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“No, he is not like a simple hunter,” she thought belatedly, looking at the muscles of the muscles, “then who is he?”
Meanwhile, a man scooped up a few times with a ladle a little water and splashed it on the stones. The stones hissed, and the hot steam filled the sink. Pavel turned his face to Ole, and it was time for her to be surprised again: an impressive "stick" hung between the man's legs. No, the girl was not stupid, but so, at an emphasis, for the first time looked at such a mysterious and strange subject for her. Pavel tried to pretend that he did not notice such a close study of his body, and sternly shouted:
- Nick, and why are you frozen in the corner? Grab a gang, take warm water and rinse well, but the hair does not urine, the head should be dry. Now I will bring you a felt hat to protect the head and ears.
- On-ko, put on and scat on the canopy: warm up while I steam the broom.
- Here, a broom and ready, now we start to steam out your skinny mosly. First heels, legs, then back, and again: heels, legs, back ... Lightly, gently, so as not to burn the skin that is not used to heat. Okay, that's enough for now, turn your face up, and you need to warm up before. What did you think, put your hands to the sides, I will not weld you and will not bite you. And here in a similar way: socks, knees, belly, chest ... and again, and once more.
Olya felt the heat at the beginning of burning the skin, then slowly filled her whole body, so it became difficult to breathe. Finally, Paul took pity on her and finished clapping with a broom.
- So okay. Everything, get down, rinse and you can cool down in the dressing room while I bathe.
After a while, Paul shouted:
- Come in, Kohl, I will wash you with a washcloth, and at the same time I will do a massage - you will be as good as new. Heard what massage is? Not? Then memorize and learn how to knead the muscles and joints. Then you will do to me. By the way, this very massage doctor ordered me to do for full recovery after wounds. Well, lie down. My soap is good, foamy, although the scourer is tough, but you endure, as a man should.
And here, the horror that began: hefty male hands rubbed, crushed, crushed and twisted it like a living doll. It seems there is not a single living place on it. Olya woke up only below, when she was poured with water from a gang.
- Well, alive? - asked, laughing, Paul. Now you will urinate and massage me, just look, be careful around wounds.
As if she had climbed up in a fog, she sat down on Paul and, what she did with it, did not even remember herself. After they once again rinsed and came out to wipe in the dressing room. Seeing the unimportant state of his assistant, Pavel wiped it off himself and gave him clean clothes.
They were married for a long time and with gusto, until Olga right at the table began to nod. Pavel silently got up, made the bed and commanded:
- Throw off your pants and go under the clothes - bye-bye. I'll clean it up by myself.
Pavel washed and cleaned the dishes, sat silently at the table, thinking about something, then went to bed to sleep. When he went to bed, his neighbor was already snoring, smiling at something in her sleep.
This is how this very long and very strange day ended.
PART 2. New life.
At night, Olga slept as if she had been killed, and in the morning she began to have a nightmare, as if she had fallen under a blockage, and she was covered with stones and earth. It became difficult to breathe, the poor girl in fright, all tensed and woke up ... thank God not under the ground, but in bed. But it was still difficult to breathe because Pavel squeezed her with his left hand, while swinging his right in different directions. His face was focused, his eyelids twitching, and the muscles in his arms and chest tightened with harnesses. Olya tried to free herself from capture, but it was not there. Having tried everything and in despair of escaping, the prisoner went to the trick: she began to stroke her invader in the face and head, whispering various gentle words to calm him down.And it worked: the grip began to weaken, and the soldier slowly calmed down, leaned back and breathed evenly. Olya fiddled a little more, finally released, and began to crawl a little to the edge of the bed. At the same time, she awkwardly ran her foot over male legs and stumbled upon some kind of obstacle. After thinking for a while what this could be, the girl decided to lift the edge of the blanket and find out what was the matter.
What was her surprise when she saw between his legs Paul sticking up his cock. Now he was nothing like yesterday's, hung down. Silently lowering the blanket, Olya became thoughtful. Of course, she’s already a big girl and she understood why and why men seek for women, but she vaguely imagined how all this happens. The recent fright was immediately forgotten, and curiosity completely changed it: strangely, the man is sleeping, but this thing is sticking out. Why is this happening? Is it really a nightmare to blame? But here Olya already had a very recent experience of appeasing Paul. Without hesitation, she decided to apply her experience in business, for which she again threw back the edge of the blanket and became timid at first, then more confidently, lightly stroking the member with one hand, after - two. But the strange thing, the reassurance of a member did not come neither in a minute, nor in two, nor in five. The suspicion even crept into the girl's head that her ward's hardness even increased. It is not known how much more soothing procedures would have lasted if Paul hadn’t puffed intermittently, twisted and turned on his side, his back to Olya. On this all night adventures and ended, the girl also turned on her side and fell asleep.
The morning reminded of itself by the hubbub of birds outside the window and the noise of a kettle on the stove. Olya gladly stretched out, got out from under the blanket and put on her present men's clothes. In this case, had to thoroughly tuck up the sleeves and legs. Going into the kitchen, the girl saw Paul with a tailoring needle in her hand.
“Here and Sonya woke up,” he said with a smile, “and I am finishing my nightie from my white shirt. Nothing at night to sparkle bare ass and embarrass your knight. Oh, oh, she blushed, that is, he. And I wonder why this squire gets up later than his knight? I already cooked porridge, the kettle boils, and the assistant sleeps. This is whose duty to boil porridge and boil tea? Okay, okay, do not extinguish, you will get used to it. Keep your nightie, carry on the bed, and then march to the street to wash: I have you prepared a full bucket of water and a towel.
They had breakfast in silence and with concentration, until during tea Paul smiled at his thoughts and said:
“For some reason, you dreamed of me, Kolya, at night, so much so that I was ashamed to say so. Strange, I have never had such dreams before. Do not know why it is?
From these words, Olga almost choked, flushed, coughed and blurted out in response:
- And you, and you ... I almost strangled me at night, here.
- What, I fought again at night? - Pavel frowned, - lately, nightmares let me go, and here, you see, again. This is all peace does not give the fight where I was hurt. Half a year has passed, but I will not calm down. But you, look, all the way: it means I did not strangle you. It is time for me to go to the local witch, that is, the medicate for fresh ointment and herbs. She said that with another month and - I will be as good as new. Because of this witch, I was lured here by a forester - my long-time acquaintance. And there is a good healing lake not far away. Will you come with me to the witch, will you not bother?
- I do not care with you, but I do not know how to ride a horse.
- Here, at the same time and learn. But this is after, and now we have morning military exercises. And so it will be every morning for two hours. To begin with, let's go to the armory, I will show you my arsenal and explain what's what.
“This is a battle ax, this is a spear, this is a sword in a sheath, and this is a bow and a quiver of arrows.” And here is a military vestment: a leather suit, duster, chain mail, a helmet. This is a shield.All of this you need to study in detail, for all of this you will take care: clean to shine and grease. And now let's go to the gym, I’ll show you methods of sword possession. We take wooden training swords and begin.
- Tell me, Paul, where did you fight?
“Uh, Kolya, where I have never been to the prince’s ten years of service: in the west and in the east, and in the south among the steppe inhabitants — enemies from all sides, and all dangerous.
- What, along with the prince himself fought? And what is he, Prince?
- Yes, how can I describe it to you? God willing, he himself will see.
- Prince, he is far away in the capital, how will I see him? No
- God willing, together we will get to the capital when I am completely cured.
- And will you take me with you to the capital? True true?
“And it will depend on you how well you will master your duties,” Paul said with austerity in his voice.
- I will try, by God, I will try.
- Then let's get started. Here, memorize the movements of the sword and repeat after me ...
And so it began for the girl Oli, or rather, for the young man Kolya, this new, unseen to the village, male life: training in the morning, then cleaning of weapons and armor. Before lunch and dinner - therapeutic massage for Paul and grease his wounds with ointment. After lunch, rest, then hunt animals or gather mushrooms, berries and healthy herbs in the forest. In between, it was necessary to have time to cook soup and porridge, brew healing tea, clean up the house so that everything would sparkle. So, before going to sleep, Olya barely moved her legs, and when she dived under the covers, she immediately fell asleep.
(To be continued)
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Feels male thoroughness. A detailed recipe for kulesha (I'll use it if suddenly I manage to catch a hare))
Come do it. And do not just bother - but you TZ and TsU))
But this is me, I'm joking)) Because “it won't be enough!" ©))
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Continuation is almost ready, be patient.
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Nicely)
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Approximately such a goal was set, no hooliganism.
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I liked it very much :-)
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Thanks for the feedback, there will be an end soon.
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An intriguing start, dear Critic (he is a colleague))).
Good start to unwind.
What I wish for success!)
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Thanks for the feedback, I'll finish it soon and post it. I will add to the above that I did not plan swirling intrigue, my tale is in pink tones.
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quickly redo it in a woman, and then painted the duties of the items. sho do not even breathe)))) went to lubricate the wounds ... what's the fat? badger?)))
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What is fat? Bitch! Ha ha ha.
A statutory order: ten years in the prince's squad - this is not a fucking muhra. There is a soldier, a cook, a Swedish, and a reaper.
Soon, Snezhanochka, I will finish, come read on.
Thanks for the feedback.
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I would put five. Like your board. Five for this story is a sneak peek. Zhenya, you do not see that any desyatochny like a disgusting mockery for you?
Story of strength, pulls on three. Set
You have already been hinted that your prose is not yours. Do not catch up? How else can you say this?
Zhenya, do not disgrace, go with the story in the necessary, there it is more necessary :)))))
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Moth, go fly over the shit, the thing for you.
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Serge, not so rude. Smol, of course, is a fighter, but the very essence is true.
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Well, why carry so far, right up to the need, for that there is a basket.
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The story is good. Dialogues only need to be better connected with the narration, and then there was a feeling that the description jumps, despite the fact that it is quite consistent.
I think at 7.
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Thank you, Michael, for your generous assessment.
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“Olya even thought it wasn’t possible” - and so the whole story. Thoughts are few, but feelings are generally zero.
It looks like a school - “Think up a story on a picture”. It turned out that I see, I write.
Why left home? Only because of the nagging stepmother, but something was supposed to be the last straw. Why went with an unfamiliar man? What did you think, what did you feel, what motive of this act?
For 18 years, the girl is too stupid.
You should rewrite the story by adding thoughts and feelings to it, but for now there is nothing to evaluate.
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Olya, you are too strict. For a grafoman, it is very well written.
I agree, it is written without feelings, but he can not rewrite anything. Once he wrote without feelings, where did they come from?
You argue that the plot is banal and jammed into holes. I agree with that too.
Say the phrases used stamp. Yes stamp.
And it did not occur to you that not all people have a rich imagination, that not all people can boast the beauty of their language!
But it is written without errors.
Although you are right, literacy alone is not enough.
Further to argue with you I do not see sense. I myself now see that, apart from literacy, the author has nothing to boast about. You convinced me.
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Glad you learned a school essay here.
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Debaters.
You look at the poems of the author.
Without tears you will not look.
Then look at the assessment.
High.
Then read the comments.
Laudatory.
This is a private club.
It is not written for you.
For their own.
The content does not matter.
Nightingale praises the cuckoo.
Cuckoo praises the nightingale.
Run away from here.
You will not be welcome here.
You are strangers.
In the morning will come the members of the club.
Will beat you.
Do not complain.
I warned.
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Yes, waking, klonchik, do not sprinkle with saliva and do not frighten readers in vain.
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Misled the tag "Romance". Under this tag, people want to read about the feelings and emotions of the characters. And here is an account of the course of events, detailed, but depleted emotionally.
The story did not work. It turned out the presentation.
You can beat :)
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Glad I learned the school presentation here
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Eugene, where is the sex? I was already in the mood to read something, but there is no sex, as one of Shirvindt’s heroes said ...
I will not criticize, and everyone said without me. Smiled: "girl Olya." A girl is a position or title?
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The girl is the performance characteristics of the female object. When this TTX is changed, the object is called a woman)))
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Thank you Serge for your wit and interesting comments.
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“You, girl, Olya, are you able to keep yourself in the middle of a dope?”
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"Girl" is a heavy duty of life.
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THANKS to all who read my writing-essay and wanted to speak. I am glad that the site is visited by a lot of thoughtful and literate readers.
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Eugene!
Finally, I got to your story, read and put a round ten.
Then you have spoken so many critical words, and I will object!
By the absence of sex - after all, he is a little bit) But in general, sometimes this expectation gets more of the most outspoken scene. I liked how you could convey this heat. And there are feelings! Not in the forehead, but reading, you feel everything. In any case, I was very easily in the place of the heroine. But of course, further process needs to be deepened)
The second.I liked your thoroughness - and kulesh, and the decor at home. Details are always important to me. And in your stories there is nothing superfluous in this regard. All that they have written about is of value, works on the images of the heroes and on the story that is supposed to happen between them.
I look forward to continuing and add to my favorites. Thank!
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Frankly, quite an unexpected review. No, the review was expected, but not such flattering content. Thank. I am glad that I understood my idea: yes, there will not be unrestrained sex, wild oh-huhs, this tale is in a completely different style. In the continuation will be present erotica with sex, but limited, as a logical continuation of the relationship of the characters. Alas, it so often turns out in me that I have to write and say not just what the soul asks, in contrast to and in spite of. And this tale (or school essay) from the same series. Indeed, sometimes very tired of porn vulgarity.
Yes, the story can make a lot of complaints, I agree. Nevertheless, I will put the continuation on the court of readers.
In conclusion I will say: surprised by the large number of guest reviews. I am glad, but somehow unusual.
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10!!!
Got finally. At first, I did not catch up with the fact that time is not the present, but the past. I think what a man does with a bonfire on a country road and cooks kulesh? When a multivark, microwave and electric gas oven are waiting for him at home. Well, I think, a romantic ... He wanted to cook in nature.)))
Then it became unclear why the girl is kind of illiterate sexually. And when the conversation turned to weapons, it was only up to me that the prince was not allegorical, but he was real. I had to look at everything about everything from a different angle and reread it in a new way.
The story is not written about our days, but about days long past. Then everything fell into place. I think that anyway, the author does not need to focus on this. The story is more like a fairy tale for children after school age. And what's the difference when it happened?
I liked the story for its thoroughness. A detailed recipe for cooking kulesha. Even as a stove it is necessary to kindle, and then contemporaries, I feel they will freeze in such a situation.)))
It became clear why Olya-Kolya does not know the features of the structure of the male body. How could she know when there was no Internet, no television and porn advertising at that time.)))
However, the story is thoroughly imbued with romance, and although nothing has happened so far from the fairytale, this is only the first part. There will be a second - there will be a fairy tale and sex)))
In general, I liked the story. Know beforehand that this past is described. But this is just my fault. I read it a second time and I liked it even more.
Of course, the story is rather ladies' and served as for the ladies, but men with a romantic soul should also like it.
Summary: author writing products !!!
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Thank. Here is the third definition: a fairy tale for older children. The first two are essay and presentation. In my opinion, all three are quite suitable. It is a pity that the current post-school children have matured so much that they took my fairy tale loosely.
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Eugene, you wrote a wonderful fairy tale for girls who graduated from school a long time ago)
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Yura, you are spoiled by the Internet and all sorts of technical things))) But for some reason I immediately understood that it was happening in the past, the prince was the most efficient, and wanted to try the kulesh. I usually cook a rabbit with rice. And here is a question for you, as for the first cook ST - is it possible to cook klesh without bacon? Just a rabbit and cereal? I do not eat fat
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About fat - this is to Eugene. I never cooked it. As for the first chef, it's not true either. I would prefer to call Alouette and Nettle from memory.
Maybe I did not quite understand about the fairy tale? I meant a fairy tale for adults. That is 18+, as they say.
And do not compare it as a negative indicator. I wrote as positive. Like “a fairy tale for girls who have finished school long ago” (@Nefertiti and romantic boys from 18 to 100
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Eugene, then I ask you) Kulesh can be cooked without fat? I ask you seriously.
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I think you can.
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Eugene, get in full. Ten!
And do not delay the continuation. The beginnings are made fascinating, it's time for the middle game to be presented to the reader,
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