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Comment on publication: Foursome or how we discovered a new world
Intriguing !!! Keep going
Comment on publication: Pharaoh's Gift
Good idea. Read interesting! Thanks to the author for the idea and implementation! ten!!!
Comment on publication: Fool
The story at the beginning claimed for something more than what happened (as described) below. It turns out that this story is one of many on the now hackneyed topic ... Therefore, we subtract ORIGINALITY, but give a plus for ease of presentation ... Overall, 7 points Thanks to the author! Dare, improve ... Write about what you are interested. Good luck.
Comment on publication: Irony of Fate or Enjoy Your Bath
Andrei, in principle, I was wrong, but the one who wrote the patronymic Hippolyt G. was wrong. he was GEORGIEVICHEM)
But I don’t want to continue the controversy over one nuance, believe me! I still put you 10!
Comment on publication: Irony of Fate or Enjoy Your Bath
Thank you, otherwise I did not know)) I read "12 chairs" at 10 years old)
And in the “Irony of Fate” - GG GEORGIEVICH (not Grigorievich) ...
Comment on publication: Lookout in the pantry. Story 2: Private Music Lessons
An interesting deal! The plot draws in! Described remarkably. 10 points!
Comment on publication: Irony of Fate or Enjoy Your Bath
Interesting) A good script is based on, its good dialogues plus the completion of sex situations that are organically woven into the lacunae of good-quality Soviet cinema ...
Well, except that Ippolit Matveyevich, and not Grigorievich))
But in general - cool !!! I was a little amazed at the surrealistic fragment with Nadya's friends ... I think - bust ...
But, I repeat, the whole story is not bad! I put 10.
Comment on publication: Life from the new side. Chapter 6
Charming! It is enticing to read the course of this exciting story !!! And what I like: after reading, I want more and more, I can't get enough)
New you success in creating masterpieces!
PS: 10 points in the bank)
Comment on publication: 2 of 36
What an exciting and exciting story! Written great! The plot seems to be trivial, but filed masterfully! Undoubtedly, the successful work of the author! New you success!
From me, of course, 10 points.
Comment on publication: One chance for two
What an interesting triangle! What pictures and what emotions! Great, author! Respect and 10 points!