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on the couch by the tv. But as soon as I heard the tired rattle of the key in the keyhole, I immediately woke up and almost sobered up. The level of adrenaline in the blood jumped again, and my heart began to pound in a furious rhythm.
He jumped into the corridor, and froze in place, looking at his battered spouse. I have never seen her so weak and exhausted. Tired and well-worn, with a complete lack of hair and makeup. But, at the same time, completely satisfied, and satisfied. When I rushed to her and hugged her, she whispered in her ear that she loved me very much and would never forget this birthday. Restrain myself from a passionate kiss did not work, and I pounced on her lips. They turned out to be incredibly swollen. I was surprised. But not that they are swollen, no. This was inevitable, given the kilometers of members that they pumped today. Surprise was caused by a crazy erection, descended on me, when you find a few facts.
Firstly, my wife smelled several foreign colognes at once. It really got me. Secondly, there were no panties on it. How this became possible, I did not understand. Alina has never yielded to my persuasion to go out without underwear before. Even on an innocent walk in the park near the house. She considered it not hygienic and not aesthetic. And then, suddenly, such a turn! Moreover, it’s not that she sowed her panties or presented one of her lovers! They lay in her purse calmly crumpled! Just one of the guys told her to go home without clothes, and she diligently fulfilled his wish! But this is not the most exciting! Kissing her, I clearly felt the taste of someone's sperm! Moreover, it is so obvious that she sucked someone in front of the door! And I almost guessed it!
As it turned out, the guys whispered to the taxi driver, who came for Alina to take the payment in kind from her, not with money. The taxi driver used the opportunity to take full advantage, and at the very entrance, he became the twenty-first man who “flattened” that night into my Alina’s mouth ... ooh ... How much water has flowed since that time, and I remember everything yesterday (face Grisha read the widest range of his emotions, mostly positive). In general, I throw it over my shoulder and drag it to the bedroom. I put cancer, spreading bread and ... fucking ... have you ever seen a volcano crater after an eruption? If seen, then easily imagine the point of my wife. That is how it looked. Huge, yawning, with crimson-red edges.
It is even scary to imagine that it was necessary to do with my Alina's anus in order to cripple him so much. But the severity of the situation is not in this. I was her first in everything. He taught everything himself. But ass - provtykal. My beloved was leaving with a "sealed" ass, and returned - with a broken-down trash. Until that evening, I couldn’t even get my fingers in there. She said it hurt. But to other peasants - she gave herself up with giblets. Take me, boys, wherever you want. Yes, Alyn? Was it the case? Allowed everything? (Grisha mockingly nudged the blonde).
- Allowed! I then resolved a lot of things (Alina responded with such self-respect, as if she defended her right in the courtroom). Although I was not specifically asked. When I refused voluntary anal sex, the boys did not stand on ceremony. The letter "sic" twisted, arms twisted behind his back, and began to look for grease. You just do not laugh (this is to us with Azar), but besides butter there was no other lubricant found (it was said in a sincerely sad voice). Moreover, not just a piece of butter, but spread on bread, with a layer of red caviar. Several boutiques were gutted, and the harvest was stuffed into my ass. Well, and then ... then - the matter of technology ... What are you laughing at, bastards (with laughter)?
This has already been said to all three.Because we with "Kazan" and Grisha laughed to tears. Personally, I have never seen or heard such a method. About any erection and eroticism of the situation we were no longer talking. We all could not calm down, continuing to develop a joke. After about ten minutes they calmed down and the word, again, Grisha took.
- In general, I grieved a little about the loss of integrity, which became native, backwards, and vdul into it. Once the men have completed, the drilling work has been done, which means you need to use it. (Especially for eroticspace.info — seksithails.org) Fuck, so Alinku, and she would have henna. No moans, no emotions, all in the sauna left. To feel at home on someone else's celebration of life, I start a conversation. I continue to "pump up" Alinkina zhopka, admiring the spectacle below. There is something to see, see for yourself later. I ask that the guys gave something.
I know that in addition to the sauna and the “glade”, they also threw off the “birthday girl” as a gift. She turns around over her shoulder, calmly podmahivaya, as if her hands jerking me, and replies that the money presented. Four whole pieces! They said that she bought herself what she wanted. My jaw dropped a little. This is almost eight hundred bucks. My monthly salary. Three is hers. More did not ask. Thoughts flew away. Shot off in a hurry, took a shower together and - on the side.
And in the morning she offered to collect the same company one more weekend. Already on a pre-agreed, paid basis. The guys hinted to her that they were ready to use her services from time to time. This is how we ended up on this path. There is a "nailed" clientele, there are "vagrants", like you. But we are less likely to go outside. We interfere too much with the local, well-established “business”. More than once I threatened to fill my face. Cops poisoned me. So we encrypt for the most part, but we use “word of mouth”. Friends of friends bring friends. This is the case with Diana today.
The issue that has long been brewing with Kazan has become more relevant than ever. Who is Diana and where did she come from? Approximately in the same way I asked Grisha about it.
- Diana? And Diana is a separate story. There she is, by the way, goes. Now meet.
By the car, and the truth, was approaching a stately girl with flowing, not dried hair. Black as pitch and slightly curly. The girl opened the door, and sat in the passenger seat next to the driver. Immediately turned to us, and alternately doused me and Azar with an appraising glance. Smiled warmly and greeted. Then immediately turned to the blonde:
- Link, urgently chewing gum and a cigarette! I just had such a nasty mouth ponchal that you never dreamed of! (indignantly) And what feeds them there in the army, what does such an abomination “at the exit” work out? Ten minutes spat-rinsed. Grisha, will you introduce me to boys? (now playfully).
Grisha was already moving, and was moving in the direction of the city center.
- And how? Meet the men, and take heart (the man laughed, pleased with a good pun). My second girl's name is Diana and she ... my son's ex-wife. Please love and respect...
The end of the first part.
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With respect to all of you, Alexander Kirilenko.
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a very long start, but knowing the author it can be assumed that the next will be much brighter and more interesting
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Thank you for your trust, dear. The second part, indeed, will be much brighter.
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incomparable with the first work.a long description of causal relationships, relations with a customs officer, Dag, prostitutes ... in short, shit! if last time I was looking forward to continuing your story, now I consider the continuation to be completely optional.
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Thanks for the kind word, buddy;)
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Guys, do not drive! He describes his life! Real life, real! It's not easy anymore - go jerk off! This is already a drama! Kirilenko, I beg you, do not stop writing such works. You - Dostoevsky erotic genre. Write! Write more! Write in this style, do not listen to anyone!
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Thank you, neighing.
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Boria, Valya ... Fucking shame, get the fuck out of here.
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And I think quite the opposite! Kirilenko - well done! Continue to develop literature and make the stories more voluminous, meaningful and juicier. I hate single-page sketches! ..
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Thanks for the support, colleague;) I will continue to look for the road through the thorns to the stars)
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just class !! waiting for the continuation
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Continuation does not take long, My dear Olga. Thank you for the praise;)
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What a crap, 4 pages of incomprehensible nudyatiny and finally the banal story of the spouses from the cycle of how we came to this. ((((((Well, actually where is treason here?
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Kowtow for sincere criticism, Dear One. When creating the next story, I will surely take into account your speculations, as well as the conclusions of the Esteemed "critic", expressed above.
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You see, Aleksandrad, the readers are not interested in stories about “how the spouses came to this”! Where more exciting to read about you and your entertainment. I read the first few pages with interest, and then ... Not because it was written worse than previous stories, but because the main role is not you! Who can compare with you? Yes, no prostitute with a pimp. I personally look forward to continue, as I am sure that it will be much hotter and unpredictable).
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Natalie ... we'll discuss all this later;)
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I xs that people do not like. The story is simply ahuen. Probably just not for everyone. Those who stupid fuck needed by other authors, see. And this author, apart from describing sex, still has something to read about life. The author, bravo !!! Already waiting to continue. In general, write more often if you can, I always wait for your stories as a salary at the end of the month))))))))
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Well written story. So good that even Achtung gives non-illusion.
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Podobka detekted)
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Podobka occupies only two of eight meanings embedded in the word “Achtung”.
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Understand punctuation, it's hard to read from commas
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Yeah, no question;)
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Complete nonsense and fantasy of an amateur who has nothing to do with reality, starting with the fact that the author never traveled on the Moscow-Dnepropetrovsk train, first, because the conductor drives all passengers to the border in their places and does not allow smoking in the vestibule, secondly, customs officers' ensigns never check passports and everyone has a personal card on their chest with an indication of their rank and name, and besides that, he puts on a uniform while serving. So, the author-tale about what has never happened - think up, something more believable
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Hey, Guest, man.The amateur is your brain if such a wisdom allows a stranger to write to you. You personally know me to sign a pussy, eh? Remember, for sure that Kirilinko is always in charge of the market. As written - it was. Sign up, fuck, and in a personal write to me, do not hide your face. I tell you, fool, the rules of polite criticism, fuck, fuck, fuck ...
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Oooh!) I'll have to adopt a way of communicating with ill-wishers from Kirilenko ...)) I liked it!)
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There you + put, here -)))))))))))))))) Where are your stories. And I'm sick of fucking reading (Kirilenko, this is not about you). Few worthwhile authors. I just have everything on the rails and have time to quench their thirst for reading porn)))))))
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Thank! Soon there will be something new ...)
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;) Yes you are a hot man;). Surprised! ;)
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Check it out, asshole. And let's go where you can find the coordinates, if you are a man and you are able to answer your rotten market for the bazaar. You need to beat off the tower, so that you don't have the desire to bark, for no reason.
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Yes, you have sexitails. Oh, how are you on your topic zafililis, sir.
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Everything is with you, syklo, clear. Grow eggs - write. Just write the case, do not spoil the air, as you usually do.
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Boy, yes you have batthert. Fuck you goof.
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Pfff ... As it was required to prove.
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In vain so you ... And I often traveled. None of the vestibule will not drive, no guide. True passports still probably frontiers, and not the customs check. The author could be a little confused.
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Thank you for your support, dear.
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Thank you all for the ratings and comments. You helped someone prove something to me. Further sarcasms and excessive criticism are ignored because ...
With respect to all of you, Alexander Kirilenko.
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the author you are cool ... I did not expect such a turn of events to even kill ... I am waiting for the continuation !!!
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Thanks for the praise, dear;)
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The author, write again, everything is cool, do not listen to detractors!
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Thanks, thanks and thanks again;)
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We look forward to continuing the previous stories. After all, they are not finished !!!
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On the way "Divide and conquer. Part 4: A few words about ... ". So wait, everything will be soon.
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Great! Just WOW! Loved it, waiting for the continuation, you are TALENT :)
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Thank you for the compliment, My dear reader. Nice to read these words in your address;)
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Ug!
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But your fables - the limit of perfection, yeah ...)))))))
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Larosh, thank you for relieving me of the need to respond to the next rudeness;) Although, I still answer: Olga, do not choke on bile. And take care of your head ...
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Can you still score the arrow? It is strange to see a murmuring porn writer))) and do PEOPLE know that you are driving a goat? If the story were good, I would gladly choke on bile from envy))) but alas, UG is UG!
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Were you, madam, a man, the arrow was already clogged.Another thing is that you, like the above-mentioned ones, would send a message to her. Purring porn writer ... A cheerful statement - but delusional, are being treated. Interestingly, do people know that it’s better not to mess with my goat goat? What else to say? Hmm ... Oh, yes! "Olga, do not choke on bile. And take care of your head ..." (c)
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It’s strange that I’m going to kill the zapadlo, and scare me that you’ll beat off my head in the order of things))) Actually, PEOPLE, if you know what I am talking about, they will let you and your goat in two seconds if they know that you are on them you crumb loaves))) Mikhail Krug and then he was overwhelmed when he tried to purr, and oh, how far you are to him)))
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So, Dear Olga, the goddess of the pen and the amazing author of "bestsellers". Kohl you took up the “adult” topics, the “arrow” to you, and it was you, I score, write down. Ukraine, 49034, Dnipropetrovsk, ul. Belostotsky, the abandoned part of the territory of the tank farm. Date and time of the meeting we will discuss separately. Pull up your PEOPLE (if you have them, of course), who will take me and my “goat” into two seconds. But, for starters, let them pick up a certain Valery Valerievich Korneev, and clarify with him whether he gives Mazyu for Svyatoslavovich Kirilenko. If your PEOPLE are really as cool as you think, then they know Valery Valerievich exactly, and all the more so how to contact him. Or write the coordinates of your PEOPLE, we will dial them. It is not excluded the option in which the "front part of the face" they (your PEOPLE) themselves and podrichturovut. By the way, I almost forgot, for boorish, even blasphemous, mention of the tragic death of a wonderful poet and, simply, a respected person - you will have a separate demand. I absolutely seriously say, mark my words.
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How much aplomb, and brains and concepts are zero! ”Actually, PEOPLE, if you understand what I am talking about,” you ask first for those who understand what this phrase means if you don’t understand it and then fill the arrows. It is clear, of course, that you are sure that no one will shine from the authors of the local here in real life and that is why the words are spread like a greyhound, but I think you will fall for all the same, if you don’t stop in time. By the way, they do not give Mazu, but they pull))) and self-respecting people will otryhtruyut face for mentioning their names next to the name of the porn writer))) for girls, by the way, this is not zapadlo but I think the guys themselves understand the theme of your stories)
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An attempt to move off the topic is not counted. Your idle talk is obvious, the rest doesn’t matter. And do not hide everywhere that you are a girl. This does not absolve you from responsibility for your cheek. So, know the dog, your place and do not yelp. And I do not need to talk about the concept of what you yourself - without a clue. Mazu is not only pulled, but also given. Check on this with your imaginary PEOPLE. Finally - advice: that's enough, the blooded people, to fool their people with their idiocy. Write in lichku, if there is more, than in the space bzdanut. By the way, don’t wait much for an answer - I almost lost interest in your worthless personality.
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I reread the post again and again I was amazed at how rotten and thoughtful you are !!! Feels like a bunch of shit with a stick razvoroshila (((
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Ah, yes, well, yes ... (sarcasm and a waving hand). Fuck, fuck, I am pleased;)
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Fiercely plus, he troll even easier than Realist-mamoeb. A little bit more and he will also be cut off the campaign.
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So you are also a Ukrainian?: D Well, everything is clear here, an ordinary racial racial of death. It is a pity that I spent my opinion on him.
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It was written for “Romantic vulgarity”, aka “Drocher with a cozy little one”, aka “Baby is silly”, aka “Romeo Montecchi”.
You, Jew, have lost your nose in general, can't you see the shores? If a real person, an acquaintance with people, you are displeasingly disliked, you will quietly give the coordinates for the meeting, we will come up, talk for your life, so as not to exert the boys and the server. Yes, and it will be a man, in contrast to the waste litter, which arranged this srach.
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Listen, I don't understand one thing. He chicks the arrow, but the conceptual such. What's the catch? Or does he want to otpiddit Olga? =)
P. S. The Observer - bathert.
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I have no pain anywhere, but you, if you continue in the same vein (to go into someone else’s market), you can seriously get sick. Do not poke your head at another topic - you will be more whole.
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Oh yes. Do you want me to tell you the fuck up? =) Since you are so dissatisfied with getting pussy?
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And do you want me to ass on the British flag tear, uedyche unfinished?
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I do not understand why so much criticism? Did not like it, do not read! And the stench about the author's lack of talent, disagreements with reality or some other whim, keep it with you. And it’s not too lazy to write)))) I read and was pleased. Look for what you like, and do not waste time cursing
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Dear Nyushka, thanks for the balm for the soul;) I am glad that not only the light is full of negative)
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People are angry that they have read 7 pages for nothing
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You, Mademoiselle, unnecessarily cutting. The author writes very well. The fact that everything could happen in his life, I have little doubt. I, too, youth was saturated. And the adventure was not less. Literary talent is not, but I would have shared. And can you just envy?
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Honor mine and think if I envy? Unfortunately there is nothing to envy)
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And you read other stories of Kirilenko and you will understand that it is your lot in life to envy this author.
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Stanly crowley
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You have really amazing talent! I look forward to the following works ...)
Z. Y.
In addition to what really “lights” your style, the quality of the language is worthy of a separate compliment. Competent, beautiful presentation - a rarity)
Here they write to me komenty))) and there are no bad ones at all)))
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Alexey
September 29, 2012 21:41
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Kirilenko you are a master! Your work is a THING!
Everyone reading this story! Do not rush to swallow this masterpiece, read slowly and enjoy the thoughtful taste of the details.
By written 10 +. Create further (I will not even mention better).
But such he wrote komenty, and what next? How are you better? You have no bad koment, you say? Will be!
Z. Y. How are you pissing me off me? Meeting - fucking!
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Here's how to meet exclusively as lowering your greyhounds allow me a little polirnut))))
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Kirilenko probably if you do not praise yourself no one else?
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Shmara speak for yourself! See how many people are satisfied with the story. Fuck are you writing? What you did not like and even four and a half cripples does not mean that the story is bad. So you have gotten down havalnik and fry cutlets to your husband, scum.
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)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))) )))))))))))))))))))))))))) I’m probably going to come here every morning now. Comedy rests))))))) From where in us there is so much negative)))))))))))))))))))))))))
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Muhaha, with me to grind in a personal ssysh? So let's go with adidas and yaga and pussy into the tower loli to rape.
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Kirilenko, you are well done. Although an asshole too.For several reasons. 1. Where is the sequel? The preamble is, and the rest, zamylil. So what are you crest?))))))))))))))))))))) And then I look at the nation began to consider))))))))))))))) ))))))))))));) Of course with the border guard such a trick could definitely be, because it probably was at least 5 years ago. Then of course they didn’t have that dick about what they were writing about. And who wants to argue I will not answer, because I live in Belgorod, where there is a border)))))))))))) Yes, I meet with a debt))))))))))) but more San so do not joke. And then really get out. We are still in the USSR. Do you know how? Although you know with a friend so the friendship took place. In general, first the eggs are cut, and then only count. Well, the last))))))) I first neighing from the heart, but the residue remained fleeting))))))) Didn't you relax that from November 23 to 26? You can beautifully answer the “nice criticism”))))) It’s better face to face to beat the pitcher as well, a)))))))) “then the eggs” should be considered))))))))))) I don’t teach, I said so, because I’m afraid of your anger)))))))))))))) Is it neighing or angry? As already said, the story is excellent, even though you ... cut it off on the most interesting part. Although to be honest, when you started describing a girl and her conversation, for some reason I understood))))))))) that there is a family contract. Although I did not think that to such an extent. He practiced with his girlfriends, but one-time, perhaps it killed him. Well, and yet they are my slaves, so the style of the relationship is slightly different))))))) In short, the story is super. Do not listen to anyone except your inner self. Create further, waiting for the continuation. Although not only this story. Nevertheless, it is interesting to me how Lizochka was brought to mind or, as often, they gave it a try, and then she went through trial and error)))))))))))))) Wow, that’s what I sold again. Kirilenkoooooooo, let's create and expose. And one more thing. You could not designate your stories as something in the title, as a general idea. Well, I don’t know: “This wonderful world of Kirilenko ...” And then I get to your stories when I go to my favorites and press Kirilenko. And so forever I miss them))))))))))))))))))))))) Nichrome itself has already been soaped. In short, we NEED FURTHER STORIES.
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Thank you, my friend, for the positive multiplied by common sense;) You're just a master at the volume and meaningful reviews. But this is not their main advantage. They are adequate, that's what all their charm is about) As for my stories being missed: if so, I will personally write to you in a personal note about the placement of new material. And as for further stories - in the near future, I will pour “Divide and conquer. Part 4: A few words about ... ". The continuation of this particular series the audience requires first.
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I’ve probably deserved this attitude from your side, but I’m not a critic, so ... I am happy. I would be glad to see the continuation of this part, well, of course, and "Divide and rule")))))))))) Although other stories of your letter. Well, there you also stopped at interesting))) Although if you look positive, then life itself is interesting. That's what I like in your stories, multiplied by literary talent. Probably many have something to remember and everyone looks at them through the prism of themselves. I probably in your stories, except everything else, like your attitude to life.
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Kirilenko you are great, so much controversy. So far, I have seen the same amount only for Zoi, on his last story)))))))))))))))))))))) This is your indicator, definitely people are not indifferent)))))))) )
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Author, write also stories and comments !!! I do not even know what was the most interesting to read. Raskaz is very good. But how do you Olga flashed it just do beauty. Lyuba Baba has already felt sorry for you a million times. Well done!!! Burn more !!!
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This "abandoned part of the territory of the oil depot", which revised the series "The Brigade", is unable to zashugat even Mandavosh in her pubic)))
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And you have a lot of coins?
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Alexander, thank you very much for the aesthetic pleasure. I really liked the story and I look forward to continuing. Write it sooner if you haven’t written it yet :) It’s better to spend your time on this, and not on cheap provocations addressed to you.
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Please, Elena, always happy to have such reviews. I will listen to your advice and focus on the presentation of the continuation;)
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Thank you, Dear Hoffman, for your positive feedback, filled with common sense. "Girls from a drunken yard" will need to be read, thanks for the coordinates of the search.
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About "Romantic vulgarity ... THIS-" typical Black-Hundred cattle, screaming in the Winter: "Who tore a woman's hands off !!?"
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Kids, you make my day your butthirt. Just shut up.
P. S. Judging by the reclining cockerel Kirillenko, I am far from cattle.
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Of course far. Today you are a piece of shit that you need to kick for a long time, giving shape to the human body. It is very hard work to make shit the likeness of a person - that is, cattle. But when this piece of shit takes the long-awaited form of cattle, it has a long way to humanization, but not the whole cattle can do it. So about 1%, but you do not enter it unequivocally. So your top bar - cattle!
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Kirillenko, calm down =) Your juicy, delivering lulz, batthert is no longer interesting to anyone. For XYITA.
P. S. I even have to log in to see how you let down your laziness yourself.
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Definitely, you are not interesting to anyone who is vulgar, because you are stupid and stupid, and your protrusions only spoil the air, but do not carry an informative basis. We drank from the site and do not smerdy with a cadaveric decomposition!
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Oh, Kirilenko, Bravo for your story! Read in one breath. I look forward to continue! I was particularly struck that you, like me, from Dnepropetrovsk ... Maybe we even met;). In any case, write more ...
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Thank you, Anita, it is very nice to receive words of recognition from an immediate countrywoman. Perhaps, indeed, somewhere seen, the world, as we know, is small. Maybe you write to me in the mail (address at the end of the story), or give your e-mail. We would write off with you and find out whether you saw or not. And there ... as the map would have lain;) In general, whatever you decide - in any case, I bow to you for paying attention.
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prikol'no. Uzbekistan. prostite, daj ne do4itala.
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November 28, 2012 15:24
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Lol, the author also snaps at valid criticism.
“Secondly, the events are not fictional” - this is what pleased most of all.
Predictably, dryly, written in the style of “the author jerked off, both finished, and finished the story”
And a little more “envying successful people.”
Successful people run their company, and do not write porn stories, then monitor comments to them :-)
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here you are wrong to have such a well-known and successful man, Kirilenko, he is even a thug and cuts all on a kebab and clogs the arrows on abandoned tank farms !!! here he is a cool writer and even says thieves in law give him not in his mouth but in Mazu !!! and he also loves to ride the train and writes the novel “Like Cossacks, the confused people chose”, read his story and 90 comments to him are a lot of fun !!!
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And what did you want to say with this diarrhea? I talked to myself on the branch and this shit was dragged here, well done. But what next? Do you think it is necessary for someone else, after the author has correctly explained to you who you are and what are you?
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Kirilenko, she is from Dnepropetrovsk, if that. You did everything right. Willingness to meet showed, and she gave the brakes. All clearly and in concepts. In general, if possible, do not pay attention to the minor trash. Stay your course, good luck!
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Why on my branch? I saw this comment in one story and answered, and then I thought that it fits perfectly here and brought it, and readiness to meet and meet these are very different things) that I didn’t hide from Dnipro, but I didn’t offer him even once there is no need to tell tales here, if someone is stupid, let him re-read all my posts and show me where I wanted to meet? But his ridiculous attempts to look cool and making appointments at abandoned tank farms do not cause anything to laugh))) Even if I admit that I agreed to light up and that picture will come up as Kirilenko comes to his thugs and very serious friends and says to them: on the site of pornorasskazk where I act as a gangster porn writer with one and the same girl whom I didn’t like my story, would you go with me to an abandoned tank farm where I scored an arrow and give me my oil there? I write it and sigh from laughter))))
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In addition to what really “lights” your style, the quality of the language is worthy of a separate compliment. Competent, beautiful presentation - a rarity)
Here they write to me komenty))) and there are no bad ones at all)))
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I do not understand where this reader saw a literate speech? Yes, you check your last literacy post, Olga. Not ashamed?
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Kirilenko well, do not hide behind the nicknames of others) have the courage to face the truth)))
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That you really do not want to look). Obviously, the author will not answer you. And I wrote what I see. You write with errors, and even proud of it. And I like Alexander's stories very much, that is why I could not resist, she answered you.
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Why don't you like your stories))) it would be amazing
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In this case, write more to die and stop carrying nonsense
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Kirilenko you rastroenie or rachetrenie personality? I understand that you are already ashamed to write stupid answers under your nickname, but rather than hiding under others, better keep quiet in general)))
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Wow !!! That's what you wet !!))))))))))) What do you smoke? What Kirilenko ?!))))))))))
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Kirilenko you rastroenie or rachetrenie personality?
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Now there will be crucifixion.
Read my reviews in previous topics and make sure that I am not Kirilenko.
You behave in a boorish and disgusting way.
You can not be seen at school.
Behave yourself with dignity, and promoting the name of a well-known author is simply a mean and low act, and you also dragged your own written comments to your mediocre address on this thread.
Olya, I do not know (and I don’t want to know) what kind of a writer you are, but as a person you are crap.
Be careful.
You have very big problems.
And do not be surprised if Life teaches you something.
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If the friends are really serious and thieves, then the answer can be only one: Are you an “obscene word,” you yourself climb into a harlot and want to help us? Go to the "obscene word" and that we would never see you again! Well, a farewell kick following at least! But in fact, there are no cool friends and nothing else, Kirilenko is an ordinary schmuck, who at least tries to be a tough guy in his virtual world. He sets up meetings in places with Hollywood films, realizing that people who write here will not want anyone and if they come, you can always shout here that he came, and they did not come))) well, and with many in general from other cities for thousands of kilometers and it is clear that they will not come for some cheap drocher)
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This is a clinical case. Olga, urgently treat your head. Although this is no longer cured
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And this is not necessary to treat) I feel so good))) I’m not Kirilenko and do not suffer from personality disorder)
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Relax and punkni, Olya. You have paranoia, get well))))))
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Ebaaaat !!!: - 0 Oteta srach so srach !!! 8-0 All srach srach))))) Scha we will count what's what and who should give pussies)))))
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Do you want to give you a bat? Pizdyuli the most ugly.
P. S. You guys, do not react so shit on what they throw on the fan. Kirillenko batherhot in lichku, then batherhot when Olga lowered him. Now he protects his verbal diarrhea with left nicknames. Enough, make love, not eroticspace.
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And further. If all the problems are due to the fact that Kirillenko (allegedly M) assigned the arrow to Olga (F), but she refused, then this is a complete fuss. Or is he going to pussy a woman? BBPE in action, not otherwise. But Olga is a true anonymus, she doesn’t need a cheap drocher.
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All problems because of your verbal diarrhea pidorochek.
Maybe on the dick you need someone, but not here!
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Cool, do not give anyone the bits - just shove her in your long-suffering ass and put it on the site - we will unanimously admire your abilities.
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Kirillenko, I can shove her for you. Although ... who the fuck you need, plus it is autographed. Fall into your anal abyss.
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Pidorok, are you getting into shit again? Even as it looks sad at the same time. Do not be discouraged, and people sometimes grow out of chmoshnik. But very, very rare.
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You are always so excellent, Sasha. Liked.
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Thank you, Anyut, most immense;) I am very glad that you liked it.
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Thank you, Alexander, I liked the story.
Looking forward to the continuation
although also looking forward to the continuation of our German beauty.
It is a pity that the reviews about the literary merits of the story
they turn into srach from the side of small-melting and small-tale individuals,
who are not capable of anything
how to anonymously cheat a more talented author.
And this is glory, brother.
Fame is not only positive, but also negative feedback.
Came on shit, shook off, walked on.
And if this shit climbs into the soul, it is necessary for him to indicate his place.
And preferably so that this shit and never occurred
someone else shit.
And so, pay attention to howl finger done fag,
just do not respect yourself.
So good luck and patience.
Life has the property of returning.
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I support 100%!
Write on, and make us happy with your works!
On the other "vyperdy" do not pay attention.
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Kirilenko, are you alive there? - you haven’t written for a long time - there’s really nothing to read.
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Alive, healthy and even barking)) Read the new story, already posted
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gut, here same trolls are envious! don't feed them, good people) better take pity on poor Olga with poor text ...
Kirilenko - you are super! I hope in my life someday it will be as good as it is now when reading your stories ... It is a pity that we moved from Donetsk to Russia at one time, otherwise I would probably find you) can I get an immodest question? How old are you?
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Thank you, dear former compatriot, for worthy words) Maybe we will write off via e-mail? And I will answer all your questions.I am waiting for a letter to e-mail:
mr.eXXX
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Alexander, by coincidence, I read this story last. He did not comment on previous stories, but, as they say, has already matured :))) As always, everything is very vivid, interesting, sometimes exciting, sometimes funny. Naturally looking forward to the continuation of the story! As a resident of Dnepropetrovsk, reading your stories is doubly interesting, especially since at some points our tastes and attitudes towards women and life in general coincide.
I really hope to continue your creativity. I did not choose the last word by chance, I really think that your stories are creative, not petty obscene, written with the purpose of reading and masturbating, or inept outpouring into the text of your own (not always) self-taught erotomaniac this online resource.
For what actually and with all my heart thank you.
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A chic story, I read it a while ago, right now, I began to rummage in search of a sequel and do not see the red army, which makes me sad just exorbitantly, because I am intrigued by the eerie sequel I want to read just such a wildly string. uh When I read only positive emotions.
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