Hello! I want to introduce you to your story. Do not judge strictly! This is my first written and published story. Write in the comments what's wrong, I'll fix it. And if you like, then I will release a sequel. So let's go!

This story is about Neville Haig, a beautiful, very talented boy. Neville was a student at the British College of Mathematics. It was not difficult for him to study in him, because he is a smart guy. Once they gathered with friends in a bar, to mark the closing of the session. In this bar, he often performed, since he was a guitar player (vocalist) in a local rock band. So the bar was very familiar to him. The company that Neville was in was not very big, only 3 guys and 2 girls. After arriving at the bar, they discovered that it was packed to capacity, but through connections Neville still managed to break through the table. The place was pretty good, it was in the corner, and from which the scene was perfectly visible. While the guys settled down, he decided to go to order a beer. Turning to the bartender, and ordering 5 mugs of branded beer. He wondered where such a crowd of people came from. It turned out that today a very famous regional rock band performs in the bar. After that, he returned to the table.

The performance went very well, the audience just squealed, but Neville, as a guitarist, took a note of a couple of solos. After the performance, everyone got on quite decently and started telling stories from their colorful life. Sorry I had nothing to brag about, because my whole life was very gray (study, home, rehearsals). Only in college some rasskaras went, Neville thought. It seemed to him that nothing unusual would happen to him. After all further the same gray everyday life a family, work, the house. These thoughts decently set my mood, I just wanted to come home and go to bed. Saying goodbye to friends, taking the guitar, which he left at the bar in the last performance, he went home. Along the way, I should pour it, I began to look around and found excellent bushes. Having run into them, I began to do business, incidentally cursing my gray life. Suddenly I saw a small flash in the sky, and at the same moment I was pressed to the ground with great force.

Consciousness from such a strong blow, he lost instantly. When he woke up it was getting light The whole body ached terribly from such a strong blow. But he was able to rise. Barely standing on his feet, Neville began to look around. Everything around him was unfamiliar. Where I am? Only that thought was spinning in his head. Then he remembered that there was a guitar on his shoulder and she could break from such a strong blow. Neville flew to the case with a guitar as if stunned, opening it open, he sighed with relief. Fuh, the main thing is that the guitar is intact, otherwise my father would have nailed me. Neville thought, and indeed, the guitar cost about $ 800, for an ordinary family it was a lot of money! Zipping up the case, throwing it over his shoulder, looking around once more, Neville saw far away buildings resembling a barn. He did not want to find out how, why, and why he was here. The hangover made itself felt, and even a strong blow to the ground almost broke all the bones to it with every step it reminded of itself.

Walking about 15 minutes, Neville heard the sound of the river, his mind immediately explained. Without thinking twice, he broke into the place where the noise came from. He was so tormented by thirst that he did not notice how a strange creature, of a bluish color, flew by. When he reached the river, he began to get drunk, surprisingly, the water was crystal clear and very tasty. Divine taste, have I ever drunk such tasty water, or is all the water from a hangover so delicious? Neville laughed! Since I got drunk now I need to understand where I went. Suddenly behind my back I heard the voice of a girl. Turning to see who called me, I was stunned by what he saw. In front of me stood an absolute naked girl with a jug in her hands. She looked about 19 years old.Her young body could not help but please the eye, given the fact that before naked women I only saw pictures on the Internet! She was short in size about 165 cm. Her blond, long hair grew in the wind, and her blue eyes shone with surprise. Her breasts were covered with a jug, but I could still see them.

They were of the third size, looking very elastic and taut, and small pink nipples only gave them a frill! My eyes slid lower, her flat tummy perfectly accentuated her gorgeous figure. At that moment, my dick was already standing like a soldier at attention! Looking down even lower, I saw a neatly cropped pubis. Her legs were too close to each other, so her pussy could not be considered. And besides, shame still picked up, and I abruptly turned away and squeezed my eyes shut, expecting to get a jug on the head. Having sat like that for 20 seconds, I never got a poke, to which I was very surprised. Then I heard that the girl began to tell me something, having already forgotten that she was absolutely naked, I turned to listen to her. It is not polite to sit back to the interlocutor. Turning a bit, I saw that the jug was already on the ground, and the girl, with her small steps, was approaching me neatly.

Shame again took up, and I abruptly turned away. The girl stopped a few steps from me. I already heard clearly what they said. The language was unfamiliar to me, it was similar to the elven one, which I heard from the movies. I asked her to hide behind, while simultaneously explaining my words with gestures. English is the 3 most popular language in the world, even if she is new to him I was sure that she would still catch up with what I want from her. But in response, I heard only the same phrase. My head just boiled, for a few minutes I tried to explain to her that she was dressed, and she repeated one by one. Then I heard a whistle, and blue rays of light began to appear behind my back. I turned around, and in amazement I could not open my mouth. The girl’s arms covered a blue glow that slowly concentrated in her palms. (Erotic stories) Having gathered the shine in her palms and with a characteristic cry, the girl threw it at me. My head was spinning thoughts no longer about a naked girl, but about what the hell was going on here. After hitting the blue beam of light in my body, a slight tremor penetrated me, and I disconnected for a couple of seconds.

When I came to, I flew to my feet, but quickly fell to my knees. My whole body just burned, it feels like they threw me into a kettle of boiling water. The burning continued for about a minute after which it passed, but this minute seemed to me an eternity! Moving away from the shock, I pounced on this witch! I clutched her shoulders with my own hands and, shaking her violently, screamed that I would kill her. But then the girl said she understood me. It is not strange, and I understood her.

- What the hell's going on here? Who are you? What did you do to me? Where am I?

I screamed like mad. Questions flowed one by one, the poor girl was even confused. Before she could open her mouth, I asked the next question!

- Mmmmena name is Angelica! She said timidly and stammering with fright.

After that, I calmed down a bit and listened to her. As it turned out, I got into another world! The world in which people have magic. The world is inhabited by strange creatures that are not on earth. And the world in which clothes can be worn only by people from noble families. Clothing is a kind of symbol of noble blood and high status in society, people wearing clothes have very strong magic and enormous power. All others are required to go naked! And I need to find a way to go home. And so began the adventures of Neville in a parallel world! In a world called Northguard!

4 comments
  • anonymous (a guest)
    March 10, 2014 13:47

    Everything is interesting, but why at first “he, he, he”, and then suddenly “me”?

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  • March 10, 2014 16:42

    You know, I would say that I wanted to tell this story from 2 sides. On behalf of the main character and from the side. But t.To this, my first experience I think that it did not work out very well))

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  • March 11, 2014 20:55

    He started not too well, but it's time to give up. Keep going Be sure there is someone who appreciates your work.

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  • Anonymous (a guest)
    March 17, 2014 2:05

    Quite, quite good. With interest I will wait for the continuation.

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