1. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 1: Hermits.
  2. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 2. Weak - revenge, strong - forgive
  3. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 3. It is difficult to protect yourself.
  4. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 4: The tragic battle
  5. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 5: Betrayal
  6. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 6: Elders
  7. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 7: Fiery Hell
  8. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 8: Disappearance
  9. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 9: From the future - to the past
  10. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 10: Atlantis - Eden in the past
  11. Not yet an Inquisitor. Part 11. Murder
  12. Not yet an Inquisitor. Chapter 12: From Paradise there is no desire to return

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there was a scanty part of the Nazofer, we had time to destroy the rescue capsules, so much was there.

- Commander! At the enemy thermal charges, FIRE! - commanded the queen. Shensherov's fleet from above covered runaways. Those shuttles and rescue capsules that rushed away from the planet and seemed to be saved, flared bright flames. Indeed, in a matter of seconds, the five-thousand Nazofer fleet led by their king ceased to exist. Rescue capsules were ruthlessly destroyed. Not a single Nazofer survived. This is really destruction.

- Impressive, very impressive. We have nothing more to do here. God bless you, mother queen Shensherov, the dragon's voice boomed.
“Thank you so much, Elder Drago.”
- For me, for what? You have your saviors, we just looked. Guys, we are flying away - about a hundred of hot plasma arrows flying ships pierced the cold space of space. After a moment, there were no plasma marks left.
“Mother Queen, declare the cancellation of the alarm.” The fight is over, - I heard a contented voice (and the antennae of the hair, probably twisted into rings with joy).

“Elder Kyrcyr, you and your inquisitors saved my civilization.” We are forever in your debt.
“We don’t owe us anything, this is our job.” Thank the Earthlings and yourself personally for the fact that they were able to hold up many thousands of fleets before my team arrived.
“Earthlings, I will ask all four of you to my ship,” the elder's telepathic order sounded.

- Yes ... Leah, Sasha, follow me. Son, and you deliver the mother queen to the palace and instantly to me. There is an urgent matter.
- Father, I will do the type-top.
- Father ?! Yes, he is younger than you! - the queen was surprised, and then she still guessed, - I understood, atomic.
Soon all four were on the ship of elders. But just as I once visited the ship of creators for the first time and I didn’t remember anything, so it is here. Subsequently, I tried to remember at least something about the ship. Nothing was fixed in the memory. But there were about a hundred inquisitors on the ship. We considered them with great interest, and they us. I looked from one to the other and in each I saw a representative of a civilization I had never seen before. Finally saw a friend: Wanderer, then a Vampire. And that Vampire noticed after he exclaimed:
- Ambassador Alexander! That's the meeting!

- Guys! Did you want to see who kept the Nazofer fleet? See, these four Earthlings have done an incredible.
- Chef, let me determine who is who.
- Come on Fat. Just do not make a mistake.
“I’m never wrong, but here I’m confused.” The legendary chief of staff of the Alliance, General Leah, is unconditional. But among men there is Ambassador Alex. Alexandra gave out Vamp, and among the two of you, if you believe your eyes, then you are Ambassador Alex (he pointed to "A" in the square). But your age is exactly the same as Alexandra. And there is a close kinship, then you are twins. And this is your father, Ambassador Alex. Although he looks much younger than you. So atomic rebirth was used. But what was the point in rebirth? Most likely in the battle was lost one of the limbs. Only in this case it is justified.

- Well done Fat. As always, everything is accurate. And now I ask everyone to give an assessment to my illegal actions concerning the Earthlings.
“Chief,” began one of the inquisitors, with a head resembling a wolf, “I personally believe that you acted wisely and truly.”Just because we have succeeded.
- Wulfir, you are not sincere. It is not clear how everything turned out if it were not for Drago. While he and the Nazopher were throwing up the sussy-pusi, you managed to fly. Yes, and his pet Ambassador Alex he regretted. Usually, he violated the entire ship of the gunman for violating the order. For some reason, I am tormented by vague doubts that he deliberately pulled time, waiting for you to crawl.

- King Nazoferov himself ran into destruction. Surely it is not clear that for disrespecting not for individual inquisitors, but for the elder himself, he will rub everything into powder. In this case, he did so, but only with our help, while he himself remained clean and fluffy.
“Chef,” the Vampire began ingratiatingly, “I have a suggestion.” I think they will support me, if not all, then the majority. First: we have no complaints about your actions. Secondly, why don't we take Earthlings into our team?
- Vamp, there are some BUT. General Leah would be a great inquisitor, but you know the rules. She is the chief of staff of the Alliance. Yes, and as I understand it, she herself is not eager to go to us.

- Dear Elder guys! I respect you all and honor this offer. But! I am a warrior, a combat general. As recently said, in war, all means are good. That's why for me the main goal is victory in battle. And as I reach it, that is another question. And the inquisitor should always act only in the name of justice. So no offense, I prefer to fight.
- Ambassador Alex. He received an invitation to the inquisitors from Drago himself, but he refused, ”he heard a surprised hum,“ and with his recklessness, Alex will not stay in the inquisitors for a long time. He is an excellent fighter and is not inferior in strength to many of you. You all saw how much he destroyed the Nazofers on the ship. But some of you will hardly manage to kill even a few. But he is not yet ripe. Although, if you think differently - speak out.

- Yes, the glorious "road of death" turned out. Alex, what do you think?
- The people, the elder correctly noticed - I have not yet matured. In the future, most likely, I will make you a company, but I am not ready yet.
“Everything is clear with General Leah and Ambassador Alex.” And for the twins it was the first fight. But they have a prospect, - the inquisitors have buzzed at the remark of the elders.
- Chief, what is the prospect? - Someone from the inquisitors was indignant, - I personally in such an extreme, and even put my first fight in my pants, would only see the Nazofers' fleet in all its glory, - there was a laugh, - and they fought like experienced inquisitors. I felt, and not only me, that the guys fought skillfully, without agiotage and fear. We will all support if they agree to join our team.

- Even I did not expect their dream to come true so quickly. They offered me to take them to the inquisitors, and after the battle kicked out. Parents! What do you say to that?
“Suddenly,” said Leah.
- And in my time in such cases, if the generations do not mind, they say - I bless. My fatherly blessing they have. Let them adequately represent your team. So that I should not be ashamed of them.
“I bless too,” Leah supported.
- We are all FOR, I heard an incoherent system of votes.
“Thank you for your trust,” the twins dropped to one knee, “we will not fail.”

33 comments
  • February 10, 2018 19:38

    what can I say ... bravo, the author, you are on top and keep the intrigue,

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    • Rating: 6
  • February 10, 2018 20:53

    thank you very much

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  • Tolik (a guest)
    February 10, 2018 20:34

    10++++

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  • February 12, 2018 2:08

    very happy come again

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  • February 10, 2018 20:47

    Fine, children are inquisitors, and what fate awaits daddy ... oh, it's hard to read 5 pages like that, I want to complete the work right away, bravo!

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    • Rating: 7
  • February 10, 2018 21:14

    I can only say that in the next story, daddy is waiting for unexpected and very tragic adventures

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    • Rating: 4
  • February 10, 2018 21:35

    As always on top!

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    • Rating: 6
  • February 10, 2018 21:49

    thank you
    I am very glad that my regular readers like

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  • February 10, 2018 21:57

    Wonderful! above all praise. But wait so long and read so quickly and of course +++ 10 +++

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    • Rating: 6
  • February 10, 2018 22:45

    Spasibki, Top

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  • Gardener (a guest)
    February 11, 2018 1:51

    Already, less than 300 people read it, and auto-press continues to write it ... for whom and why is this diarrhea you imagined? By the way, moderator, which publishes this G on the main page, this G obviously tastes :)

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  • February 12, 2018 0:26

    In fairness, I must say that your assessment of 300 readers is greatly underestimated. It is not difficult to be convinced of it, having looked at the counter.
    Of course, everyone can have their own opinion, but I would like to hear arguments in support of statements about “shit”. (I think I translated you correctly.)

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  • February 12, 2018 1:18

    I certainly agree with the Gardener, the number of readers is much less than that of erotic stories ... but this is understandable, the site of eroticism and readers look here for a strawberry, and not for a fantastic action movie. Still, the theme of my stories does not fit into this site and I myself thought to run off to another site by the type of Prodan ... probably finish this series and retire to another resource.

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  • February 16, 2018 16:10

    Just tell me later on which resource to search for you ... I really like your stories.

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  • February 16, 2018 8:57

    We see the nickname "God" was banned for inadequacy. Now the verbal diarrhea will be engaged in the "Gardener". You have repeatedly been told that you don’t like it - swim past, G. We see you need to send you to the original source / on the sexual route on foot /.

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  • February 11, 2018 11:27

    Words NO, some Emotions !!!
    Super class!!!
    +++++ 10 +++++

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    • Rating: 5
  • February 12, 2018 1:21

    as always, regular readers, very happy, thanks,

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  • February 11, 2018 18:29

    I thank you for the hint, but at the very beginning (even when I registered on this site) I didn’t specify the wallet number, and now, even if there are chapters with the possibility of donations, I still won’t get anything, just the admins.
    Thank you very much

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  • Limur (a guest)
    February 11, 2018 18:59

    Nun, your stories are 10 +++++++. Specify your webmoney / kiwi / yandex wallets, sbera number, at least here in comments. Similarly, RabbitRu, I want to thank you for what you give to your readers.

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    • Rating: 1
  • February 11, 2018 23:33

    Thank you for the appreciation of my work, but in this case I am totally against ... your admiring komenty now inspire me, it is for them that I write, I write for your good mood ... and if financial interest is involved here, then it will be completely different ... I prefer to give a great mood, and not to do business ... for business there is a real ... sorry, I do not agree with your opinion.

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    • Rating: 6
  • Gardener (a guest)
    February 12, 2018 2:46

    “I will probably finish this series and retire to another resource” - will this happen in how many years? And the number of reading the initial chapters was unimaginably more than now and no need to invent that now almost no one wants to read you due to the fact that there is no erotica in the story. They are reluctant to read because this “fantastic action movie,” as you call your soap opera, is fed up and sober-minded people decide not to clog your brain with this garbage. You have already reached the point that children were born to heroes as I learned from the comments of the last parts, now you will begin to talk about the fate of these children, then they will grow up and more children will appear, which you can also tell about ... it is indeed SUPER FIGHTER))) if only readers would live to its completion, or still read about the fate of the great-grandsons of the heroes children of readers.

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    • Rating: -5
  • February 15, 2018 18:55

    Sir, no one forcibly forces you to read this "soap opera." I advise you at the sight of my soap opera to scroll further with the slider and do not start reading it. If you do not like it, be so kind as not to force yourself and read the stories that you like. Enjoy your reading.

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  • February 16, 2018 9:00

    You have repeatedly been told that you don’t like it - swim past, G. You yourself can’t think of anything or write, so do not disturb others. You need to once again change the nickname to "Envious bezdar" for example.

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  • February 12, 2018 12:09

    Everything is super. Each new volume is all twisted intrigue and twists.
    Eli waited to continue waiting with impatience. Only your stories and read others are not interested. If there is an opportunity to combine all the stories in one book and you could download and download the Yandex disk or Google disk somewhere on the roads like a book. Already several times re-read the entire series of stories and dosichpor interesting to read.

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    • Rating: 6
  • Herr walldeir (a guest)
    February 13, 2018 20:56

    imho twisted the authoress with the plot, for GG swings by leaps and bounds, inquirers also jumped around with relics, soon Drage kicked in ... and there was no longer any interesting case ... it's time to dump GG - for zazhralis and levekap jumped. .. looks already boring by Jam Bondin.
    TOTAL:
    Pros: Living language of presentation, density of emotions.
    Cons: a decrease in the level of compliance with the resource (although - minus it?), An excessive acceleration of the hero's pumping - which complicates the continuation of the story.

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    • Rating: -1
  • February 15, 2018 19:01

    Thanks for the detailed comment ... claims are clear ...

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  • Abbot (a guest)
    February 15, 2018 23:20

    And try to tell me that I did not warn you, my daughter ...
    Everything is predictable. And the ball, launched through the washstand, sooner or later fall into a hole. This is the law.
    You will change the monastery - notify the old man. I will be bored without you.
    I'm used to you, suora.
    I am indifferent to fiction, but yours stands apart than it touches.
    Good luck to you!

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  • February 17, 2018 2:21

    Thank you dear abbot

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  • February 21, 2018 0:11

    I understood the idea, if you don't mind, then maybe I will use it in the future ... thank you

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  • February 16, 2018 10:26

    as always 10 ++++++++, everything is super)))))

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  • February 17, 2018 2:23

    Thank you, I am very glad that my regular readers do not forget me ... Good luck to you, always and in everything!

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  • March 6, 2019 6:13

    +++++10+++++

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  • February 21, 2018 19:35

    Lady Nun! You are just great. This novel gave me a lot of pleasure. Successes and new novels and stories! 10 +

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    • Rating: 3

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