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Comment on publication: Mind games. Part One: “Whom You Want”

Fucking however. It is only a little strange that at the beginning it was still outraged, as the chef was rolling up, and even as it was outraged, and then it turns out that the girl herself is not done with a finger, not a miss. In my opinion, there is inconsistency. In short, 8 points from Badun.

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Comment on publication: Live crew. Part 2

Well here) I was upset, I really liked the first two. Can you kick for acceleration - one day - minus one point, how do you stimulate?
I'm joking of course) write, take your time, wait)

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Comment on publication: Live crew. Part 2

I do not understand where the third part?

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Comment on publication: Elderly Part 1: Technology of seduction

I liked it, really as an instruction. You would probably in the article section. Put 10.

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Comment on publication: Dreamer!

The author, shame on you, all sorts of pidrila, cunt, described yet. 2 points.

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Comment on publication: Deceived hopes

Hi Hi! I missed you? Quite abandoned you. Well, nothing, catch up :-)
I say - well, it’s not the author who explains so well, although he noticed a couple of times, but there are improvements, I noted it positively. The story is good, lowered the score simply because I fooled. I honestly lacked something, some small Circuits. I do not know, I can not describe. Just in my opinion Fedya came out somewhat monotonous.

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Comment on publication: Deceived hopes

I got to you. As always, the rudeness and obscenity of expressions amazes me. Although I should note this time they are still mostly in direct speech, for which a plus.
I put 9.

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