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Comment on publication: I'm from an ordinary family. Part 3

Further work on this series hung (((

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Comment on publication: Poor Marina. Part 2

And you do not steal from Google tsytay)))

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Comment on publication: Poor Marina. Part 2

Do not dislike my tales so shamefully, but really grab the report)))

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Comment on publication: Poor Marina. Part 2

Even once by the number of views and ratings for three days, it smells like wrap. Particularly suggestive of these thoughts is that a user with a similar nickname has the same stats for nothing but publications, and all others have the strength of 1k + views and a couple of ratings for the same time.

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Comment on publication: Pregnancy is not a disease, and age is not a vice

Happen sometimes.

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Comment on publication: First

Why then do you leave your comments on my enviable frequency to my comments?)) And on the subject of cheating. You have almost 12k views, and only 12 ratings. Moreover, as soon as you put something below 8, almost immediately there is a new assessment, to pull the average score to 9+. After I gave you 6, three ratings were added to bring the average score to 9. You track the rating of your stories even more than necessary. As for the rest, it is more like a man's fantasy, having sex with someone several times in his life, than the adventures of one who roasts many girls. Your posts, the afterword in the text and the text itself are all imbued with your desire to appear around the alpha male. Too intrusive, I tell you. Less pathos, be easier)).

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Comment on publication: First

Well, I wonder, is there any creative development or is it all the same type. Stop, by the way, cheat positive ratings, but it is very much striking)).

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Comment on publication: First

It's funny that all the “greats” you listed escape a little bit of a problem from the resource. Yes, and they write mostly heavy texts, filled with deep bespontovoy philosophy. It is certainly pleasant to read them, as literature, but literature and so shaft. Porn has porn. Beautiful erotica and literary, this is clearly not in the stories on one page. And the question of filtering for quality and compliance with something is rather a question for those who conduct moderation and submit to a publication than to the author directly. Another thing is that the text clearly does not shine with knowledge of grammar, it is necessary to separate thoughts, to single out certain completed actions, to put unbound events into separate paragraphs. The text is not bad, but the situation is too dull and flat. Absolutely stupid main character, which is conducted on any trick. Absolutely narcissistic, alfisty main character, who fills up any click and breaks any slots. This is all too corny and jaded. especially for the story on 1 page. I read the second, it does not shine with the same originality. The ending of the second story is absolutely lapped from it. Mostly the feeling that it is written by a man who knows about sex only from porn and wikipedia.

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