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Comment on publication: How it was

I read the story and this is the best that you wrote. This is the best I've read on this site. And this is not because you are my favorite author, but because it is.
And you would not write this comment, you would not violate your promise, but I see how your mood has changed. Sincerely happy for you!

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: In my 32 years

I have never boasted of my literacy and never hurt anyone for mistakes and content. I do not give a damn.
You poked me and not only, and then laid out an absolutely illiterate story.
Pass the story through the Word, it will show you all your missing commas. Land Cruiser is a coupe, SUV, but not a Jeep. Land Cruiser is Toyota. Toyota is not a Jeep. No rear body. Now I understand that you are not in a hurry, you are just an ordinary ignoramus, with overestimated self-conceit and, well, very narrow-minded.
Now I understand where the legs grow from the comments: Vasily (guest)
October 22, 2014 10:01
Talent. 10 +
Drone
October 22, 2014 12:04
beauty +10
Ivan (guest)
October 22, 2014 12: 08 #
Brilliantly 10
October (guest)
October 22, 2014 12:53
Masterpiece 10
Sveta (guest)
October 22, 2014 13:49
Talented 10+
Reader (guest)
October 22, 2014 15:17
Vital
Yes, and other guests somehow strangely visited only your story, I was not too lazy to look through the comments from the stories for the week. It seems that they came from nowhere, read only your story, admired and went to nowhere.
Good luck with your hard work - scolding others and praising yourself!

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: In my 32 years

Rotten story. And a lot of mistakes.
Not enough pieces of twenty commas. Errors begin at the very beginning.
The third sentence: “- Well, how?”, After “Well” you need to put a comma. In the sixth sentence. And so on. Reread a lot of errors in the text.
More mistakes in the words:
Zillion is a million.
Tormented - tormented.
Instead of “che”, you need to write “what”. This is first class.
There are many mistakes and they are very stupid.
Now there are mistakes in the description: “At the crossroads there was a jeep and blinked with turn signals. Then he turned to us. While he was dragging, I noticed a huge dent in the back of the chute. I didn’t see the brand at that time. Jeep is a brand of car.
Remember your words:
“First of all, someone needs to learn Russian. I readily admit that sometimes you write and it pours out of you (in the sense of inspiration, and not only), it is difficult to check thoroughly, but you, the author, bring it to the public’s judgment - be kind enough to be more careful.
Secondly, the work should be exciting, we write for this, too, but by no means inspire disgusting. In this story there is no healthy atmosphere of fantasy, but there is dirt. ”
Prophetic words fit your story 100%.
I understand that I was offended ... You have a zealous admirer - he will console me. Assessment is not set. I put only the good ones, but there is nothing here ...
Rotten story.

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: Svetik seven-color. Part 2

Put a well-deserved ten.

• Rating: 1

Comment on publication: D. R.

I agree. Merry tales.

• Rating: 2