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Comment on publication: Sketches. №3: The case of the train
I did not want to confuse. It was just interesting to make the switching of the embedded realities of the story, as in a thousand and one nights. Dima is the one who was mistaken for seeds. And the narrator at the end is a person who travels with Dima at a completely different time and on a different train. And to whom he tells the story, drinking vodka from a plastic cup.
Comment on publication: Comic verse
Good with depth.
Comment on publication: Ass of my dream
No no. Mat fits well. Philosophical message, it seemed to me: the value is in the dream, in the high world, which is better than reality. Half of the life that “pissed off” is, of course, the remaining half. Which will be without a dream. Morality is clearly written and accessible, which is on the surface, which also clings.
Comment on publication: How I became a bull
Thank you for your support and comment, Alexey. Best of all, it seems to me, to replace the adjective expressing an emotional state with a more neutral one.
Comment on publication: How I became a bull
It’s about the sex giant. This story contains an allusion to the abduction and fertilization of the Phoenician princess of Europe by the notorious Zeus, who appeared to her in the form of a bull. The mother of Zeus was Rhea, the Titanide, who can be considered at the same time the Giant, for the mythological Giants were her siblings. Thus, if the giant is transmitted through the maternal line, then Zeus, like his protégé, is the protagonist of the story, the Giants in the truest sense of the word.
Comment on publication: How I became a bull
Thank. Negative criticism is also very good, although it seems to me that I will take into account the taste and color ... I will consider the remark about the search.