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like a seed, settled in the abdominal area and with each note grew and expanded, filling itself with her in an instant the body became pliable and obedient. And the body itself resonated in unison with the growth of the voice inside, vibrated to the meditative music outside ... Suddenly a lump separated from him, and Sally saw herself from the side - standing just a couple of steps from the vocalist, touching the stage ... raised her head - or what could she have raised? - and saw what his voice looks like ...

... A funnel, like a whirlpool, just not swirling around and frightening in its speed, but slowly, like a slow-moving vinyl record. The girl was standing on the very edge of this funnel, waves-grooves were running under her; it turned into a needle, which, scratching the surface, glides over it and plays music itself, and at the same time it-the person stood and looked into the very back of the whirlpool. Here, at first, a dazzling white appeared on the neckline, casting the blue tip of the dagger, into which some pale streets with sleepy houses stretched out - but this is the Sunset Strip! “... then the dagger crumbled into pieces with the dazzling brilliance of a gold mine, in which the girl looked from above ... In her eyes, gold began to blur in a sunny lake against which a red-eyed lead snake was floating ... No, it was a serpent Sally saw his excited royal penis, swaying from side to side to the beat of the curves of the whole body. Some people began to appear next to the serpent - a teenager with sad eyes, a beautiful young girl about his age ... a middle-aged woman with a noble aristocratic face (Sally had never seen aristocrats in her life, but for some reason was sure that so they look). Some strange warmth emanated from them, so Sally desperately wanted to go there, to them, to that funnel. But at this time, the serpent turned to her so that she saw his invitingly dangling body right in front of her face, and turning into his own member, he said: "I want to ...". The head of a member has finished the phrase - “fuck you r mo uth ...”

But this was not some abstract desire. The order sounded clearly in that voice. And who was Sally to disobey him? ... The girl saw how she herself obediently stretched face to proudly protruding dignity ... how she opened her little mouth ... and now the triumphant phallus itself touched her lips ... tongue. .. palate ... The girl was just a little - squeeze it with his lips ...

The member pulsated warmly in her mouth, vividly responding to every touch and caress. He filled all the space in front of her and inside her. Sally with pleasure squeezed the head with her lips, tickled her and licked. Then brisk tongue took up the trunk. The girl tried to deliver the member maximum pleasure. And the penis clearly liked her efforts - Sally very soon felt how he began to moisten.

And around the music sounded triumphant. Music greeted her head and mouth, sang every movement of her tongue on the head ... on the trunk ... back and forth ... more and more ...

***

Something in Morrison's voice made Ray tear his head away from the keys and, with an effort of pulling consciousness out of the stream, carefully look at him. At first it was a change of tonality - Jim did not sing his mantras in a monotonous voice, but read poems, without departing from a given rhythm, automatically performed by musicians who did not understand anything. The next second, the keyboardist realized that the vocalist was reading:

The killer awoke before dawn.

He put a boots on,

He took a face from the ancient gallery

And he walked on down the hall ...

Ray did not remember these verses. And even could not vouch for the fact that Jim does not compose them on the go. He looked at Robbie, then at John — they also looked at each other, puzzled. Krieger began to play quieter, but it seemed that Morrison did not care:

He went to the room where he lived

Heed to visit his brother

He walked on down the hall! ..

From the voice, the keyboard player realized that now something would happen that had a premonition that did not let him go through the whole song, and a quick fling of glances with the others only strengthened him in that confidence. The musicians began to play more nervously. No one dared to interrupt the song - it was impossible to do. In secret, Ray hoped that maybe Jim himself, hearing the desperate signals given to him through music, would come to his senses ... maybe he would stop at the very edge where he himself fell, inevitably and fatally, intoxicated with his inevitability and fatality, and carried away the rest ...

But, damn it, how beautiful this fall was in the inevitability that they themselves created!

And he came to the door,

And he look inside ...

Somewhere in Manzarek's subconscious, a feeling began to be born that this was no longer just a song, but a settling of accounts, some kind of very personal and important conversation for Morrison ... with whom?

“Father? "-" Yes, son. "

"I want to kill you."

"Mother ... I want to ..."

And, suddenly opening his eyes and staring at one point, Jim suddenly cried out - as if he had spat out a hated, purulent phlegm that had been hovering inside for a long time:

"... f uck you, motheeer!"

Ray saw a wave of horror sweep through the hall. Listeners involuntarily recoiled from the scene. Yes, and his very heart collapsed down. He could not look away from Morrison, could not look at the other musicians - and without this, he understood that they were overwhelmed by similar feelings. And he saw something else ... -

... as one of the girls standing near the scene - short, pretty, fair-haired - reached for Jim ... as she unzipped his worn and patched leather pants more than once ... Further from the musician was already shielded. Tried to drag the girl away or not, Manzarek didn’t care: looking at the exit from the stage by chance, he noticed Elmore Valentine, one of the club’s owners, who were waiting for them. Well, that should have been expected. It really was the "end" ...

And Jim - either shouted, vyhripival in a microphone incoherent set of words, or imitated the sounds of pleasure from the rolling orgasm, or really experienced an orgasm ... Ray was no longer aware of what was happening on the stage, but only convulsively, nervously displayed on the organ his party, intuitively understanding that only delaying the song saves them now from inevitable reprisal behind the scenes.

The real turmoil reigned in the club, so no one paid attention, as if from a hall, a pale beautiful middle-aged woman with a noble aristocratic face slowly reeled out; how she leaned in helplessness against the carefree dark green mirror wall of the club; how did the driver jump to her question “Is it bad for you, Mrs. Morrison?”

Five minutes later, Sally appeared disheveled, disheveled, with a wandering otherworldly gaze and a strange smile on her face. She took several uncertain steps, leaned over the parapet, and vomited something white ...

Los Angeles. August 22, 1966.

- Whore!

The biting slap burned and stunned the girl, throwing her back on the old battered sofa. She didn’t even cry out, just holding on to her slowly turning purple cheek, looked at David standing over her and answering her with a hateful look.

- Well, you bitch, Sally!

The girl was silent. And what could she say in response?

- Why did not you call? She finally asked quietly. - I was waiting for you ... We could go together. This could not be ...

- What?! - David did not believe his ears. - And I'm still to blame for the fact that you sucked that bastard?

He swung. Sally tucked her legs and covered her head with her hands, waiting for the blow, but instead there was the sound of broken glass. She took her hands off. Her small wall mirror was lying on the floor, some knickknacks swept away by David's hand, falling nearby. Some crashed.

The girl wanted to ask him to stop, otherwise her child would wake up, but instead she just sat and watched the cozy room turn into a devastated paradise before her eyes. Usually calm, good-natured, David shouted some curses in an unrecognizable voice, but she didn’t hear them: suddenly her eyes clouded again, and it seemed to her that yesterday’s funnel was spinning around her room, sucking in all the space around. ..

And Sally has not forgotten the taste of the penis, which appeared to her yesterday from this very funnel ...

The guy froze in half-turn with his fist brought in for the next strike: the girl slipped off the couch and crawled to her on her broken glass to her, pushing the scattered things.

- You ... what are you doing?! ..

Sally did not answer, but only crawled up - closer, closer ... David became frightened. He backed away to the front door, leaned on her and, shouting at the end, "You, fool !!!" promptly rushed out onto the street.

The funnel suddenly disappeared, falling into the open abyss. Sally remained on her knees, mindlessly looking at the one who had closed behind the guy - the former? - a door.

Her baby cried from behind — soft at first. Then - louder.

The girl did not hear anything.

The epilogue of the author (“voice over”).

That evening, the group was really kicked out of the club with a “wolf ticket”, as Ray Manzarek was afraid of. But the musicians were incredibly lucky: literally two days before that, they had signed a very lucrative contract with the recording company Elektra. For the company itself, which previously worked exclusively with jazz musicians, this was a novelty. Therefore, that evening, its director, Jack Holtzman, attended the concert along with producer Paul Rothschild, whom he urged to work with a new group. And, impressed by the performance, they immediately offered the musicians to begin work on recording the first album. They agreed.

And after five months, the first album with a simple, even modest title “The Doors” was released. And he created such a sensation that even the Beatles group ordered four copies of this record for themselves - according to the number of its members.

The last song of this album was “The end”. Everyone who worked on her recording in the studio, remember this as one of the most vivid moments in life. True, in the final version, the song was slightly softened, replacing Morrison’s obscene shout with his inarticulate growl and the rolling rumble of Densmore’s drums.

Since 2003, the song has occupied the 328th place in the list of “500 best songs of all time” according to the version of Rolling Stone magazine. And this is a fact.

22 comments
  • January 12, 2015 23:49

    Strong))))

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  • January 13, 2015 0:18

    Thank:).

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  • January 13, 2015 0:38

    I know English badly, so I had to translate via the Internet translator. Of course, the Non-commentator is right, very strongly, for my perception even probably too :) I read it over, even sometimes I had to read several times. It is written so strongly that, in my opinion, such a parameter of the assessment of the story “as ease of reading” has suffered a little, and perhaps all my ignorance of English. I think the atmosphere is simply superb, as if you were at that concert.
    Of course, I set you 10. You are a great master of verbal images, to which many of us are far away. The story is more likely for the elite, forum parties, and not for a wide range of viewers ST,

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  • January 13, 2015 0:50

    Anabel, thank you very much for your attention and appreciation. You know, I had the option to write not the English version of the song, but a poetic translation (I translated this song). But, on reflection, I refused it: firstly, it seemed to me weak and very inaccurate, and, secondly, it would violate, in my opinion, the atmosphere. Therefore, I decided to dwell on the original language. In the end, you can really use the online translator))).
    And you again filled me up with compliments :). Nice - but terribly awkward.
    But still, I hope that maybe someone from a wide circle of readers will find something in this story for themselves ...

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  • January 13, 2015 1:05

    You conquered me, great !!

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  • January 13, 2015 1:12

    Thank you :). Very nice to read this.

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  • January 13, 2015 8:28

    sumptuously! see the essence through the rags of words. the author is in unison with the characters, especially the description of the paintings of a hallucinogenic character.do you smoke? you are smarty !!! beautiful, easy and exciting! shatter like this shining white dagger !! applause, flowers and drugs in the studio !!! ten

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  • January 13, 2015 19:29

    Snezhana, do not overdo it, it can be regarded as drug propaganda.

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  • January 13, 2015 20:03

    Snezhana, thanks for the rating and compliments. Very touched, very grateful. I admit honestly - never smoked anything and did not use. And I do not advise :) (and I think Sally would also share this my opinion in the end :)). But under the image of hallucinations - a very serious medical and psychological basis: before starting to describe them, I specifically worked a lot of material about the nature and sequence of visions caused by the use of LSD. And only then my ideas about what my heroine could see while listening to this song under the influence of the drug entered into the business. And in fact she saw the content of the song through her images.

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  • January 13, 2015 10:41 PM

    Yes, I'm joking as always ... but I really liked it. I have not read this for a long time. Pelevin and glory with not count))) keep it up !!!

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  • January 13, 2015 19:41

    Very serious work, Sergey. Above this need a long time to work.
    But, let's be realists, our guests will not guide their tens, like us. If one of them tried to read, then he threw it at halfway. But in vain, this is rarely the case.

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  • January 13, 2015 20:16

    Yevgeny, thank you very much for the assessment and comment - it is very valuable to me. Of course, I do not create any illusions about the high rating of this story. But he was written and not for ratings. I lived with this story for six months. And I wrote it for two months - when I finally realized what and how I want to say. And with the image of Morrison, I live for twenty years. And this image once had to reach its critical mass and pour into something. Well, and in what he poured out - from the more visible :).

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  • January 13, 2015 21:36

    Well, colleague, please accept my review.

    A good, stylishly written thing, with the filling of its own authorial taste. Descriptions are bright and heartfelt, easy to read with the receipt of emotions ... Excellent, indisputable.

    I do not know why there are so few ratings ...

    +10!

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  • January 13, 2015 21:45

    Thank you so much for such a review. It is honorable and pleasant to be your colleague.

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  • January 27, 2015 12:21

    Congratulations on the restoration of the full version.
    And my comments on it here:

    https://eroticspace.info/forum/threads/367/page-11

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  • January 27, 2015 12:22

    [QUOTE = "Anfisa_T, post: 35651, member: 18651"]

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  • January 27, 2015 19:18

    Seen, read - and grateful.

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  • February 6, 2015 9:58

    10+!!!
    Finally got to the story of Sergei! Stories about the Dors should be read to their music. But which one? Seeing: “The End”, strained Yandex: “doors the end to listen”. In the very first line there were songs with a triangle: “play”, having pressed it continued an exciting reading. It is interesting that when Morrison screamed in my ear, some lines appeared before my eyes:
    And he came to the door,

    And he look inside ...

    And about the phase of which San Kil Yu and about Maze which the same San Fak Yu)))

    I was very impressed that I was in that year and listened to this concert.
    But even without music, I'm sure Sergei managed to convey the atmosphere of those years and that music.

    Very serious work! Not only worthy of this site!

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  • February 17, 2015 22:04

    Yura, I'm sorry, just now got around to respond to your comment. I did not even think, to be honest, that you would read this story with a “Dorsovsky” song, although, in order to immerse myself in The End, I scrolled it more than a dozen times in a month (just like Love 1967 of the year). Maybe this, among other things, helped me to write what I wrote. And I am very pleased that I was able to impress you with this story so much that you appreciated him so highly. Thank u

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  • February 17, 2015 22:53

    Well, I really shouldn't have apologized! I know very well how you do with time.

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  • February 16, 2015 20:27

    Well, I got to the story and thank God found in the full version :)
    Sergei, everything has been said to me, but I will emphasize the incredible authenticity of Sally’s visions. Great!

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  • February 17, 2015 21:58

    This, Julie, was the most difficult in the whole story. And I am very glad that I coped with this task. Thank you for your rating and comment. And I am very glad that you finally managed to reach him :).

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