seems the role of the operator he liked.
Lera beckoned the men to her. Arkady and Igor stood on the sides of their trio, and Lera turned to Igor and took his penis in her mouth, while her hand was jerking off Arkady's dick. A little later, she turned to Arkasha, and changed her priorities.
Once during the process, she saw Semenych's contented face, the fat man again dragged some food. Having met her partner with her sights, and the future employer showed her a clenched fist with a thumb sticking up. She couldn’t send an uninvited viewer, her mouth was busy with more important things. Igor's member demanded her attention and caresses.
The first to give in was Tolechka, the hole that he had all the same, was very narrow and elastic. Lera felt his sperm fill her intestines.
Having flowed out Tolya with a choking sound, he pulled his organ out. But literally in a few seconds, Lera felt that a new guest was knocking on her back door. Arkady wished to occupy the empty hole. And in not having time to close and smeared with the sperm of the predecessor anus, his dick entered easily, like clockwork.
And here the upturned tip showed its true face. Apparently he got somewhere, because less than a minute later, Leroux covered a wave of orgasm. And behind her the second.And during the second wave, a Member of Arkady could not stand the intensified massage, shot mixing his sperm with Tolik's sperm.
Yosya, who felt all this tumult through the thin flesh, at last could not restrain himself, and filled Lerina with a good portion of the womb, sultry Jewish sperm.
The last was Igor, he grabbed Leroux by the head and drove the member as far as possible and pulled her straight down the throat. After swallowing everything, Lera slid off Katz, who was sitting relaxed, and spread out on the sofa next to him.
A few minutes later she got up and went into the shower.
Lera stood under warm streams caressing her weary body, and under their encouraging touches, her strength returned to her. Ten minutes later she was full of energy again, and ready for new challenges.
The stall door opened, Andrei peeked in.
“Yoska, he said that he invited you to go fishing with us. You'll go?"
"And how do you want to? How to decide it will be. I would go, you have good friends. But you decide. "
Lera knew the answer beforehand. But it was he who had to voice it. Male vanity, such a fragile substance.
"Well, if so, I will go to please the men."
Paid time was coming to an end. The whole company dressed out of the bath. Passing by Semyonitch, Lera could not restrain herself and sneakily showed the fat man her tongue. She smiled when he heard a satisfied hehekane behind her.
Saying goodbye to new friends Lera got into the car to Andrew. He took out a laptop and transferred recordings from the camera to a USB flash drive. A flash drive gave Lera
“Tell your Sasha. And thanks from me for stopping there. By the way, I’ll take a camera for fishing too, tell that too. “And Andrew moved the Mazda from its place.
“Give. Listen to Andryush and tell me about the guys, otherwise I don’t know anything about them. ”
“Yes, I do not know how to tell. But in short, listen. Tolyan is married, two children, but with his wife of disagreement. Not like mine, but they bark all the time too. Sicker looks like each other, to hell, that's what they are. Do not run up because of the children, the youngest is still in school. You do not see that Tolyan is so talkative, he is actually shy, and this is so. You won't believe, he didn't even have a mistress. Previously, it seemed there was someone, but for the last two years there was definitely no one. So, today he has a holiday.
Yoska, a Jew's face, is also married, and there are children, the son is studying in America, it seems there will be with his relatives, and the daughter has left for Israel, now he is serving in the army. And his wife gave in to her historic homeland. And Yoska went with them for six months and came back, I can’t say there - it’s hot, the sand is all around, and the Jews are with the Arabs, and I say my native birch trees are dreaming. So they live, they are there, and he is here. It seems to be married, but it seems not. I also did not want to go to my son in America. What he says, I did not see in that America, did not see anything, and there is no desire to see anything, this America. Here he is such Yoska, Russian patriot.
Igorek, two years ago he divorced his wife, his love happened to be an idiot. Twenty-five girls knocked, and this asshole behind her as tied. Well, they lived for six months, then this shlendra turned the tail and screwed it. But Igor was left alone. He gave in to his former wife, and late, she already lives with a man, that man turns out to be her lover for two years. And our Igor is neither a dream nor a spirit. Now one and kukuti. The children grew up, the wife of the former old man is no longer needed, give a younger one. Especially nakosyachil himself. These are pepeteui. He seems to have some kind of woman, but this is so, pure for the body. At heart, then darkness.
And at Arkashka absolutely ass. Two daughters and a wife. Wife fucking right and left, and he suffers. So sometimes it’s stomping, and again in the house under the heel. Sorry idiot, I read him thirty years know. That was a good guy, kind, honest. And you see how life has turned. "
When the car taxied to the entrance of Lerin house. Lera hesitated for a moment, saying goodbye to Andrei. She wanted to kiss him goodbye, but remembering that the whores do not kiss, did not dare. Her hesitation was decided by Andrew himself, he pulled Leroux to him and dug into soft, pliable lips, his tongue slipped inside and Lerochka swam.
Taking a breath, she jumped out of the car and leaned over whispered
"I am waiting for a call."
Then she closed the door and ran to the entrance.
Andrei looked at Lerina’s window and muttered
“Eh, man, how are you such a wife, from yourself you let go? And maybe with such a different and impossible? Better that way, than she quietly, such horns will guide that you can not get through the door. This, after all, on a leash, you can not keep. "
Sasha met his wife in the hallway.
“You, like, baby?” He hugged his beloved wife. She pressed her face to his chest, and wrapped her arms around his torso.
"It was cool. Good guys. Only very tired. “She took a flash drive out of her purse and handed it to her husband.
“Look, almost everything was removed, and what I missed will tell you. But then. And now I'm going to sleep. If you get excited, come in. You can use any hole, just please, don't wake up. ”
Entry in the diary "Resurrection." Bath day. In sauna. Andrew (it seems already a constant lover) Yosya, Arkady, Anatoly, Igor. In all holes. For the first time “three bows. “Finished everywhere. Blowjob under the table (partial recording, Andrew reprimanded) $ 300. Video report is attached. Do not wake up ... "
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great text. Well done, author. Only "Petrel" wrote Bitter)
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My cant. Initially, there were poems about the Soviet passport. Then he decided to replace.
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And the right decision. Mayakovsky is still full of love bliss, with long blowjobs contraindicated
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Ndaa ... I didn’t think about the great proletarian poet from this angle.
Creativity Vladimir Mayakovsky (Yes, and Maximushka Gorky to the heap) as a means of erotic stimulation. The most interesting calico is spinning.
Requires exploratory research. Definitely.
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When continuous sex, without plot, as it is not very interesting to read.
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In this series, I did not focus on the plot, although it is there, it only develops slowly. And on types. In such stories, the characters mostly act as extras. Vanya, Petya, Kohl, Mahmud. I wanted to show them with real people, with my thoughts, destinies, characters. Well, just entertain and amuse the reader. Hope succeeded. Yes, the henpecked henpecks in this topic are fed up, Sasha, though stuck on his head, but not a schmuck.
A twisted plot and adventure, it is in other series ...
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Thanks for the continuation, well, finally there appeared a rather long and interesting story on this topic. I hope that this chapter will not be the last. And from myself I want to add an idea to the author, not to finish the story as it ended now, but to stop at some interesting place, as if at the crossroads of several continuation options. And the continuation of the history is very interesting, even now it’s a fishing trip with Andrei’s friends, by the way, we don’t yet know how many will be there. And Lera’s challenge to the sauna to Semyonitch is already a new company, and announcing in the internet hangs for a reason, which Sasha gave in the second part. And also a business man to whom Lera wrote her phone in a cafe. So there are already a lot of options. And as readers, it would be interesting for us to participate in this kind of interactive and send the Author to those options for the continuation of the story he has outlined.
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Applications are accepted. By the way about the announced that I completely forgot. Thanks for reminding me. And you did not mention the desire of Lera to her husband to do it, it’s me about mistresses. Masha there, and others. Yes, and with his wife Andrew is not so simple. In the text, in general, many interesting things are poured in, something will play further, something not.
For example, there was such a mention of a certain Andrei who sent his wife Katya to Turkey to rest. This is a reference to another cycle, “A prodigal wife. Katya, there is exactly what happens in Turkey. I haven't laid it out here yet.
In the features of the national ebalki, new characters will be required.
And Semyonitch is not the only company that can fit. But what?
Stas with Denis should also appear.
The participation of readers is welcome. And waiting for suggestions. So far, the plot has been defined, and now variations are possible.
So the cycle promises to be long. True two or three weeks will have to take a break. It is necessary to complete the previous cycle, there are only two chapters left. Yes, and a couple of new stories to bring to mind. How to finish posting necessarily.
And about the endings. To finish a chapter with a diary entry is a peculiar feature of this series, I usually interrupt on a tense moment ... Although you can break long chapters, like a bath day, for example.
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Yes, and it is probably right to make some kind of piece in the series, let it be a diary entry. But about Lera's husband’s mistress of mistresses, it seems to me that it already translates the story from the sexwife category into a swing, in my opinion you will lose that zest when Sasha really enjoys his wife's sex on the side. Well, about the fact that the storyline story can be divided into possible ramifications, so it does not necessarily do on the last lines, in which there is an entry in the diary. Perhaps this will be how you did it at the beginning of the second part of the story. And yet do not take long breaks, it is better not to let the reader leave for a long time and to warm up his interest in the development of the plot, albeit with small chapters.
Exclusively IMHO.
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There is no talk about swing as such. Lera should not participate. At this moment I had an interest to describe Lera’s feelings when she was in Sasha’s place. But I do not know yet, I must estimate the pros and cons.
As for the breaks, you are probably right. just here there are different circumstances, Sometimes urgent business trips happen, there's nothing you can do. But about the small chapters, I will adopt.
Yes, and the variant with office novels is also possible. Just pure seksvayf, I think it is not entirely realistic. Interspersing and swing and classic betrayals are inevitable. Sasha may simply not know about many things, and Lera herself too.
I already wrote something like this, this relationship model is more like a free marriage than a classic Cukold. The model itself was taken from a real pair, my friends. Both are enthusiastically watching the bawls of each other but no joint activities. There the truth began a little differently. The husband's wife and girlfriend caught, well, revenge, and told her husband in detail. And he fucked her so much so that she had smoke out of her ears. Well, carried away. Everyone has their own cockroaches ... By the way, I thought the business would be let through. You are attentive.
I have not decided what will happen next. Waiting for wishes.
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In my opinion, this cycle lacks a bit of drama. What concerns the porn component directly is everything at the highest level. Descriptions of sex, dialogue, situations, unrealistically hot and depraved spouse ... There is no carp.
But, here, reading this part, at some point I caught myself thinking that in terms of further corruption of Lera there are not so many options. Well, what else can you think of? The gradual designation of GG in the status of a professional multi-machine operator under the wing of a pimp Semenich, well, and some perversions still remain unexplored, such as "golden rain", sado-maso, zoophilia ...
But in terms of psychodrama, the scope for creativity is quite large.
Well, as an option. Lera continues to fall in love with Andrew. More frequent meetings, more addictive. Jealousy from Sasha is increasing. Clouds appear in the sky.
Further. Lera drives her husband for sex. After that, watch videos of their copulation. Unexpectedly, very jealous. There is a scandal. Lera demands to return to the previous format of sex relations “I can, you do not”.
Sasha, reluctantly, agrees.
Lera is torn between Sasha, Andrew and the love of frequent sexual promiscuity.Already Andrew begins to be jealous of her to the other lovers, and even to her husband. Sasha with grief begins to drink and cheats Leray again. Everything is completely confused.
As a result, there is a final clarification of the relationship between the spouses, with the smashing of dishes, mutual accusation of all mortal sins, passionate conciliatory sex and the general decision to return to the origins: no adultery, side sex and other things. They are again faithful and loving spouses, wholly belonging to each other in body and soul.
She takes it under the handle (flirtatiously wagging her ass, with a cunning fucking *** smile on her lips and crossed fingers behind her back) and they go off into the sunset.
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Thank you for your appreciation.
As for further development, sooner or later, any cycle is reborn into a dull series of monotonous stories, gradually filling the teeth with teeth, both the reader and the author. Here the main thing is to stop in time. While it seems to be early. Lerochka far from all sides of her nature demonstrated.
The transition to the category of professional women seems to me a completely dead-end option. Sad train ... Corrupt, well, they certainly will. The same planned scene with azeras or their replacement. There's just enough. And tough.
Although bestiality is unlikely. It is either already banned, or they are going, but I don’t want to substitute the admin of the site.
Psychodrama. Psychology is an interesting thing. But I really don’t want to go away to the drama, the whole cycle was conceived as an entertaining, a kind of easy comedy porn. Where is the lyric, where is the comedy of positions, and somewhere sad.
About love. Rather, love from Andrew’s presence is present, Lerochka, in the first place, doesn’t love her soul, then she touches her husband, and only then others. Her attitude to Sasha is a separate song. On the one hand, she loves him, and on the other, her fucking essence woke up. And internal conflict is inevitable as Armageddon.
But Ndrey got to the full. There are options. From the final version of the Bathing Day, I deleted a couple of episodes. In the locker room and on the way to the bath. I thought that it was too early to develop this line. In the original version, in Andrew, jealousy began to wake up, he even wanted to leave the bathhouse, but Lera insisted. so that development will be in this direction. And Andrey's wife should appear. True as I do not know yet.
Watching videos with Sasha and Masha. With Lera’s thoughts and comments in the spirit of bargaining with Semyonitch one and a half pages. This we can. Not the first time.
And jealousy with the character of Lera, stormy with inevitable scandal and showdown. And there are many options for development.
True Sasha horseradish agrees to the role of henpecked, not the type.
Andrew will inevitably be jealous. He is an ordinary regular man, the owner. The woman he considers his own cannot be shared with others, hence again the conflict. Up to fights with Sasha. For example, I am impressed by the option where Andrew comes to sort things out while Lera is not at home. At this time she speaks with her husband on the phone and hears their conversation. And the conversation is simple. Word for word, the dick on the table, and nibbled. Lera break free from work, dusting home at the speed of an express train, and flying into an apartment she sees a picture. Andryukha and Sanya are sitting in the kitchen with beaten mugs, for an almost empty bottle of vodka in their arms and asking her to run again for vodka, otherwise the infection has ended. Well, what to grab a snack.
Well, bite dishes on the head of both her husband and her lover, is also possible., As an option. There is a lot of forks here. Including in the sunset. Oh, and I liked the idea of a slyly fucking smile and fingers crossed on the ass. And as an option in a sign of reconciliation, a joint trip to the resort, say in Jamaica. Or to Egypt. NDA ... And already there ...
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The story is interesting. So far even remains intrigue.
As a continuation, one could consider a certain version of the prequel for greater disclosure of the main characters. The conversation in the car was the final chord. And, by the way, the prequel would allow you to describe marital sex, so that it becomes clearer where that spark disappeared, due to which the heroes went all down hard. You are good at describing thoughts. And it will deepen the characters.
Honestly embarrassed Lera's quick transition from an exemplary wife to a complete fucking. Quickly to group sex has passed, quickly to the anal and double. This slightly reduces the degree of realism. Reminds the description of the plot of porn.
You should also pay a little more attention to Sasha. Until the strength of his character is visible. And it is not very clear what will keep Leroux from turning him into a kukolda.
About Andrew. This is a time bomb. You will not be easy to resolve this situation. His love breaks the scheme. And by the way, he is the fourth at least. Forgot that there were two guys in the bar. Therefore, Andrew at least the fourth.
An episode with rigidity can be a topic. As a warning to Lera. If you have to be treated, it will in many ways change the attitude towards this occupation. Or open it sado-maso. In the case of a tin, by the way, a setup for Sasha. If not revenge, then a rag. So think carefully about whether you need to gesture. Will it then be possible to keep a thin line beyond which the abyss of the Cukold. Most of the stories in this category die because of excesses with their husbands. When they influence after or prepare their wife before. Most disgusting even read.
So go ahead. From the latest series of your very high quality. Comedy will not work. Andrei will not allow this. And your descriptions are more to the drama.
We are waiting for the continuation ...
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Add a little more. According to Andrew, you can wind up a cool drama, if instead of taking Lera to go hunting with friends (he shouldn’t want to divide her, in theory), she will lure her into nature with the aim of spending a couple of days together. And there is already a very cool situation twists for her. Either stay with him, but then it is already intimate, joint awakenings, breakfast, or else she should refuse to keep her distance.
If the two remain, then of course the triangle looms with all the consequences.
In general, you can come up with a lot with Andrey. The rest of the men still look like dummies with pennies. There are no characters in them. They do not add emotions to the story.
In principle, it is possible to alternate chapters with the development of the plot with chapters with a description of the folk adventures. If you focus only on sex, then the whole thread will be lost. And you get interesting stories, so from this series you want the plot too. But the decision for the author. So far so good. There are guns that can still shoot. There are certain lines of development.
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The story is interesting. So far even remains intrigue.
As a continuation, one could consider a certain version of the prequel for greater disclosure of the main characters. The conversation in the car was the final chord. And, by the way, the prequel would allow you to describe marital sex, so that it becomes clearer where that spark disappeared, due to which the heroes went all down hard. You are good at describing thoughts. And it will deepen the characters.
Honestly embarrassed Lera's quick transition from an exemplary wife to a complete fucking. Quickly to group sex has passed, quickly to the anal and double. This slightly reduces the degree of realism. Reminds the description of the plot of porn.
You should also pay a little more attention to Sasha. Until the strength of his character is visible. And it is not very clear what will keep Leroux from turning him into a kukolda.
About Andrew. This is a time bomb. You will not be easy to resolve this situation. His love breaks the scheme. And by the way, he is the fourth at least. Forgot that there were two guys in the bar. Therefore, Andrew at least the fourth.
An episode with rigidity can be a topic. As a warning to Lera. If you have to be treated, it will in many ways change the attitude towards this occupation. Or open it sado-maso. In the case of a tin, by the way, a setup for Sasha. If not revenge, then a rag. So think carefully about whether you need to gesture. Will it then be possible to keep a thin line beyond which the abyss of the Cukold. Most of the stories in this category die because of excesses with their husbands. When they influence after or prepare their wife before. Most disgusting even read.
So go ahead. From the latest series of your very high quality. Comedy will not work. Andrei will not allow this.And your descriptions are more to the drama.
We are waiting for the continuation ...
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About Sasha I agree one hundred percent. I will try to fix it in the future. There is no desire to turn it into a kukolda. And where do these or other cockroaches in our head, but who knows it.
Well, what about the quick transition ... Was there a faithful wife? The fact that she did not change does not mean anything. Do not turn the events in this way, it would still change, sooner or later, it is only a matter of time. Her damn life lived inside, and waited for the right moment. In the text of the mention of this occur and will repeatedly meet again. In the form of thoughts of heroes and author's digressions.
Cruelty will be, at least once, I remember the old film "Brother" there was such a lover of sayings, so here is one very much to the point "Love the honey, love and chill." And here is how Sasha from this cover think. For example, Lera can not tell the details, stupidly hide that would not expose her husband.
Time bomb. Andrei was conceived as a similar image.
And he is not the only one. Lera herself also fall. And not with Andrew. So far I have two candidates, and both have not yet appeared on the scene.
A colleague at work or one of the clients, a poet or a musician. Lera is a subtle nature, albeit a fuck, for such a type should fall.
Yes, and Sasha himself ... So not a triangle, but as in life happens, a polyhedron.
At the expense of the alternation of series, I wanted to build everything on the principle of modern serials. When the main plot develops from series to series, but each series has its own finished plot.
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Well, you decide here of course. A polyhedron is also an option. At the expense of fucking mind agrees. Slipped.
With regard to cruelty, it is important not to bend, otherwise how to hide.
Well, additional intrigue in the form of secret lovers is also interesting. The main thing is not to slip into a series of fucking, because in this case the characters lose their individuality. So far, only glavgeroy and Andrey have characters.
By the way, if you plan to do something like a series, then it is desirable to work out and throw off some characters.
More like an idea to you. And what if Lera stumbles upon Sasha's friend or friends? Or a friend's husband? What if there are such options: what he wanted for a long time and here is such a success. Or vice versa: a man was looking for a whore, and then suddenly she was. And he is in a fit of nobility in denial. But here Lera, not wanting to lose the opportunity to fucking, seduces the highly moral. Also the plot. Well, how to develop, decide for yourself.
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I forgot. Why Lera does not want to turn Sanya into a kukolda. The answer is simple. She loves him. He loves both a close dear person and a man.
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Ambiguous, to be honest. There must be a moment where her love will manifest. Some difficult moral choice. True, I'm afraid that this series will end. So leave it on completion. Of course it will look like a happy ending, but it depends on your skill. There was a good author of Gifted Writer. His series was about Christina and Eldar seems. There of course there was plenty of drama. And the husband, who seems to be understanding and even fascinating, but experiencing such emotions, is terrible. But in the end they ended up staying together, but what they experienced left an indelible mark. And like a happy ending, and at the same time scorched earth. So in fact, the whole series rests only on the relationship of the main characters. If you manage to bring them out of this whole story, you will be on a par with the best authors of this resource. You have the makings for it.
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Liked. And what can we expect in the future, can share plans that will be in the next chapter
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While in thought, whether the business of a cafe, or the tie-up office romance. Whether the Internet will work. Can not decide. I accept the wishes.
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The Internet is perfect for a short sketch of the next sexual scene. Without the development of the plot. Purely to maintain a degree of vulgarity. Still, the resource requires.
Business save for something unusual. Let it be not who it might seem at first glance. Something shocking even for Lera. What can it be in the plot to enter for several series.
The office romance is better left aside, otherwise Leroux will have to be placed under the entire male part of the team. Sooner or later someone will find out about the Internet or cross with her in the sauna. There are many options. Well, or, alternatively, let it be a series again, purely for sex without a special plot fullness. To expand the diary.
The most interesting is Andrew. There is potential drama. But this is my opinion. I love the plots. Fuck is not particularly attractive in view of unrealistic. But the plot adds the effect of presence, as in an interesting film.
Of all the sex scenes, the most memorable is with Andrew, because she opens the way for them somewhere further. The rest, again, nothing more than dummies with phalluses. In any case, waiting for the continuation. The main thing is not to tighten. Whenever possible Well, other readers connect with suggestions for the plot
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I completely forgot. Andrei is the third, in the text it was about the fact that Lera gave up her body (meaning sex, not just a blowjob.) And then Andrei is the third. Misha and Gena do not count.
The fact that the characters did not turn out to make living people, well, what it means does not work out, we will work.
The fact that someone having learned at work about Lerinyh hobbies will begin to blackmail. In principle, the reception is standard, but with the habalist character of Lerochka she will send everyone to the forest, and in order to live in peace, she will climb to the chef under the table and all is short. By the way, the series can get delicious.
But in the internet that is just something exotic. I'll think about it.
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Inanimate in the sense that they leave no trace in the plot and in the emotions after reading. And the fact that they are different is noticeable. You wrote that the goal was this.
And even dialogues are more interesting to me. In them, the characters are revealed.
And about sending everyone to the forest or to the boss to get under the table ... You will overtake it. You can’t ruin all your previous life, social contacts just for the sake of sexual adventures. She must still have brakes, otherwise slide into a treshnyak.
And about Andrew. Do they have sex in the bath first and so far the only time?
And she left the bar with the guys, jocks (Stas and Denis) left. When is her two trunks in the apartment? These flogged her in all holes. It was up to the bath. It's not about the blowjob. Blowjob was in the car with two hard workers who were going to their wives. It seems that I do not confuse chronology. But it doesn’t really matter. Inaccuracies are permissible. We all read right away, but you have a pause between parts. Something may be confused slightly.
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Well, let's say, one of the goals, to write a rather long series only on this occasion is meaningless.
There are a lot of development options, and the option under the table is one of the possible, but it is possible.
To reflect the statistics seemed to me a curious detail. Slight but curious.
After a fun weekend, the pace should decline, the events in time should stretch.
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Seems to have missed something. Cruelty is not prohibitive, initially visitors from the south should have had enough to mock at the “Russian bilyadi” omit it, so that it was rather a question of humiliation.
Throwing someone will have to. Gena and Misha have already left. Stas with Dan do not know yet. These two crooked thieves are not very interesting to me. Primitives.
About my friends Sasha was mentioned in my opinion, Lera thought about this question. As an option it is interesting, but in the form of a secret connection, in the open it is an obvious setup.
I understand how you like the plot. And what about thriller elements?
Then spread Kira.
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Yes, in general, any development will be interesting. And the thriller is also good. We will evaluate so to speak upon the fact of writing.You write according to your plan and ideas, if possible, taking into account the wishes of readers. There are quite sensible. Anyway, our main desire is to excite your own imagination. With this story it succeeds. Hence the interest. Dare.
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About the thriller I meant the series “Devoted wife. Kira "the first head of which just sent for moderation.
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Honestly, once again going to this resource and going to the page with your story, I was pleasantly surprised by the number and that the most important amount of comments left. So the story touched the reader, so many opinions and options for the development of the plot. Yes, and you in my story I don’t know by chance or it’s such a move that leaves a lot of random plot development options. But at the same time, after reading all the comments, it seems to me it will be harder for you to write a sequel too many readers want to put together in one story, here you can find drama and thriller and love story, and the story is more or less true. Although here I’ll probably still agree that a prequel will still be needed, it’s very unrealistic to transform the main character in a few days from an exemplary wife into such a detachment. But by the way, there are very good ideas for the continuation, which is only worth sending GG to a resort in Egypt or Jamaica, there really is such a space for creativity. I don’t want to list many more of what was said above, but much that was suggested by the readers would be interesting to read in this series. And I would like to add on my own, since you are so positive about contacting readers, create a forum type, by the way, this resource allows you to do this and discuss the entire series there already, though I don’t know if there is an opportunity to write in a personal. And by the way on some foreign sites of erotic stories, in the forums between the author and the readers, I quite often met this form of continuing the story as a short fan fiction from readers from which the author then continues.
P. S By the way, on which resource was the continuation about Andrei's wife, will there be 9 and 10 chapters?
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Well, the thriller is to Cyrus. The second chapter just laid out.
No, not by chance. Bookmarks do quite consciously. Development is likely to receive not all, but many. This increases the scope for maneuver in the description of future events.
For me, the merit of this cycle is that it is different. There is no hard storyline, you can play plenty with each chapter, while maintaining a common, basic outline of events. Give bias in any direction.
I will think about the prequel, but I don’t know from what side to approach it yet.
I never used forums and honestly say no how it is done.
Fanfic I'm for. It is terribly interesting to look at your characters from a different point of view. Really interesting.
I understand Katya you read, just ask about chapter 9. Yes, there will be. Katya will be required.
I do not know how correct it will be to indicate the address of another such resource on this resource? But I will answer a direct question https://pornorasskazy.com/ by Belomor
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Is Katya the wife of one of Andrei's friends? Then read to understand. I did not catch where the connection with the history of Lera. Well, is Andrey's wife like Lyudmila? Not?
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My cant. In the text are two Andrew. One lover. And the second is Sasha's friend. The first part seems to have been mentioned and somewhere else. Just Andrew is a very common name. I have five people Andreev typed.
In that cycle, Katya “rests” in Turkey, actively rests in this way. And her husband is practically off-screen, so I wanted to show how he expects her here.
Most of the characters live in modern Moscow, why don't they sometimes intersect?
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Everything. Got it. Katya is Andrei’s wife, who is Sasha’s friend with Leroy. So you have combined these two stories. Well here it begs either the exchange of wives, or the sex of Alexander with Catherine. Make a crossover :-)
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Katia and Sasha are interesting, I then planned Leroux with Andryusha.
Well, why are two. The story of Katie is called “the prodigal wife. Katya"
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Well Lera is very obvious. It is now possible with all. And if you send it abroad, then in principle she should not dress there, and she simply will not have openings for her. Can only eat her will let go. And Sasha will just need to organize an online broadcast from the room or GoPro, so that he is always aware of what is happening.
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Well yes. The broadcast is fun. We still need to put Kate here, though it’s necessary to rule the first chapters there, I was just starting to become a graffiti, so ... This is what I need. Tzimes of the last chapter of Kati in a conversation with her husband on the phone during the "Turkish massage" performed by three elderly Turks. So the broadcast ... Andrew did not understand anything. And indeed it was on this series that I studied.
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If you put Katya here, then do not send Leroux to the resort. Repetition will be. And what a series about Marina is mentioned there? Maybe lay out here?
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Marina is my very first attempts. Thrash and jerkiness. But Lera's legs grow from there. A series of abandoned. The main reason, from a certain point, well, is not written in the first person by a female character, not in any.
When I started, I did not attach any importance, I put the playful presentation style at the head of the play. From the first person it is much easier. Yes, and the first chapters, hemp gnarled, even embarrassing. But at the same time Marina is dear to me ...
Lera still let him frolic here. To the velvet season, oh how far.
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Do not disappear for a long time with the continuation, you wrote above that you did not decide on further development, so still what to expect or until the application for the product is accepted.
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Are accepted.
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And how do you develop such a plot so that the Internet also worked and Semyonitch called and the heroes would have to get out of it
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Well, Lera with her insolence, just move someone else, the Internet is likely. And two bath stories in a row - an obvious bust.
So most likely business or Internet.
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Great story. And many sequels are possible. I think that everyone can develop as a separate topic. We will wait for the decisions of the author.
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The Internet. And again forks. I hope in 2-3 days I will lay out.
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Nevertheless, it is a pity that the continuation does not go so long, almost a month has passed since the last update. So whether there will be a sequel.
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Yes, now I finish the chapter about the Internet. Constantly pulled to work.
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