- Fantasy debauchery. Part 1
- Fantasy debauchery. Part 2
- Fantasy Depravity. Part 5
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lactation and egg deposition included in my account. And this amount was more than they gave to my parents. I, as well as Gyra, thought hard, it already smells of slavery. But then she began to read the rules and found a price list. Proceeding from it, I could work once a day, once I donated milk at least a liter in this mode, I paid the debt for one year, respectively, during processing the period is reduced, from ordinary soldiers I will only have a quarter of my account, for the rest - more. That's what the talk was about, the doctor pushed me with the words "... and then you decide ..." she just did her job, wrapping me around the counter. I sat and read for a long time, and then the monitor gave me a message that I should go to the treatment room for admission to the service.
Reception was clean and close, a man of five. But I did not have to wait, the assistant came out and invited me inside. There he gave me to the doctor. He was a man of about forty, with a light gray in his hair. He looked at me, he looked at the panel, I put my hand and he looked into his tablet. He told me to undress, I undressed behind a screen and was surprised to find that the jumpsuit was wet inside, especially in the nipple area and in the crotch, but there everything was filled up. It is strange that I did not feel it. When I finished, the doctor sat me in a chair with metal armrests and leg holders. I was not comfortable sitting.
- Marin, I will be frank, you already know, and we know that you know. Dizzy? Nothing. You have looked at your account balance, so we suggest you accept reality and enter your service as soon as possible. If you have questions, I will try to answer them.
- And what will you do?
- Startup procedure. You have invested a lot of money, but until you have mastered it almost all are in a passive state, so they need to be launched, and tomorrow you can work, or not work, if you can. You are ready? Or more questions?
- No, probably. - almost at the same time, the grapples grabbed my legs and wrists.
- Great, I do not like to waste time. Glad you're the same. Now it will be a little unpleasant.
And it became unpleasant. Almost immediately, my buttocks began to disperse, opening my crotch, then something cold buried my ass and began to climb into it, the doctor raised his eyes to me.
- Inconvenient? In fact, this is normal. Your working bodies are getting ready for work, but this is just a fixative. - I already had my eyes on my forehead, this pin had already probably reached the stomach, and every centimeter was thicker than the previous one. But as soon as he stopped, I felt relieved. - But now it will be uncomfortable.
And he was right, bitch. In my earlier small pussy, began to push a couple of objects. One thin slipped into my urethra, and I already closed my eyes from such a painful affair. The pussy was easier, but only until this unit touched the uterus, and then began to thrust something into it. I was spinning and could not do anything about it. The procedure went into some kind of quiet mode and everything that happened, I became less disturbed, well, I climbed something in my pussy and asshole.
- Darling, is it time for you to donate milk?
“I don't know,” I said through clenched teeth.
- I think so far. Soon you yourself will know when and how much you will give, but for now learn to listen to the body. I'll take off the milk? - I just nodded. He brought two small cones to me, and froze. Then he looked at the tablet and pressed it a couple of times. Then he removed the cones and replaced some of the porous pins. I could no longer ask anything, in my womb absolutely strange things were happening, painful and disgusting. - And you do not miss, such tits snip off.
He pinched my nipple slightly, and I felt pleasure and a strange feeling, squinting, I saw that the nipple was moving a little, and then the doctor took one pin and began to press on the nipple. It was creepy looking, but it felt very good. The nipple resisted a little, and then fell into the chest along with the pin. This is a whole fountain of emotions, I even forgot about soy crotch. I felt the nipple open in my chest, already inside and I missed this hose inside, and the sensations were so fantastic, as if my whole body was caressing me with tongues, but these feelings fell on my right breast. Then the doctor put the second pin in the other nipple, I was in heaven. Having started the device, the doctor began to look at me, the milk poured in a continuous stream. And I almost ended up with such effects. And then, like a blow to the head with a hammer, I finished, even shouted with pleasure.
- That's all. The procedure is over, now we pour the milk and can go to him. - the clamps on me opened up and I felt how all the mechanisms leave my body, and the body shakes from the orgasm and shakes slightly. I almost finished when my retainer left my ass. I sat on a chair, excited as a nymphomaniac, two hoses stretched out of my breasts and dragged my milk, and I dreamed that the doctor would say everything had to be repeated once more.
But did not grow together. Milk began to pour very slowly. The doctor took out the pins and slapped me on the boobs. I even tried to leave, but he stopped me and pointed to the jumpsuit. Got dressed. She came out, and in the cockpit she fell like a mast, without undressing and listening to my pussy squish to the beat of breathing.
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Very interesting, but please check the spelling!
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We take into account. Not quite clear estimates. How can it be at the same time yes and no to fact?
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Norm, but a yacht is unnecessary
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Super, the beginning is interesting. I am still waiting :)
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Wonderful! The ovipositor is not at all superfluous, but on the contrary the most interesting. I will wait for the continuation.
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The beginning is interesting. I'll wait for the product :)
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I see my stories in your soul? This is not the first time I see your positive comments.
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There are who cling, and there are, which are not. Genetics, for example - did not go with me, did not hook, unlike Purgatory. If it is interesting, then you can tell the author about this, and the author, in turn, will please us readers :)
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great story !!
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Have obscene words?
Yes (10)
No (24)
What do you mean no? People, you seem to be special.
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Dear author! "Yes" - this is a plus for the author. And so the well-wishers vote :) And "no" - this is a minus for the author. And so those who don’t want are :)
I myself often come across this approach to my stories. Although the obscene language I have only one text. Readers - it is CRAFT :))))
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:)))) THEY ARE CRAFT.
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On the tab "There are obscene words" - NO is in plus to the author.
All the others are really - YES to the author.
The story itself is not hooked, unlike the "Genetics".
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I really like fantasy but it doesn’t hurt) There are no beautiful scenes here. Cynical technique, as if it were happening on a farm. Sex is not here)
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I agree, I quote: “And please, do not judge for deviation from the main theme of this site, well, I can’t do without preludes and plots.” Regarding technology, these are unnecessary words, which will take a few more lines, and accordingly distract from the main theme. I repeat - the text is trial. But it seems there is attention to it, you can write the second chapter.
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You can write :) But make us nice. You and the women are reading. And when about tubes and suction all sorts - the feelings are not AH! :)))))
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Thats exactly what I mean! Like, were mutants mentioned? You can do a cool thing with them :))
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WRITE. These are the details and they are needed !!!
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I agree with you. Will there be sex or not? Normal, not with the device. But the idea itself doesn’t attract the original one :)
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Let me ask you then, did you look at my early texts? What do you think of them? Pure name and rating is enough. I find it difficult to find out the opinions of women on my work. I expect an answer, you can in the LAN.
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I will write you a little later.
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I vote plus. In addition to mistakes, of course :-)
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Very interesting, I look forward to continuing.
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Everyone writes that they are waiting, and the rating is getting lower and lower every hour. Are you waiting for further disappointment?
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Do not be like Zoe. Estimates by and large do not mean anything. But their number - that is, people who are not too lazy to assess - can be counted. It's easier for me to write a comment than to poke in ratings. Genetics was really more interesting. And here, GG is just TP) But since this is the beginning, it is difficult to assess whether it will be interesting to me. Therefore, I look forward to continuing)
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Do not worry!
My stories started with a high score, but gradually the grades decline. And so almost all authors. In your particular case, the assessment falls precisely because of the incompleteness of the plot. Continued, definitely, you have to write. And in the last part it will be possible to make a final conclusion.
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I just the last and did not shine, everyone wants to continue, and I would have turned everything on chapter 4, well, they ask and ask, it turns out that part 7 is already bullshit. Here I do not know to what degree to write, 3-4 or 5 chapters? I still have the admins slaughtered the arts, they are in the right, but to complete the picture it was worth leaving ...
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You know, I can only advise one. It is necessary to write the text as a whole, as you imagine it, and then break it apart and put it one after the other. When you see all the text in front of you, you can work it out and edit it. And so it turns out, the first part, for example, was laid out, and then in the process of writing the second part, they realized that in the beginning it was necessary this way and that way. And it's too late to correct. Although there is an opportunity to edit, your story has already been read.
I had a similar situation with Pirate)
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So the continuation of tighten for a couple of weeks, but lay out in a crowd.
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We wait! We will read)
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Stop where you want. It was the audience who created Santa Barbara)) I liked one statement - the story should not end with the last point, after it it should come to life. Do not be dependent on readers, you are original, and only you decide how to turn the plot)
Yes, and although it is difficult to communicate with all the people, it is better to choose a personal than to publicly discard thoughts - they can be taken for nagging.
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with the guests of the site in a personal not to talk.
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Well, okay, let the author cry - the grades are low, they don’t want to read, etc., etc.
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obscene words are present. "Pussy", vsezh, still, little swearing. Well, so - write, author! Especially since the other pacemakers on this subject are not particularly fond of. the same zzerg and then, along the way, abandoned.
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Do not remember my name in vain))) and, by the way, it is written with capital letters.
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I like it. Waiting for the continuation.
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By the way, and from you would not hurt produ!
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We do)
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the beginning is interesting, write a continuation ...
oviposition is an interesting idea if there is a description of the process in some terribly perverted chair and a spicy pose with a bunch of preparatory procedures))) and not a banal laying in the toilet))
I liked the idea with a big minus in the invoice for the procedures ... it would be interesting if their constant upgrade was required and the position of the girls would be essentially slave
I still suggest somewhere in the fifth part of the attack of the enemy on the laboratory and the capture of girls with all the ensuing consequences
h s. I did not rate it)
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It will be more fun if someone else is taken prisoner, they will love each other and run together))))))))))
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And you say I have a fantasy ... There is a suggestion that will turn around))))
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And if you can develop the theme of modified male mutants.
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I would not like to be banal, but: “AFFTAR !!! Burn more !!! "(s)
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Your stories are very specific, especially the genre direction and style of writing ... not that I'm a fan of that. but this has its own charm ... but I think that for me you already had a high point when you wrote "Purgatory or paradise is different for everyone" ... this does not in any way affect the fact that I will no longer read your stories ... although "Lustful genetics" caused only negative emotions in me ...
I hope that with “Fantasy of debauchery” you will breathe new life into your stories ... and I will again read with pleasure and wait for new texts ... good luck in writing and let the muse visit you at the right time and in the right place ...
all that is written is only my personal opinion and it may differ from the opinion of other readers ...
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The story is awesome. I look forward to continuing.
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when will the continuation be?
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uh, and if you add one more thing to your stories. penetration into the urethra, well, in short everything up to what else can fantasize in this direction.
score on story 8 of 10
score on characters somewhere 7 out of 10
it’s hard to say, but it was better in genetics, it seems that it was written not to forget the plot, and then it was laid out for the purpose of evaluation to the readers.
the score by “scenes” even for the first chapter is not enough, or rather, the topic is not fully disclosed as raw material.
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I’m going to post it all at once, they gave me good advice not to write in parts, but in whole, so until the whole story is ready, there will be no continuation.
2 moment, I found a good toy, now I think to paint its plot in the story, but there are questions to the readers:
1) How is Futunari related?
2) How do you treat slaves?
3) Is it worth it to describe the game?
I will collect the answers here or in drugs.
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1. Positive, if without any horror with meter dimensions. (I want to write a story myself, one hentai, which was once translated)
2. Negative, as well as to any kind of sadism and violence against the weak.
3. Gameplay what? I do not see any particular need.
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1. Negative. I can not stand this topic.
2. Positively, if without sadism
3. I do not see much point. You can just name. Who wants, he will find.
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Loved it! Waiting for the continuation.
Hope without sadism. It is interesting what functions were activated and how the capabilities of different categories differ.
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Great story, more such, waiting for the continuation.
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Well done, girl, do not pay attention to evil and worthless critics, they are simply offended, and it is envious to them that they themselves cannot create, create, and write such masterpieces, without exaggeration, but about grammar it is just the result of the speed of your thought, when you simply have no time to pay attention to spelling, because you strive to realize your colorful ideas and thoughts, you’ll wait when you finish writing, check the text for errors, and then your envious person will simply have nothing to criticize. Thank you for your creativity, I am your fan forever
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Cool write. waiting for the continuation.
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10 :))
I will follow the development of the plot :)
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This is definitely a future masterpiece in the spirit of the famous genetics
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Boring ... Boring and trite to the aching teeth ...
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