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lips and from the bottom of my heart offered in full use the contents of the piggy bank, where I sent all the last cash gifts from relatives.
Having received favorable consent, the boy kissed his teacher, at the same time pulling off the remnants of her clothes.
Prickly hay scratched delicate skin. You could even be patient, but Ben could not fit in. He was twitching between her legs, desperately not falling, and from this even more coming into hysterics.
In the girl's experience, too, there were no stories of help to men. In addition to a blowjob, they did everything themselves.
The boy was almost growling and even bit her on the chest, until he was gently removed.
- Don't fuss on your pussy, master. - the familiar, slightly hoarse from the sleep bass rumbled reproachfully.
The blond giant's hair was in straws, linen pants crookedly hanging on the hips. He clearly spent the night in this barn, and was awakened by the floundering of an inexperienced couple.
Affectionately sweeping Lizzy, who had sludge from his gaze alone, stretched across her hips, Apollo bent her legs at the knees and spread her arms wide apart.
- Look, master. The girl is juicy, ready. These pieces of skin cover the hole, - Apollo said so that the soul died down, - Here you have to fuck.
A thick callused finger with a crookedly chewed nail climbed into the flesh of the opened flower.
The flower came to life, opened, scattering petals and gently soaking, trying to suck in the welcome guest.
Another, already thin white finger touched a wide open hole. Inquisitive student gently put a finger nearby. And for a few seconds in satisfied silence they moved together.
- Here is her sweet knot. You see a bone under the hood.
Lizzy started moaning miserably.
- Huek cook, the girl asks.
The boy hastily threw off his shoes and trousers, kneeling next to the viciously opened girl, holding a neat, straight member at the ready.
Both young creatures, Lizzy and Ben, eagerly obeyed their mentor, waiting for instructions on what to do next.
He grunted and with obvious pleasure brushed Lizzy's chest, listening to her moaning.
- Stick into her dick, lad. Right in the hole, but do not be afraid, it will stretch under you.
The executive Benjamin, biting his lip, began to slowly enter Lizzy, crying enthusiastically and sighing.
The juicy flesh absorbed its trembling end, releasing a liquid that was transparent as a tear.
Ben came in and froze, pining from a keen pleasure.
The giant at this time slowly threw off his pants, and literally waving his enormous dignity, he sat down at the side. Red ball-shaped head stuck in the girl's nipple and fucked him, pressing into the chest.
Ben came out of the hole a little, and with a groan he ducked back inside. He was pounding.
The giant's trunk poked into one, then into the other girl's nipple, imprinting into white roundness.
“You need to feed the girl,” Apollo said sternly, “boobs are good, but if you feed off, they will grow even bigger.”
“Let’s feed,” young Benjamin puffed quickly moving his hips, “there will be, and there is, and there is ...”
Lizzy groaned loudly, Ben touched something inside her, but immediately let go.
The flip flops smarter, and, clinging to the hips of his music teacher, the boy finally groaned, pouring the seed inside.
He poked his satisfaction under her arm and laughed.
The giants had to literally roll him off his body in order to free the way.
The girl turned over and put on all fours like a dog.
Damping the edge of the long-suffering dress. a man put a fat brother to the hole. And in small jerks he went towards rapprochement.
“I love it when the ass flops,” he commented, “and you see boobs hanging.”
Push, and the whole body twitched. The girl screamed - Ii. He was great. Bursting
- Hold on, young Mr. I can not poke, wagging girl
And so it was that Lizzy's teeth were gritted.
With a whistle of admiration, Ben watched as a member and his hand thick enters the twitching body.
Apollo pretty slapped on the pope, Lizzy whined like a yard bitch.
Finally, the desired point melted like a fire of pleasure was found by a long member.
- In the morning to fuck - to gain health, - Apollo said instructively, having entered completely, in front of the bewildered Benny.
- Mister, do you and Bob seem to play sometimes in the yard?
- I play.
- This is my nephew. Call him here, let the dick help you too. Girl fire.
Beni knitted his brows, weighed quickly and shot his eyes at Lizzy as a dog.
- And you will not take it from me? Only yesterday my father gave me, I will not give it away, - the boy said badly.
- Well then, yours. Share it whenever you want, ”the blond giant chuckled.
“Nah,” Lizzy shook her head, “no Bob.”
She was slapped gently on the ass and good-naturedly grumbled to Ben:
- Run Run. Scha I will steam it, itself will request.
In the pussy zakoloshmatili, and the governess squealed with pleasure. Apollo won it completely and irrevocably.
Bobby turned out to be a fair-haired, sturdy, vaguely reminiscent of his uncle.
He instantly appreciated the situation, and even without removing it, but only after spreading his pants, climbed up to Lizzy’s head in Nirvana.
Having poked a half-soft member into it, he busily slapped his cheek, bringing him to consciousness, and deftly inserted the end into his screaming mouth.
- Uncle often calls me to their girls. But we have no such smooth ones. Thank you, Benny, your most beautiful.
Benjamin nodded in agreement, straightened up and re-took off his trousers carefully, without rushing.
- Papa has discharged from the capital agency, blue bloods, a pin-up from the bankrupt, the poor.
Liza mumbled something in the dick.
- Suck, suck, crap - Bob moaned patronizingly, - our sperm is not something that the capital, healthy, to juicy. Wow, well sucking girl, like my own.
He took out his penis and rummaged in his mouth in a businesslike manner, pulling out a wet tongue. He gripped his strong fingers, pulled out to the limit, and with two fingers of the second hand climbed deep into the throat.
“And Dyadkin will take it, he won't choke,” he said meaningfully, “and not a single girl can take a sip of it with us.” Straight for the guys, even lead the matchmakers. It is a pity that.
The boy let go of his mouth and moved in a friendly way, passing the line to his friend.
Ben lifted the girl's wet, flushed face, and, eagerly admiring, introduced the strengthened member into the inviting depraved mouth.
“And let him marry,” he said with pleasure, “Papa the aristocrats do not like to live — he will give what is given for her.”
Lizzy thought. Brains aggressively cleaned with a smooth tasty dick. And suddenly I wanted to attach Apollo to myself before whining with nipples. And that is simple, so her mind for two is enough.
Bobby lay down, grabbing hold of both boobs and began to "milk" them, arguing than the boobs of the local washerwoman are worse or better. And so actively he slapped on him that for some reason Lizzy tightened her whole body.
“And cho, you will marry me, wench,” said the newly appeared fiancé, who worked like a hammer, “If, of course, the owner gives a good tribute.
He shook his hips, beating Lizzy with his gun, all the entrails, finally started something he pressed and she screamed in a free way. For the first time in his short life of dignity, ending his voice.
- Yes. Yes. Yeah.
“I'll talk to papa tomorrow if Lizzy wants it.” Only a year she is mine, when I want to, - and Benjamin politely poured the sperm directly orgasmic mouth.
“Well, why not share it,” Apollo said kindly, “more fun together.”
He walked out of the stretched, cracked hole, stood over Lizzy, and gladly marked her entire face with long lines of whitish semen.
Bob preferred the language.
A week later, the manor was announced on the estate.
Mr. McConnell has reserved for himself the place of a frequent guest at the newlyweds. Gave an inn, money and a fair amount of land.
Young - active, economic, let them be built.
With great pleasure, he told the clubs how he dissuaded young Miss Frank, but the girl “is in love like a cat with my stableman.It was necessary to ensure, not to throw the stupid one into poverty. ”
Friends of the kindest Mr. James Abraham McConnell sadly discussed how the blue blood deteriorated, neither pride nor brains.
The bride went a little rumpled, very poor thing shocked by the future management of the inn.
Young Ben used to go off on his feet, and often retired with the young to discuss the nuances of the upcoming celebrations.
At the wedding, the elder McConnell photographed a lot.
Everyone.
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From the author:
Here is the result of a good mood and a desire to experiment with historical themes.
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for a long time not laughing so much)) thanks, author, for a good end of the week
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Cheated a bit)
Lizzy, as a whole person, and she does not disappear, and attach her husband. You look, the first porn movies will shoot,
I like happy couples, I, as a true girl princess, always for a happy ending.
My first short work. Without continuation)))
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rather pornofoto for heroes of the Boer War). but this great-grandmother of Linda Lovelace will definitely not disappear, regardless of whether the plot gets a development or not.
Believe in you, author
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Thank!
That's because ... just want to write something))
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I hope the author will not disappoint and write the continuation of this story 10 +
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Oh.
I have only 2 options to continue spinning:
- zoo (Apollo cares not only about the tribe, but also about his animals);
- the first porno film industry (Lizzy creates business).
But decided that both interest will not cause. And therefore, it makes sense to leave the story as a short sketch.
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And if these options try to combine?
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Can)
But it seemed to me that this is not a business, nor even a zoo.
And I am emotionally addicted to comments.
They write that it is fu and disgusting, and the mood to write will run out.
I'm afraid. I'm careful maybe.
Blowjob theme. Everyone is happy, no one swears)))
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To be honest, I don’t really like it, even though I read
I like it more when mother and daughter, and if we add to this incest topics coercion and humiliation, then this is generally a class but there are very few
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Exactly)
There are narrow themes, and there are still gender.
For example, a mother with a daughter is a very muschin theme))
But submission and humiliation touches both sides.
I want to write something that worries you and readers.
As I finish the current series, you can think about the psychological history of submission, humiliation, and dependence on it ...
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I look forward to the continuation of weaving stories
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Yes, the Beauty and the First-Year Student argue who is the first and jostle)
I will try to please you!
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I hope in the near future
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Moderation)
My first experience of describing Incest. Although without mom and daughter)
What can I say ... Cool)))
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Another variation of Lady Chatterley's Lover? The author is talented. The heroine is well-written: a portrait, character, biography, briefly but at the same time informative. For all the text before the final - great. That's just the face in the 19th century did not finish, this is a stupid innovation of modern porn movies. I strongly doubt that oral sex (the French kiss was known in the peasant environment in the 19th century). Marriage with a stable boy is fantastic, we leave on the author’s conscience. For the epilogue: - 1.
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Thank you for appreciating the text before the final.
Criticism agrees on all fronts. You're right)
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Here for the first time I will leave a comment here, it was painfully unexpectedly hooked on a story from new ones, which is rare.
Actually, I really liked the beginning and the idea itself, although in some places punctuation is lame and there are typos. The image of the main character has already formed, which is forced to earn by itself because of poverty.
By the way, her appearance is not described anywhere. Well, except for the chest and then a little. Is this on purpose, by the author? That everyone imagined how he wanted. Or why? So I like detailed beautiful descriptions.
But, actually, why am I writing this review. Because the beginning of the plot intrigued, thoughts were immediately buried in my head, how much more could be thought of further, the image was formed. And the end of it all ruined.
First, it seems to me that rich papkin’s son would hardly have wanted to share his first woman with someone, especially with his own groom and his nephew. And secondly, this whole story with a groom and even a wedding completely broke the image of Lizzy from me - they made her not a practical and mercantile girl who sells essentially herself for a better life, but a whore who loses all her mind, which was mentioned, from, excuse me, the feeling of a big dick in myself.
I do not know, personally, my vision of the plot is somewhat different. I will try to explain briefly.
Start liked. But starting with an acquaintance with Ben. I would make him a little more embarrassed and indecisive, but at the same time, as you had, the author, impatient in anticipation of the first sex. And I would describe it in more detail. She also would have taken a big role of Lizzy, because she is like a mentor in any way - even if she would teach everything in colorful details. Otherwise, it turned out that the teacher of Ben and Elizabeth was this stable boy, without whom they would have never had sex.
Then one could describe Lizzy's workdays in the new house, so to speak, their relationship with Ben, maybe he would have woken up to her some other feelings besides lust. It would be possible to make just not one small finished story, but a series. You can, of course, and additional side characters gradually introduce. I do not know ... In the end, I would rather marry Lizzie with Ben or some of his university or some other rich / noble friend.
Well, it would be possible to add a couple of scenes with the stableman, such as I could not resist his beauty, but in secret from Ben, who would be jealous of his "property". But since it came out at the end - it makes a mercantile clever girl ... Well, let whores, just trade in themselves - a frank fuck at the end.
Maybe I, of course, too seriously approached pornoroshkazu, but he hooked me, for which you, the author, thank you.
And maybe my ideas are fundamentally different from the authors, but if you like something, in general, I would be glad to see a sequel.
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Thank you for such a detailed and thoughtful comment.
You have approached the situation very professionally and strategically, which is very appealing.
In a situation with a thoughtful and developing author, your advice would be invaluable.
Perhaps someone honors them here, and they will become help and support in development.
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Now about me) Open and detailed, like your post.
See the rating? Low) Comments? Tears)
I, alas, never write continue.
I am careless and messy. In the text of the error, because I am writing in the tablet, thoughtlessly poking a finger and quickly, in the hope that the page will not be updated)))
I write that comes to mind. I continue only what readers like.
As soon as interest diminishes, I will do something else.
No matter how pleasant their heroes are to me.
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I think if you read it once or twice, almost all the errors would be gone. Or I don’t know if you’ve found a beta, because ideas and fantasy are there.
And did not the readers like this story? And the rating seemed to me not low. There are not many more comments to the "drunken beauty" ...
But your business, of course.
Just "to jerk off", sorry - your story is quite enough, as it is now.But sometimes I stumble upon ideas and even a performance that goes beyond the framework of porn text for self-satisfaction, albeit infrequently. I liked your idea, plus for some reason it became a shame for the heroine, that by the end you made her the ultimate anxious slut. So I decided to write a comment.
In general, sometimes this happens - even if you write the product yourself or “based on,” but I understand that I cannot do it as it appears in my head.
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My works will always be like that.
Raw
Alas.
Grateful, very grateful to those who accept favorably and such.
I am fascinated that you took me seriously.
And even somewhat confused.
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Now about the heroine.
Immediately after the story is my first comment.
Conflict "Love is evil")))
When a person builds the future, plans.
A practical Lizzy would not marry Ben, but for the elder Mr. McConnell.
But the fate of FIG)
Because the night, the pond, Apollo.
All practicality in the ass. And the brainy young Miss obeys the chance that the three idiots-prostitutes emerged by chance.
Merging pure blood, family honor, own plans.
Love is evil.
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Well here how to look. Isn't the older mister already married? This time. And since he is older, he will die faster. Of course, the widow can get something, but the children will share something, and the first wife, and you never know.
And so, after the death of papa, everything will go to Ben, with whom, it seems to me, it will not be so disgusting, and which can be turned, unlike the hardened father.
Well, yes, love is evil. But personally, I just did not see her here. Neither from the side of the stable boy, who would just fuck a beautiful body, nor from the side of Lizzy, who just flowed like a female dog. Well, I, as a reader, saw it this way.
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The elder Mr. Lonely, in the house one does not feel a female presence at all, sleeps alone, takes decisions on his son alone. Most likely widows.
And so Ben, the pale likeness of his right hand. He squandered all the savings, the father feels it.
Lizzy already thought about the business with the elder, and compared with her father, and she valued the housekeeping. I would try to twist, I bet.
As for “disgusting - not disgusting”, I would argue, but let us slide into taste.
Here the groom is disgusting. Local beautiful animal.
But ... everyone has different love. This one is like this. Porn love.
On the topic of the site))
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Oh and yes. One could add anal here and there. So, from my kinks advice)
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)))
Clear advice)
I would add, but the canvas was against.
Here, by the way, there is a good literature. But it is much worse than the present strong in other places. Therefore, as soon as I understand that the author is “literary,” I stop reading.
All those badly stitched “lips of Nikanor Ivanovich with Ivan Kuzmich’s nose” ...
Respect for the efforts, no more.
I'm reading porn here. I write porn. I like it)
Ps. If the idea is like - I give, change, write as you wish.
Pps. Less than 8 - bottom. Even if the trolls put 1 (and there are authors of stories with whom it is impossible to “stand together.” As soon as I see a work by this author next to my story, then everything is clear - few will sprinkle now).
So, even if they went off by 1, with the interest of readers, the work will still be raised))
It does not rise - it's a pity, but alas, I also lose interest.
One of the series is now in question.
Life is beautiful, but transient)
I'll spend it on something else.
It's nice to talk with you, so I'll spend it on talking with you)
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What is against?
Vaughn and the last scene - just three of them were - one for each hole)
Well, here we must be able to combine. Too, sometimes I ran into something that had more water and text for the sake of text than sex. Yes, and sex, too, need to be able to describe. Not too brief, but not too meticulous, and in general to excite.And I came across this here, I repeat, but rarely.
Sometimes the plots were good - the darkness of ancient Minos, for example. True, he got away from here somewhere.
Throw ideas - yes. But to do - is unlikely. Yes, and I never wrote anything for publishing anywhere.
Oh, I did not know that there is such a strange system. Because 8/10 is so very good if you look at it purely logically.
Oh, you flatter me)
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So let Miss Lizzy to float freely)
This, by the way, is a feature of ready-made stories, with the beginning and completion, they can be seen as a whole at once, you can think and play as with a designer.
And a betta author (if I understand their functions correctly) can help with this at the level of the first option.
Type "the scene in the garden is better to postpone for the evening, and increase the sex at the ball in three")))
I have thoughts about the Clever Girl in sadness because of this (I want to write it immediately, with one story, and this, damn, 7 pages can fly in, the risk of losing the text is high)
In such a large text piece, logically, separately it is necessary to check the construct of events, separately test the excitability of the scenes)))
In general, there will be many mistakes. And, therefore, critics.
Now in the thought that the first to write)))
PS it is difficult for the author to understand whether or not the descriptions he creates are excited.
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Interestingly, at first I didn’t master it, but then I decided to read out of respect for the author and got involved and it was good as always. The ending of course killed almost everything, so many options, and you chose this hayloft and wedding, in my horror. In the beginning was aestheticism, and in the end ...
But I still believe in you, correct))).
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Few people like the ending for some reason)
And it seems to me, so cute, wedding, love))
As in a joke. Why do girls watch porn hard until the last credits?
Everyone is waiting for the heroes to marry)))
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Did not finish - finished. Perhaps this is the best grade story, set by nature itself. I wanted to write a lot of good things here, but brevity is the sister of talent. Yes, and I have literary talent, unlike the author, completely absent. But, sincere wish to the author - write about the zoo and about the golden village and about incest. You get not obscene, not banal gonzo-porn, and you like Andrew Blake or, at worst, Mark Dorsel in the porn industry.
I read stories on this site, even find it difficult to say how many years, but wrote a comment for the first time. So do not blame me.
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You are just lovely)
(I will not hurt a man like this?)
With pleasure and good mood I write porn for porn readers.
And such reviews for me are great, the best rating.
Thank!
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It turns out that praise praises praising.)
For your sake, I am ready to become anyone, even with charm, even like in the movie “The Lord of the Rings.”
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But sincerely)
Neither you nor me have any additional meaning other than a valid attitude to the text.
I write when I have comments. I read, light up, thoughts are born.
I never understood those who write to the table. It's like a demon obsessed))
And I'm a conversational character.
So I read your comment and wanted to do an interactive story-experiment.
With plot twists from the comments.
I seem to have regular readers. It will be fun)))
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interactive story-experiment - interesting, let's see, we will touch.
Today you have exactly one more regular reader.
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very glad to meet you)
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Today I read your story. Did you ask? I will say - VERY !!! And I sincerely ask you to release, so to speak, a reprint with a more expanded sequel.It seems to me that you have the opportunity to write a porn-novel, even if it is paid, I am still your reader. I promise!
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First, flattering.
Practical Lizzy cool girl, I also like it)
Secondly, I did not know that porn-novels in general are)))
There are only stories.
I am not a pro, they explained to me on the forum how much work is needed and concentration even for stories, admit it scared me.
Therefore, if you decide, then certainly not immediately, and it is hardly paid.
I want to find a completely different profession))))
But the stories happy to indulge. Write what interests you, if the topic hooks me, I will immediately write a story.
Thank!
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If there are no porn-novels, then just you have a great opportunity to become the first! And set the rules of the genre)))
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We'll see)
What is called "never say never"
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I laughed to tears))
it was necessary to stumble upon the story from the first time, where it ends with WEDDING))))))))))) before jokes went on this topic, such as "I expect them to be married at the end or not," and then X))))
she laughed and muzhikov acquaintances amused)) thanks, author, write more)) quite to myself
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Decent story.
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