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spray sticky sperm. Without losing time and not letting Ignat go to his senses, she got up on a bench to his full height and literally jumped on him, clasping her legs again. Once again, having lost his balance, not even so much because of the suddenness of the jump, but because of general fatigue, he backed away, eventually having his back to the locker. Randomly fumbling over his leg, Yana leaned her heel on the door handle. Support! Having readily planted on a long member, my wife now became a rapist herself, rising and falling faster and faster, and Ignat could only hesitantly hold her buttocks. Buttocks hiding the very hole that he could not conquer.
With Ignat, she wanted to do the same as with the red one, that is, to jump off before the orgasm itself, but as soon as Yana got ready to withdraw from the already beginning to pulsate member, the tattooed arm threw the narrow back of this sly woman, and put her palm its even lower. The second hand crept under her foot, which was resting on the door of the locker, and clutched tightly to her buttock, in order not to let her jump off. He finished in it, with each reduction squirting a new and new portion of sperm deep into the pussy. By some miracle, she still managed to free herself, she sank to her feet right in front of him, and the head at the level of her solar plexus fired two more volleys: on the neck and on the chest.
She looked at laughing Ignat, only thanks to the locker who remained on his feet accusing and viciously. Having widely spread her legs and having put her hands to her sides, she watched as the male who had lost all his strength, laid out one hundred percent, slowly settled down on the floor. In the meantime, thick sperm actively flowed out of her roughly riveted hole, either dripping onto the floor or flowing down the inside of both thighs.
I looked out the window and just fucked. One small, fragile, but very lustful slut literally took and raped to the loss of all the forces of two strong young guys. She stood like a gladiator in the arena, having just won an unequal fight, wounded, but still victorious. All in semen, with disheveled hair, a mass of traces of coarse slaps and blows, with new bruises, with a broken-down hole, breathing heavily ... My little champion.
Yana slowly, shaking her ass covered with drips of sperm, approached the redhead who had time to sit down. Putting her graceful leg in his chest, she again knocked him back. Has come the knee on a hip. Bent over him and took the tablet. Sitting pussy on his already fallen cock, she quickly ran her finger across the screen. Removed the video. Ai Yana, ah well done, but with whom with whom, and with you I would gladly go not only to reconnaissance, but also to storm to the teeth an armed enemy fortress. Together.
Throwing a tablet on his chest red, my lioness decided to take a shower. Without departing from the ticket office - I thought. While she carefully washed herself off with cum, rinsed her hair, dug the handle in her pussy, scooping out all the excess, the whole trio talked about something fun. Ignat, imperceptibly for Yana, wiped his cock with her towel, handed it to the redhead, and he did the same. Here are bastards! We didn’t win in a fair battle, so we decided to spoil it at least quietly.
My wife turned off the shower, took a carefully stretched towel and was already beginning to wrap himself in it, as the redhead suddenly suggested something to her. She thought for a moment, biting her lower lip sexually again, then answered briefly and stood at one of the lockers. Still naked. What did they conceive this time?
She turned her backside to the guys, leaned against the cabinet, gracefully arched her back and stuck out her beautiful, hot, strongly reddened butt ass, in all details exposing a well-worked, exhausted, tired, slightly parted hole. Redhead took the tablet and took a photo. Wow! For all the time of our relationship, I have repeatedly asked Yana for an erotic shooting.But she was always adamant. And now two guys, whom she barely knows, easily conquered her for it! And what if I also want to always have with me some pictures of my wife in hot poses, if she is not around?
Ignat went up to Yana, who was still standing on the ass, grabbed her buttock and showed his thumb on the camera. Redhead clicked. In the next photo, the pussy was captured already in close-up. With four fingers Ignat, pushed all the way.
Yana finally turned into a towel, and I realized that the presentation was over. Unfortunately. Stop! Unfortunately? Do I really start to like it?
I slowly climbed off the log that had rescued me and slowly slid back to the bedspread left on the beach. Having walked around the dressing room, I took a quick look at the entrance, and my heart plummeted into my heels. Right at the entrance stood and smoked Lech, Murat and another one of their company, like Kohl. Jan is now coming to them! We must somehow get them out of here!
- Great, guys! Listen, Lech, we never drank an acquaintance, and this ...
I did not have time to agree. The dressing room door opened, and from there, talking and laughing merrily, the whole trio came out with my wife hastily wrapped in a towel in the middle. Hugging.
Repin's picture - did not wait. Colorful picture, emotional. And the final touch - a drop of sperm drained from the pussy quickly ran down the thigh, losing somewhere around the ankle.
Yana blushed, and the rest, five men, stared at me in surprise. I just shrugged, say, such things, guys. Well, what else could I say? A tired young girl, flushed from sex, goes out in one towel from the men's locker room, in an embrace with two guys. Even Stirlitz, and he would not otpdeldel.
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“Yeah, it turned out awkwardly ...” she released a little pipe from her slightly wet lips from white Russian Jan. - And what will people think?
- What they think, I think, is already clear. - Auburn, who later introduced himself as Anton, thoughtfully turned his cocktail in his hands. - Nymphomaniac. Slutty Swinger Seksvayf. In the yard of the 15th year, only the wild natives did not hear about swingers. You know, Vadim, I envy you. Fair. I saw a lot of different sluts at this resort, but I haven’t had such a fucking job yet.
- Oh yeah. - Ignat dragged a cigarette. - Just a monster sex. I do not know about you, Anton, but I already thought that I would die right there during an orgasm. Just do not understand why it was necessary to bite, eh, Yang?
- And you yourself first started. Or do you think that you can beat me, drag me by the hair, whip me in every place, but I will not resist?
- Two words. Rebellious filly. - Anton uttered, and we all laughed.
“Eh,” he continued. - It is a pity that you did not break the ass. Why did you suddenly start to fight for her?
- You see ... - Yana lit a cigarette, made a picture of smoke from her mouth. - Anal is a kind of humiliation. Even rather complete, total submission. Well, for me personally.
- In short, you're just afraid.
- So! I'm nothing. Not. I'm afraid. But just because my ass will not give up. To get it, I have to subjugate completely. And as you have already understood, boys, it will be soooo easy to do this.
“You understand that you can hardly keep her inaccessibility until the end of our rest, Yang?” - I put in my five kopecks.
- We'll see ... - Yana put out a cigarette. - So far, no one has succeeded. There is a worthy candidate, so be it, I will give him my anal virginity ... But so far this has not been found.
- Yes? What about Omar?
“Well ...” a haughty and confident glance suddenly became somehow confused and dreamy. - He had a chance. But for some reason he did not use them. Do you guys know anything about such a tall, broad-shouldered Arab? Lobster name is. In Russian, no boom boom, and English is not very. BUT?
The guys looked at each other and shook their heads in unison. So! And why is she so interested in this ambalom? Was she not joking about revenge? But what she hopes for, he will tear it again like a rag! Or maybe Yana wants this? Maybe she still likes being completely subjugated?
- And the pictures have nothing like that ... - Anton got into his tablet again. - Eh, sorry this shrew video has deleted.Such a hot porn would turn out.
“Hey, Janka, do you have to subordinate you to porn too?” How about anal sex? - Ignat was laughing. Yana kicked him with his leg under the table. He continued to smile, but his gaze was noticeably colder.
- Well, what will you do? Do you blow my pussy again? Do you have the courage to do it a second time? - boldly she narrowed her eyes. “All right, boys.” It was nice to sit, but my friend and I had to go. 2 nights already, and I pretty podnazhralas. Come on, honey.
- Wait, wait. How about the last photo? You said in the dressing room that you liked being photographed naked.
- Guys, we really have to go ... - I started it, but I stopped in mid-sentence.
- So there is a dressing room ... - Yana objected.
- But you. Nothing. Not. You are afraid. - Ignat teased her.
I thought my wife would laugh, offensively make fun of them. Or just angry will send to hell, with his trademark steel note in his voice.
Yana turned with her whole body to Anton, sharply lifted up her topic, exposing with readiness the beautiful young breasts that sprang up and elastically twitched up and down, boldly and smiled broadly and winked at the camera. Damn, Yana, the people are darkness! Open cafe on the beach! Yes, and he still directly takes off his face! Darling, what is going on with you?
A few of the men who were sitting at the nearest tables, laughing, applauded. Someone hung loudly. One woman covered her eyes with her palm, apparently to her husband. Reveling in universal attention, Yana abruptly crouched in the distant likeness of a curtsy, which made her young breasts waving in excitement once more. One young guy, sitting in a remote corner and digging into his phone before, also managed to take a photo, when Yana, under a disappointed discordant hum, slowly lowered the topic, straightening it in a slender lustful little body. Then she gracefully leaned over the table, looking at the resulting photos. Apparently, being satisfied with them, she smacked Anton on the cheek and, turning on her heels, followed to the exit. I quickly went after her.
- Yana! He’s right on your face ...
- Oh, calm down, little pigs! How boring you are. Maybe I do not mind that he admired me after this rest.
- You understand that he has a lot of similar girls there. You'll just be one of those sluts he fucked.
- Yes, in the tablet, maybe. But in his evil head he will always understand that I am the best. Best of all he fucked. Number one.
To be continued...
Chic story. Let's produce people)
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A few words from the author.
Since I am writing this story not for one, but for a couple with my girlfriend, we often have fierce disputes not only about the plot, but also the style of the story as a whole. Does the story need so much mate, or is it not enough? What attention should be paid to the dialogues or inner experiences of the main character?
However, the plot is the hottest battle. I try to lead him smoothly, to pay more attention to details, to preserve as much chastity as possible for the heroine. My co-author, on the contrary, insists on the rapid development of events and the maximum exacerbation of situations. For example, if I didn’t intervene at the right moment, Yana would never run away from that four in the sea. I also want Omar back on the key role of the main alpha male, and she wants to increase the number of promiscuous sex relationships.
To increase the eroticism of the story, we had to sacrifice the lion’s share of realism, namely the use of contraception and the banal incompatibility of the sizes of the genitals of the characters. And the truth is, who will be interested to read about bland sex in a condom without any risk and danger? So ... Dear readers! Let's just take Jan as an incredibly lucky girl who, during these four days, was lucky enough to either fly or pick up any nastiness, or, moreover, injure her genitals.In the end, in the real world this happens too, right? =)
Why am I writing all this? The characters of our story, as if animated, themselves dictate to us, the writers, their desires. Yana, for example, being a special narcissist and bitchy, will no longer allow her husband to subjugate herself. And Vadik, gradually turning into a kukolda, is unable to spur a wayward wife. This fact, superimposed on frequent disputes over the plot, generates certain difficulties with the writing of subsequent chapters. Even despite a lot of ideas. Therefore, I would like to ask the reader to share with us his opinion, his views on this topic. Even the most aggressive critics will be gratefully accepted and thoughtfully considered by us.
And thank you, reader! Thanks for the kind words and support. We, as beginner writers, are doubly pleased!
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Your story hooked precisely by the fact that Yana does not obey her lovers, but subordinates them, doing what she considers necessary, without submitting to anyone. This is the main highlight of your story (for me personally). Accordingly, if you reduce the role of a husband to a kukolda, it will be commonplace, because this was already in dozens of stories written earlier. Besides, to be honest, I would like a happy ending, that in stories of such, ahem, the genre is incredible rarity. If you take into account my wishes - thank you very much! :)
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You are good at it, so write how to spell. There is no scene in the sea and you don’t need it, if you want such a scene, then so be it. Feelings, details and everything else is good in moderation. And do not need any realism. Everyone understands that this is a fictional story, not a documentary.
We look forward to production.
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Well, look, show the details of the game Mortal-Battalion is not great. Rushing is also not worth it. Take a hit on the psychological game.
Highly recommend “George massage” or “Cuckold. Three weeks". There was no mass fucking, there was a cunning game.
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It is strange that in your tandem it is the girl who wants the most rapid and sharp development of the plot, but you are not. Usually the opposite happens, men need action. If you bring the story closer to reality, then I don’t think that the main character, having just pierced on Omar, would immediately have gone all bad. But, given the peculiarities of the genre, it was nevertheless worthwhile to show her doubts and letting go of the reins after long persuasion by her husband and a gradual retreat under the influence of circumstances. Women never twist right through. They always sausage from one extreme to another and feelings do not allow to think logically. And even the "woman with eggs" in life is not always and in all. Often in sex they like the opposite role. But here, as the character was prescribed, it was prescribed.
As for the narrative in general, everything is great, but it was not worth paying so much attention to the description of acrobatic etudes. We are not a fighter, but a porn story))) Better pay a little more attention to the psychological component. Anyway, we are waiting for the continuation.
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About the author, say, at least approximately, by what time to wait for the continuation?
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As for - “neither pick up any nastiness, nor, especially, injure your genitals” - I fully agree with the author. Why unnecessary problems that in real life can ruin everything. That's why he is an artistic story. But “fly into the air” is within the framework of the chosen genre. And spouses, in general, should be mentally prepared for such a turn. This is at the discretion of the author. But, if “this” suddenly happens, then no abortions :)
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The story is amazing! Thank you and your girlfriend. But it is a pity that you did not obey her in that episode with 4 guys in the water. Very sorry. And in general, your girl’s preferences are much more interesting, sorry.And the cons of the story is the rotten appeal of the guys with Yana, all these violent actions with her during sex: slap in the face and all that. It would be much more interesting to break it through active sexual actions, caresses and the like. And a huge member of Omar. Well, my well, I'm sick of it already, really. All these bastards with giant members. And honestly, I don’t want Omar to return to the story at all.
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The continuation generally went the other way compared to part 1, part 2 did not like
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The second part is much better than the first. These two-meter thugs alpha males with huge members, dominating his wife, already utterly got. In general, for a change, do not write a story about awesomely beautiful wife and her two-meter handsome husband with a hefty member? Where the wife will have sex with a low hlyupikoobraznym partner fearing her formidable husband.
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You are very good at writing, I personally liked it, the plot is entirely in the classics of the genre. I will wait for the continuation. Of the promising plots on English-language resources, rather long stories are being developed, of course, I would like your story to not fade away in the most interesting place, as it often happens on this resource, but as for the continuation, I still like the ideas of your co-author, do not stop the heroine, increase the share of eroticism, it is possible one day to give the heroine still to fall into the hands of those four (or five), sharpen the plot, sex in a disco bar, sex in the sea, sex on a pleasure yacht, yes, anywhere, with different E partners, all of it is good enough you on my mind turns to describe. As for the mat, in my opinion it is not necessary to overdo it. You are very good at describing the reaction to the heroine in public places, on her sexy look, I would like in the continuation that the heroine still began to appear top forest. And finally, I still wanted my husband not to turn into a finished kukold, about which Males like Omar wipe their feet, it would be better in the plot to expose this couple perhaps by anyone of their friends and everyone will understand that they are husband and wife.
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So, is it still to continue?
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Perhaps, I have not read such high-quality and exciting stories here for a very long time. I want to continue, but no less I want that the sharpness that makes the first two parts terribly attractive did not leave him.
If you are interested in opinions, then I will express my own. Glow up the situation around this pair. The more excited, angry, wanting to fuck the wife of the protagonist of men, the better. The more often the situation gets out of their control, the better. In this regard, the moment with the four men in the sea is absolutely the best in this part. I hope that you dedicate the whole part to them - group sex is a topic where you can turn around freely.
Why in the end not to feel the quintessence of this lust, not to demonstrate how the main characters themselves have been driven into a trap from which they can’t wriggle out?
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Loved your story, looking forward to continue. Finally, adequate people appeared on the forum who can both write history properly and describe sex excitingly.
I was very sorry when Yana managed to get away from the four in the sea. She behaved perversely, and I would like to see how she paid for it. It was not very realistic that her 4 excited, thrown men just let her go.
And I would not want the relationship between the heroes to become a slut wife and a lowered kukolda. I do not understand why the man must be omitted. And the whore's wife is quite possible)) There are the same swingers, where the wives change, and the husband does not crawl on their knees in front of them.
Hunting to see how Yana becomes more depraved and free, how she can easily have sex in public places (beach, park, toilet, balcony, in front of windows, etc.)
You can make an interesting sketch, as the husband simply returns to the room and sees how Yana, pressed to the window, someone is fucking.
Of course, I can not wait, when Yana is still divorced for anal sex. And I even want it to be Omar, who will thoroughly stretch her ass. After that, it will be easier to serve 4-6 people at a time.
Yes, and I would like to see a lesbian.
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The second part was reduced to a faceless, or rather even humiliating (due to the fact that the males are much younger, weaker and more infantile) a triple ... But since the author promised to continue with Omar dominating even more, and judging by the moments of Yana's sadness her lover Arab , we wait with the wife further continuation in the spirit of the beginning of the saga.))
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The story is really one of the best.
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When will the continuation?
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Sorry for not letting go on for so long. It’s just that for quite a long time we had a kind of creative crisis, the story was written very tightly. But now everything is fine, and soon we will publish the third part =)
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Good afternoon!
To be honest, the first part turned out better. The second is more superficial and schematic, which does not allow to “plunge” into the narration, having sacrificed realism, did not win in eroticism. Density of aggregations per page does not add interest. I believe that the “drive” the plot is not worth it, it is better to work the scenes more carefully, paying more attention to the characters and emotions of the characters. Yana turned out not to be an emotional one that broke from the chain, but the motives of her “rabies” are undisclosed. IMHO there would not mix flashbacks, memories of episodes from life before the trip, would be a contrast ..
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Yeah, but that's still not published.
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Dear author, so when will you still wait for the continuation, I would like to know, are you planning to finish it in this part or is this another part of the story?
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Great story, first and second, but ... what I liked more in the first part is the wife’s inaccessibility which was later broken, and in the second part she’s not so much impregnable, she’s kind of broken already, I didn’t like it fair. I would prefer if my wife still built herself “non-giving”, but nevertheless would change her every time with the same Omar, but more and more shameless images.
In the second part, she is already frankly a whore and makes this understand her husband, I personally like when she does not behave like a whore, but at certain moments she would give up the brakes, in random and not planned. My opinion.
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A chic story, the author why not write to continue!
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Good story!
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Author, if all the same sometimes you go to this site, please answer, so whether it will still be a continuation.
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