- Our first experience! Part 1
- Our first experience! Part 2
- Our first experience. Part 3
- Our first experience. Part 4
- Our first experience! Part 5
- Our first experience! Part 6. Chapter 1
- Our first experience! Part 6: Preface
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trying to catch her lips, but just enjoying this unusual caress for me.
Fingertips tickled over chest, nipples, stomach, I shuddered, they sank down on my thighs, pulled my skirt up, lightly stroked my pubis. You feel good? She whispered hoarsely. Yes - I swallowed convulsively in my throat. What are you wet - her palm covered my pussy, and from her voice goose bumps ran down my skin. Her lips covered mine, she kissed me with a wet smacking sound, held her palm up to her face, kissed her, turned her to me, I breathed in my smell and realized that I had to kiss her, kissed her mimicking her, several times, fingers held my lips I caught them with a kiss, licked them, the hand slipped, sank, I heard the sound of lightning on my jeans, I decided that I understood her desire, and knelt down.
I saw a hand that did not take off my jeans, but climbed deep inside. Not now, do not rush - she sank down to me, her hand came up and rose to her face. I thought - I started, but wet fingers pressed to my lips, silencing, I inhaled a tart smell, licked them, she began to enter my mouth with her finger, I began to suck it, my finger changed to another, then both of them entered at once. Stop it, otherwise I can not stand it - she said hoarsely, removing her hand - you are driving me crazy. Come - she got up and helped me up - Dima, are you ready? As pioneers, Dima appeared in the kitchen leading to the balcony.
Well then we are in the shower and to you, lead - she turned to me. I took her to the bath, she came in, turned to me: And you, standing, come in. (Especially for eroticspace.info — sexitails.ru) I went in, she began to undress, threw clothes on a washing machine: What are you standing for as not your own, come on quickly, give me fear here. The bath was all paired up after the guys, I took off my clothes and climbed into the bath to her, tried to imperceptibly look at her, a beautifully outlined figure, a little bit fuller than me, a second-sized chest, a little lowered, although it is normal after a child, a small scar of appendicitis is smooth shaved pubis. Well, as I told you - my inspection did not go unnoticed, Natasha with a smile turned the shower on me. Beautiful - I said sincerely. So what are you waiting for? - she clung to me, stroked her cheek, I looked at her blankly, she grinned and pressed on my shoulder. Come on!
It finally reached me, I knelt down, she lifted her foot on the edge of the bath and I didn’t have time to really see her half-open flower as her hand pressed my lips to it. God - she moaned when I tried to clumsily lick her, began to lick, she helped me with light movements of the pelvis, pressing my hand over my head. Wait - a minute later she whispered, looked around, turned off the water, sat down on the bath attacks, legs spread wide - Come here, otherwise my legs do not hold.
I approached, she kissed me, leaned back against the wall, I pressed against her, began to kiss the neck, chest, lower to the stomach, kissed the scar, pubis, licked the clitoris, sucked it. Help me with my hand - she moaned, grabbing my hand and pushing me towards the pussy. I introduced her two fingers, began to fuck her, sucking on her clit. Quick, another finger - she crushed my head, I added a finger, then another. Ooooh - she moaned, bent over, squeezed her legs, shook her several times, her legs opened. I moved it by hand, she pushed away. No, don't, don't move.
For about ten seconds, she sat with her eyes closed and a satisfied face, then slowly pulled out my hand. Olya, it was ... - she didn’t finish speaking, she waved her hand, leaned over and began to kiss me - thank you, I haven’t been so good for a long time. Let's quickly wash and to the boys, otherwise they were waiting - she jumped up, turned on the water and began to wash. We quickly showered, I wanted to get dressed, she pulled me to the door. Why do you need to dress up they are waiting for us in the bedroom - she laughed, leaned over her ear - you are with Dima, I am with Sasha, I understand correctly? Well, yes - I smiled. Now there is no time, but you remember, I owe you that much - she spread her arms wide - and I always pay off debts.I laughed, she took my hand and we went to the bedroom. To be continued!
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Umnichka slut - everything is gorgeous! Grade 10+.
Personal request - be hard in expressions. I understand, in life, in dialogues, it is said this way, but for more excitement I would like to be more frank!
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I agree, no work is complete without fiction. Plant, but it can be a bit tough.
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You are a real smarty! you are a miracle! i wish i was your friend
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I was very excited ... Perhaps this is the best proof of what I liked !!!
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Gorgeous as always))
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you are the best writer I have read in this field Respect
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It. Highly. Impressive. written luxuriously ... waiting for the continuation ...)
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wonderful author-write more!
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still!!!
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Beautifully written! Impressive
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Excellent continuation.
As always on the level, did not go.
Thank you for this unhurried and smooth development of the plot, I really hope to continue.
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Fine!
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It's bad that not “to the end” Olga)))
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Soon I will add part 5, there will be events in the bedroom)
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Are you going out to the agent or all the time you are sitting in the stealth room ???))) I look forward to continuing)))
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In general, it is surprising how few people write comments and give marks, it would seem that it was easier, I liked to write, I did not like it, put a low mark! The best killer of the author’s inspiration is the indifference of the readers!
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Memento nobody cares.
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There is no indifference.
But not everyone has the gift of writing such a beautiful language like you!
Would rather continue!
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Agree. Most of the comments are short as the order “let's continue!”
Of the 15 thousand. Views just a few comments. Well, okay, guys, they probably end up at the end of the story, turn to the wall and fall asleep :), but the girls could be more talkative.
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right)
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))) The authors are creative people, they cannot but write: they have a nail in their ass that Gumilyov called “passionarity”.
And we - the readers - are lazy consumers. You should not attach much importance to the reaction of readers: your stories and so it seems an unprecedented number of comments. Well, apparently not the reacted readers, I think, not indifference showed, but engaged in urgent matters))))) take into account the specifics of the site, here people come for excitement, and not be clever.
Happiness to you, Sunny, you are lovely! (both in a creative sense and as a woman)
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charming, lovely! we are waiting with great impatience
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Unreadable. Rules for making a direct speech came up with idiots, you don't need geniuses, yeah.
Too many mistakes.
The style of the text is clumsy, pearl offhand: "We drank laughing and started talking, there is."
Or "she helped me with the light movements of the pelvis," when it happens in the bathroom - it sounds funny.
The final grade is bad.
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I do not like it, do not read it) you can throw shit on anyone and you are no exception) that's what they write about your work, and with your criticism you remind me of a Neighbor;
Yana
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Not finished;) I put a "minus"
The form is interesting, although too long, viscous, the beginning.
But the content ...! I did not like the narcissism of the protagonist and the arrogant, even dismissive, attitude to heroin. "... I collect her hair into a fist.", "Insert", "samochka", etc. ... Well, what is it ?! And you called it the “Best Porn For Women” ?! Fi! Yes, this is the most common male story!
I DO NOT WANT to read the sequel in this style, even if you promise a wedding at the end!)))
Gone back to the Romantic section)))
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I do not pretend to be either a genius or a great skill as a writer, I honestly warned that these are the first stories and I just describe what happened. If this does not fit your BDSM standards, then I am not to blame.
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P. S. Your tale has read only 7,000 people since July, and mine is 15,000 in November, then readers decide who writes well and who is bad! So, come down from heaven to the sinful Earth, Mister Porno!
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Honey, I didn’t even know about you, but I saw how, with ridiculous criticism, I climbed to the Legion. Yes, I also had the imprudence to point out to him mistakes, although I myself write like a drunken troechnik. So it’s not for me to laugh on the sinful earth * laugh good-naturedly *
For reference, Mister Pornograf's BDSM stands for Infinite Kindness, Compassion, and Mercy.
And of course, I admit that your kung fu is better than mine. Millions of flies can not be wrong.
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Medice, cura te ipsum! - the best recipe for you)))
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Comparing readers with flies that fly shit characterizes you as well as you can. The essence of such you well reflects a proverb; If from the pan - it is a pan! And if with Hama pan - then three times Ham! Narcissistic Narcissus, who imagines himself a Master, does not cause anything but contempt and mild disgust, which arises when you push a cockroach and hear the wet crunch of its chitinous shell.
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Mr. Pornographer didn’t compare your readers with shit, he just quoted a catch phrase that is traditionally spoken in response to - - “Your tale has read only 7,000 people since July, and mine is 15,000 in November, then the readers decide who writes well, and who is bad! ”- - -
Mr. Pornographer is indeed slightly narcissistic, but does not worry about it. In practice, this gives only bonuses in dealing with women.
Medice, cura te ipsum? Quoting out of place is a sure sign of stupidity. What should I heal myself from?
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If you are already talking about yourself in the third person, I advise you not to be petty, but to begin with:
We, Mr. Pornographer, Emperor and Autocrat All-Russian, Moscow, Kiev, Vladimir, Novgorod; Tsar Kazan, Tsar Astrakhan, Tsar of Poland, Tsar of Siberia, Tsar of Khersonis of Tauride, Tsar of Georgia; Sovereign of Pskov and Great Prince Smolensky, Lithuanian, and so on and so forth!
about millions of flies, I think everyone will understand everything correctly, you have no reason to make excuses)
It is necessary to heal yourself from what you attribute to me, and please, do not write me more, it is unpleasant to me to communicate with you.
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Oh, what excuses? This is an explanation so that you do not cringe. After all, I did not attribute to you anything except an illiterate letter, burdened by criticizing others for minor mistakes.
Do not write you more? Are you uncomfortable? Ho ho ho! Communicating with Mr. Pornograph really few people are pleased. The only exceptions are those who like it. I don't like you.
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Thank God that I do not like me, and sorry for those who like you. Although there are reasonable doubts that such exist at all)
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The phrase "sorry for those who like you" as the stigma of stupidity.
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Truly you are stupid like a tree if you do not understand this phrase))) and you will be baobab for a thousand years until you die)))
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You're already dead, O romantic slut. Otherwise, your stories would be different.
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You have nothing to say except delirium?
Adios, cheap drocher!
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Only today, on all screens of the country: "Dead whore vs Cheap drocher"
Cast:
Cheap drocher - Mr. Pornographer;
Dead whore - Stupid pussy Olga
The film touches upon the problem of a modern ruined society, imposing stereotypes of eclectic blasphemy for low-ranking females. Gangbang and romance, prostitution and flowers, promiscuity and love for a spouse. All this and more you will see, penetrating to one of the many spiritually dead whores. Here this role is brilliantly performed by Olga's Dull Cunt.
Mister Pornograph, who miraculously embodied in the role of Cheap drocher, will show you that
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This creature (pornography, a man is difficult to call it) is similar to a device that is deafly programmed into one function. Fantasy is enough to reproduce pseudo-type, words and phrases throughout the site. Or is this type of answering machine Pornographbot?
His main feature is the tendency to theorize. This is a mental type. His thought prevails over action and over image. He does not need to fuck the girl, he will masturbate in his mind. His thinking is mostly not visual-effective, not visual-figurative, but conceptually-theoretical. He will solve the puzzle, but he will not be able to pass along the board, even on the floor, not so much as two chairs. He will be well versed in the theory of versification, but even a bright poem will read dullly. They say about such people that they are far from life. Having said a good one, in his opinion, he will jerk off a phrase on her for a month, not realizing that everyone has already forgotten about him. It seems to me that Pornographer has many minor or more substantial bodily imperfections, which cause his inferiority complex. These are myopia, astigmatism, abnormal bite, flat-footedness, bad skin, thinness, anatomical dysplasticity, dysarthria, rotten teeth, vegetodistonia, etc. Often, the Pornograph's aggressiveness is manifested precisely in “humor-making” aimed at people for any reason. I think that the main problem of Pornographer is that he HERE found a substitute for sex, and in short moments of enlightenment, he suffers wildly from his inferiority!
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No, Olga, by. You think that the roots of my aggression are rooted in bodily flaws, like “I don't like the Pornograph, because even stupid whores like me don't give him that.” It is not at all so wrong. In the world, Mr. Pornograph is quite an attractive man in his prime. But first of all he is a man, a systemically thinking and decisive task that nature has set for him - to know women. Therefore, from the earliest nails, I studied these mysterious creatures for a long time and methodically. I thought that I would become a connoisseur of female souls, and instead I discovered that I had turned into an excellent zoopsychologist. But since there is no limit to perfection - I continue to study you. And what could be more revealing than text incarnations of creatures like you? That's the same thing.
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But first of all he is a man, a systemically thinking and decisive task that nature has set for him - to know women. Therefore, from the earliest nails, I studied these mysterious creatures for a long time and methodically.I thought that I would become an expert on female souls, but instead I found out that I had turned into an excellent zoopsychologist - THIS IS THE LORD ALREADY SCHIZOPHRENIA !!! WHEN THE PERSON KNOWS KNOWLEDGE WHAT THE PROBLEM BEFORE HAS PUT THE NATURE - IT IS A VERY BAD SIGN !!!
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In the world, Mr. Pornograph is a rather attractive man in the prime of life - WHEN YOU LIKE YOURSELF, THIS IS CALLED NARCISSM)))
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Not capsi, this is a worse sign than narcissism or schizophrenia - this is idiocy.
But what have schizophrenia? After all, when a man knows what task nature has set for him - this is called wisdom.
As for narcissism. To please yourself is to be in harmony. I don’t like you here, hence all these fucking fantasies, which, given your low level of intelligence, suggest that you are not a hedonist at all, but only a victim.
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You guys are champions of the universe! The first time I had a chance to finish reading srach in the comments! I do not need neither this story nor others, I - dossuha. You are just a terminator, Master!
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Hey! Pornographer! You are a trickster! Turned my calm, soft dislike into tearful adoration. One this comment. I will fly, I'm not lying!)
I understand, of course, that to love such a slyly shattered egocentric like you is a natural BDSM, but the risk is the adornment of life, mother peremat! :)
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Thank you dear. However, try not to be overly emotional.
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Emotions - like risk, decoration of life;)
And now ... I am crying with emotion: the Lord assured me to intermarry with such a man! I'll go, I take a gulp of Nitroglycerin, or else my heart flutters, no matter how hard it is to give an oak!
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Medice, cura te ipsum!
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Today, when I finally got to the computer after work and sat down to check my mail, I found a notification of a comment in my story written by Olga. Nakhuya ?! That is why gladiolus. I was invited to laugh at the pornography profiled. This was not in my memory, I wanted to see fresh. AVOHUH, comrades. While Olya faylitsya. Now, when I bought a ticket, popcorn, nestled in the cinema and lovingly stroking the bat, I want to see a sequel.
P. S. I do not defend any of the parties, because to take sides is to lick the ass.
P. P. S. The stories of Olga are fuckin ', retouched by romance. As is.
P. P. P. S. The pornographer is also not a good author, but at least a suitable troll.
P. P. P. P. S. If he is trying to dull pussy to point out her dullness - this is Fail. Her unique universe of warm checkered rug, mate and cozy little sexitails will never fall apart.
P. P. P. P. P. S. S. 1, 2, 3, FIGHT!
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Gnawed popcorn, bat under his arm and get home, here you are not the Colosseum, and there will be no gladiatorial fights.
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A completely neutral comment on both sides caused Olga's hard bathert. Maybe under the guise of a swingers hiding their fuckiness under the romance hides Diana? Writing style, nickname style. Comments
P. S. To everyone: https://lurkmore.to/Tupaya_pizda Yes, yes. Hate you lurk.
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Why is "Lurk" hated by you? In Lurke a lot of sensible texts. I love him, but I fall under the offensive definition of "Lurkoekki". “Lurkoeb is an unreasonable form of life on the Internet, generated by Lurkomoryem. 95% of the regulars on this site are lurkoebie. Typical Internet zadrot, living memes to which it has nothing to do and learns about them exclusively from Lurkomorye. ”I hate it when the truth is in the eyes! :)
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I finally got to the 4th part ... I liked the story - it is easy and pleasant to read ... The plot is believable - it is also nice! Olga - continue writing, do not be fooled by stupid trolling! :) Who likes to let them read - who doesn't like - let them read further :))))
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Very good tales! It's nice that taken from reality. Dear Olya, I join the requests of other readers - write more, please! The taste and color - you know. But about my real emotions I would like to write to you in the mail. Does she still act?
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Of course it works)
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Where is the sequel?
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I liked it) sincerely excited) Sexual descriptions have pleased.
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Everything is good, everything is great. I really liked the condition / exciting))
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The series is good in its simplicity - it looks like Van Gogh’s paintings are simple and sincere, that’s why it’s great. I liked it - with taste and trivial, without too much.
The war in the comments amused ... Olga, criticism and attacks are different, you should not pay attention to the latter;))
You are clever, write further
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Olya!
Tvoi opovіdannya - supremely erotichnі that devil!
Even talanovito!
Is it okay for my daughters to be the 5th, what am I doing for the rest of the world?
Postscript I will write in a little bit.
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Thank you for rating) if I add part 5, it will not be the last) there is a lot more to write about, but the desire was gone, partly from the fact that they plundered stories on an Internet, and also because of stupid insults of stupid critics who write themselves unable to, but always ready to throw mud at)))
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Once again, good afternoon, Olga. Did not write to you in the mail (by the way, but now it still works ??). Fours story is also pleasant, thank you. Continued waiting. It is interesting! And about the spoiled mood - oh well, all of them. Do not worry, this is a question of desire and goals: to communicate or to control. It is foolish to learn who wants to talk to the troll. It is foolish to teach those who want to talk troll. This is the Network, here basically narcissism - where else to it. The same with copyright to the story - what are you offended? This was to be expected - again the Network. You write not for readers, but for yourself - do not deprive yourself of pleasure. Sincerely, I write in a personal.
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There is something to write about, of course, but on the one hand I want to write, but on the other there is no inspiration, so I’m waiting for it to coincide))) mail is valid.
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We are waiting for the fifth part :)
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The stories are chic and very truthful. I would like to try it, but I fear for the consequences, and therefore I’m not persistently persuading my own Olya too :)
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I think you are doing the right thing, haste here can hurt and spoil everything.
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The story is weak, events develop too inertly, the ending causes boredom.
You can do better! I re-read the three previous parts several times, in the first and in the second I put unambiguous tens, + I hooked the story.
According to this story, I got the impression that they wrote, and suddenly you had to urgently run somewhere, so you decided. ok so come down.
Reading your dear conversation with the “grandfather” of this wonderful site gave me more pleasure than exactly this part of the story.
Find at last inspiration and time, write a bright ending of your love adventures.
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Love!!!
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Thank)
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Like the previous story awesome! The lesbian theme is very exciting, and the sequel is intriguing!
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