no, I am very upset with the results ... well, I hoped that at least one member of the jury would notice at least for something ... I don’t know how to write, not mine

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ARTISTS WALL CALENDARS

It is even surprising that the author from such a pen has come out such a vulgar thing as the “Airbus of debauchery” showed to our attention a thing that deserves, if not admiration, then close attention.

It should be noted that the “Twelve girls before the New Year” is a self-sufficient story both by itself and as an erotic tale about the Christmas dreams of a bank manager from the French-speaking canton of Switzerland. It seemed to be easier? The uncle lives in the euro-chalet, on the road to the mountain pass, well, stupefied by loneliness, well, distracted from work on the Christmas holidays, well, he went over absinthe looking at the calendar with naked girls ...

In such visions, a young man, on the background of good nutrition, mountain air and prolonged abstinence, is not unusual. It was possible to put a rhetorical question: - And what our boy smoked? And all the intrigues of the plot end, the clinical picture is understandable and understandable.

However, the work turned out much deeper. And as any uncommon work, it is strong, precisely by what the author kept silent about.
Whoever wrote in comments, but the main character is not the 12 naked girls from the calendar, and not the boy Gillian, who uses the girls for the whole story for their intended purpose. The main character of the story is the intoxicating mountain air of Switzerland and the ancient legends of these places.

I believe that the author himself does not realize how realistic and close to life is what he called fiction and presented to the reader in the form of a Christmas fairy tale. Let me clarify that there is a saying: “Who served in the army does not laugh in a circus,” I don’t know what it means, but if you contact the owner of a small hotel at the mountain pass, with information about what you saw on the pass naked, a bearded man in a bear's skin, the owner will laugh gaily and say that all this is nonsense and fantasy, and you all saw it from fatigue ... However, gently close all the bolts, and then he rises to his wife and tells that that man, about who was told by his father and grandfather, again walking on the pass.

For me personally, the canton of Valais is the Roclett cheese, endless passes and tunnels, mountain serpentine, the monastery of Saint Bernard, the history of the Duchy of Svoysky, and the witch trials, but more on that later, but for now let's return to the Almazovsky character Gillian.

It should be noted that the average European man, the author is drawn simply as a textbook. They are careful, disciplined, cowardly, and do not like to make decisions. He will stare at the erotic calendar with enthusiasm and dreams and present himself as a playboy on vacation, but to meet with the cashier at the supermarket or go to a nightclub and remove the girl he has neither determination, nor will, nor cleverness. Even if the girl who stayed at his home after the party gets naked before the goal, he will not guess in her life that she wants to tr, to gasp, he will decide that she is just hot, give her a blanket and turn on the condo ...)))

Men strangely fear their fantasies. The materialization of their own sensual ideas leads a man to a numbing horror. During my school years, a boy, with whom we played tennis in adjacent groups on the court, was caring for me for a long and timidly. He was constantly following me after training, always inviting me, now to movies, then to friendly gatherings, and I, in turn, tried to politely escape from his courtship. The boy seemed to me small, but not in the sense of growth, but in the sense of content. I still like older men, and my school years, I did not notice my peers at all. At best, she paid attention to high school students, and even if she had something to look at.

As a result, the boy showed such wonders of ingenuity in order to lure me to visit and be alone, which, in my personal conviction, honestly earned the “Main Prize”. However, lure - lured, and what to do next was vague, eventually blushing, paled was confused in thoughts and words, and so on. And how, it is asked, to smooth awkwardness? I offered to play a bottle, but when the boy had to make a wish, he fell into such a stupor that I felt like a complete fool, but since I was already ready for everything, I suggested to guess his desire and ... took off my dress.

While she was shooting, she was worried and blushing, but when she saw his sagging jaw and enthusiastic gaze, she got into the taste of teenage striptease and undressed to the dress of Eva. Do you think the boy's determination to act is awake? FIG you, despite my frank pose of a model from Playboy, the boy hid his eyes to the floor, but peered sideways with greed. This inspired a timid hope for a romantic adventure, but he himself did not dare to take the first step.

True woman, I did not become that day, everything was limited to a modest school blowjob. By the way, my confidence that it is necessary to stir up with those who are older, after that incident, only got stronger ...))))

But back to the boy Gillian and the girls from the cover. During the last twelve days of the year, the bank manager alternately (apparently so as not to interfere with each other), naked Snow Maiden deprived of memory, clothing, complexes and prejudices. By the end of the second day of the snow maiden, it is up to the uncle that a naked girl in your house needs to be entertained, including in bed. However, he came to this idea, only after repeated reminders, Miss February, that a live girl is much better than a photograph in the calendar. (God, how familiar this is.)

Alex Almazov turned out a beautiful allegory, on the immaturity of the modern man. All that is enough for him is to stare at the calendar and dream about the girl from the cover materializing in the middle of the room naked, and when the girl gets naked, the man is speechless and forgets why she called ...))) However, for the girl's visit Martha , Gillian has already mastered communication and dawned that girls like when their fucking "t.

Progress, as they say, is obvious, but he vigorously poked a member with a member and said compliments, but he still had to offer her herself. To visit Miss April, our hero lover, turned on his head and began to think that it would be decent to invite a girl to a restaurant before getting fucked; However, this bright thought remained a good intention. Like, why entertain, if so will give.

“... Gillian leaned back in the seat and waited. And, having placed a hand on the heart, he was never going to want it. Banally, but he stupidly wanted to sweep it into the ass. And then thrust into the mouth and there it is to end ... "

Of course, I am not a hypocrite, but with such an approach to a romantic relationship, it is not surprising that Uncle Gillian lives alone. I would have nailed such a monster myself. But it is, by the way.

And then the men began the life of a full idiot. Girls all week, before the New Year, replaced one another. They appeared on time, gave themselves willingly, grimaced rarely, chatted a little, disappeared quickly. It should be noted that this is the way most men understand happiness. The author, by the way, subtly noted that even “such” life of our playboy weary for exactly one week. Still, they also, at least it was necessary to tr "hatch, and the ideal of a man is a journey lying on the stove with the girl doing blowjob between his legs.

Well, and as the apotheosis of the narrative, the author presented us with a glimpse of romance in the soul of this animal, which was put into a bowl like a domestic cat, whisked into cats, and cats were combed out. Realizing that the calendar ends, the year ends, lafa ends. Gillian urgently falls in love with the only girl who wondered about his life, walked with him to the store, played snowballs, dressed up a Christmas tree, pretended to be jealous of others, in time and to the place started a tear:

“... for some time they shouted more silently. Outside the girl put his goodness on the hand of the man and spoke with a note of restraint:

- You really want me to stay?

Gillian twitched and crippled.

- Pravda. But I do not know how. What needs to be done, that you will not be exhausted, as all the rest. Ponimaesh, you are so special. I ... I am well with you.

“And to me,” the girl removed her hand and turned around.

He hid a tear in his face ... "

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Every girl knows how love is born in a man. The main secret is: to captivate, but not to give right away, but he will go mad himself ...

It turned out briefly, vividly, strongly and with subtle morality for novice photo models:
You do not want to fuck, talk more and turn on the fool.
Do you want to sweat, take off your clothes right away ...
Do you want passionate courtship, let's just the next day ...
Want to get married, wait for the third date ...



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Of course there are in this text and secret signs that transform it from an ordinary Christmas tale into a real masterpiece, but about this next time.

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Thats exactly what I mean))

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