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Comment on publication: Kanlang children. Chapter 12

Why not chapter 11?
According to the canons of fiction in Chapter 11, my hero must accomplish the feat, and since the eroticspace genre is erotic stories, this will be a sexual feat. What in the character of Henry will lift him to a new peak? I decided that this is bisexuality. At the end of the story, Henry can fuck anyone, anything that moves.
But I don’t want to write about what I don’t know that I didn’t worry about myself. Such fantasies will damage the authenticity and make the text unconvincing.
Maybe someone from the readers have an opinion, what should be the 11th chapter? Feelings of heroes, deeds, details and trivia? Please write, share, comment. Perhaps I will add.
In the meantime, let mysterious incompleteness remain in Children of Kanlang.

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Comment on publication: Kanlang children. Chapter 9

You are right, as a separate story this episode does not excite the reader, but rather confuses. But this is the 9th chapter, the plot “pit” of my hero, from which he is to get out.

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Comment on publication: Kanlang children. Part 1

With an incentive, the centurions helped the Roman legionnaires to keep a place in the ranks. This can be erotic))) Like a blow job with the help of teeth and nails.

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Comment on publication: Drunk beauty for sale. Part 3

Russian is flawless

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Comment on publication: Two contests, a boat and the Mediterranean

Thank. I wanted an unexpected ending, as in the real literature.

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Comment on publication: The last day of the safari

Ha))))

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Comment on publication: Glory hole princess

finale cool!

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