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Comment on publication: Blue eyes of the poet
No, it was not published. Specifically, this sketch and "Showed" from another part of my "arts".
Comment on publication: I am a nymphomaniac. Session 1
Superbly Right in the textbook, you can "How to write erotic stories." And, although the plot is predetermined, reading is not boring. The right style. The main thing is to endure it and put an end in time. There is a wish: a psychologist should be revived slightly. They have a confidential dialogue, one side turns the soul, the other - the thing in itself, it turns out ...
Comment on publication: Asymmetric response ("Showed ...")
Thank you for your support, I took the risk of “not really porn” squeezing, I thought they would spit it.
Comment on publication: The maiden vicar. Chapters from the book
Well, yes, punctuation with porridge. It turned out because of the difference in the syntax of English and Russian languages. The brains of the “translator” did not always switch in time.))) Somehow, more gerund and cascades of privony revolutions got out at different times. This is not “American” English, but Welsh, 150 years old. I'm not a professional translator. Go to the pros, there will be commas and everything else on the level. True money is worth it))).
Comment on publication: The maiden vicar. Chapters from the book
I will consider criticism, for each chapter I will select tags individually. Although hardly more than 2-3 chapters lay out.
Comment on publication: The maiden vicar. Chapters from the book
BUT! I thought you were looking for a paper book. What about what, and lousy about the bath :))) I seek out paper curiosities.
Comment on publication: Love and nobility
Up to 4 pages enjoyed (aesthetic) :).
Comment on publication: The maiden vicar. Chapters from the book
I will not tell you. The matter is long-standing, I have only my translation. But you are right, this is better in the original. This is a pitiful semblance of the original. So ... freestyle on the subject. By the way, there was such a series of "Red Light Street" in the 90s. There are many anonymous translations. Where better, where not so much. I, a blockhead, did not buy at one time, I thought I would wait in a hard cover, and then at once covered up the shop. I saw somewhere in online bookstores selling slowly.
Comment on publication: Train
What do you mean by the final scene? What place? Or the final phrase? It's important for me to know.
Comment on publication: Two hundred for harm
Thank you. A little did not understand where the severity ... like no one really hurt. I thought funny. But okay, everyone has their own perception.