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Comment on publication: Polyandry. Part 1

Honestly, it can continue for a long time, just as in life, girls get bored with time, and writing about one thing becomes uninteresting. The most interesting thing is the plot, and then it becomes commonplace. Even the most beautiful and slim chick someone already tired.

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Comment on publication: Polyandry. Part 1

On check.

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Comment on publication: Trip to mate

Honestly, I did not read, but anything is possible, because this is life. He wrote this story on the memories of one case where the family had three children, but then it turned out, according to the results of genetic examination, that all the children were not from her husband and moreover, from different men.

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Comment on publication: Assistant

Thanks for the comments. The question is open, from whom she flew, because in Tver in the afternoon she was alone. Not the fact that the neighbors did not help or father-in-law, this also happens.

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Comment on publication: Family quarrel

Just got the idea. Developed as I could.

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Comment on publication: Neighbor

First, publish the story of comb. Then I will think what to continue and whether to do it now. When you write something, you fantasize, think through actions, as the situation could, approximately, develop if it were. Sometimes it's just too lazy to prescribe something. Honestly, I began to understand those who write scripts. After all, there are so many scenes that need to be written down in detail, dialogue, right down to the look and intonation. Slave work.

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Comment on publication: Family quarrel

Thanks for the comment. In a nose I pick and pick out topics from there. I just think what I would like to write about, It depends a lot on mood and mood.

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Comment on publication: Pinocchio's Way

Thanks for the comments. Verse awesome.

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