- Predator. Part 1
- Predator. Part 2
- Predator. Part 3
- Predator. Part 4
- Predator. Part 5
Almost midnight. The click of the door lock made Liane shudder. She was wrapped in a blanket, curled up in a ball. "What will happen today?" - With horror flashed through her mind. Ralph walked into the room and gently said:
- Hi, honey.
Liana decided to pretend to be asleep. Ralph rustled things and went into the shower, mockingly said:
“I know you are awake.”
An ice shiver ran through the girl's body. She herself did not notice how dozed off. But some strange feeling woke her. Beside her, Ralph stood, smiling evilly at the corner of his mouth.
“I thought you'd be faking for a couple of hours.” - he said laughing.
He abruptly pulled the blanket to the floor and Liane immediately jumped out of bed.
- Will you be naughty again today? - asked Ralph with his inherent mockery.
Liana's breath came as she saw Ralph pull a small whip out of a drawer.
“As always, I will give you a choice,” he said, smiling. “When I count to three, you have to go back to bed and then I will put this thing in place, otherwise ...” he whistled with a whip in the air.
The girl shrank.
“Once ...” There was absolute stone calmness in Ralph’s voice. - Two..
Suddenly, Liane fell on her knees in front of Ralph and through tears begged him:
- Please stop, let me go, I can not more. I do not love you. Do not you see that I feel bad with you? ...
She still talked a lot, dropping Ralph’s tears to his feet, but he looked through her, he did not listen to what she said to him and what he was asking about ... His perverted mind came up with a “brilliant trap”.
“Stand up,” he said, a little squeamishly, helping her stand up and wiping tears from her face, but there was not a drop of pity and compassion in his actions.
“Well, since you are so sick of it all, and you don’t want to compromise ... we will make a bet,” he smiled slyly, watching her scared look.
- betting?
- Yes. And here are the conditions: It's almost one in the morning. You go to bed and do not resist, I will not force you. I will only kiss and caress you. If you hold out until dawn and do not give up, then I promise not to touch you for a month, if you want, I will not even talk to you. After all, my voice scares you, I hate you all. You will be free for 30 days. If I win, for 30 days you will unconditionally obey me EVERYTHING. Agree?
After a short pause, Liana confidently replied:
- Yes, I agree.
She was 100% sure that she would never want him, never agree to surrender to him, no matter what he did, she will always hate him ...
A satanic smile spread across Ralph’s face, as if the angel himself had fallen into the trap of the devil. He put out the light ...
Kissing Liana on the lips, he clearly felt that every cell of her body was strained like a string from tension.
- Relax, I will not allow myself too much, until you ask. - he said gently.
Liana ignored what was said. She was disgusted, this hideous monster kisses her lips, neck, strokes her hair and shoulders ... Sometimes she shuddered from his kisses disgustingly. Ralph did not leave it unnoticed and nibbled her slightly. She did not respond to his kisses, no matter how gentle they were. (Especially for eroticspace.info — sexitails.org) Ralph gently caressed her bosom, glaring kisses at her neck. Then his kisses went lower and lower, and he began to play with her nipples, which surprisingly quickly responded by swelling. Ralph grinned triumphantly. Liane became uncomfortable, even a little ashamed. Ralph's hands stroked a beautiful elastic tummy. When he lowered his hand below, Liane suddenly squeezed his legs.
- CCH, do not be afraid, trust me, because we have an agreement. - Ralph aggressively spread her legs.
The girl tensed with all her might, and Ralph began kissing her again on the lips, playing with her pussy.
“Well, kiss me,” his hands caressing her ever more persistently. Liana thought that a whole eternity had passed and she constantly watched whether the saving sun had risen ... Suddenly she felt a strange sensation in her lower abdomen. It was not painful or unpleasant, but it scared Liana and she immediately tried to pull herself together and get rid of this feeling. But it was too late. Ralph knew how and where to click. He perfectly felt that her body was gradually giving up. He knew from the very beginning that victory would be his. Ralph penetrated her fingers into her bosom, forcing Liane to shrink, but the treacherous physiology did its job and Ralph's fingers became wetter.
“You give up ...” he said, laughing maliciously.
He began to cover all her body with tender kisses, sometimes nibbling on her.
The girl's breathing gradually ceased to be even and she began to breathe more deeply and intermittently. Something incomprehensible was going on in her head, she stopped being so afraid of him, gradually relaxing his body, as if he were removing the shackles of her. All experiences disappeared from her head. She lived here and now, she was no longer worried about anything other than what was happening to her at the moment. Sometimes the mind returned and she was horrified to realize that she was giving up, but it was no longer so scary ... When Ralph gently pressed her middle and nameless fingers on the “G” point, a humble convulsive moan was heard from the girl’s mouth.
Ralph laughed triumphantly. He began to persistently kiss her lips, demanding an answer, and Liane began to respond timidly, she threw back her head, enjoying the way he kissed her neck. She held on to her last strength, but desire was stronger than her.
- Ralph - her voice was low and pleading.
“I listen to you attentively my little one,” he answered, continuing to kiss her.
“Take me,” she asked faintly.
- Louder! - demanded Ralph
“Take me,” she said out loud, almost clearly.
Ralph burst into devilish laughter. Now he did not want to be rude, he wanted to fully enjoy her body and his victory. He gently entered her, rhythmically, but gently moving. Liane hugged him and their bodies intertwined in a single dance of passion. She felt his tenderness. She no longer wanted to run away from him, she dissolved in his arms. She moaned sweetly, kissing his most tender kiss. Ralph was very gentle with her now, he divined her desires and adjusted the pace to her in unison. Finally, a wave of orgasm swept both ... Liana bent like a cat. She thought they soared into the air ...
In the morning Liana woke up. Her hands hugged Ralph. Liana recoiled. Ralph smiled.
- I won yesterday. It was great.
The girl lowered her eyes.
- Shy? - he gently raised her face by the chin. - But you liked it.
Liana instantly remembered everything that happened yesterday. She took Ralph by the hand, but did not say anything. In her eyes he read everything. She was not afraid of him anymore, she realized that no one except him needed her, that she only wanted to belong to him ... Forever ... Liane did not love him ... She adored him. She was not hugging a monster ... she was in the arms of someone who would always take care of her, love and take care of her.
P. S. This is the final part. In the romance, which would be described further, I am not strong ... I recommend everyone to watch the beautiful video mine on vimeo
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7msxRmoA5o
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Suddenly, but very cool ... no wonder they waited so long
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I liked the story so much stress and such a beautiful ending ... Thank you for the beautiful story!
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Join :)
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Liked. Thank you for such a wonderful story!
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Nakoneeeets then !!!))))) Just gorgeous)) A wonderful story))
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Vasche class just superrrr!
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PERFECTLY!!! Amazed by your ability to write beautifully !!!
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Well ... actually, everything is predictable. You do not need extra stubbornness and get gingerbread instead of a whip! And why would she not immediately go this way? So no, you have to fly seven circles of hell to see the true face of the one who is near ...
You - well done, what exactly is the final!
Although I did not doubt this))) Thank you for the real pleasure of reading, of intrigue, tension, and of a beautiful denouement! Terrific)) I want to smile. And she will be the most faithful wife, because she was raised initially))
Good luck to the author!
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"And why would she not immediately go this way?"
And why should he not immediately go this way ?? Monster, it is a monster. In her future, the good does not shine with her. And dad from him what will be ..
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Somehow disappointed. Already Very Sharply she began to adore him ... !!! It was necessary to reach at least the 6th chapter ...
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And it seems to me all right! Emotions splash it he let her? Yes. Decisions to make the most allowed? Yes. Everything is right and everything is timely. Further violence would already be to the detriment. And Ralph is a smart man. I said it initially. Just for everything there must be a limit. And he came exactly in the previous part. And the fact that this part is final and so correct is just fine!
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thank
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And it's all!!??? We waited so long for one page !! ?? Also the final part ... This is sad. But even so, the story is very cool !! It is a pity that there will be no continuation (((
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thanks to all)
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Looking forward to similar stories with impatience !!! ;)))))
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Author! Sorry for being rude, but ... Answer honestly, would you write a normal sequel, if you weren't pulling?
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what is it not normal?
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Good story, and the sequel is normal, but just very concise. About how he tortured her 4 parts were written, and in the 5th she already liked everything. This is at least strange :)
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It follows that it is necessary to torment girls for a long time in order to like them !!!
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Everyone has their own preferences :) Someone, yes, likes to be tortured :)
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First, you did not answer my question. Although this can be forgiven, because I have formulated the question in such a way that it also follows from it a series of conclusions that are not stated directly. In particular, the one that caused your question. In spite of this, I would like to hear the answer to the question I asked.
Secondly, I answer your question. What bribed the first three parts of the story? At least three components: action in a wide public space (presence of minor characters, escape to the forest, shopping trip, lunch with parents), subtle experiences in both characters (in the heroine in direct text, in the hero through reservations in dialogs ) in all moments of the story and in the whole space of the first component, and the presence of various intrigues generated by the first two components (for example, Ralph’s promise to powder everything that is dear to her - true or false?).Bed scenes to this all went as a supplement (again, organic) also permeated with experiences and what is happening in a vast area (for example, rape in the children's room of Ralph). In the fourth part there is no action, the space is compressed to the size of the house, and the experiences are present solely around the bedding scenes, which greatly reduces them to physiology, and not to psychology (that is, feelings / experiences became much less). In the fifth part, the space has shrunk in the literal sense of the word to the size of a bed: it’s not that there is no action, there’s nowhere for the senses to turn, and, therefore, there can be no intrigue. As a result, there was only a bed scene in which “pleasant sex” ... turned the world of the main character overturned. Did she really love him because he sexually satisfied her? And everything? That is, for the main character, it all comes down to physiology? And the main character is “plywood” at all, for it’s not at all revealed what he thinks about this (unless, of course, it’s speculative to think this out of those facts that we know of the first three parts). In general, the whole plot of the story turned out to be built according to a formula that the bearded anecdote aptly expresses: “the rabbits thought they loved each other, but in fact they were bred”. These rabbits were your characters ...
P. S .: I simply refuse to believe that any girl can write this seriously! Therefore, this ending of the story cannot be anything else, except as a flick from impatient and annoying readers. Which, by the way, is quite justified. But this does not change the outcome.
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No, this is not a go-ahead, I wrote everything as I conceived ... the main theme of the part was “betting” ... maybe you are right I paid little attention this time to the detailed disclosure of the plot ... I repent
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So, the heroine loved him for "good sex"?
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No) Ralph just showed her how he could be. that he is not a monster.
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Exclusively through sex ... It's terrible. Yes, he baked his first love in a madhouse. How can such a person fall in love exclusively for “good sex”, and after several acts of physical and psychological violence? Do you not see the absurdity of this? The heroine now looks like a whore. Well, albeit not lustful, but still it all comes down to her physiology. And this is just awful if you recall the events of the first three parts.
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And it seems to me, it is not. After all, for all parts of Ralph was both polite and caring with Liana - breakfast, tea, shopping. He was ready to do everything for her to make her feel good. And he always gave her a choice (well, except for the scene in the nursery, his male instinct obviously worked there, but this happens with temperamental men). But she herself chose violence. It was she who invented herself a monster named Ralph. And it was precisely bet that gave Ralph the opportunity to open his eyes to Liana, to show clearly another way of developing relations. Yes, through sex, because she did not even want to think about other things, she did not want to.
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What kind of care?)) If you were at first in the gate almost you **** and (1 part), then persecuted, then kidnapped and brought into the house, then I do not think you would consider it for care). She is like a bird in a golden cage or like a wolf fed, and he is still looking into the forest. No more than a toy used to meet sexual needs. A shopping trip and food - it is only that the toy does not die of hunger and meet the standards and views of the rapist.
Therefore, there are indignations: the image of the main character is revealed ONLY from the negative side. He appeared as a soulless and ruthless man.And what is in his head, what he thinks about everything, what his experiences were, nothing of this is described.
And in the final part, when the girl at his feet was rolling, begging him and crying to him, he did not feel sorry for him, he didn’t click on anything: “His perverted mind came up with a“ brilliant trap ”.”
About any tenderness can not be said here.
Well, about "she chose violence herself." Well chose and chose. Some break immediately, some do not. On the contrary, I am glad that the heroine fought at least somehow for her freedom. True, it is a pity that she broke down.
In general, there is a slight disappointment from the ending (although I really liked the story, really), since there was no climax. It would be quite possible to stretch into 10 parts, which described the image of Ralph, his thoughts and feelings, the way he came to the conclusion that it is better to be gentle and fix everything. And this is already inserted at the end, make the final part.
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Diana! You blame the heroine Liana! She was supposed to immediately surrender to Ralph and rejoice in it, be happy. Then, according to your understanding, all girls should be given to all rapists at once and with joy. For you, "CONCEPT OF FREEDOM" DOES NOT EXIST. For you, there is only the concept of slavery! I have heard this all my life: “The victim is always to blame. And the criminal is never to blame for anything. ” Ralph is a criminal, not an ideal man, as you and others represent him. He is a predator, a wolf, and Liana is his victim, a hare. Predator people are always looking for victims and always justify themselves by what they want to eat, which is why their prey-food is to blame for the predator's appetite!
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I do not blame anyone)) And the concept - freedom - for me exists, oddly enough. But I was fed up with this freedom for a long time)))
And then. that the victim provokes the offender is true, I am not saying that those who commit crimes are right. And I do not stand on any side. But in this story I see exactly such a situation. And this is just a story)) I don’t think I need to blow an elephant out of a fly like this!
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This is not just a story. ALL PORNALS DECLARE THE ANIMAL ESSENCE OF PEOPLE!
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For this they are written. It's like a surge of emotions, like detente. And it is right!
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I completely agree!
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Well, you see, in fact, we understand each other well when you do not attack me and do not blame the most unthinkable things! And my slavery is voluntary, because I have something to compare with. I choose such slavery so as not to suffer from such freedom))))
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Yes, everything is very simple! After the previous parts of the story, in the comments, overexcited and off-duty girls and women demanded that the heroine be with her perpetrator Ralph only, love him and belong only to him. The author has fulfilled the desires of readers and their own. Happy End - everyone is happy.
But excited girls "require the continuation of the banquet!"
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Not at all) Not everyone asked for a Happy End - this time. And secondly, it is really very strange when a person is first tortured, bullied, and then he changes his point of view once and for one night, because of tender sex. This just does not happen in nature. Well, it can only with anxious perverts who love being mocked and physically mocked at first, and then caress.
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And I have the same opinion)) Liana is not like a girl who likes mocking. I waited for the other end - it will get stronger, it will be replayed and it will receive what it deserves, but this did not happen, the placard ((
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I apologize, and can you somehow personally write a message. Simply, there is one "thought" that you should not read out here ... If anything, here is my mail. K
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answered mail)
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Just watched the video - smartly) Ralph in your vision is so outwardly?) It seems to me different, ugly and with an unhealthy look ...)
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But this does not happen if you have a freak in front of you, then you will not fix it with anything. Once it was possible to show yourself sweet and gentle, so that you could torment your whole life afterwards?
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I agree ... it all came down too much to the fact that he did not show violence once after a thousand, and she immediately spread to him like vanilla in the sun)))
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I adore your story and really hope for a sequel (banquet).
Everything is too short and fast, because the “end” is the connection of all the plot lines into one. And here I did not see, unfortunately.
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By the way, the video is awesome)
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Yes, the video is just super!
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And tell me, what kind of video is it about ... I somehow can’t find the link anywhere ... well, this is how I am ...
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Tell me where to find?
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Here's a link to the video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7msxRmoA5o
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Mine by Álvaro de la Herrán for GQ Spain
called))
and there is a link at the end of the story :)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J7msxRmoA5o
More details: https://eroticspace.info/story/2013-06-05/hischnik-chast5.html#comment30951
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after the word "Details" is not necessary) it was accidentally copied
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I have seen! Thanks for the answer)))
Yes, with a claim on the topic, but not topically))) Although it is not suitable for either Liana or Ralph. Other plane
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This video is more suitable for the novel Tori "Dependent", for the book "50 shades of gray"
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Yes, I agree))
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But what about 30 days of obedience?
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Hahaha someone that))))
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And what, I would also read about 30 days))))
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Yes it would be nice)
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I look forward to new stories)))
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Not a bad story, but it didn’t justify most of my expectations, here’s the basic list of expectations: 1) the end is too fast, not very believable 2) I think it was possible to show the development of their relationship in Chapter 4 3) son to say this, so that then she will certainly become interested and want to know ^^
Although I liked the description of BDSM: 3
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Thanks to the author for the hard work. A wonderful story, with meaning and emotional release. I would not refuse to visit the place of the main character.
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