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Comment on publication: For what bought ... Buy boss

You are too harsh (The plot is not mine, as you probably understand, but I didn’t find any special inconsistencies in it. Yes, all this is not very plausible, but what doesn’t happen in life?

1. “Norm. woman -> whore. Have you heard successful businessmen go to live in dugouts and care for pigs? This is a turn!) And so a whore ... I just got myself a lover. This often happens))))
2. Husband - the mattress and was. I think this is reflected.
3. "Clerk -> impudent." Yes, a normal man, he sensed permissiveness. Still waters run deep. And in general, he was the most unmanageable in the company - this is reflected in the story.
4. "Awards". You will not believe what women are capable of, who were well pleased))) The whole world is a sparkling happiness!)))
5. "Frigid -> hot thing." Yes, she was not frigid. Just there was no final click, the toggle switch was not turned to maximum speed. When turned, she moved out of the coils)))

When I started writing, everything seemed to be enough in the plane of logic. So now it seems, sorry))))

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Comment on publication: For what bought ... Buy boss

Yes it is - I answered in the previous comment that there will be no continuation

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Comment on publication: For what bought ... Buy boss

Thank! I was very captured by this story, so I described it with great enthusiasm)

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Comment on publication: For what bought ... Buy boss

Thank you, but will not continue. The heroes of the story is just beginning, but its description is not so interesting.

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Comment on publication: What I bought ... Trolley bus

Oh you, what are my hochma? So, a bit of irony ...

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