“Release her and go,” said one of the orcs.
The second approached Arwen and set her free. (eroticspace) He grabbed her hair, approached her ear and whispered in a low, rough voice:
“You have the great honor of seeing the great dark lord Sauron himself.” Come on!
He pushed Arwen and they led her right along a dark corridor. One of the orcs roughly struck Arwen in the ass, from which she screamed. She was led into a dark room, lit only by the light of two torches.
“Ahhh, elf princess, welcome,” said a tall dark figure, “and you two, get out!” - he ordered two orcs.
- What do you want from me? I will never accept your rule, it is better to die! Shouted Arwen.
Sauron went up to Arwen and grabbed her chin.
“You know what I have dreamed of all my life,” he leaned over Arwen’s ear and continued, “fuck the elf princess.” With these words, he dug in a passionate kiss. His tongue roughly penetrated Arwen’s mouth. At first she wanted to bite him, but then she suddenly felt a surge of excitement and responded to the kiss. Sauron continued his actions. He rudely touched Arwen's chest. Her breasts were elastic and at the same time soft. He tore her dress and her eyes looked beautiful chest with pink nipples. He pressed his mouth to her nipples, he caressed them with his tongue.
From Arwen’s mouth, a low moan came, growing louder and louder. Sauron went down lower and lower until he reached the pussy. Arwen no longer resisted, but enjoyed. The Dark Lord took Arwen in his arms and carried him to the bed. He roughly threw her on the bed, spread her legs and pressed his lips to her genital slit. He caressed her tongue lips, clit. Arwen was moaning so loudly that she almost screamed.
Suddenly Sauron stood up abruptly, pulled off his cloak, under which, as it turned out, there was nothing, and threw him somewhere to the side. He took Arwen by the hair, lifted her out of bed, and put her on her knees. He poked her in his mouth with his already excited member. At first, Arwen resisted, but then gave up and took it in her mouth. Arwen gently held her tongue on the head of the penis, and then completely swallowed him. She was sucking dick and at the same time crushing his balls in her arms. Sauron was moaning, he was wildly pleased, he had never been like that before. Suddenly, he pressed Arwen's head tightly, so that her lips pressed against his pubis. Arwen felt a hot jet of sperm hit her throat. Sauron again took Arwen by the hair and dragged her onto the bed. He abruptly inserted his dick into her pussy, from which Arwen screamed. Sauron fucked her hard, and Arwen screamed:
- Yes, more, more! Sauron pressed his lips to her nipples and licked them. Arwen ran through the body cramp and she knew what was ending. Sauron accelerated the pace and also finished. They fell exhausted on the bed and Sauron said:
- Well, now you agree with my rule?
The raskazik is too short, too clumsy, a bunch of stylistic blots. BUT ... The author is a plus plus for trying.
The topic in general is almost not developed due to the fact that any attempts to write such works are also subject to the furious raid of the pushed comrades who also have the desire to write something. (Not counting the tons of yaoi about Legolas and (Insert the name of any male inhabitant of Middle-earth))
In general, 5 out of 10, but exclusively for the topic.
P. S.
And yes, it is unlikely that Sauron, even having obtained the Ring, could even fuck anyone. For the simple reason that he simply has no body. Poor thing, that's probably why he was so angry))
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Even Saruman said: "Sauron has not yet regained physical form, but his spirit has not weakened at all." YET, not found. In principle, the body he could get. If you read the book carefully, you can see it there. But he was waiting for the Ring.
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Sad story. Very pathetic attempt. It seems that cheap Russian porn movies combined with a famous fantasy novel.
Disadvantages (at least basic):
1. Briefly. Do not have time to start reading at once and everything.
2. Primitive. Trite.
3. The choice of acting characters surprised. Apparently the author is so keen on Sauron that he decided to choose the Dark Lord of Middle-earth for the role of “plumber-trakhara”.
4. Stylistically and grammatically very bad. The mere words "pussy" in a similar story looks very funny.
5. Very reminded of the banal role-playing game of an age couple. And in general, apparently, the author, to put it mildly, is “very young”.
"They fell exhausted on the bed and Sauron said:
“Well, now you agree with my dominion?” (C)
This type:
"They fell exhausted on the bed and he said:
- Did you like it, love? Maybe now we'll look at the movie? "
1 out of 10. And then, for trying to raise the theme of "The Lord of the Rings."
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"They fell exhausted on the bed and he said:
- Did you like it, love? Maybe now we'll look at the movie? "
She presented the big-bellied Sauron in family shorts and a lonely beer can. Near Arwen in curlers and a bunch of little dark lords. Mimimi How cute!
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It's good that at least someone wrote about Lord of the Rings, the idea of norms, and the factor of coercion, but why did the war have been won by the orcs? it was necessary at least in the process of writing
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Rave
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I was more surprised by the fact that I read the given story, a little two years ago.
That's the question: plagiarism? or on this site did not dare to publish?
No matter how it was there - this is not the first case where the authors are trying to create a porn version of the classic fantasy, and it’s a mess.
Try next time to create your own world, albeit a primitive one, but your own. And really, just write to the extension
Good luck.
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Detstvo, detstvo. Detstvo is laughter and joy (s)
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Well, very funny!
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