It has already gotten dark.
We walked slowly.
At the foot of the pillars
there are shallow puddles.
I told you: "Honey,
somewhere far away
Strewn sky
star pearls.
You looked up -
there is gray and gloomy,
Cover the world with a shadow
dank power.
Sad sighed
and whispered softly:
"Forgive that sympathy
not caught on. "
Well, not bad at all.
You are a seedling of passion
Tried to instill in me
Under the wind gusts, under the rustle of rain.
Moody happiness ...
Sprout did not grow together.
We have a candle blown out by a thunderstorm, passing.
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Eugene, it's nice to hear you again (that is, to read). I read your answer and realized that I had never used Abwabwe’s rhyme, but it sounds beautiful. Thanks for the poetic example.
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Not without bragging, I would say that such a construction of lines is my own invention. You correctly noticed: abv-abv. But this is not all: the trick is concluded in a long line “in”, which actually includes “in” and “g”.
I invented it and embodied in the verse "Other Destiny"https://eroticspace.info/story/2015-10-03/razvraschenie-lany-inaya-sudba.html
Here, the long line is numbered 1 and 4.
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Eugene, re-read "Another Destiny", indeed, the stanza in this construction looks original, it is very different from the most common options. You need to arrange for this style of copyright copyright.
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To tell the truth, I do not know what kind of copyright is and what it is for.
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