- Come on Thursday (the story is rewritten by the author)
- Effects
- Destruction of the ideal
- New target
- Approaching the goal
- Sex has its own laws
- Power of art
- Someone must give way. Final episode
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Besides him, there was no other peasant in the room!
“And if, nevertheless, an officer? ... Pomatos and threw? ... I left just before her arrival? ... But the open space and the exit to the library would be noticeable ... No! There was no one besides the soldier! ... The smell was too strong, too fresh. Immediate ... "
The hunting stand of a friend shook Kalinina, brought her out of a stressful state.
She carried the unexpected guest into the back room, which served as a dressing room and a rest room, where Bestuzhev literally pressed the undersized girlfriend into a corner:
- You, what ... with HIM?! ... After all, it ...
Kalinina raised her hands in protest:
- Why do you think that came to mind? ..
- Stop it ... - Nina Georgievna wanted to say “stop lying”, but found another, more harmonious word - pretend! You have here, for the whole library, it is worth the SMELL!
- What?
- You are just here FUCK!
— ... ?
- Right?
— ...
- What are you silent? ... Say nothing?
“I want to be a mother,” Kalinina found the right phrase.
- I know! But ... He's ...
- Do you want to say "soldier"? For my unborn child, it does not matter.
- Yes ... Of course ... You took the risk ... Is he so good-looking that you forgot to pay attention to his shoulder straps? ..
- You saw ...
- I saw! What did I see? The soldier, who was bored out over the table, with ears red with shame ... Not surprising. Almost caught on the hot ... Then anyone gets quit ...
— ...
- God! And if it was not me, but someone else? ... You thought about the consequences?! ... They would spread gossip all over the garrison! ... Even to imagine creepy ...
- You're not so ...
- Of course! ... But you will owe me. I'm not talking about money, but about the details. Agreed? ... Listen! I want to consider IT as it should. Let's go to the gym ...
- Not now...
- Right. Let the guy come to his senses too ... Yes, and you need to calm down.
Bestuzheva retreated from Kalinina, took off a fox fur coat and searched with her eyes where to hang her. - There is a seagull? ..
...
Women were absent for at least half an hour.
During this time, Private Bolshakov managed to restore his heartbeat and finish the text of the “Moral Code of the Builder of Communism”. Now he could leave the library room, but was not sure that it would be right. Because lingered. I decided to first strengthen the tablet to the place where it was supposed to hang it.
For this occupation and found his girlfriend.
The first of the back room went high Nina Georgievna. She was wearing a red dress that fitted her perfect body and looked like a fashion magazine mannequin. Immediately behind her, in a long, slightly wrinkled skirt and in a blouse with a large number of buttons (two of them were missing), a miniature Elena Pavlovna appeared.
Both women stopped at the door. Elena Pavlovna looked under her feet, and Nina Georgievna openly looked at the soldier standing on the stepladder. Bolshakov was struck by the beauty of the guest, who in her elegant dress and half boots looked like a foreign marvel. Continuing to stare at the woman in red, the young man asked Elena Pavlovna if he was going to mount the finished tablet in that place. Elena Pavlovna nodded. And Nina Georgievna said:
- Here you are, our postrel! ..
These words brought Bolshakov out of his contemplative state.
- Which one? - asked "Petrovich."
Deftly jumping from the ladder to the floor and, with a quick movement of both hands, removing the folds of the gymnast along the belt behind his back, he did not look like an embarrassed person. On the contrary, in retaliation for the recently experienced excitement, his second incarnation was preparing to be bold.
Nina Georgievna sensitively responded to the intonation of the question.
“Okay, okay,” she said conciliatingly, and pulled Elena Pavlovna back to the back room.
- Listen, and after all the guy is really good! - said Bestuzheva, confused girlfriend. - Not as cute as my Polyakov, but in general ...Type-top, as the modern youth says. And the donor is for your child, normal. I approve.
Seeing that Kalinin returned in a state of worries, and is about to cry, Nina Georgievna hurried away.
- I, now, too, have no time ... We must have time to work out ... Come on, somehow, gossip about all this at your leisure. Horror, how interesting! Well, let's say, on Sunday. In the square near the House of Officers. I walk there with the boys, and we'll talk. At ten o'clock. Ladushki?
- Well, - Elena Pavlovna was forced to agree.
She would really like to refuse such a meeting. But Bestuzhev's remark, that now she owes an inquisitive "friend", deprived Kalinin of any choice.
Coming out of the back room, already in a fox-fur coat, which was very close to her high position, Bestuzheva gave Bolshakov a white-toothed smile and made a soldier with a pen:
- Bye, prankster! ..
For the captain's wife, it was too much. As soon as the front door slammed behind the guest, she leaned against the wall and burst into tears.
- Well, what are you? ... What? - reassured Elena Pavlovna Bolshakov. - Please do not cry...
“She knows everything ...” Helen sobbed in his arms. - I feel so ashamed...
- Calm down, my dear, - soothed the inconsolable Lenochka Bolshakov. He stroked the girl on the head and kissed her tear-stained eyes: - Do not cry ...
- She thought ... that I ... with one of the officers ... Ah, you ... are an ordinary conscript ... Because she said that if an officer's wife with a soldier ... is licentiousness and lack of taste ...
“Gender discrimination! “- Boris signaled in Bolshakov’s head.
"A soldier is not a man?" “- in the same place“ Petrovich “was indignant.
- And ... can tell others ... - Lenochka sobbed on Bolshakov’s chest. - She said that now I owed her ... Oh, Momma ... what should I do now? ..
- She will not tell anyone! - said Bolshakov decisively.
- Nn-why? - Elena Pavlovna has lifted on the recent lover big and wet eyes.
- Because I fucked her too! - in Bolshakov's voice the carnivorous “I” growled. - And you will help me with this!
The word is not a sparrow, fly out - you will not return!
Elena Pavlovna, even being in a state of nervous breakdown, understood that she was being offered a deal. For Bestuzhevoy's silence, she has to bring this tall, handsome guy, into the gymnast of which her bitter tears are being shed with Ninochka Bestuzhevoy. And not just to acquaint them, but to promote Bestuzhevoy to sex with Bolshakov.
Diamond tears instantly evaporated, and in the blue lakes of tears, desperate lightning of a close thunderstorm rolled.
- Who do you take me for? She said, pushing the comforter away with both hands.
“For a person who needs support,” Boris said calmly in Bolshakov’s voice. “Having inclined the blackmailer to adultery with a soldier, we will deprive her of the opportunity to trump information. Of course, for this purpose you can search for someone else. But where is the guarantee that the other one will do everything as it should and doesn’t let it go? ..
Kalinina heard the words expounded by her recent lover, but she could not know that they arise in the head of a soldier from the dialogues of his incarnations (like a conversation with herself), which she naturally could not see.
“Are you suggesting that I be a priestess?” Bastard! It is below human dignity! - she threw in the face of Bolshakov.
“There is another way not to release the secret into the light,” said Boris. - Killing ...
Seeing the captain’s eyes widen, “Petrovich” laughed softly: “This is scream if this doll will believe ...”
- Stop so joking! - Elena Pavlovna shouted to the "defender". - This is immoral and mean towards me first of all!
- Can you suggest something else? - quietly asked Bolshakov.
Judging by the expression of Lena's face, a very emotional response was brewing, but Kalinina coped with herself and extinguished the tension that arose with an unexpected question that, at such a crucial moment, only a very intelligent girl could ask:
- What about the moral principles of the builder of communism? - her pupils of steel with a pinhead - black dots in a icy-blue void.
“We'll have to trample them temporarily,” Boris answered in Bolshakov’s voice.
- Never! - Elena Pavlovna stamped her foot and frowned from pain in the priests area.
- Well! With you, Elena Pavlovna, everything is clear. You, as they say in the people - I would like to sit down on something and observe the girlish honor! Only in life with this puncture. Always have to choose.
Kalinina stubbornly silent.
Bolshakov bypassed the offended girl and moved to the hanger.
Put on a hat. Slowly fastened cloth floors of his overcoat. Girdled soldier belt. With the edge of the palm checked, the combination of the stars on the earflap with the center of the forehead. Looking at the angry face of the librarian, he said:
- I was glad to help ... I want to repeat - at your service! How to find know. But dismiss these lamentations. They did not tire me, but it is time to go to the construction of the barracks.
Trumped and headed for the exit.
Elena Pavlovna’s mouth curled into one sad fold:
- I agree, - she said in the back of the outgoing Bolshakov.
He stopped and, without turning around, asked:
- That's for sure?
- Yes...
- That's wonderful! - Approved the hypostasis "Petrovich." - Tell me, girl, everything you know about your ex-girlfriend ...
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Unexpected but interesting
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It upsets only that with continuation you tighten and the volume of the written is reduced?))))))
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I like this.
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Rarely, when the continuation is more interesting than the first part. In this case, the further, the more interesting, thanks for the story! The only bad thing is that I will go several times a day, hoping to see a sequel)
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Good story. And not stamping. Grand Merci. This is already a sequel! In this case, the prospect remains to write the prequel of this garrison-erotic saga)) Good luck!
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Gentlemen, the show will be big. It is thought over on several episodes forward. But it is written slowly, due to the numerous variations of the presentation method (whoever was engaged in creative work, this syndrome “the desire to do better,” is certainly familiar), and the complexity of the relations of the main characters. I do not want to repeat the pattern: "... they gathered, drank, the husband fell asleep and she ..." or something like that ... For those who are waiting to continue, I advise you to "tolerate" for at least a week. Thank you for understanding!
P. S. Very surprised by the rapid decline in the overall assessment of the story. I admit honestly - beats hands.
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great news that the author’s enthusiasm is available! ... as well as the fact that there is a desire to think outside the box.
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)))) And you do not be surprised! Mozart, they say at all - poisoned! And here, just estimates are specially reduced! Write more often and more! Recently, this quality is not enough here!
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If it hits you, you can not write. Everyone does not care.
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+10! and not applicable, continued!
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“Mayor Polyakov, as a graduate of the academy, received a second member and a politician of the deputy commander of the political part of the large part of the num- ber of volunteers.
It is no good at being so confused in terms. If you come to write about the garrison life, if you please know anything about her. Well, what is the difficulty for a civilian to google, that there is a division, part, connection. Or is it all bullshit for the author?
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For Eugene 3.
The remark is accepted. Indeed, one should have written a “military unit”.
Thank!
But the rough form of appeal does not do you the honor ...
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I beg your pardon, but I was not rude in my thoughts.
You know, you drew an interesting portrait of a ballerina, I liked her. Nevertheless, in the process of reading, I had and did not release two questions, or rather two doubts:
1) Is the heroine a Muscovite, Moscow prima?
2) Does she really love her husband?
And these two questions, as I understand it, are closely linked.
How did Muscovites behave since long ago when there was a need to change the life of the capital for a dark one? By hook or by crook, they tried to avoid this terrible change in life. And there is no longer up to the principles, honor, material costs - everything went in the course.
What do we see in the heroine? For the great life you live suddenly throws a brilliant metropolitan career and travels to the ends of the earth. In this situation, I see only one explanation: true love, which, like the trump six, beats even a simple ace. But I did not notice in the story a hint of mad love. And was she at all, this love? As far as I understand, you and the ballerina are going to use your hands, that is, to add to debauchery? Or how?
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Alas! Such are the frames of this genre!)))
Just why "hands"? My heroines are very decent women who fall into interesting situations with ONE, a hunter to the female body, who creates these “interesting situations”.
Its essence is hidden under the triple guise and manifests itself when the poor victim is already “everything up to the bulb!” The invention of these conditions is the main core of the narrative. And sex scenes - only the result, so to speak - a reward to the winner for his works.
About love. In the story that was higher, "Boris", instructing Bolshakov on grandiose plans for the future, noted that "love is a slight insanity." In other words - a disease that can go away, be delayed, or - lead to a tragic result ...
From myself I would add: “They get sick not only on the periphery, but also with a Moscow registration” ...
Sincerely, Bolshakov.
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Well, readers are familiar with the “love disease” to varying degrees, which is not the case with schizophrenia or dissociative personality disorders. This is for the uninitiated a dark forest (although for specialists too).
I understand that the plot is built to please the main character, your Freudian pet. His behavior is more or less clear: whoever first seized power in his head, he dictates subsequent actions.
The actions of his “victims” are much less understandable, although you have made efforts to explain the prerequisites of their rather strange behavior. Alas, and after your explanation of the actions of women do not seem to me less strange. Maybe the whole secret is in some super-extortion of the hero? Do not forget this fatter stress.
Good luck.
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Sent a sequel. After which there will be a final part.
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The story "New Goal" is a continuation of the series "Come on Thursday." For some reason, he set apart. This is not true! He should follow in the list of my works at number 4, and the story “Approaching the Goal” at number 5. This sequence is obligatory! She linked the entire plot. I ask the moderators to correct this inaccuracy.
Sincerely, Bolshakov.
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The author is a complete mess. It would be better to inquire about the anatomy of the female body. Then he gets a member through the cervix to the egg, then without prior training, without lubrication, she fucks a woman who is well over 20. Judging from the story of the kid in eb ... I’m rather big and during such sex a partner squealed in pain worse than undercut pigs, and she broke a point so that she could not go to the camp.
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Sralchik, go away.
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+10)))
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