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Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 4: Woman of Mass Destruction. Part 4
Ready.
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 4: Woman of Mass Destruction. Part 4
Very interesting. Since when is the aura of secrecy around the character and the non-disclosure of his true nature for the time being (if not until the very end) is a disadvantage? Extremely unfounded nagging.
And about the moose in Texas ... Once again, read the second sentence at the very beginning.
And yes, the "second alien" did not draw, she is like the main character, remember the first three chapters.
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 4: Woman of Mass Destruction. Part 3
tomorrow night will be sent to moderation. probably.
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 4: Woman of Mass Destruction. Part 2
“What a sensitive boy you are, Tommy!” ©
"Overdid"? Yes, I just started. I'm afraid to imagine what the reaction will be to further events.
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 4: Woman of Mass Destruction. Part 1
No waiting. The entire fourth chapter is already finished.
Comment on publication: Monday morning
Honestly, I do not understand why the story is only two units. Injustice of pure water. Yes, the subject of kuts, details is not enough, the overall situation is poorly clear. But everything else is pretty good. Here and at times the worst sketches in the style of “back quietly approached, stuck, pulled out and left” are gaining average ratings. And here there is no action, and a detailed description of what is happening, and good-looking literacy.
In general, I put 7 for the story and 3 more balls for an undeservedly low mark.
Comment on publication: In a dark alley of Croatia
Did the protagonist not hurt a member to push the butt plug?
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 3: Falconry
Say something they say. This is just one thing when you sketched for a day even a good “jerk-off” one or two pages story and got just a grade, and quite another when you are 4 months old (yes, I am lazy) sculpted a fourteen page echoon "Blackjack and whores" and received the same notorious "just" rating. Agree, there is a difference.
But what am I talking about sad things? Thank you, dear Crazy Grunt. I am glad that my "not like everyone else" story attracts someone. I will try not to disappoint with the continuation.
Comment on publication: Haystack Village. Chapter 3: Falconry
Taschemta, there is such a story, “Living crew”, the first part of which consists of the 31st page, and the second - of the 18th. At the same time, both parts have tons of ratings and comments. And looking at them, I always thought: what am I, his mother, doing wrong?
However, you are right. Since I can’t write less clinically, then splitting up into parts is perhaps a panacea for all problems. Well, from some, at least ...
Comment on publication: At the entrance
The approaching romance ... I remembered how my friend and his undergirl on Valentine's Day were drinking vodka with juice at the entrance. True, it did not come to ... (I borrow from you this artistic device).
What immediately caught my eye was the incredible literacy for this site. Hats off an imaginary hat. Yes, and can not but rejoice that the characters are not dashing alpha male and nymphomaniac, but shy ... teenagers, yes? In general, the story was a success.