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Comment on publication: Demon. Vanity and pride

Thank you for your feedback ...)

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Comment on publication: Girlish obsession

Noooo ...)) Although it’s not close either, and there are problems with the Internet)) ..

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Comment on publication: Girlish obsession

Yes, One of the very first attempts at writing ... And the continuation has already been ... It is necessary to search the site.)) For some reason, not all the stories are on my list, including this one ...

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Comment on publication: Demon. Act Four: Forbidden Fruit

Thank you for such an interesting comment ... No, I am not a participant in the program of the Battle of psychics ...)) ... And of course, the author is always visible in his works. Even in negative characters, villains and scum, you can see something from the author himself. On other sites I exhibited several works of a similar and different nature, but ... But there are much fewer readers ...)) ... I chose this format for transmitting thoughts and expressing my creativity, because it allows you to talk in an easy, frivolous manner with the reader about the serious ... In the next part of the reader a new test of logic and morality awaits ...

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Comment on publication: Demon. Act Four: Forbidden Fruit

Friends, everyone heard and thanks to all for the comments. They help to develop in the works, as there are no other ways to improve their own writing. Of course, there are controversial points and blunders. But they even have writers and directors in Hollywood. It is pleasantly pleased with the fact that there are not so many of them, and the text is liked and appreciated by the reader positively. Once I started with 3, 5 points ...)) ... Continuation is being prepared ... The image of the demon turned out, since the reader sees him self-confident and narcissistic ... And the feeling of powerlessness of angels is not accidental ...)

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Comment on publication: Demon. Act One: Preparation

Thank you for such a detailed comment! ... I did not read the books you indicated, so I cannot compare ... I agree that it is not fiction, but there is no category of mysticism ...) ... and so far I am completely satisfied with this format of my fantasies and ideas ...

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Comment on publication: Demon. Act One: Preparation

I did not want to divide into parts, but the story turned out more than expected, so I put a pause here. The second part in the finalization. Coming soon ... Thanks for the feedback!

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