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her back, open buttocks do not count. Then she grew a fur on it, began to hide behind it, with its fluffy beautiful black tail with a white tassel, holding it in front, supporting her left hand just below the waist. He became a good cover for chinks. Her breasts remained open, she did not grow hair on them, which is why she constantly felt the hot glances of those passing along on her nipples.

Everyone wanted to press it against the wall here and now, dump it on the floor or otherwise take possession of it and didn’t hide it at all, but they didn’t dare, didn’t even dare to touch it or go near it, so as to accidentally touch it. The supreme demon, the Commander-in-Chief and a hundred more names, she belonged only to him, and everyone here respected him and was very afraid, and it was for that, he killed easily, not forcedly for any offense. He explained to her that the demons do not die, but the bodies remain here, but they are revived again, but with a decrease in status. Her presence, nudity and constantly reeking scent distracted many and the demons often made mistakes, especially when she started to ooze moisture, which was quite often, her body needed attention. No, they did not retire, no matter where they were, even if it was high advice, he took her, right there without embarrassment, at all. In passages, corridors, halls, where there were no comfortable places, she rested her hands on the wall or completely sagged, resting them on the floor, and pulled up her lovely long fluffy tail. If there was a table, he swept everything off of it on the floor, laid it on the table, spread its legs wide and used its leaking slit. It did not matter to him that at this very table, even if only a meter away from her, other demons were seated and had an important discussion. She never missed an opportunity to listen to them, about her unclear, never asked, her mouth opened only for groans, which she was not always able to contain. The demons became silent, watching how they fucked her up, while her nipples, protruding sex petals, lips and even mouth lips darkened, becoming almost black, which was not characteristic of any demoness, hair also changed color, she often scratched the table in pleasure. Durable material, stronger than diamond, yielded to its claws. The damaged tables did not change and soon, by the number of furrows and their depth, it was possible to find out how many times they were taken on them. Then he returned to the discussion and the adoption of important decisions, as if nothing had happened, while she remained lying on the table and most often on her back, shuddering and arching with her whole body, without straining her legs.

Not hiding the breasts, nipples, and the newly credited crack. They burned their eyes, but she did not care, she finished, doing it with them. Inadvertently becoming an object of envy, everyone wanted to at least touch her, her hair, feel her hot, steaming, or even burning juice on her fingers. Who was closer, they tried to look into the crack itself, it usually closed quickly, no matter how wide the legs were. Now that she has become a demoness, their gaze did not penetrate deeper than their skin and scales, all they could do was breathe in the smell and envy in silence. The supreme demon liked to take the fingers of the deceased and savor. Sometimes, when making particularly important decisions so that the demons would not be distracted by lustful thoughts, he would order them to leave, forcing them to wait outside the door for a long time, and when they returned, they saw that the Commander-in-Chief did not bother to remove her and even put her legs together. Then, few could see the open bosom of this new demoness, the slowly closing sexual entrance, the narrow, but no less attractive ajar rear entrance, how elegant folds shrink in these openings, shining with the whiteness of the newly poured seed. Not rarely it was on the lips of her mouth.

Gradually, he taught her accepted behavior and respect, but she still remained a draconess, and therefore she loved to break all the rules, had already begun to understand something, even inserted her comments on the council.For such a punishment followed, the most severe for her could be deprivation of sex, he did not use it. The second less cruel is death, too. The easiest thing was the beating with a whip, so that the muscles were peeling off the bones, he neglected because she carried an egg that developed. Fortunately for her and him, she still perceived urinary incontinence as humiliation. It was with this that he punished her, using the crack so well that she pissed. Usually one time was enough for two days of correct behavior, and if you met a demon at the meetings that had already seen her humiliation, then longer. For a more blatant violation of the rules, he ordered me to piss, she had not been embarrassed for a long time, but considered it to be especially humiliating in the presence of others, especially when she wasn’t polished. For the first week, she already knew how to behave, she bowed to whom it was supposed to, how the lower demoness should act, although the demons more wanted to see not a low bow, but her arched back and raised tail. She served her master by serving food and other things, demonstrating complete submission, but in the cabin, or you can say a separate palace of the Commander in Chief, alone and in the presence of internal servants, behaved capriciously, for which she did not receive punishment. Noticing that her position is low, other demons began to order her, then she looked at the owner and if he nodded, she performed. Some people thought of ordering her to stand in a pose or suck them, the four commanders who were killed on the spot personally were enough for the Commander-in-Chief to not receive such orders. Also, all who dared to touch her died, at least just the hands, which allowed more to die slowly. Looking at this, Tiirith understood that she was in danger if she decided to make her horns even longer. And yet there were days when he could not be there and take her with him, so he returned Siad's life. So that they engage in same-sex love, this Commander-in-Chief did not consider him a betrayal, rarely rewarded Siad, causing jealousy of Tiirit.

The demon at first tenderly treated its fluffy tail, with which it covered itself, caressed him, then adapted it. At first she was very indignant, but then, already feeling her every hair, she moaned indecently loudly, did not scrape her claws, but stuck deeply. Her bushy tail cleared all its holes remarkably. After that, she put him in order for a long time, if time permitted. Despite this use, she did not reduce the length and number of tail hairs, and on that basis, he decided that she liked her use of this kind.

Wimri saw more water on the flat surface than she wanted, but it only added questions. A couple of seconds passed for everyone, the guards still stood quietly forty meters away. What she saw influenced her, was surprised to find that she was excited and wet. Just a little, not enough moisture leaked out, but enough to show the smell. This happened to her for the first time, in her still black eyes there was confusion. Hoping to avoid publicity, I decided to burn the smell. Alas, Vimri did not think that the composition of her fiery mixture had also changed. If the smell spread only with the wind, then none of the guards could not fail to notice its fiery jet. Vimri was surprised no less than them, since her tongues of flame were iridescent with seven colors. Recovering her mouth shut, she sighed and was even more embarrassed when she felt that the flame had not burned, but on the contrary increased its smell many times. She lay down, pressed her tail and closed her eyes, trying not to breathe and not see the reaction of the elves, who felt the bewitching scent should be like flowers. When they were replaced, fortunately for them in just a quarter of an hour, they almost ran away. Vimri was confident that on this night and in the next few days their girls would be very pleased and completely satisfied.

21 comments
  • July 26, 2015 10:38

    One question) What does the mysterious phrase at the end mean - “Text version 1.2“?

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  • July 26, 2015 23:23

    Nothing mysterious. This is an alteration of the old fragment from the first part of the book, for obvious reasons not included in its composition. They planned to lure the people of your category to read the first two parts of the book. Alas, a serious problem of writing style has emerged, so I quit and forgot everything. Because of the loneliness, I decided to edit the old fragment, I spent a month on the poor seven pages of the Word 11th font, I wanted to give the old presentation the right style. I wanted to correct: the construction of sentences, the choice of words, to give a clear and stable semantic thread. And the second time, alas, the old problem remained with me. Instead of seven stanitsas it became 41, in three episodes came up with the rest. Therefore, I called it version 1.2. Maybe if I meet someone, it will become my meaning, and I will even then, if I have free time, correct this already laid out text to version 2.0, and then the book itself.
    And before that time, you just have to dream, basically all the perversions listed in the text are not mine, but your view of relationships, just reworked by my imagination, although I really like dragons, and I am sure these mythical, non-existent creatures have saved many from violence including from my side.

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  • July 27, 2015 4:28

    I understand you) Sometimes, the plot is so exciting that you constantly come back to it and change something. You know, I read to the middle. I like dragons too.
    But just did not have enough time to read to the end. But I saved to favorites - at leisure I will finish reading) Although for my taste you are too keen on pornography)))) Yes, I understand what you wrote for ST. But here long stories are not appreciated. But you could have a good fantasy, provided you reduce the number of perversions or write them somehow more streamlined. In any case, your work closely within the framework of ST.

    Another tip is to loosen the text. He goes with you in a continuous stream. This is very inconvenient to read. It is necessary to break paragraphs into shorter ones and add dialogs. And further. Do not link creativity with your personal life) You need to write, not because someone loves you or does not love you, but because you can do it.

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  • July 27, 2015 11:10

    Wonderful advice, and most importantly - the right. I read your stories, I liked them very much, even I confess that I tried to apply your writing style here.

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  • July 27, 2015 11:17

    You know, do not try to "apply" my style! Look for your own! Especially since you have it. Any text is good when the author writes in his own way.

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  • July 27, 2015 0:25

    Not mastered, not mine. Fantasy of course must be developed to write about sex dragons. I still remember Pavel Shumil in this field was noted in his Word about dragons.

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  • July 27, 2015 1:26

    This text is a mix of different episodes and different ways of relationships with a minimum storyline. True, explanations in some places are redundant. In other words, if you did not like the fact that at the beginning, you can skip and look further. And then there are wyverns and demons. In addition to traditional, there are homosexual, lesbian and completely perverted relationships. All for your pleasure.

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  • Super puper (a guest)
    July 27, 2015 0:53

    Dragons - a booth of people? Lizard your ass for such a fantasy. Women's human must be fucked @ minotaur!

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  • July 27, 2015 1:38

    The stsuko Minotaur threw off the hoof and ran off barefoot, only the juvenile dragon remained with it, and this human wanted it, wanted it so ...

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  • July 28, 2015 6:35

    Author. I put the maximum only for the volume, it's cool. But the text on page 20 has already started zadalbyvat, know the measure develop history. But in general, all gut. Keep going

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  • July 28, 2015 9:50

    24 pp. Where on each (except the first) description fucking. Of course, it starts to bother, in these cases I advise you to stop reading and continue, say, the next day, or maybe later, until the effect returns. And on account of the continuation, it has been around for a long time, it’s about 120 thousand words, only the subject is different, almost without a crush.

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  • Kappa (a guest)
    July 28, 2015 23:14

    Interesting discussion) The author, as you yourself think, is it worth reading?))) Or maybe it was necessary to post version 1.1 first?)

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  • July 29, 2015 8:41

    The first version is erotic, more descriptions of feelings, less mechanics of relationships, I will not post it. This is not popular here, as I understood most like mechanics, and from the senses - humiliation and submission. And the more exotic it is, the better. It would be better to break this text and lay out in parts.

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  • adgadg (a guest)
    July 29, 2015 10:08

    Correctly advised.
    1. More conversations, less solid text.
    2. Spread out here in parts of pages 5-6 maximum.
    3. A very important point: so that the viewer / reader does not get bored, you need to get rid of the monotony of the story. Example: a description of a scene, if it is long, can be diluted with a flashback or a description of what is happening at the same time in another place. You have met this, but very rarely on such a large text.
    4. This is purely subjective: it is necessary to concentrate a little more on what the characters think and what they feel, even though this is a porn site, in fact, the picture is more vividly felt when you know what emotions heroes experience in details, and not just where and how much they stuck.

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  • adgadg (a guest)
    July 29, 2015 10:22

    By the way, in general, it is very good for the fantasy category. I put a high mark.

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  • July 29, 2015 12:08

    Wonderful advice, just waiting for such clarifications and be sure to consider if I decide to redo or create a new one. More such comments.
    To add to the text of the dialogues, thoughts and feelings of the characters, they need to be worked out, creating a model of character and additional clarifications - and this is an additional amount of text and time spent. Diversity, (so that the reader does not get tired) was also sacrificed. The text turned out to be so huge and this is only a narration of intercourse with a scanty plot, if you add all the listed tips, the text will take the format of the book, and to it already quite different high demands of readers. Therefore, I stopped editing the text and laid it out as it is.

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  • July 30, 2015 11:49

    Honestly, read this as "In the animal world" with Drozdov watch! Another would about tying dogs wrote!

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  • August 2, 2015 0:47

    Well, what to say? I read the first pages, and I didn’t have enough strength for more, I will read parts later)))) I took the image of the heroes and interested them, so I’m putting 10 ideas for the originality, but for the story itself, if you please 3)))))

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  • August 3, 2015 11:49

    Nuuuuu what to answer? Also I do not master many texts. Recently, the majority of libido is limited, strictly tied to certain points (anal sex, obedience, humiliation) and if this is not in the text (at the beginning of the text), then that is unreadable. It is good for beginning authors to calculate, the whole story revolves around their favorite moments. It is a pity that traditional relationships are becoming a thing of the past, to be bisexual - in some segments of the population has become a sign of modernity, which means that soon there will be a race of other sheep who have no opinion, but there is a desire to be modern. Many will disagree, but frankly speaking, you don't care, as well as those who agree with me - this view is only one of many possible.

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  • August 3, 2015 11:50

    This is the last comment from me, there’s no point in discussing anything further.

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  • November 23, 2015 17:59

    Hey. The first time I read like. And the attempt to read it for the first time remained on 1 page.But I returned to him after a couple of months, tried to understand how these animals had tails and spikes for me, but if you go on sensations, then there is no difference with human pleasures and really read in 2 visits - 2 days. Thank!!!

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